College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 104 Looking at the Picture Composition (2)
Perhaps this title is the unified evaluation of the merchant lady for a hundred years.It is true that Baochai is a lady who abides by feudal ethics and strictly abides by moral norms, but it is her calmness and norms that make her impressive.At such a young age, she can handle the relationship between superiors and superiors. The old lady likes it, and the maids are happy. Where can I find such a good lady.

Baochai's ability to deal with affairs is strong but she never shows it. It's just that when Sister Feng's son is sick, she can't refuse, so she has to help with some housework.But from the handling of this matter, we can see her wisdom and excellence.

Secondly, the competition in the Grand View Garden is beauty and talent, both of which she possesses, she is a strange woman in the world.

In fact, Baochai is well-behaved and tolerant, and she doesn't mind what she gains and what she loses.She has a broad mind, and she dares to bear all the misfortunes of life.Baochai, you are like a circle with no edges or corners at all.Never hurt others, but also good at helping others.You have such a big heart and you are so friendly.

You let me see the gentleness unique to a woman.The gentleness unique to every lady.

[-]. Long Flow of Tears
Perhaps the most prominent symbol of Daiyu is her eyes that are swollen like peach pits. I don't know why this jade's tears are so many, it makes people heartbroken.

In the Grand View Garden, this one is probably the most eye-catching one.Due to family changes, she has become cautious since she was a child living in her grandmother's house, for fear of being ridiculed.It was this that made her suspicious and suspicious.But deep down, Daiyu has a tenderness like water.

When it comes to her love, Daiyu dares to pursue it, and she is willing to show it, hoping that Baoyu can understand.At this point, she broke through the shackles of feudal ethics on women and broke these rules.Although she died with hatred in the end, she still let us see a strange woman who dared to love, hate, break through, and innovate.

Although Daiyu sometimes has a little temper and narrow-mindedness, this can never erase and cover her unique brilliance.Daiyu, you are like a star. Although you show your sharpness, you will inevitably hurt others, but you are so special and different.

You let me see the unique temperament of a woman.

Three, combined

Whether it is Baochai or Daiyu; whether it is a circle or a star, they each have their own brilliance and beauty.Baochai's rules are like circles; Daiyu's novelty is like stars.

When we look at Baochai, we also look at Daiyu; we love Baochai, but we also love Daiwang; we must learn to be a circle, and we must also learn to be a star, so that we can shine with a unique aura of beauty.

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The creative composition title is eye-catching, euphemistic yet poetic.The three subheadings in the main part of the article are also ingenious, making the layout of the article concise and clear at a glance.The unique and unique selection of materials, the technique of turning the big into the small, and the wonderful and affectionate speech are also the unique features of this article.

Zhizi and Tongzi
(a candidate from Fujian)

Seeing such two figures, one is calm and smooth with soft lines; the other is sharp and full of light, it reminds me of two kinds of people in ancient Chinese history, Tongzi and Zhizi.

Those with soft lines are Tongzi.They are well-informed people. Facing wise or foolish emperors, they either become officials or live in seclusion in the mountains and forests.They choose according to the current situation, and retreat when it is time to retreat.Facing the troubled times, they either fished in Pushui, rested in Yexia, picked chrysanthemums in Dongli, or lived in secluded bamboo forest.They sang and sang, they leaned on the wind and howled.The heart is like the clear autumn water, and the untied boat is like Zhuangzi, who would rather "drag his tail on the way" regardless of the pole; the one who forgets himself in his heart is like Tao Yuanming, who "climbs Donggao and composes poems while facing the Qingliu"; A leisurely person is like Wang Wei, "Walk to the poor water, sit and watch the clouds rise"...

The Tongzi felt relieved, they were as round as pebbles.They understand that in the face of troubled times and a foolish king, it is enough for me to keep my innocence, so why bother to take everything seriously.So they wandered in the mountains and rivers, accompanied by green water and clear apes, winding paths leading to seclusion, riding horses and swiping, believing in Coke.

However, it is often the stubborn people who are ordered to save the people from the fire and water.They have their own universe in their chest.

It is Quzi who spreads the Yin River.The setting sun of Chu State dyed the Miluo River in front of us red, Zilan slandered, Zheng Xiu was confused, and the people were panting and struggling like a dry fish.Is Qu Zi's persistence useful?I'm afraid he himself will have to shake his head and sigh.When the state of Chu fell, it was also the moment when he died.He put the status of a statesman far above a poet. "Who can observe with the body, who can receive the gentleness of things?" Life is not a poet, but the way of death is the poet's.Perseverance is like Qu Zi, why can't you listen to "sages don't stagnate in things"?

Death can manifest one's will, but life can practice one's will.When death came to Sima Qian, he chose life. He forbears to live on because of "has endless selfishness, humble life, and literary talent is not shown to future generations".What kind of attachment is this!He finally became the word of the family.

With sharp edges and corners, those who are fearless are like sticklers.They persist in their pursuit without regrets or complaints.Xin Qiji, who "followed the army and followed the pen", was discarded as many as 38 times in his life, and only a few soft brushes remained. He wanted to write the heart of defending against the enemy, even if he patted the railing all over, no one would.Zhuge Liang, who was obsessed with Baidi Tuogu, fell ill from overwork, and died in Wuzhangyuan...

