College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 103 Looking at the Picture Composition (1)
(2005 Fujian roll)

composition test questions
The following two pictures can give people rich associations and perceptions. Please contact the prompt text to compare them, and write your associations or perceptions from the pictures into an article of about 900 words.

[Notice]

①Association or imagination should be related to both pictures. ②The title is drawn up by yourself. ③ Make up your own mind. ④The style is optional. ⑤No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
The composition test questions in Fujian Province in 2005 was an ingenious composition question for materials, which is unique among the composition questions for college entrance examinations across the country.In addition, the composition score has also been increased from the general 60 points to 70 points, and the total number of words has also been increased from 800 to 900 words.Candidates need to pay attention to these details when reviewing the questions.In essence, the topic of this composition is multi-topic composition, and the corresponding "prompt text" in the materials is a "subtopic".

The difficulty of this topic is: students should carefully examine the topic, extract meaning from abstract graphics, start with the difference between the two graphics, and be able to combine historical and realistic people and events to seek ways to narrate.The focus of this question is still the examinee's dialectical thinking ability, which examines the examinee's values, cognitive ability, and whether he has speculative ability in the process of cognition and judgment of objective things.

Writing Ideas Tips
This kind of contradiction and opposition is mostly based on the picture topic composition topic from the head, and the focus of the review is on comparison.The "comparison" in "Please contact the prompt text to compare them" in the question stem is the key word, which reminds the examinee that the two pictures need to be connected and viewed instead of separated.It is possible to "associate and perceive" a set of opposites, or to grasp and think comprehensively and holistically.Candidates can relate people from pictures, and things from pictures, and can write "tradition and innovation", "dialectical relationship between change and invariance", etc. The ellipsis in the prompt reminds candidates that they can also spread out the wings of association, play freely, and You can make rich associations by observing the differences between the two pictures.A circle can represent regularity, stability, smoothness, completeness, etc., and an irregular shape can remind people of innovation, individuality, publicity, sharpness, etc. As long as the imagination is reasonable, there is something in it.

Full score sample essay
Confused

(a candidate from Fujian)

I liken girth to our beliefs and area to the increase in our material needs over the years.Our motherland is rising peacefully, and people's material living standards are improving. However, just like that circle, when it gradually changes from a star shape to a circle, the circumference is swallowed up little by little, just like our faith is missing little by little.

Zhou Guoping said: "One of the characteristics of modern life is the lack of soul." Yes, people walk like wandering spirits with indifferent expressions; swords and swords on the Internet, feasting and feasting in dance halls; …indulging and lost in every corner like dust.Shu Ting's poem reads: "I am your brand-new ideal / just broke free from the spider web of myth." Extreme, like the logical law of excluded middle?
When Wang Shuo scolded and dug Lu Xun's tomb, a supporter (who seemed to be a writer) said: "What age is it that people still worship great men!" Success in counting days), I suggested that he also negate Yu Dafu.Yu Dafu said: "With the emergence of great people, a country that does not know how to respect and love is a slave country without hope."

If the great man cannot be worshiped yet, does the sound of faith have gradually faded away?I am confused.

Before his death, Ah Q had a bold statement: "After 20 years, there will be another..." Ah Q's spirit of forgetting is his ancestral treasure.I suspect that the lack of soul is because the spirit of forgetting has evolved to the fullest.Decades of time have obliterated many personnel affairs.Can we just blame the movie star when she hits the streets of New York in a costume emblazoned with the Japanese navy flag?Isn't her ignorance our ignorance?
I have firmed my mind in other things.Japan is still unwilling to repent. Masahiro Okamori blatantly defended Hideki Tojo and other first-class war criminals. Koizumi visits the Yasukuni Shrine every year and has the support of half of the Japanese people.Also in Eurasia, the German Chancellor resolutely knelt down in front of the Memorial to the Jewish Victims of Israel, and the German people took their children to educate them about shame.I feel desolate in comparison.How can Japan swim in the river of condemning saliva!Should we think about our own problems, why can't the huge China show awe-inspiring courage?I found the answer in "The Gathering of Sand" by the writer Zhang Kangkang: when the wind penetrates the sand, the sand moves and dances, and finally completes its (Mingsha Mountain) standing.The gathering of people's hearts is like this gathering of sand, and faith is the wind that penetrates the sand.How can a dish of loose sand be deterrent?

