College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 10 Godot Has Came Today
(Choose one of the three topics in the 2006 Fujian volume)

Writing Ideas Tips
Candidates need to thoroughly understand the three elements in the question stem: "Godo", "today", and "has come".Regarding the main element of "Godot", most researchers today believe that "Godot" means the object of waiting, a vague hope that people harbor in their frightened lives, and a vague hope for the future. If there is no hope.Knowing this, candidates can start writing from the meaning, function, and enlightenment of the symbolic body of "Godot" in "today" and "already come".

Full score sample essay
The man is in the dim light

(a candidate from Fujian)

Someone once asked Beckett who his Godot was, and Beckett replied, "If I knew, I would have told you."

Waiting for Godot, but who the hell is Godot?If we don't understand this point, even if Godot comes, we will still be strangers, and we will just pass each other.

In my mind, "Godot" is the long-lost spiritual tranquility and clarity of thought in modern people's hearts.We have been immersed in the noise and commotion for too long, and we are a little strange to things like beliefs, ideals, and friendship.

Godot is faith.For the insignificance of human beings, ancient and modern people feel the same.But modern people feel more and more vulnerable to the strength of machine civilization, and the flame of faith is more ethereal.It is true that man is just a reed, the most fragile thing in the universe, but man is a thinking reed, and man possesses unparalleled spiritual power.

"People are just sparks, sent from today to tomorrow by faith." As long as the faith keeps going, the spark will never go out.Godot's return is not far away.

Godot is ideal. "Youth's dream is the dream of the wind, and the longing of youth is the longing." This is the ballad sung by the Nordic sailors when they sailed.When we embark on the journey of life, we should also think about whether we are ready to realize our ideals.If people have no ideals, they will be trapped in boundless emptiness and waiting.Instead of letting life go by in vain, why don't we set up ideals now to welcome Godot's arrival?
Godot is still moral.When we embark on the journey of life, we must not forget to have a kind heart and go on the road with morality.If the ancients wanted to establish a career, they must first establish virtue.Virtue is like the wind, merit is like grass, and when the wind blows above, the grass will be blown away, and there will be no disadvantages.Modern people put too much emphasis on profit and despise righteousness, so that they lack mutual trust. How can they not feel lonely and hopeful in their hearts?Coordinating interpersonal relationships with a loving heart, then we will always feel that we are immersed in the warmth of love.

"I searched for him thousands of times in the crowd, and suddenly I looked back, but the man was there, in a dimly lit place." If we have strengthened our belief in life, set up lofty ideals, and set out on the road with morality, then we will find that "Godot" is already in us. before.

In fact, Godot has never left us, Godot is with us, but we are in a hurry, busy with trivial matters, so that even the feeling of wind is slipping away from our hands all the time.What is really waiting is Godot. Godot has always hoped that people can discover him as soon as possible, so that people can return to the unity of soul and body.

Godot has come today, I hope people can grasp Godot so that he will not leave us again tomorrow!

score review
The author of this article did not entangle what "Godot" is, but gave a correct interpretation from the three aspects of "belief", "ideal" and "morality" in general, and further proposed that "we have strengthened our belief in life,... will find that 'Gorot' is before us" insight.The writing idea of ​​the article is clearly visible, the arrangement of paragraphs is reasonable, the sentences are closely connected, and the language is extremely fluent and free, which shows the author's strong language expression ability.The title "The man is in the dim light" subtly implies the topic "Gorot has come today", and it also has the finishing touch, adding a literary color to the article.The use of the title is wonderful!

wonderful words
Man is just a reed, the most fragile thing in the universe, but man is a thinking reed, and man has unparalleled spiritual power.

If the ancients wanted to establish a career, they must first establish virtue.Virtue is like the wind, merit is like grass, and when the wind blows above, the grass will be blown away, and there will be no disadvantages.

In fact, Godot has never left us, Godot is with us, but we are in a hurry, busy with trivial matters, so that even the feeling of wind is slipping away from our hands all the time.

