College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 105 Looking at the Picture Composition (3)
This is a unique little novel.The examinee called No.1 "I" and described the three stages of life: eight years old, 28 years old, and various experiences, which profoundly revealed a philosophy of life: life is gradually transformed from an irregular polygon into a normative, stable circular process.The article is simple and simple, the concept is exquisite, and the questions are rigorous; but the truth is profound and alert, and it is intriguing.

Two critical illness notices

(a candidate from Fujian)

The dean sat on the big rattan chair with a dignified expression.Although it's not a big deal: Why don't we just stagger the two critical illness notices!But the fault of this matter lies with these two "patients".Now, maybe I will laugh for the people of the world.well!

"Dean, Doctor 'Old Eyes' is here." A nurse ushered in a dejected doctor and said to the dean.

"'Old Eyes,' sit."

"Dean, this thing is a bit strange. Based on my decades of experience, this... how can I say it's just a mess?" He said vaguely with a frustrated expression.

"Okay, don't say it yet, where are the two notices, are they with you?" the dean comforted him.

"Oh, yes." "Old Eyes" quickly took out two "culprits" from his pocket and handed them to the dean.

The dean began to read.

Emergency notice. Unit A, No. 001.

Name: ××, Age: ××, Gender: Male.

Medical history: yes.Occupation: businessman.

Symptoms: Although this person behaves well and is emotionally stable, he does things too conservatively.There is no "passion" element in the body, so the metabolism is disordered; there is no "struggle" plastid in the effector T cells, so the immunity is deficient; there is no "innovation" molecule in the osteogenic element, so the osteoporosis cannot withstand the blow; the nervous system The lack of "changeable" factors in the, so not sensitive enough...

Performance: Started in the button business, but never dared to enter the clothing market when the business grew bigger, but set up a button company; didn’t dare to start a small company, but fought alone; the practice stayed in marketing, but didn’t dare to expand, such as real estate Marketing, buying and selling of capital; dare not...

Condition: It is getting worse and has been exported to foreign countries. The growth and spread of vicious parasites such as "response to changes with the same"...

Suggestion: Although the effect is not great, it can only be injected persistently and inject "variable" elements.Do not go to the company these days.

Notify family members and prepare for closure.

Emergency notice. League A, number: 002.

Name: ××, Age: ××, Gender: Male.

Medical history: yes.Occupation: Tennis player.

Symptoms: Although this person has novel ideas, innovative behaviors, and changeable emotions.But doing things and being a person is too changeable.Lack of "stable" genes in the body, so behavior disorders, no "regular" plastids in effector B cells, resulting in immune disorders, no "stable thoughts" in the brain, so the brain is hypoxic, and the nervous system does not have "thinking in line with others" hormones.

Performance: Tennis as a career, once became the champion of the French Open.Grand Slam has also won the championship, but the behavior is weird, such as the serve is not in the one-point position, and he has also developed a "super-Western grip". Hitting the ball back...

Condition: long-term cure, "unconventional" behavior is prominent, and continues...

Suggestion: Confinement, formal training.

Inform family members and prepare for Wimbledon defeat.

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Of these two patients, one is a business prodigy, the button king TMMP, and the other is a tennis master RODOC.Do you say that the "old eyes" do not observe seriously, or are their "standards" and "innovations" a little too much?

score review
This article is also a short novel, the plot may seem absurd, but it has profound meaning, which shows the candidate's exquisite conception and innovative spirit.Candidates closely follow the key words "stability" and "changeability" of the topic, which makes people realize suddenly in hilarity: Although a person behaves well and is emotionally stable, he is too conservative in doing things and lacks the spirit of hard work and innovation, so it is difficult to achieve great success; Although people have novel ideas and innovative behaviors, their emotions are changeable and their behavior is changeable, so it is difficult to make big things happen.The story is weird, but the philosophy is shocking.

Publicity and restraint

(a candidate from Fujian)

Blair once said: "If a person is a Conservative Party when he is young, he is too heartless, but if a person is a Liberal Party when he is old, he is too immature." Perhaps, publicity belongs to young people, and restraint belongs to old people.

Su Shi sang loudly: "The great river goes to the east, the waves wash away, and the romantic man of the ages." Li Qingzhao whispered: "This time, why is there such a word of sorrow?" Perhaps, openness belongs to men, and restraint belongs to women.

Openness, let the sun shine brightly on the earth, and revive all things; restraint, let the moonlight radiate with the insomniacs to sleep; openness, let the rolling Yangtze River endlessly; restraint, let the camel bells in the long Sahara Desert be melodious .

Publicity and restraint, what is right and what is wrong?
If it is too publicized, the scorching sun will wither the vegetation; if it is too reserved, the darkness will make passersby panic; if it is too publicized, the river will burst its embankment;It turns out that publicity and restraint are inseparable from each other.