Looking at the standard, stable circle with a large area and a short circumference, I remembered what Hong Ke said: "A weak nation, a nation with insufficient blood, you can't just expect it to grow tall." When can we Let the faith return, the soul be exalted, and the nation reshape the blood?
score review
This is an excellent work in the examination room with sharp writing style, profound thinking, and thought-provoking reading.The author has a deep grasp of the meaning of the title, deeply analyzes all kinds of grotesque phenomena in real life, sees the essence through the phenomenon, and directly penetrates the inferiority of our nation.The author goes from (domestic) to foreign (foreign), from daily life phenomena to abstract ethics and morality, from the field of literature to the field of thought, pensively and penetratingly, which is enough to show the candidates' profound literary accumulation and language skills.

wonderful words
People walk like wandering spirits with indifferent expressions; swords and swords on the Internet, feasting and feasting in dance halls;

Celebrity Quotes
One of the hallmarks of modern life is the absence of a soul. ——Zhou Guoping
I am your brand-new ideal / Just broke free from the cobweb of myth. ——Shu Ting

A country that has great personalities but does not know how to respect and love it is a country of slaves without hope. ——Yu Dafu
When the wind penetrates the sand, the sand moves and dances, and finally completes its (Mingsha Mountain) standing. ——Zhang Kangkang "The Gathering of Sand"

A weak nation, a nation with insufficient blood, you can't just expect it to grow tall. ——Hong Ke

棱角
(a candidate from Fujian)

There are so many heroes in the vast history; gold and iron horses swallow thousands of miles like tigers; how many emperors and generals sit firmly on the dragon chair and command the country and society.Some people wield swords on the battlefield and make great achievements in battle, but they can only serve as ministers, or even go to jail;

Just like a star shape with changeable edges and corners and a thick and solid circle, the area of ​​novelty and change is small, but the space for standardization and stability is large.Ancient and modern pairs of virtuous talents have been recorded in the annals of history, and most of the immortals are extreme heroes of stars and circles.

"Strengthen the mountain and the world is overwhelmed, the time is unfavorable and the time will not die, the time will not die and there is nothing to do, what is the danger!" Xiang Yu showed a bit of sadness and helplessness in "Gaixia Song".In my opinion, he is a polygon full of edges and corners.Even if he has a heroic spirit and an ambition to dominate, he can only let himself go in the face of being surrounded by songs, and his desolate songs can only be accompanied by the rolling Wujiang River. How can he face Jiangdong's elders?His vigor, his abruptness, and his display made history fear three points. Qin Shihuang, who "sequenced the eight prefectures and put them in the same court, swallowed two prefectures and killed the princes", has made the world panic all day long, how can Xiang Yu "strengthen the mountain and overwhelm the world"?So the ancients gradually realized that only by smoothing their edges and corners can they achieve great things, including Ju Yunei.

At the beginning of its establishment, the Han family kept in mind the admonitions of history, "rested and recuperated" in a grand manner, allotted fertile land, lightened labor and reduced taxes.In the world of the great Han Dynasty, the people are prosperous, and the Liu family sits firmly in the high hall. "Andy's warrior guards the Quartet" just highlights the worries under his soft policy. "Calamity often accumulates in the slightest, and wisdom and courage are often trapped in drowning." Ouyang Xiu, a descendant, willingly revealed this natural truth.There may be various crises gestating in this sleek honeypot. As long as you cut through this arc, you can see that the descendants of the Han family who indulged in tranquility can only be reduced to fish meat under the knife of others...

