College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 11 Leave a little blank (1)
(Choose one of the three topics in the 2006 Fujian volume)

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Compared with the previous two topics, "Leave a little blank" is easier to be recognized by candidates, and the writing surface is wider and the interpretation points are more diverse.Whether it is the association of "blank" and "flying white" in artistic creation, or the cognition of the natural environment or the scenery and phenomena in real life; People's interpersonal communication in real life, thinking about the principles of dealing with people, etc., can all be included in the article.

Full score sample essay
I just need a gap

(a candidate from Fujian)

Legend has it that the genie of the lamp can never be imprisoned.As long as there is a gap, no matter how small, the elf can turn into a wisp of green smoke and escape.

However, that gap is the blank space that has been obliterated in my world.So, my heart can't breathe.

When I grew up in the hope of my parents, excellence became a habit.They can't stand mediocrity, so I had to go to the cage.They arrange my world, leaving no blank space for me.Dad said, you must be the best, but he doesn't know, I don't want to be the best, I don't want to wander in the Olympiad, and I don't want to wander in the alphabet.I just want, I just want a gap to build my world; I just want, I just want to have a little blank space for myself to graffiti.

When I was about to graduate from junior high school, the head teacher left me a sentence: "Be yourself!" No one knew, but I recalled the longing in my heart when I recalled this sentence in the dark night.I also long for my parents to leave me a little blank and let me spread my wings and fly high.However, they always want me to be good, to work hard, and to be the best.I have tried to resist, but my hardness is always melted by soft words.So, I buried myself in my studies and forced myself to do everything I didn't like.

I thought I was numb and wouldn't contradict my parents anymore.However, the fortress of my heart was broken after seeing the words "leave a little blank", which is exactly the word I have said countless times in my mind.At this moment, I just want to say loudly: "Dear mom and dad, please leave me a little blank."

Many students fought in the dark, and their tears wet the earth.Children in the third year of high school may be confused, but the life of repeat students is completely occupied by mountains of books and seas of questions.My parents asked me to repeat, and I nodded silently.They filled my hut with books and set a schedule for me, so tight that there was no extra time to look out the window, and the lenses kept getting thicker.I seem to be imprisoned in an airtight stone house, and I have no choice but to read.It was a period of days that I still feel sad when I think about it. From childhood to adulthood, I have to be obedient.Even though I could not repeat my studies and choose a second-rate university, I still surrendered to the earnest eyes of my parents.

I just need a little gap so that I can touch youth.Xiao Si said that youth is a bright sadness.However, I am neither bright nor sad, but only in pain—the pain that has been arranged for 19 years.

Mom and Dad, although you can't hear me, I still want to say it.Please leave me a little blank, let me choose the way I want to go.I know you love me, but love is never a bondage.

Please give me a gap, please give me a little space.I'm not trying to run away like the genie of the lamp, just be myself!
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The article is true and touching.Through the way of inner monologue, the article creates a vivid and sensible character image of the protagonist "I", which is unforgettable after reading for a long time.The authenticity of emotion is the biggest highlight of this article.

wonderful words
I just need a little gap so that I can touch youth.

A little bit of blank space

(a candidate from Fujian)

Thousands of years of ups and downs, you, standing quietly on top of thousands of people, looking up to the sky, only the wordless stele left your sigh, caressing the uneven body of the stele, feeling the vicissitudes of life, you , just slightly raised the corners of the soft and firm mouth at that time. At this time, the wind is still bitter, the sky is still vast, you are speechless, and the stele has no words, but you have completely recorded your extraordinaryness, and the history is still long for you. On the seemingly blank stele without words, there is an infinite extension of you, the greatness and wisdom of the empress of the Tang Dynasty.

Thousands of times, you, quietly sleeping on the sacred land of Milos, until the day you see the light again, you, the god of beauty and love, on the day of recovery, although you have lost those two jade arms, But he has harvested stunning beauty, peerless beauty, the beauty of Venus.Your beautiful and smooth lines are condensed in the place where the broken arm is empty, but so rich. At that moment, that blankness inspired the Venus in many people's hearts.At that moment, that blank space allows beauty to extend and love to be full.

