The bard wanders into the entertainment circle

Chapter 298 Dig up the script

After a while, Zhang Yimou came back to his senses, looked at the two and asked, "Have you finished watching?"

"It's over." Chen Shuo and the two nodded.

"how do you feel?"

Chen Shuo and Yu Bo looked at each other, pondered for a while, not knowing what to say.

Not only Chen Shuo felt that there was something wrong with the script, but Yu Bo also felt the same.

But his roles are few, basically only the first few scenes.

He didn't know if he should talk more.

And Chen Shuo felt that if he said too much, it would be bad.

As soon as Zhang Yimou saw their expressions, he knew the worries in their hearts, and said seriously: "You two don't have any worries.

In fact, before this, we found some well-known writers, directors, and screenwriters to read the script.

Except for one of them who expressed some agreeable opinions, the others directly and completely denied it.

So you can speak freely and say whatever you want. "

Yu Bo pondered for a while, and said, "I'm not a professional in script creation, so I'll tell you from the perspective of an audience."

"Yes, this is a different perspective." Zhang Yimou's eyes lit up when he heard it.

Although he thought about not continuing to work behind closed doors, but based on industry habits, the people he hired to read the script were all professionals.

I never thought of finding some lay audience to watch it.

This movie was made for audiences to see.

If the audience's opinions can be known in advance, the revised script must be more in line with the audience's preferences.

"Although it is from the audience's point of view, after all, I see it with the characters.

After watching it, I feel that King Qi's role is a bit inappropriate.

Maybe Director Zhang modified the script based on our performance in the last interview, so that King Qi and the blind girl had a fight.

But the king of a country has super-high skills, able to calmly resist the assassin's attack and counter it.

It always feels a little too deliberate. "

Wang Bin nodded and said, "It is indeed a problem. Do you have any suggestions for improvement?"

"One is to directly hand over the task of fighting the blind woman to other people.

But that too has a problem.

If this scene wants to be exciting, it can only be the exchange of offense and defense between the two people at the nick of time.

If it is suppressed by a large number of warriors, there will be no such effect.

King Qi's status is not suitable, and there are only two people left who are suitable to fight the blind girl, the father and the son Suifeng.

It's just that this assassination was planned by his father, and he came to stop him from contradicting himself.

And the young master Suifeng will walk with the blind girl all the way in the future. It is unreasonable to make a move at this time, and when he walks with him later, he will not be able to find his problem. "

"What about the second one?" Li Feng asked.

"The second is to lower the status of King Qi and set it up as a military officer who is in a key position on the front line.

In this way, it is reasonable for him to be assassinated by the blind woman, and then captured by thunder.

But in this way, it seems to destroy the conspiracy pattern of the whole script. "

One problem leads to two solutions, and each of these two solutions has its own problems to be solved.

Wang Bin couldn't help but feel a little headache. The previous problems have not been solved, and there are a lot of problems in the future.

He couldn't think of a solution for a while, so he didn't hesitate at this moment, and asked Chen Shuo, "What's the problem here?"

Zhang Yimou, Yu Bo and others also looked at Chen Shuo, wanting to hear what he thought.

Chen Shuo paused, and tentatively said: "What if I say that this script has a serious logical loophole?"

Zhang Yimou and the others didn't think there was anything too much about his words, and they had heard all the more outrageous things.

"What loophole are you talking about?"

"Father's badness and conspiracy seem too thin, as if he was just doing evil for the sake of being bad, and creating conspiracy for the sake of creating conspiracy.

There is no deep inner support.

The character of the second sister is too thin.

And her presence undermines the rigor of the story.

Since she is her father's undercover agent, she is also the second in command of Feidaomen.

That father can use her to get rid of the eldest sister and hold the power of Feidaomen in his hands.

It seems that it is too much to do too much to prepare for this conspiracy to destroy the Feidaomen.

And the stories of Suifeng and Liuye are as vain as a castle in the air, without any basis for existence. "

When Zhang Yimou heard it, okay, another one who rooted out his script, and he was also the actor he selected.

"What about your solution?"

"I'm not a professional script writer either, but I think that since this script is already full of loopholes, I should just jump out.

Take out a single character and reconstruct a scene.

Then stick to the theme and write a biography from the perspective of each character.

When all the characters come together naturally, the story will come out naturally. "

After hearing this, Zhang Yimou felt that this was also an effective method.

If you really want to be able to portray a few characters with distinctive personalities, set a goal for them, and put them in a suitable situation, you will definitely be able to collide with different sparks.

It's just that this method almost abandoned the previous creative methods of him, Wang Bin, and Li Feng.

It may be difficult to recreate the script from an angle they are not familiar with in a short period of time.

Seeing the expressions of the three of them, Chen Shuo also knew that this method might not be acceptable to them.

He also said: "If you don't want to overthrow and re-create, then find out the problems one by one, and then implement them.

Try to present a complete, logical and self-consistent story as much as possible. "

The three of them thought about it, and this is feasible.

Li Feng said suddenly: "If you want me to say, let's just get rid of the element of the palace.

Then he changed the identities of his father, King Qi, and Suifeng, and let them fall to the ground.

In this way, it will not only solve the problems Chen Shuo and Yu Bo said.

At the same time, it can also solve the problem that Zhou Jingzhi said that the characters are superficial. "

"How did it fall to the ground?" Wang Bin asked.

Li Feng said: "After removing the palace, the six main characters can be divided into two opposing camps.

For example, simple officers and soldiers and thieves.

Yes, it can be like this!

Feidaomen is a Jianghu organization engaged in rebellion, and the government wants to arrest them.

At the same time, Feidaomen also wanted to fight back against the government.

In this way, the tone of the whole story is not so lofty, and it does not seem so false.

At the beginning of the story, the blind girl went to assassinate the chief catcher who was in charge of hunting down Feidaomen.

After being caught, the chief arrester sent Suifeng to rescue him in order to find the trace of Feidaomen.

The purpose is to gain its trust, find the location of the flying knife gate, and prepare to capture and kill him in one go.

The love between the two of them remains unchanged, and the plot does not need to change much.

Similarly, if the main thread of the 'conspiracy' is held, the Flying Daomen is in the government, so it should have its internal response.

And this person is the role of the father.

On the surface, he and Sui Feng followed the instructions of the head of the headquarters to eradicate the Feidaomen,
In fact, it was just a tactic, preparing to draw the power of the government into the siege and kill it.

Eliminate the vital forces of the government. "

(End of this chapter)