History will always make a fork in front of us, although the weakness of human nature always makes us pursue a comfortable life, let ourselves swim in the honeypot and be happy, let ourselves behave in the world smoothly, and "walk" without regret.Although Tao Yuanming's "Return to the Garden" is free and easy, and Li Yu's "Flowing water and falling flowers, spring is gone, heaven and earth" is extremely light and easy, but I would rather be like the sharp-edged Su Dongpo drinking wine and composing poems.Although he was born early, he is also happy at ease; he lives in the high hall and has been dismissed several times, and the ups and downs of life are all dyed, so that the talented man can let future generations wake up to the true meaning in his famous sayings.The same Yue Fei, with his ambition of "serving the country with loyalty", trampled his iron hoof all over the enemy's den, "the shame of Jingkang is still not snowed", he still swung his sword bravely, resolutely and resolutely under the threat of twelve gold medals. Hand, but also in exchange for the admiration of the descendants of the West Lake.

Don't let life smoothen your edges and corners, don't let reality melt your fighting spirit, those who are smooth and cautious can only get a moment of comfort, let your light shine brighter and more eye-catching.History will be spread out under your feet. "The ancient sages are lonely, only the brave keep their names."

score review
At the beginning of the article, a set of parallel sentences are laid out and rendered, showing the majesty of the article.Candidates can closely follow the questions, go straight to the topic, and express their opinions: don’t let life smoothen your edges and corners, don’t let reality melt your fighting spirit, the smooth and cautious people can only get a moment of comfort, and make your light more dazzling Some, more eye-catching.History will be spread out under your feet.The article is full of quotations, reasonable and powerful, and it is a rare masterpiece in the examination room.

wonderful words
There are so many heroes in the vast history; gold and iron horses swallow thousands of miles like tigers; how many emperors and generals sit firmly on the dragon chair and command the country and society.Some people wield swords on the battlefield and make great achievements in battle, but they can only serve as ministers, or even go to jail;

Celebrity Quotes
When the time is unfavorable, the time will not die, if the time will not die, there is nothing to do, and if the time is not dying, there is nothing to do! —— Xiang Yu

The strong wind blows and the clouds fly, and the strong warriors guard the four directions. ——Liu Bang

Misfortune often accumulates in the slightest, and wisdom and courage are often trapped in drowning. —— Ouyang Xiu
Flowing water, falling flowers, spring is gone, heaven and earth. ——Li Yu "Waves Washing the Sand"

The sages and sages in ancient times are all lonely, but the drinkers keep their names. ——Li Bai "Will Enter the Wine"

classic case
Xiang Yu, Liu Bei, Tao Yuanming, Li Yu, Su Dongpo, Yue Fei

Who is the hero
(a candidate from Fujian)

"Roundness and harmony are the essence of the mean."

Regarding history, the ancestors demanded to "build the coffin and decide", but sometimes, it is often that someone's coffin is built and the evaluation is written in the history books, but it is still unavoidable to "defraud the corpse", making people wonder what to do.Just like Wang Anshi, the "Yuan Xianggong" in the Northern Song Dynasty, in his article, he scolded Mr. Meng Chang as only the leader of "chicken and dog robbers", not a "good scholar".This caused an uproar in the academic circles at that time, and those politicians who had praised Meng Changjun were also dumbfounded. Today, 100 years later, we still have respect for Wang Anshi's earth-shattering remarks. He re-examined the "theory of the ultimate in all ages" in history and broke through the barriers that have surrounded the world for thousands of years.Not to mention how turbulent his subsequent reforms were, just one article can shine brightly on the thousands of miles of wasteland in the Northern Song Dynasty.

Since ancient times, sages have regarded the doctrine of the mean as the bottom line to settle down. The essence of the doctrine of the mean is a circle that exists in the hearts of the world. It is stable, standardized, and has a large area, so there is also a lot of room for maneuver.All the edges and corners have been ground clean, not a little out of line. "Scholars don't want to be useful in the world, but they want to be worthy of the world."These numerous hermits and moderates together constitute a deserted picture of China's feudal society where all horses are silent.

