Rebirth 07: Start adding points from elementary school students

Chapter 170 Young Master with Kidney Deficiency
The time at home is much freer than at school.

The main reason is that Li Yan’s parents are not at home during the day, so she can freely direct...act this drama of life.

Nearing twelve o'clock, Li Yan quietly got up and sent out the VIP chapter, and no longer paid attention to the data.

The next day, Chen Fengling came back at around seven o'clock to prepare breakfast for Li Chun. As soon as she entered the kitchen, she saw Li Yan sitting at the desk typing on the computer keyboard. She was shocked.

"I look up at the sky and trees every once in a while to keep my eyes healthy."

Li Yan successfully predicted Chen Fengling's move.

"I also get up this early every day at school and I'm full of energy."

He predicted successfully again.

Chen Fengling had nothing to say. Since her son worked so hard, she could only make more delicious food for him to nourish his body.

I've grown a few centimeters in the first semester of junior high school. I'll eat more and try to grow to 1.8 meters!

Nowadays, Chen Fengling doesn’t even think lobster is too expensive even if she feeds it to her son.

Kaiyuan was still sending messages to Li Yan at three in the morning last night. The increase in first-order orders was in line with expectations, which kept him awake at night.

Update quickly.

You've already read the 300,000 words in reserve, and you're still urging me to update?
As soon as Li Yan replied, Kaiyuan replied immediately:

Please get excited, this is all income, all achievements! If it were other authors, they would have been calling me “Ahhhhhh” every day, but your indifference makes me feel like a dog.

Li Yan: Only when I stand on the top of the mountain can I feel excited.

Kaiyuan: I’ll make recommendations for you right away!

Then he sent another document - "Kaiyuan Edition of Online Writing Skills".

Li Yan clicked on it and saw that it was all teaching how to write strong emotional points, how to add hooks in chapters, how to set up suspense, how to maintain the pace of updates, and how to use a few free lines in the title and the beginning to attract readers to click in...

Kaiyuan didn't say anything, and Li Yan didn't answer either. He just asked the editor:
Can you show it to me, sir?

Kaiyuan thought about it for a long time but still couldn't figure out what this meant, but the man was a great noble after all, so he just said "don't spread it around" and went back to work.

What do you think? Li Yan asked Mr. Shenxu.

The young master actually replied immediately: I have read it.

Wow, these two guys, don’t you guys sleep in?
Even if you are not a student, today is the weekend!
Li Yan: Sir, I am curious. If you are about to read a plot that is pretentious and slapping in the face, and the title and the first few lines seem to be slapping in the face, and you click on it and find that the end of this chapter is just raising your hand, will you scold the author?

Young Master: Yes.

Li Yan: Then the title of the next chapter is "The raised hand will eventually fall", and the first few lines are almost like a slap in the face. Will you read it?

Young Master: Yes.

Li Yan: In this chapter, the protagonist was about to slap someone but was stopped by someone else. After writing for a long time, the protagonist raised his hand again. Would you scold the author?

Young Master: Say hello to his whole family.

Li Yan: Then...

Before he finished typing, the young master had already sent him the answer:

But I will keep watching until the slap comes.

Li Yan sighed: No matter how much you curse, you still watch, but the more you curse, the more you watch?

Mr. Kidney Deficiency: After seeing this a few times, I got tired of it and just threw it away.

Li Yan: But there will always be people who will continue watching.

Mr. Shenxu: It depends on your choice.

Li Yan: Give me a chance.

Mr. Shenxu responded immediately: How can I give you a chance?

Li Yan: I had no choice before, but now I want to write a good story.

Mr. Shenxu: Okay, go talk to the editor and see if he will let you write a good story.

Li Yan: He really gave it to me. He was very supportive. He sent me some tips this time and didn’t ask me for anything. Maybe he just went with his heart. He was afraid that it would affect my rhythm.

Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Sorry, I am a reader.

Li Yan laughed: Okay, okay, we can start the show now.

Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Which play is this?
Li Yan was stunned. Have you been arguing with me for so long without knowing that this is "Infernal Affairs"?
But it happened to be a holiday, and it was Saturday, so Li Yan took the opportunity to talk about real life:
By the way, Mr. Gongzi, I am really grateful for your golden alliance. I hope to treat you to a meal if I have the chance. Mr. Shenxu: When you become a great writer, just don’t forget me.