Perseverances cling to their obsessions, Tongzis master their mastery.Whether they are tactful and evasive, wise and wise, or sharp-edged and stick to their beliefs, they have become the immortal wealth of all generations of China.

We learned to be calm from Tongzi's "Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves through the forest, why not scream and walk slowly", and learned to be tolerant from "A thousand rivers have thousands of rivers and moons, and thousands of miles of cloudless sky". Tongzi taught us to learn to adapt , calm and soft as round.We learn to persevere from the Zhizi's "clothes are getting wider and we will not regret it, and we will be haggard because of Yixiao". Teach us to shine brightly, stick to our beliefs, and be as sharp as a star.

Looking at the former sages, if we have the persistence of Zhizi and the tolerance of Tongzi, there should be another more beautiful circle!
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Candidates start from the two pictures and cleverly think of two kinds of people in ancient Chinese history: Tongzi and Zhizi.Zhizi is calm and smooth, open-minded and leisurely, dedicated to career; Tongzi is sharp-edged, fearless, and tolerant of human affairs.Candidates think dialectically, go deep into the truth, explore and analyze, and express the idea that both Zhizi and Tongzi have their own merits and are the immortal wealth of China for all generations.The article is lofty in conception, majestic, open and close, rich in speculative color, and the appropriate quotation of a large number of poems and sentences also plays a very good role.

Celebrity Quotes
Deng Donggao wrote poems with Shu Xiao, Lin Qingliu. —— Tao Yuanming
Walk to the poor water, sit and watch the clouds rise. —— Wang Wei

Who can observe with the body, and accept the gentleness of things? —— Qu Yuan

There are endless selfish hatreds, humbleness and no world, and literary talent is not shown in future generations. —— Sima Qian
Don't listen to the sound of Chuanlin beating leaves, why not scream and walk slowly. --Su Shi

Thousands of rivers have water, thousands of rivers and moons, thousands of miles of cloudless sky. —— "Jiataipu Lantern Records Volume [-]"

The belt is getting wider and I don't regret it, and I am haggard because of Yixiao. ——Song Liuyong "Butterfly Loves Flowers"

eight eighteen twenty eight
(a candidate from Fujian)

"Slap!" A slap slammed on the buttocks.I burst into tears. "How did the teacher teach you that the grass is green and the sun is red. Look at you, how did you draw it?" I looked at the torn painting through my tearful eyes: the grass is yellow, and so is the sun yellow.Why do you have to paint the grass as green and the sun as red?I muttered in my heart.Put on my father's sunglasses, the grass and the sun are yellow.I don't understand.

"And your composition," the teacher's voice brought me back to reality, "I asked you to write about my father and mother. How did you write it? My mother is a book boy, and my father is a driver." Dad carries me to school, not a book boy or a coachman, what is it?" I refused to accept it, and talked back to the teacher.

I was eight years old that year, and I was still an irregular polygon, novel, changeable, and full of imagination.The circumference is long, the area is small, and the life experience is shallow.

"It's too much." When I got home, I threw away my schoolbag and sat on the sofa sulking. "What's wrong?" Dad asked with concern. "Someone cheated in the exam today, and the teacher didn't see it." "Did he copy yours? Did you get affected?" When it comes to cheating, the parents feel like they are facing an enemy and ask nervously. "That's not true. It's just that this is too unfair to the students who study hard. I'm going to report it." "Don't be stupid, it doesn't affect you. Report, what if someone retaliates? Besides, there are so many cheating Yes, can you report it?" Hearing what his parents said, it made sense, so he gave up the idea of ​​reporting.

Back in the room, I remembered the composition that the teacher had just read, about friendship.It's just that the friendship I'm describing is far from what I've encountered.The article uses very gorgeous rhetoric, and the friendships I have are simple, flat, but very warm. "The article is very beautiful, but it is against my will." I said to myself with a wry smile.

That year, I had been gradually transformed into a regular figure, but the edges and corners were still there, neither novel nor standardized, nor changeable nor unstable.The circumference is not long, and the area is not small.

"How about this dress of mine?" My girlfriend showed me her new clothes. "It's very good, it matches you very well, you look ten years younger when you wear it." I was full of praise, but the dress was ugly, but when I was "praising", I didn't feel anything.There is no panic at all when he said something against his will for the first time.The boss just criticized me, said that my way of working is wrong, and told me another way of working.So I obediently followed the method introduced by the boss to work, even though the method was even more wrong.But no matter what he said, this is the working method explained by the boss, and it is none of my business if there is a problem.Besides, talking back to the boss doesn't end well.Years of experience have given me experience.

I am 28 years old this year, and I have been polished into a circle. I am stable, my circumference is short, and my area is large.My life experience has enriched, and I have become sophisticated and tactful...

One day, when I went to pick up my daughter from the kindergarten, the daughter rushed over crying. "The teacher said that the sun is red and the grass is green. But the sun and the grass are yellow when I wear my father's yellow glasses. The teacher said this is not good, and beat me." The daughter finished speaking weeping.These words hit my heart suddenly, and the door of memory that had been dusty for a long time was suddenly opened.I think of the yellow grass, the yellow sun, my mother is a book boy, my father is a coachman, and I think of the irregular polygon that has not been polished by the world.

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