And all the rebels will be thrown into the [-]th hell, and they will never be reborn forever.The world needs order, just like Wang Anshi, Fan Zhongyan, Kang Youwei, and the Six Gentlemen of [-] in history.The end of challenging authority and moderation is being relegated to the wilderness, watching the new laws enacted by one's own hands being abolished one by one, or even more tragic, blood staining the land for a lifetime of dreams.

Who is the hero?

The four seasons reincarnate, the spring and autumn changes, and the stone statues of civil servants and military generals in the ancestral temples and ancestral halls have lost their gentleness or majesty and bravery in the past, and they look indifferent in the time of dynasty change.History has weathered their faces, but it has sculpted those images of "I did not abandon the world, but the world abandons me" more and more freshly.We praise their spiritual freedom of "not wanting to break their brows and bend their waists to serve the powerful", and praise their iron-blooded personality of ardently resisting tyranny. Although we don't know where they died, and we don't know how to mourn them while holding flowers, but the names of these heroes , have been engraved on the monument of history, time will remember them, they are with time.These people constituted the forerunners of the advance of mankind.

I think our lives need to develop a spirit of daring to innovate.A stable circle is regular and orderly, but the irregular polygons are like lights shining in the dark night, their brilliance is enough to illuminate our dim life.Human life lies in creation and in striving to survive.New creation is the source of a nation's endless life, and it is also the guarantee for the continuous progress of the entire human society.Conservation of the past made the Chinese nation unable to get rid of the fate of many disasters in the collision of Chinese and Western cultures 160 years ago. Many people with lofty ideals worked hard to balance this historical injustice. They tried to break through the barriers of the old system and create a world of great harmony. Faced with this scene How will we comfort the history of innovation and these people who are advancing with the times?
There are always thousands of rivers and mountains, and there is always a gaze that cannot be taken back. Heraclitus said: "A man should not step into the same river twice." Although life cannot be copied, we definitely have the ability to use our own hands to make life richer and more beautiful. .Watch the world quietly and seek the truth, and sincerely treat the common people with no second thoughts.The big river flows the sun and the moon, the spring and autumn dynasties, ancient and modern.Facing such an era of innovation, what reason do we have to dodge it?

score review
The author cleverly uses the famous saying of the essence of the mean to lead the whole text, which coincides with the title.In the torture, inspection, speculation, and criticism of the essence of the mean, it is pointed out profoundly that these many hermits and the mean have built a deserted picture of Chinese feudal society with all horses and horses together.Articles or illustrations, or quotations, or positive and negative arguments, full of passion, thoughts flying, and brilliant writing.

wonderful words
The four seasons reincarnate, the spring and autumn changes, and the stone statues of civil servants and generals in the ancestral temples and ancestral halls have lost their gentleness or majesty and bravery;History has weathered their faces, but carved those images of "I never abandoned the world, the world abandoned me" more and more freshly.

Watch the world quietly and seek the truth, and sincerely treat the common people with no second thoughts.The big river flows the sun and the moon, the spring and autumn dynasties, ancient and modern.Facing such an era of innovation, what reason do we have to dodge it?

Crystal Snow Lonely Forest
(a candidate from Fujian)

More than once she died with hatred for Daiyu and burst into tears, and more than once she thought that Baochai would not be happy and felt unfair.I don't know why Mr. Xueqin let these two wonderful women, who are also the essence of the sun and the moon, end their lives tragically in the Grand View Garden.

I remember reading a lot of comments about the right and wrong of Chai and Dai, and I felt quite indignant.Both Baochai and Daiyu are the most beautiful women in the world.I pity Daiyu and cherish Baochai, because they let me see the unique beauty and temperament of women.

[-]. Everyone's Lady

(End of this chapter)