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It is useless to pull the coffin in Kowloon. This is the conclusion Manzhu Shahua came to after watching Chapter 6 The Land of Zen and Chapter 7 Five-color Altar. .Because from the point of view of the description, Kowloon pulled the coffin and hit Mount Tai, and there was a crack in Mount Tai. This writing seems to be just to lead to the legendary five-color altar where the three emperors and five emperors enshrined Zen. All kinds of visions of the five-color altar show that this is the most important thing.

Writing like this really made the scene a lot more atmospheric, but the crux of the problem is that writing like this is a bit redundant.From the introduction and classification, it can be seen that this is a novel of cultivating immortals, and the background is in another world.There is nothing wrong with the protagonist being in the real society of the earth. Simply follow the development of the novel. After a while, the protagonist Ye Fan touches the power of the five-color altar and travels to the world of cultivating immortals. Otherwise, such a condition cannot be formed at all. This can be said to be like a template development of the plot.According to this development, the so-called Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin is really something that adds momentum to the opening.

Although the plot of Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin is not something that ordinary authors can think of, but Manzhushahua still feels a little disappointed. After all, she has great expectations for Su Shichen's work of closing mountains.

""Covering the Sky" is indeed the most imposing opening of all Suda's novels, but it pursues momentum too much." Manzhu Shahua commented.

Well, this is a bit like Beckham, the heartthrob in football. Beckham's free kick is famous. Of course, if it succeeds, the media will praise his skills, but once he fails , the media will say that Beckham pursues angles too much.

The beginning of "Shading the Sky" was well written and many people praised it, but if it was poorly written.Readers will come up with the same comments as Manzhu Shahua. The opening is majestic and majestic, but it feels a little false.

But is this really the case?

If you ask Su Shichen which novel's beginning is the best in his opinion.Maybe he would say Dickens' "A Tale of Two Cities" without hesitation.Su Shichen really can't answer the question that has the best beginning among the novels written by Wenluo. This "best" is not something that ordinary novels can afford, but the one that impressed him very deeply is undoubtedly "Covering the Sky" is one of them. one.

The novel that left such a deep impression on Su Shichen, how could it be because of the burden of highlighting the momentum at the beginning...

Manzhushahua watched the content of the next chapter, and the development of the plot of "Shading the Sky" completely had a wonderful turning point.It wasn't the time-travel rebirth she had imagined at all, but the 20-meter-long bronze coffin pulled by the nine dragon corpses opened, sucking the protagonist Ye Fan and others into it.Then the nine dragon corpses flew up again, pulling the coffin into the sky.The important thing is that the dragon corpse is still a dragon corpse and there is no sign of resurrection, but it just flew up with the coffin carrying the protagonist Ye Fan and others, and flew towards the mysterious passage constructed by the mysterious Tai Chi gossip diagram.

"Fuck me. Has Kowloon coffin turned into a train?" Manzhu Shahua was shocked by the development of this plot.

Actually don't say it.The first time Su Shichen saw this Kowloon pulling the coffin and putting the protagonist and others into the bronze coffin, and then the Kowloon took off, he remembered the interstellar train in Doraemon.

The development of the story of "Covering the Sky" is not at all the plot that Manzhu Shahua thought in his mind. What kind of five-color altar is reborn through time, and the Kowloon pull coffin is just a foil. The coffin is what matters.

It was unexpected.

"Sure enough, what I'm saying is that "Covering the Sky" is a work that closes mountains. This is how it looks like a work that closes mountains." Manzhu Shahua's interest suddenly increased, and he wanted to see whether the Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin was the main character. Waiting for someone to pull it somewhere.

The plot was slowly dragged out.The Kowloon coffin was most likely made by ancient people, and it was most likely the era when China disappeared. The protagonist and others were dragged to a strange continent, and they might not even be on the earth at all.

Manzhushahua's question was solved, but a new question came again.

"Another way to break time and space and go back to the ancient times of the earth?" Manzhu Shahua thought this way, "This highlights the importance of the Kowloon coffin, and look at this rhythm, is this worn by many people together?"

Manzhushahua underestimated "Shading the Sky" too much. After coming to a strange place, Ye Fan and others found the carving of the dragon, and according to the inscription on the carving, the continent they are on is Mars.

"I'm dizzy, it turned out to be Mars? The trend of this plot is really beyond what ordinary people can guess." Manzhu Shahua suddenly remembered something, and shouted, "Could it be that the five-color altar is a teleportation array?"

According to the book, the Nine Dragons Coffin reached Mars through the mysterious passage built on Mount Tai, and Mars also has an identical teleportation array.

Immediately afterwards, Ye Fan and others saw a building relic, and after identification, this building turned out to be the Great Leiyin Temple in the Western Paradise, and they also saw the ancient Bodhi tree where Sakyamuni preached.

In other words, Sakyamuni sat on this ancient Bodhi tree in front of this great Leiyin temple in Mars for seven days and seven nights and became a Buddha.

Mars... Great Leiyin Temple in the Paradise of Paradise

These are two places that no one would think of together at all, but they are abruptly brought together in "Shading the Sky", which is called a novelty.