Leaving a little blank is the thinking of a wise man.Tangible things are often too complete, too realistic, and too flawless. However, thinking is often frozen and limited to the concrete objects in front of you.Chinese wise men may have realized this thousands of years ago.The unique blankness of Chinese painting leaves people with endless imagination and thinking.The master Qi Baishi paints fish and shrimps, or simply outlines a few touches of ink, which seems to be done rashly, seemingly willfully, and seems to be blank without substance. Who knows, the pieces of blankness are the real wisdom and talent It is the real "painting spirit", and the viewer will be full of imagination because of it. The fish and shrimp will be active with their thoughts in an instant, swimming and playing in their imagination.

Very agile, very deep, the beauty of blankness is that the limited mountains, rivers, lakes and moons, limited joy, anger and sorrow are transformed into many infinite collisions of thinking.The pipa girl "at this time, silence is better than sound", attracted that Jiangzhou Sima's green shirt to be wet, how fit, no need to talk too much, at that moment, maybe we will travel through a hundred years of time and space, as if sitting in front of us holding a pipa and crying Lovely woman, sympathy, sorrow, desolation, tenderness, all these infinite emotions, how can those few words express them?A wise man always intentionally or unintentionally gives people a little space and a blank space. That part is the wealth shared by everyone. That blank space can skillfully connect different people and different things together like a thread. .

In the blank, we have a dialogue with history, communicate with sages, and leave some blank space for ourselves and others. This is a leap forward in thinking and an improvement in realm.

Make a pot of clear tea, lean against the ancient locust tree, look up to the sky, even though there are no floating clouds in the blue sky, no domestic pigeons flying by, but maybe, what you taste is the shallow singing of the sad Song Dynasty woman, is The amorous Liu Yong's "holding hands and looking at teary eyes" is the blankness, tranquility and profoundness.

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The author has a broad vision, quick writing, and a wide range of subjects: history, aesthetics, painting, poetry, etc., with profound literary foundation.The language is brisk and fluent, and the examples are concise. It is a masterpiece of beauty.

classic case
Empress Wu Zetian, Venus with Broken Arms, Chinese Painting Leaving Blank, Bai Juyi's "Pipa Walk", Li Qingzhao, Liu Yong

The full moon is a painting, and the waning moon is a poem

(a candidate from Fujian)

In autumn, which is as bright as a mirror and clear as water, I should be happy.

—— Zhang Ailing
In a colorful world, many people are busy just to be busy.When you are always enjoying it, you often ignore the pursuit in your heart.Therefore, when you don't feel that you have to do something, why not stop your mind like water and let the time stagnate?Leave a little blank for the busy life, let the real heart graffiti here?

Mr. Qiu Yu once said that grandeur fades in an instant, and noise is another name for short life.In the days of radiance, life is cast with a bright mark.At this moment, the so-called emptiness of life may be a kind of indifferent state of mind of "flowers bloom and fall".There is a philosopher who said: The saint is the one who is willing to feel at ease.Sometimes, life needs to be hidden, and the mind needs to live in hibernation.In seclusion, preparing for the future, accumulating momentum, storing water so that the gates can be opened to release water, and then the earth can be irrigated.

Leave a little blank for life, I thought quietly.Eternity is a calm state of mind, bid farewell to the busy life, and take it lightly.The taste of life is nothing more than poetry, wine, philosophy, love, in the gaps in the blank, reciting useless poems, getting drunk with useless wine, reading useless books, loving useless feelings, and finally becoming a useless person, life is thus added A little more color.Like a hermit, after drinking wine at dusk, watching the sun from east to west, quietly watching the wind and clouds, living poetically.In my heart, only by living a simple life can I live freely. It is like a blank stamp, branding a leisurely sentiment for life, and having leisure makes me feel that I am the master of life.

I remember that Heidegger once said that life is full of achievements, but he still dwells on this land poetically.I would like to thank Heidegger, the spiritual explorer, for leaving a blank space in my heart.When I am upset, I can think calmly and recite a sentence "if there is a gap between heaven and earth in life, it will be all of a sudden"; Guest, not by the plum blossom but by the willow" revived love.For example, Mr. Wuliu, "going alone with a good day, or planting a stick to sow seeds"; like Mr. Dongpo, "a poem eulogizing to the bright moon, singing a graceful chapter"; like Thoreau guarding Walden Lake, like watching a beggar from a distance. Hemingway in the Snow of Limanjaro.They are all poets, living poetically in their own blank world.

Leaving a little blank for life and this restless world, even if it is just a little, can save countless drowning souls.

(End of this chapter)