Celebrity Quotes
I looked for him thousands of times in the crowd, and suddenly I looked back, but the man was there, in a dimly lit place. ——Xin Qiji's "Sapphire Case·Yuanxi"

Godot is coming, please close the doors and windows
(a candidate from Fujian)

It was still that summer, the sun was shining brightly.

The background is the same, and it is still called absurd drama, but the protagonist has become me.I took off my boots and fell down vigorously, frantically fiddled with my messy hair, hoping that Godot would appear in the dandruff.

I don't know what Godot is, is it a three-headed and six-armed monster, is it a charming goddess, or, is it a wrinkled grandmother?The dry wind blew the trees along the road, my waiting was drawn into shadows by the sun, and there was something in me longing for Godot to come like a monster, like a goddess, or like a grandmother.

I know my life has repeated the pattern of the first day a hundred times, but they tell me it's not enough, that's not enough for a school year!So I will continue to save until I have saved enough for three years, in exchange for a thunderbolt that turns into a dragon.

But I don't believe it, I will sneak out at noon to wait for Godot, I believe Godot will give me something different.

Godot enters.

Unexpectedly, Godot actually had Jay Chou's head, swayed some kind of snake-like body language, and approached me in a Porsche.Although a little surprised, I remained calm, after all, what I was waiting for had arrived. "Hello," I said timidly.He answered me, "Hi" in some sort of slurred accent.

Next, I had dinner with Godot, and during the conversation, I found that his thoughts were actually grafted to another person, the petty bourgeois woman who said that writing was a suicide process, who wanted to destroy everything—Anne Baby.

I know this Godot is adored by many, but my disappointment begins to spread.I'm sorry, I'm trying to be as polite as possible, I still have an appointment, so I'm leaving first.It (she, he) sips a cappuccino and asks me, with whom?I hastily said, I will wait for Godot.Then he fled as if flying.

Then I saw Godot again, singing in a concert, followed by thousands of fans shaking their heads.I have also seen it in the best-selling bookshelves of bookstores, where a group of people squatted there motionless and flipped through it with absent-minded eyes.

Godot brought a virus, which was worse than SARS. Fortunately, people did not panic. They gathered in public places, trying to infect a decadent look and a cynical heart.They use fast-paced rap to deceive their hearts; they use bitter coffee to anesthetize their hearts.

I ran away like crazy, every record and every book.

It was the absurd drama they put on. There were no tears or smiles, only discarded hearts and some faint voices. They thought it was beautiful.

score review
The article is unique in conception and rich in imagination. "I" dated Godot, only to find that he or she turned into Jay Chou, Baby Anne! The various encounters of "I" have the style of "absurd drama", which makes people taste the taste of Beckett's absurd drama again.It seems "absurd", but it has profound meaning.The title "Godo is coming, please close the doors and windows" is also quite intriguing!The writing is smooth and unhurried, which is really a rare masterpiece in the examination room!

wonderful words
The dry wind blew the trees along the road, my waiting was drawn into shadows by the sun, and there was something in me longing for Godot to come like a monster, like a goddess, or like a grandmother.

They use fast-paced rap to deceive their hearts; they use bitter coffee to anesthetize their hearts.

It was the absurd drama they put on. There were no tears or smiles, only discarded hearts and some faint voices. They thought it was beautiful.

classic case
Jay Chou, Baby Annie, etc.
Godot is here
(a candidate from Fujian)

In the haze, when the two ronin opened their sleeping eyes, a man with a bag on his back stood in front of them. "Gordo?" "Yes, I'm here." All of a sudden, the ronin became excited, "Gordo is here! Godot is here!" The news spread like lightning for tens of miles in a short time .People rushed to get what was in Godot's pocket. "Gordo, can you tell me what is in your big bag?" "Of course. Here is everything you want." "Can you give me a piece of gold? I dream of having one." So , Gordo gave him a piece of gold.The crowd erupted. "Gordo, I want a big house." "Gordo, I want a herd of cows." "Gordo, I want a mill." People got what they wanted from Godot one after another. , has beauty and power.Gradually, people who are accustomed to asking Godot no longer work hard and have no ideals.They eat and do nothing all day long, and they only reach out to Godot for what they want.But one day, Godot disappeared, people only found a note: I want to hide in a place, only the hardest people can find me.What disappeared with Godot were those objects that had been taken out of his pockets.The crowd erupted again.

