Reborn great writer

Chapter 334 The Script Is Not Written Like This

"First of all, I would like to ask who wrote these five scripts?" Su Shichen selected five out of the eight scripts. The writing style and plot arrangement of these five scripts were obviously higher than those of the other three scripts, and their style of writing was obvious. It's two people. .

"Three of them were written by Xiaohan, and the other two were written by the president." The girl named Mouse replied.

"President Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan must have written novellas or short stories." Su Shichen asked again.

"Well, I have been serializing my novellas in newspapers since high school, and Xiao Jiang has published two books since high school, and the sales are pretty good." When Han Yege said this, Jiang Xiaohan They all felt a little embarrassed, the sales of his two books were indeed good in front of others, but in front of Su Shichen, it was not at 01:30 o'clock.

Su Shichen nodded slightly. Tsinghua University is worthy of being one of the most famous universities in China, with a large number of talents. Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan can be called geniuses without a doubt.

But this further proves that Su Shichen's comments are unreliable, let alone the others, how can Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan put so much effort into writing something that is not even a script?This makes people a little unconvincing.

"Who wrote this?" Su Shichen picked up another script again and asked, "Who wrote this script?"

"I..." There was a timid voice, and the one who spoke was the girl named Mouse, "That...although I saw my mother write a drama script before, but...it was my first time to write a script by myself, so, Maybe...it seems that the writing is not very good."

"Although the writing is not good, at least from my point of view, this script is much better than these five." Su Shichen once again gave an unexpected evaluation.

"Su... Shichen, this joke is not funny at all." The mouse thought Su Shichen was joking with her.

Su Shichen shrugged, "I'm not joking at all. From the basic point of view of drama, the script you wrote is indeed much better than these five scripts."

"No, no...how can it be?" The mouse waved his hands again and again.

Well, from the very beginning, Su Shichen said that none of these drama scripts could be called scripts, and now the random evaluation, why is it random evaluation, even the script author's own mouse does not think that he is better than Han Yege Both Jiang Xiaohan and Jiang Xiaohan wrote well, but Su Shichen said so. If it wasn't because of Su Shichen's reputation and amazing achievements, someone would have directly refuted it.Of course, although no one spoke now, the annoyance on his face could still be seen at a glance, especially when Jiang Xiaohan moved his mouth and was about to say something.

Su Shichen turned a blind eye to this situation and continued: "Looking at these scripts, it can be seen that the writing skills of the two of you and the way of writing stories are very good. This kind of familiar writing style, from the perspective of novels, is of course the five scripts. It’s better, but we’re not talking about novels now.” The first half is still a compliment to Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan, but the words paused and the topic changed, “What I want to say is that there is a big difference between novels and scripts. of."

"Let's not talk about novels, even movie scripts and opera scripts are very different, how to sum up this difference..." Su Shichen rubbed his chin, "Simply speaking, scripts have no emotion."

As the saying goes, if words are not surprising, Su Shichen seems to be like this. Every sentence he said is more shocking than one sentence. This concluding sentence will startle the seniors and sisters in the activity room. What is a script? No feelings?How can it be possible for a creator to be emotionless?This is something that only laymen can say.

"To put it simply, novels can express the author's feelings through words, and movies and TV series can also be expressed through monologues, but stage plays can't. Could it be that actors are performing on the stage? The voice of the inner monologue? Therefore, the expression of emotion in the drama is only through body movements or words, so all of these in the script are useless." Su Shichen sat on the table and wrote the five scripts with a pen on the table. All the emotions described on the side are crossed out.

Although Su Shichen's action was unexpected, he didn't meet any opposition. He paused and continued: "The other thing is the characters. First of all, the minor characters in the movie may be necessary, because only in this way can the main characters be highlighted. The characteristics of the characters are absolutely necessary. But a novel can be expressed in a paragraph, and a movie can be expressed in the same scene. But in a stage play, can you imagine twenty or thirty characters on stage at a time? "

Leaving aside the size of the stage, even if the size is not taken into account, the audience of twenty or thirty characters at a time can't die randomly?

"Another point is that the relationship between the characters is too complicated to be expressed on the stage. So these dispensable characters can also be deleted." Another large paragraph was crossed out.

"By the way, there is another point that the drama script is the same as the movie script. The actors must know exactly what actions, expressions, or lines to say at what time. It is the root of the script. So these descriptions are very beautiful words and sentences in the novel, but there is no doubt that they are useless in the script." Su Shichen's strokes of the pen can be drawn much better, almost making Han One-third of the five scripts written by Yege and Jiang Xiaohan were crossed out.

After Su Shichen crossed out like this, almost half of the five drama scripts written by Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan were crossed out.

Then put the script that has been marked as "broken" with the script written by the mouse, and ask: "Now which script do you think is better?"

Now all the people in the activity room have nothing to say, because the facts are in front of them, what else can they say?Jiang Xiaohan wanted to open her mouth to say something, but she also closed it, and the entire activity room fell into silence.

"So I wrote so well?" the mouse muttered cutely.

"Isn't the mouse's script based on the format? It's not all bad." Some people may have been rejected by Su Shichen once because of the hard-working script, and they were a little unconvinced, so they whispered He muttered such a sentence, but it was particularly obvious in the quiet activity room.

"Mouse's script, probably because I have read drama scripts before, has no problems in terms of expression and format, but the dialogue is too straightforward. Drama has a very interesting regulation. Stage plays are performances rather than reading aloud. , that is to say, the movements performed by the actors should not be too few, the combination of movements and language is a perfect stage play."

