College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 12 Leave a little blank (2)
On a calm day, under the calm sunshine, I just want to quietly go to the shore of Walden Lake, far away from Thoreau, singing softly, the full moon is a painting, and the moon's waning is a poem.In the blank space of life left for oneself, paint colorful colors.

score review
The title is full of charm and poetic; the inscription cleverly uses Zhang Ailing's famous quotes to clarify the topic; the article has a wide selection of materials and extensive references, citing famous quotes from Zhang Ailing, Yu Qiuyu, Lu Xun, Luo Jinxi, Heidegger, Zhuangzi, etc., reflecting the author's profound Literary accumulation.

wonderful words
In the days of radiance, life is cast with a bright mark.At this moment, the so-called emptiness of life may be a kind of indifferent state of mind of "flowers bloom and fall".

On a calm day, under the calm sunshine, I just want to quietly go to the shore of Walden Lake, far away from Thoreau, singing softly, the full moon is a painting, and the moon's waning is a poem.In the blank space of life left for oneself, paint colorful colors.

Celebrity Quotes
In autumn, which is as bright as a mirror and clear as water, I should be happy. ——Zhang Ailing
Magnificence fades in a blink of an eye, and tumult is another name for short life. ——Yu Qiuyu's "Small Town in the South of the Yangtze River"

Is there any pride like the old days, when the flowers bloom and fall. ——Lu Xun's "Mourning Yang Quan"

A saint is an ordinary person who is willing to be at ease; an ordinary person is a saint but is not at ease. —— Luo Jinxi
Life is full of achievements, but it also dwells poetically on this land. —— Heidegger

In the world of life, if a white horse passes through the gap, it will be all of a sudden. ——Zhuangzi

He was a guest of Toad Palace when he was young, not by the plum blossom but by the willow. ——Tang Xianzu's "The Peony Pavilion"

Huai Liangchen goes alone, or plants a stick and sows seeds. —— Tao Yuanming
The wine belongs to the guest, the poem of the bright moon, and the chapter of the song. ——Su Shi's classic case

"Walden" by Thoreau, "The Snows of Kilimanjaro" by Hemingway

珍珑
(a candidate from Fujian)

In ancient times, there was a man who was good at chess, who lived in the mountains and forests, and fought all his life without ever being defeated.People in the world suspect that it is a god, and those who know it are very rare.However, it has no fixed place to live, and people can't find it, so they all turn back in depression.He has a weird temper, doesn't like crowds, is very deserted, once he plays chess, he forgets everything.Over half a hundred years old, I don't want to be unknown to future generations, so I spend my whole life working hard to create a mess, hoping that future generations will break it.On the day when the game was completed, he vomited blood and died, his eyes were sunken, and his hair was all white.After thousands of years and hundreds of years, the environment changes at any time, the bureau has been lost, and the world can't find it.

In the autumn of the 12th year of Qianlong, the bureau suddenly appeared in Qingjue Temple.Emperor Hongli was fond of playing games, and when he heard about it, he went happily.Qingjue Temple is built on the top of a lonely peak, covered with snow all the year round, and birds and animals do not come here.The emperor sighed and said: "The terrain is so dangerous, how can we go back to the chess game?" The whole temple is poorly furnished, and there is only one old monk.The monk led the emperor to the bureau, and saw that although the bureau was ancient and not dirty, it was white and bright, as smooth as paper.The emperor is in charge of white, the monk is in charge of black, and the game is over.

The emperor saw that in the game, Baizi seemed to be able to understand but not to, and seemed to be dead but not dead. It was very strange.After thinking for a long time, I settled on the "Qu" position on the seventh or ninth road.The monk praised and said: "My emperor does not fight for the small but for the big, and does not fall to the 'upper' position or the 'go' position, it is wise!" So he responded with sunspots.Emperor Luozi was in the "Qu" position, and said with a smile: "My king is in the world, how can I be a person who must compare pennies and baht?" The monk responded to Heizi and said: "Please forgive the old monk's embarrassment, my emperor can be called a 'wise' man , but not called 'wisdom'." The emperor said: "Why?" Confrontation: "The Buddha's practice method is 'precepts, samadhi, and wisdom'. Determination is determined by precepts, and wisdom is generated by steadiness. 'My emperor's chess has more than enough publicity but not enough restraint. There is no 'precept'. There is no 'precept', how can there be 'determination', and how can there be 'wisdom'?" The language, quite disapproving, Luozi "go" to Qiliulu.After more than ten rounds like this, all the "Qu" Baizi died.The monk said: "The "Dharma Sentence Sutra" says: 'Winners generate resentment, losers despise themselves, get rid of the mentality of winning and losing, and be at peace without arguing.' What does my emperor think?" The emperor said: "Here."

The emperor bowed his head and thought hard, counterattacking the "Ping" position Qisanlu.The monk praised: "Don't enter the side door, attack the vital point directly, wonderful!" So he responded to Heizi and turned the attack into an offensive.For a long time, the emperor refused to give up his son. The monk asked, "Why is my emperor hesitating?" The emperor said, "If you attack, Qisanlu Baizi will die; if you protect, you will lose the first move. That's why you hesitate." The monk said: "Why don't you abandon this place?" Son?" Confrontation said: "This son is the key to the attack, if you discard it, the offensive will not survive." After thinking about it again and again, the son was settled in seven or four ways, and the son was saved.However, the emperor lost his first hand, and after more than ten rounds, "Ping" Bai also died.The monk said: "There is a saying in the scriptures: 'Someone may come to ask for the identity of hands, feet, ears, nose, head, flesh and blood, and bone marrow. When the Bodhisattva Mahasattva sees the seeker, he will be able to give everything with joy.' This is a great good! Baizi only wants to protect himself. , there is no 'goodness' here. Without 'goodness', how can we win?"