Losing what they asked for, people began to reflect.Could I have all this without Godot?So the man who once owned a mill began to bake the bricks; the man who once owned a herd of cattle began to raise the first calf; The look of self-reliance and hard work in the past.People already have their goals in mind and have worked hard for it.

Soon after, a bigger mill stood beside the river; the cattle all over the mountains showed the hard work of the cattle herders; "Gordo, you are back." A faint sentence, no longer the excitement and anticipation of the past.Gordo saw the mill, the cattle, the house, and he smiled.

The world finally does not need to rely on Godot.

In fact, Godot is in everyone's heart, as long as we can fight for our goals, then one day you can have everything you want from Godot.

score review
This article is an excellent work in the examination room to interpret the topic with fables.Candidates tell the story of the ronin with the clue of "Godo is coming—Godot is gone—Godot is back", and promote the development of the plot through dialogue and description, and interpret the story in twists and turns, which is brilliant.The story is concise and smooth, with profound implications.

I am Gordo

(a candidate from Fujian)

Ever since Samuel Becker wrote Waiting for Godot more than 50 years ago, I have suffered.

After reading the book, readers are like the two people in the book, guessing about me and exploring me.Some people think that I am a man named Godot, and there are very strange things.Some people think that I am not a human being, but just represent hope, or something like light.Faced with these speculations, I just laughed, but many people came to wait for me, waiting for me to appear and help them.

These lunatics, how can I appear in front of them.They'd catch me like the devil, tear my clothes off, pat me down, maybe dissect me.I have to wait until they forget me.

People are afraid of being famous, and pigs are afraid of being strong.Having been famous for 50 years, I was restless day and night, worried that I would be discovered by someone one day, and suddenly someone would arrest me, and terrible things would happen to me.It's so funny to watch the world blindly wait.It's like a person on the street suddenly looks at the sky with fascination, and other people follow suit, not daring to lower their heads for fear of missing something.A group of people surrounded the corner, and when others saw it, they had three floors inside and three floors outside, and the surrounding area was tight.These people are so blind, if I show up out of the blue, they'll eat me alive!

The last ten years have been fine, they were just waiting: aimless waiting, the entity of waiting I have been separated from the waiting.These people are in the vortex of society, without a clear value orientation, and are dominated by society like fools.Waiting for me Godot, just looking for sustenance of the soul, waiting for a prosperous age.Looking at these poor people, I really want to appear in front of them, give them some help, or send them a few words of kindness.

But some people are just too stupid.Always worry about losing something, in fact, they also lose a lot of things when they are sad.They think that the pain and weight of life make their lives very bitter.But they don't find a reason for themselves to persevere, but instead rely on God or gods.

There are also many things in the world that move me.Cong Fei, who was suffering from cancer, brushed shoulders with death frequently, composing the most exciting notes in his life with love and dedication.Facing physical obstacles, Tai Lihua deduces the beautiful Avalokitesvara with her heart.Shi Tiesheng used his mutilated body to tell the most perfect and rich stories and convey the strongest heart.These people don't need my help, it's themselves who can help them.

It occurred to me that no one had ever seen me.So I went to the street and shouted: "I am Godot." There were bursts of laughter from the crowd, "Go away, we are waiting for Godot, don't hinder us." "Who is Godot?" "Lengo I don’t know many of you, you’re too old-fashioned.” There was another burst of laughter.

There are so many people waiting for me - Godot.The world is like a drama of the absurd.

score review
Candidates use No.1 in the full text, and let "I" look back at the various mentalities of the world waiting for "Godot", which is a unique perspective.The examples in the article are typical, and the positive and negative contrasts implicitly express the author's attitude towards life.The witty language makes the article full of interest, allowing readers to share the author's perception of life in a relaxed and joyful way with laughter and humor.

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