Reborn great writer

iq group - Tianjie 5

The half-house kid: "It's rare, it's rare, it's rare that Su Da is so happy this time, a big man with cute big tits."

Manzhushahua: "I believe in love again. According to Tianda's deceitful behavior before, I speculate that after the investigation results come out, it will be more than B. Tianda said that I am just teasing you. I am ready to be punished." I prepared it for fun, but I didn't expect it to be posted, when did the heavens correct the evil and return to the right?"

Foodie pig: "I have rectified from evil and turned to righteousness early in the day. I don't know how virtuous it is to establish a 'for a while'. As the saying goes, knowing your mistakes can make a big difference."

Manzhushahua: "It seems that he has indeed corrected his evil and returned to the right. I didn't expect that a generation of pit kings would also have the time to correct their evil and return to the right."

The half-house kid: "I'm hiding. By the way, after reading the introduction, this time "Shading the Sky" seems to be very powerful. The name alone is much more domineering than the previous novels."

Manzhu Shahua: "You can tell from the introduction that you can climb the road to heaven, sing songs, and cover the sky with your fingers. You must be domineering."

Foodie pig: "Going to read, I said my big knife is already hungry and thirsty."

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Su Shichen, who has been praised by many readers as having turned his back on evil, is now struggling to rewrite "Sword of the Immortal Sword One". Writing novels in the "Sword of the Immortal Sword" series is far more difficult than he thought.First of all, Su Shichen didn't intend to follow Guan Pingchao's official novel, but planned to write it himself according to the game, and he was full of confidence, but he didn't realize that it was really difficult until he started writing.

There are too many branches of the game, and it is also divided into two versions: old and new.There are a lot of touching points. If you really want to write it all down, it is not impossible, but there will be a consequence.More than 50.00% of the character's vision is not on the protagonist. Is it really good to write it like this?

Like Su Shichen's "Prehistoric Series", there is no protagonist, just like a criss-crossed picture.But if there is a protagonist, it is a light source. It is no problem for the emitted light to flicker, but once the light is brighter than the light source, what will it look like?

"Appropriate deletion is a must. And the vision must follow the protagonist." Su Shichen wanted to take the emotional route Su Shichen naturally chose to write about the moving plot in the game. Write down the plot completely.

Of course, the most important point is to be completely unaffected by the TV series, the TV series made by the Tang people.One male and three females were apparently fine, but they were forcibly turned into two pairs, two females and one husband, and the other pair abused from head to toe.

It is obvious that Anu has a deep affection for Li Xiaoyao.What's the matter with Tang Yu Xiaobao?good.Although this change, the plot of Anu and Tang Yu is very touching, and the arms are broken and they still stick together, but this is not the original fairy sword at all.

It is impossible to be a fan of Xianjian: "Think about it, think about it."

"First of all, Lin Yueru saved Zhao Linger, and then she was hit by a boulder. This point is not the most touching. The most touching thing is that Li Xiaoyao recalled every little bit before Lin Yueru. People sigh." Pa Pa typed on the computer.It can be made into a document in a while.

Search out the plot of the demon-locking tower in your head, and it is enough to write down the outline of the plot, and then expand it when it is time to write.

"Of course there must be a story about Caiyi and Liu Jinyuan, especially when she sacrificed a thousand years of Taoism in exchange for Liu Jinyuan's ten years of life, but she herself turned into a butterfly. When playing games, the song "Butterfly Love" made me How many players have shed tears?" While recording these on the computer, Su Shichen wondered if he should also make the single "Butterfly Love"?

To be honest, if you listen to the song "Butterfly Love" alone, you will not feel very good.

But when that contemptuous and long tune, coupled with the story of Caiyi and Liu Jiyuan, is definitely a tearjerker, "Butterfly Love" is classical music, but the score can still be found in Su Shichen's mind, so this idea It’s not impossible. You can talk to the webmaster of Xinxing Blog and ask him to change “Butterfly Love” into space background music, and then when readers click on this blog, the content of the blog will move to that position. , the music will be played automatically.

Su Shichen, who doesn't know much about computers, doesn't know whether this method is feasible, so I will write it down for now, and I must ask it carefully when I have time.

Su Shichen concentrated on recording the touching plots of Xianjianyi on the computer, like the plot of Zhao Linger sacrificing his life and many other touching plots.If he can't write well and ruin such a classic plot, he can't even forgive himself.

In the previous life, there were indeed many people on the earth who compared Immortal Sword and Jade Immortal, and the direction of comparison was which one was worse, but is misery comparable?Jade Immortal and Immortal Sword are both classics, and one is a game and the other is a novel, there is nothing comparable to it.Of course, from the perspective of the story, Immortal Sword is more in line with Su Shichen's appetite, the reason is very simple, because playing the game, he has a more sense of substitution for the plot in the game.

To connect the touching plot points recorded on the computer without deleting them, and to ensure the original flavor of the plot, this is Su Shichen's next job.

Sitting in front of the computer like this for the whole morning, I was a little thirsty after writing, and I was going to get a drink from the refrigerator, but I saw my mother Wei Xin rummaging for something.

"Mom, what are you looking for?" Su Shichen asked while drinking a drink.

"I don't know where I put the keys of the house. I remember I saw it just now." Rummaging on the sofa.