"However, if you act according to the script written by the mouse, you can almost only use language to promote the development of the plot, so that the audience will have the intuitive impression that you are connecting the script instead of performing the script." Su Shichen's words are very organized, and The most important thing is, thinking about it carefully, it seems that it is really what Su Shichen said.

Han Yege sighed, obviously agreeing with Su Shichen's statement, his complexion is not good, it's natural, many people in their cultural club have worked so hard for so long, the things are completely unqualified in the end, novels and The drama script is really big.

Jiang Xiaohan was speechless, holding his three manuscripts, looking at the paragraphs that Su Shichen had scratched out with his pen, his face was livid, and he didn't know what he was thinking.

Not only was Su Shichen not an outsider, but he also used sharp comments to tell them that this is the real expert.

The atmosphere in the activity room changed from a hot atmosphere to a silent and oppressive atmosphere. Su Shichen secretly broke into a cold sweat and thought to himself: "Is it too much? I don't blame me for it. I shouldn't blame me." Right. This is what they insisted on me to say. No, now is not the time to think about this, it seems that the most important thing now is to restore their confidence."

"Ahem." He cleared his throat first, "Seniors and seniors, this is also the first time I have written it, and I have no experience..." Su Shichen suddenly remembered something. The school opera event is held once a year. It seems that the cultural agency is in charge, so Han Yege is a senior, so it is logically impossible to make such a mistake, maybe something happened to the cultural agency?

My thoughts went astray, and I came back to my senses and said: "The writing of the drama script this time is a matter for the entire cultural club. I have joined the cultural club just now, so I should also help." Su Shichen said so.

Su Shichen's words shocked everyone, and they began to be happy. Just now, Su Shichen's comment was so sharp, it should be because he knows the drama script very well. It is definitely very good to have Su Shichen's help.

"When will this script be handed in?" Su Shichen estimated, "I'm running out of time recently, if I'm in a hurry, there's nothing I can do."

"The campus drama will be held on NO.20 next month, and it's just two months away, because the performing troupe still has to rehearse with the script, so the script will be handed over to them in about one month."

"Okay, I'll try my best. We're about to start class. Seniors and seniors, I'll leave first." Su Shichen looked at the time on his phone. It was time for this class to end, and he was about to leave the activity room.

"We have to work hard. Before, it was because we had no experience, but now we have experience. We can't put all our hopes on Shi Chen when it comes to the script. We have to work hard. Mouse, you will give us a moment Tell me about the format in detail, ** is still not successful, and comrades must continue to work hard." The cultural agency started the first effort with one heart.

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At this time, Su Shichen had already arrived in the classroom, waiting for the class to start, and thought about it in this spare time: "Drama scripts, comedies, tragedies, historical dramas, "A Midsummer Night's Dream", "Hamlet", "Henry IV" ", isn't it just a school opera, wouldn't that be too exaggerated?"

Just thinking about it like this has nothing to say, because the class has started.

After Su Shichen returned to school, his life entered a very peaceful stage. When there were classes, he would walk around the school garden between classes. As for when there were no classes, he would just sit in his room and write fairy tales. What he had to do It is to complete this collection of fairy tales in the shortest possible time.

So this level of seriousness can be said to be a waste of sleep and food. With such efforts, in two weeks, Su Shichen finally finished writing the fairy tale "Everything will be fine".

It took Su Shichen half a month to write down stories just in his head. The reason is that Su Shichen not only copied but also modified. ", "Wilde's Fairy Tales" The stories selected in these three books will become more Chinese style.

I sent the manuscript to Wang Ni's mailbox, and then made a phone call.

"Auntie, the manuscript of the collection of fairy tales has been sent to you."

"Well, I saw it."

It was less than a minute after he sent the email. Su Shichen asked, "Auntie, you won't be staring at the mailbox all the time." Otherwise, there would be such a coincidence.

"It's not just a coincidence. The name "Everything Will Be Okay" is so strange. Does it have any special meaning?" Such a name might sound like the name of a series of healing novels, or the title of a song, but it doesn't look like that at all. The name of a collection of fairy tales.

"It makes a little sense. By the way, Auntie, you said before that the publicity is ready, so when will the book be published?" Su Shichen asked, "Can it be tomorrow?"

"Is it urgent? Even if the promotion time is shortened, printing and typesetting still takes time, at least until the day after tomorrow." One day's printing and publicity, and then the time for a book to be published is very rushed, but fortunately, Wang Ni's preparation is very perfect. ?

"Send the manuscript to typesetting."

The attachment was downloaded to the USB flash drive, and the secretary took it to typesetting.

At the same time, Wang Ni called the planning department of the publicity department: "According to the original publicity plan, coordinate with the publishing department to carry out publicity."

Shanshi Company made efforts, and the collection of fairy tales "Everything Will Be Okay" written by Su Shichen set sail...

ps: Many readers asked if the update time of the kitten can be more stable. In fact, if there is no accident, the kitten updates twice a day, but because of writing novels, it has now developed the habit of sleeping during the day and being active at night. (This is not good, because the little cat The cat originally had stomach problems and slept during the day, which made the kittens unable to eat on time for a long time, and the stomach problems became more and more serious.) I started writing at night, so the chapters were released in the early morning.

You don't have to stay up late to wait for the update, because you can see the two chapters updated when you wake up the next day, which is quite stable.

The kitten has become a night owl. In this case, I still don’t throw a monthly ticket and give a reward. What are you waiting for...

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