"Mommy, the background of "Shading the Sky" is really as the introduction said, and it's really big." Manzhushahua didn't know what to say, and his head was full of doubts, "Could it be that the legendary Western Paradise? Is it not on Earth at all but on Mars? There is also Nine Dragons pulling the coffin, what kind of background is this trying to express?"

This novel is a fairy-tale novel, so there are gods and Buddhas naturally, so there is nothing wrong with the appearance of Buddhism, Manjushahua, but she is curious about the reason why this Daleiyin Temple has become so beautiful It's dilapidated, but it's a place where so many Buddhist powers exist.

"It's good to heat up quickly, it's good to heat up quickly, I didn't expect to enter the ** in the first few chapters." Manzhu Shahua said so.

According to legend, there are many demons and ghosts sealed under the Daleiyin Temple, and when the protagonists took away the bronze plaque of the Daleiyin Temple, the ruins of the Daleiyin Temple disappeared with the wind.It was gone.One of the most direct consequences caused by the disappearance of the Great Leiyin Temple is that the legendary monsters suppressed by the Buddha will appear, and the first one to appear is the legendary one who was suppressed on the first floor of the Leiyin Temple Crocodile ancestor.

Everyone, including the protagonist, is mortal.Even if you still hold the vessel of the legendary Buddha in your hand, there is no way to compete with the legendary existence. In other words, the lives of the protagonists are threatened, which is what Manjushahua muttered ** with the point of conflict.

And what is written is not only these unexpected plots, but also the struggle of people's hearts, the contradictions among people, and various calculations.

"Everyone has their own ghosts. This is the best part. Nowadays, there are many online novels that only focus on the frankness of the plot and don't pay attention to the portrayal of the characters. But the characters of Su University have always been well portrayed."

The protagonist Ye Fan and the others can be said to have been brought to Mars. Facing such a powerful Crocodile Zu, it can be said that they have been driven to a desperate situation. Human beings show all ugliness in order to survive, and Ye Fan was almost pushed down by his companions. altar.

"Human surnames in a desperate situation. This is what Su Da showed very well in "Infinite Horror". Each has its own surname, and there is no mask." Manzhushahua looked at it seriously.

In order to avoid the crocodile ancestors, everyone returned to the coffin again, and then used the blood of those little crocodiles to activate Jiulong to pull the coffin again, and vacated again.

"Won't it just return to Earth like this? That would be too anticlimactic."

Manzhushahua naturally thought too much. This time the Nine Dragons coffin was sailing in the interstellar space. At the same time, an ancient starry sky map emerged in the bronze coffin, and there were tiny lines on the starry sky map. .And this line is the current route of the Nine Dragons Coffin, that is to say.This is a starry sky road map.

"Isn't this just like the flight path of an airplane? But this one is stronger, it is directly the flight route of the starry sky." Manzhushahua said, "The only ones who have this ability are those gods and Buddhas." Manzhushahua is very curious now , What does the end point of this starry sky roadmap look like, and is it another planet like Mars?

Taking the Kowloon coffin and sailing through the Big Dipper finally reached the point.

It should be said that this is the place where the story of "Shading the Sky" begins. In this place, everyone saw the legendary golden-winged roc, as well as the strange environment, and the mysterious creatures shedding their skins in the black pool water, etc. All of them show that this world is the legendary world of cultivating immortals.

"Su Da is really good enough. It took so many chapters to get into the theme, and it didn't make people feel procrastinated at all. Instead, it made me feel that there would be no such exciting feeling without the previous foreshadowing. This is strength. , What kind of world is this?" Can't wait to watch the next chapter, but Su Shichen not only did not fill in the hole, but a bigger hole appeared, and together with the protagonist, everyone in this world has become seventy or eighty-year-old The old man, but the protagonist himself seems to be rejuvenated, turning into a child.

Just coming to this world is such a big surprise, and then...

When Manzhushahua couldn't wait to turn to the next page, it was the last reward page, which meant it was gone.

"How is it possible? Didn't 32 chapters be published at one time? How could there be no more?" Manzhushahua looked at the title and realized that the chapter she just read was exactly that.

Before he knew it, Manzhushahua had already read all the updates.

"How can it be over like this? How can it be over like this! It's unscientific!" Manzhushahua no longer has the image of a lady at all, and keeps repeating this sentence in his mouth.

The road opened by the gods in the starry sky, where is this continent?Why did the Great Leiyin Temple run to Mars and decline? The suppressed monsters still exist, so where did the legendary gods and Buddhas go?

The most important thing is, Jiulong pulls the coffin, who is in that coffin?It can even be said to scare the legendary crocodile ancestor, so why was it summoned from the distant starry sky by the five-color altar?

With so many pitfalls one after another, Su Shichen is so irresponsible.

Soon Manzhushahua thought of another thing, which was for [-] days, that is to say, it would not be updated in the next [-] days, and she had to wait for [-] days with these questions.Thinking of this, Manzhushahua really feels like he is about to explode, suffering!

Manzhushahua understood, she finally understood why Su Shichen was so powerful all of a sudden, why he released Chapter 32 so boldly, the content of Chapter 32 was a tiankeng, a divine pit.

"Ahhhh, how could there be... how could there be such an unscrupulous author?!"

ps: I'm not doing well today, two updates are guaranteed, and there will be another update before twelve o'clock in the evening. . )