Su Shichen smiled, "Mom, I finally know how my forgetfulness came about. It turned out to be inherited from you, Mom."

"Go, don't be poor, what are you still doing standing there, if you don't help me find it."

Su Shichen put the drink on the table and asked, "Mom, have you found your bag?"

"No, I've searched everything." She had searched for Wei Xin's dark satchel many times.This time, I dumped all the contents on the sofa, but there was nothing there.

"Mom, where was the last time you saw the key?"

"It's...forget it. I don't know." Wei Xin first closed his eyes to remember, but he might become irritable when he couldn't remember, and then he didn't think about it. This is exactly the same as Su Shichen.

"Let's not look for it yet, Ah Chen, where's your key?" Wei Xin put all the poured out cosmetics back into the bag. "Of course I didn't bring it back, otherwise I wouldn't have knocked on the door yesterday." Su Shichen changed his clothes when he returned to Yangcheng from the school suite.And he was walking in a hurry.

"Ah Chen, if you don't go out today, you will stay at home and look for me when I come back." Wei Xin closed the door with a "bang" and left with her bag on her shoulders.But within a minute the doorbell rang.

"There must be something missing." Su Shichen whispered.

When he opened the door, his mother Wei Xin said anxiously, "Ah Chen, give me the wallet on the sofa. I forgot to bring my wallet when I went out." The pink wallet was thrown into the pillow on the sofa. The corner of the cover is covered, so she didn't see it when it was put back just now.Fortunately, it was discovered in time.If you walk a long way and find that you don't have your wallet with you, it's really sad.

"Sure enough, it's not that the whole family doesn't enter the house." Su Shichen felt speechless covering his forehead, because he often made this kind of mistake, "Let's think about it, my mother is as used to misplacing things as I am, and the keys are usually left behind. Among the satchels, there is only one situation in the satchel." Su Shichen came to the bedroom of his father and mother, and squatted by the bed to search for it, and he found it.It is estimated that this is when his mother was tossing the satchel upside down this morning, she fell out of bed.

Put the keys on the table.And he was sitting on the sofa, quite happy, because there was his favorite spicy fish at noon, and he hadn't eaten spicy fish made by his mother for a long time.

Well, Su Shichen is very happy, but those readers who were cheated by him, they can't wait to eat his meat.As the saying goes, if you don’t die, you won’t die. Su Shichen’s previous behavior is completely a symbol of dying...

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Manzhu Shahua is very happy at this time, why is she happy, because the powerful update of Chapter 32 is waiting for her,

In fact, she is looking forward to "Sword of Immortal" more than "Covering the Sky". It is precisely because of "Zhu Xian" that she likes Su Shichen's novels.

"The Bronze Coffin, Chapter 1 is the title. Contrary to "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation" and "Zhu Xian", is this a fast-paced rhythm?" According to the content in the book, nine hundred-meter-long dragons appeared in the distant space, and according to the description in the book, this dragon is not the winged lizard of the west, but the real one in the ancient Chinese legends. Dragon, lying quietly in the starry sky, this is what the astronauts who explored the starry sky saw.

Dragons in ancient China, this kind of creature is explained by modern science. This kind of thing is a totem of ancient tribes. It is fictional or fake. However, during the interstellar exploration, such a picture was captured, which subverts the seriousness of human beings. Existence, this point is well described in the novel "Shading the Sky", Manzhushahua nodded after reading it.

Of course, this is not the most important thing. The most important thing is that the tails of the nine dragons are connected with iron chains, pulling a 20-meter-high bronze giant coffin, which is high-end and classy!

"Tsk tsk... Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin, this opening scene should be the biggest among Su Da's novels, coupled with Su Da's very graphic language, it really shocks people." Manzhu Shahua admitted that she Was also slightly shocked.

At the same time, a small seed of doubt was buried in Manzhu Shahua's heart. With such a big battle in Kowloon to pull the coffin, who is the person in the coffin?

Immediately after that, even greater doubts came. The protagonist Ye Fan and others went to Mount Tai to play, but the nine dragon corpses that were originally lying in the starry sky fell from the sky and hit Mount Tai. A crack was smashed into the ground, and then appeared on the What they saw in front of them was the Five-Color Altar where the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors enshrined Zen, and the huge bronze coffin pulled by Kowloon was completely parked on the Five-Color Altar, as if it was summoned by the Five-Color Altar.

The plots one by one are very compact. It is no problem to write these plots for other authors at least four or five chapters, and ten chapters that are too watery are fine.But now so much content is all packed into these two chapters, so I want to skip and read, there is no way to read ten lines at a glance.For Manzhushahua, she reads ordinary novels, which are 30 seconds. Anyway, it takes less than 1 minute per chapter, but reading "Shading the Sky" takes 6 to [-] minutes per chapter. This speed has dropped a lot.

Seeing the five-color altar in Chapter 7, Manzhushahua asked this question: "It seems that this Kowloon coffin is useless, and it was just written to make the opening scene bigger?"

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ps: Yesterday’s Chapter 3, I don’t know how many chapters can be made today, and I don’t know why the kitten is used to digging holes. It’s obviously filling the holes, but it’s writing and digging new holes. Tragedy... )