The emperor abandoned his son and conceded defeat.The monk said: "My emperor is not the one who can break this situation." The emperor asked: "But who can break this situation?" The eight sufferings of life are the eight sufferings of life. My emperor thinks, what is the most suffering?" The emperor said: "I can't ask for it." The monk laughed and said: "The source of the eight sufferings is human beings. People have desires and suffer; People without desires have no merit. People in the world seek meritorious deeds and freedom from suffering, but neither can. Sincerely do not know that there is no "emptiness". The so-called "emptiness" refers to the emptiness in the heart, the emptiness in people, and the emptiness in the world. No restraint is empty, no victory and no loss is also empty. If you leave it empty in your heart, you will know your gains and losses; if you leave it empty in others, you will have no victory or defeat; The way of the bureau, cover the 'empty' ear!"

The emperor silently realized something.Then he returned to the palace and issued an order to allocate funds to build the temple.However, the top of the peak is empty, only white snow remains.No one can find the temple.

score review
The author made full use of his familiarity with Go knowledge, Buddhist thoughts, and debating skills, and he managed it in the limited time in the examination room, which shows his profound knowledge of classical Chinese!The twists and turns of the story, the vivid and exciting dialogues of the characters, and the lifelike characters are another major feature of this article.

solo dance in the blank
(a candidate from Fujian)

I am used to seeing the brilliance of the full moon, which is perfect, but the crescent moon has a silent and wise vacancy, allowing the lonely to peek into the true meaning of life.

Seeing the vast sea, without reason and limitless, the trickle of water makes the thinker explore the mysteries of life with its clever and meaningful insignificance.

Conscious of the hustle and bustle of the mortal world, crowded and prosperous, the empty mountain, with its calm and fresh solitude, allows the hermits to realize the profound meaning of the universe.

Afterwards, life appears as an incomplete vacancy by retreating, opening up silence in the congestion, and leaving a vacancy in the perfection.

Tea: Introduce tranquility to the heart

Westerners like coffee, strong and heavy.That kind of iron-like black, with a mechanical and metallic luster.Take a sip, so that the bitterness in the mouth, the strong refreshing effect and the dense water vapor will grab your thoughts and wrap your nerves without leaving any gaps.Like a domineering person, occupying all the space at once.So Westerners like to take risks, like to develop and possess.

And tea, born on the shady slope of the valley, soaked in the gentleness of the wind and drizzle, absorbs the tranquility of the moonlight and starlight, and is filled with the vague mountains and wild dew, and there is a sense of tranquility in the bones.Then pick the young leaves carefully and make them by hand.Wait until the night is quiet, the new moon is like a hook, a pot of purple sand, a pour of hot water, slowly brewing at high and low.Not in a hurry, wait for the water vapor to dissipate, and then go to taste the tranquility on the tip of the tongue carefully alone, and faintly feel that faint fragrance melts into the moonlight and mountains, and merges into a blank space of thoughts, so it is easy to drink The oriental people of tea are calm and wise. Everyone is a philosopher and a thinker.

Being a person is like drinking tea, with a slightly indifferent, gossamer-like fragrance, to give more space to thoughts and life, so that you can be calm and unhurried.

Painting: A Blank Introduces Love
For a leaf, Picasso would carefully paint its clear veins under the sun, Gauguin would describe the shadow of the leaf under the sun in silence, and Van Gogh would paranoidly paint the leaves with large blocks of color. Sorrow the madness of death.And no matter who it is, they are too specific and pay too much attention to the appearance of those things.In other words, they are all too perfect.

On the other hand, Chinese painters will faintly draw those lonely mountains in a large blank space on a long roll of rice paper, and then there will be only a lonely leaf staying helplessly in the large blank space, just like It floats alone in the sky and the earth.The description of the infinite shows the infinite feelings.Among them, blank space, a simple and profound form, undertakes this important task.Use the empty and substantial carrier to bear a situation where the sky is unrestrained and full of love.

This is a wise man's choice.

Maybe the heart is picturesque, sometimes a little blankness will hide the big world, and the person who understands the world is to realize the blankness.

People: empty mind

The so-called one flower one world one bird one paradise.

The origin of the world is also hidden in that small and imperfect.

The Buddha showed the flower to the public, but all the disciples were puzzled, but only Kaye put his hands together and said, "Amitabha, the disciple suddenly enlightened".Following the Buddha's great cause, this is the wisdom of human beings, peeking into the true meaning of the world in the incomplete blank.

People like this, when they stick to a blank space and keep it empty in their hearts, they will be completely free and easy, and the meaning of life will also appear from this.

When we dance alone in a blank space, we quietly find that we have a perfect world.

score review
The parallelism at the beginning highlights the literary talent, and the unique structure expresses literary thinking. "Solo dance in the blank" seems grotesque, but it implies profound philosophy.The main body of the article interprets the topic from the three levels of tea tasting, painting and life, which is thought-provoking and memorable.

wonderful words
Life appears as an incomplete vacancy by retreating, opening up silence in congestion, and leaving a blank in perfection.

Maybe the heart is picturesque, sometimes a little blankness will hide the big world, and the person who understands the world is to realize the blankness.

The origin of the world is also hidden in that small and imperfect.

(End of this chapter)