Li Yan: That's impossible. But I have to be honest with you. I am actually just a junior high school student.

Someone like Mr. Shenxu who spends hundreds of thousands of dollars must be a big boss. I wonder what he would think about the author of the book he likes, who is a little kid who may be a generation younger than him or even more.

Mr. Shenxu: What a coincidence, I am also a student.

Okay, the rich second-generation college student who took over several companies of his father is also a student.

Li Yan: Why did you give yourself such a name, sir?
Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Because I am quite lustful, and sometimes I feel like my body is being drained.

Wow, I really have kidney deficiency!
Li Yan: Young Master, are you usually...active?

Mr. Kidney Deficiency: Junior high school students should not care about these things, just study hard.

Li Yan: Okay, may I ask where you usually go?

Mr. Kidney Deficiency: At home, how can we do it in public?

Li Yan's hands were shaking: Uh... that's not what I meant. I was asking where you live and see if there's a chance we can have a meal together.

Young Master of Kidney Deficiency: Linjiang Province.

What the hell? Li Yan was shocked: I am also in Linjiang! I study in New Taipei and my home is in Lincheng!
Mr. Shenxu: What a coincidence, I am also in New Taipei.

However, it seemed that he was not willing to reveal too much, and Li Yan did not ask any more questions, but started talking about the plot instead.

But Li Yan has basically drawn a picture of Mr. Kidney Deficiency in his mind, a rich second-generation college student with dark circles under his eyes and kidney deficiency - he is probably hanging around in Linjiang University Town.

After talking about the plot for a while, the young master said he had something to do and prepared to log off.

But before he went offline, he suddenly asked Li Yan: You just want to write a good story, right?
Li Yan: Yes.

Mr. Shenxu: But the data will tell you that you were right to edit that document.

Li Yan: I am right.

Shenxu Gongzi: Very good, stick to yourself. I admire you for this. If your insistence on yourself causes the data to fall short of expectations, I will give you another golden alliance.

The boss is adding insult to injury! Li Yan was terrified, fearing that this guy would really beat him up again, and then he would really become a sponsored author.

How is this appropriate? !

I, Li Yan, am a dignified writer and a real man of steel. How can I eat a second meal of food given out of pity?
Wait until the data really can't be improved before you support her.

After chatting for a while early in the morning, as the time approached 7:30, Li Yan opened the dialog box with Xiaopang:

What happened to the winter break training diary? Is the goal on the first day to sleep in?

Lin Zhiyuan didn't respond, but the dormitory group avatar started to jump. It was a message from Liang Tiancheng: What are everyone's plans for the winter vacation?

Li Yan looked at her own avatar, which was the only one that lit up in the group, and replied:

They show you with their actions that the first day is the time to sleep in.

Sky Voice A: What about you, Li Yan?

Li Yan: It’s rare to see you surfing so early, Liang Ban.

Sky Voice A: Fortunately, I don’t want to waste the winter vacation. I thought about the gap between you and me, and the gap between Chen Fan and me, and decided to learn more knowledge in advance, no matter whether it is useful or not, I will expand my knowledge first.

Li Yan: It’s pretty good. I do whatever I do in the dormitory, such as writing, reading, and playing ball.

Sky Voice A: I made a diary to record what I did every day. I hope that by the end of the winter vacation, this diary will be full of harvest. Then I will go to study, Li Yan 886.

The avatar becomes dark when it is said to be dark.

Li Yan could imagine how the other roommates would feel when they woke up from a late nap and saw these few sentences of conversation.

Don’t blame me, Li Yan smiled and turned off the computer, then walked to the window and stared at the sky in the distance.

The small window is blocked by the nearby iron shed and the residential area in the distance, and only a small piece of sky cut into a diamond shape can be seen.

Before his rebirth, he sighed, "How can I fly high in such a sky?" It was quite pretentious.

Let's read a book. This kind of peaceful state of mind is not common. I don't seek to accumulate or improve myself when reading now. I just read it for enjoyment.

At night, Li Yan was in the room complaining about Xiaopang's poor performance on the first day. At the same time, she was paying attention to the first order results which were to be announced in four hours. Suddenly, Chen Fengling in the living room received a call.

Li Yan’s primary school homeroom teacher, Chen Wenjing.

(End of this chapter)