Both the young and the old need to be both public and restrained; men and women need to know how to be both public and restrained.Make public your youth, life will be bright and colorful.However, too much publicity becomes insolence.Arrogance is childish performance, it may make you fall into the abyss.

"Han Xin ordered more soldiers, the more the better." Facing Liu Bang's question with ulterior motives, Han Xin looked down at the chess game and answered casually.At the critical moment, he didn't know how to restrain himself, and still uttered wild words.Little did he know that his words strengthened Liu Bang's determination to destroy him.Insolence made him push himself to death.We must know how to be introverted while making publicity.

Life will be safer if you restrain your own personality.However, being too introverted becomes indifferent and cowardly.Throughout the ages, how many literati with lofty ideals have lamented that lofty aspirations are hard to pay, and heroes have no use for them.They are eager to know the Bole of the Chollima, but how many people can be as lucky as Jiang Shang who fished in Bixi and met King Wen who respected people?Waiting in expectation and disappointment, the result can only be that the knife cuts off the water and the water flows more, toasting to relieve sorrow and sorrow.

We must learn to express ourselves in restraint.We need to be novel and changeable, to show off our individuality, and let the water of life boil; we need to be regulated, stable, restrain our impetuousness, and be calm in the face of ups and downs.

Introverted, it is a warm piece of clothing sent by mother when it is cold, a burst of coolness sent by father when it is hot, a pot of coolness when thirsty, and an umbrella when it rains.

Publicity is singing loudly when you are happy, shouting unrestrainedly when you are sad, singing and dancing when you are together, and the back of chasing the train when you are parting.

In life, express our love with introversion and publicity, a drop of water is enough to make the sea roll, and a grass can also make the green hills sad.Don't forget to be public, and don't forget to be restrained.

score review
This article is an argumentative prose that clarifies profound philosophy in poetic language.The title "Publicity and restraint" is in sharp contrast, pointing out the purpose of the title.The article begins with quotes from British Prime Minister Blair and famous ancient Chinese poets Su Shi and Li Qingzhao, concretizing the meaning of "publicity and restraint", and revealing the dialectical relationship between "publicity and restraint" through beautiful language.Candidates are eloquent, with broad horizons and unrestrained enthusiasm; they are thoughtful, well-written, and full of literary talents.Show extraordinary Chinese skills and impressive literary talent.

Celebrity Quotes
To be a Conservative in youth is too heartless, but to be a Liberal in old age is too immature. - Blair
The great river goes east, the waves wash away, and there are romantic figures through the ages. ——Su Shi's first time this time, why is there such a word of worry? ——Li Qingzhao
Sit and watch the shooting stars pass through the sky

(a candidate from Fujian)

The sun and menstruation pass through the sky, and the rivers and rivers travel to the earth.The sky and the earth are blue, don’t you see the bright moon, the scorching red sun, the sun rises in the east and sets in the west, and night and night are fixed in a corner of the sky with its stable shape.Kun Qian floats on the shining horizon in its stable form, so they can sprinkle all generations with their magnificent Dezebu, making all things radiant.Don’t you see the shining meteors, sometimes arrogantly piercing through the lonely old appearance of the night, and sometimes flocking like rain, refreshing our vision of looking up at the sky.Meteor dances in the sky with its changeable shape. Although it cannot restrain the living beings with its frail body to give eternal light, nor does it have a fixed and eternal life trajectory, but it shines in the eyes and gives people the aura of enlightenment and awakening. ...

And the wife has always admired her, whether she should follow the rules and be a Baochai girl who is tolerant of Fangyuan, or be an independent younger sister who "doesn't have a bag of beautiful bones, and a pure land to hide her love". topic of.

Among the scholars in the pre-Qin period, who did not want to be promoted to an official position, "Once the power is in hand, the order will be carried out", "A gentleman's official position should be done according to his righteousness".However, there happened to be a haggard and yellow Zhuangzi who did not follow the secular way of longing for "magnificence and happiness", insisted on the "leisure happiness" he pursued in his heart, and told the envoy of Chu State lightly: "When we go, I will drag my tail on the way. "

Layman Qinglian who "doesn't care about the rich and powerful" once laughed and scolded Confucius unrestrainedly.What a "heresy" and absurdity this is.However, when Taibai saw the filth that could not be tolerated in the world, he left angrily.There is no sorrow of Lay Yi'an who said "this time, why is there a word of sorrow?", nor Liu Sanbian's sorrow of "holding his hands and looking at his tearful eyes, but he was speechless".It's just a sigh of "reciting poems and composing Fu in the north window, ten thousand words can't make a glass of water".

And in the long-suffering Qing Dynasty, the literati clan would bury their heads in the pile of old papers, never talk about political affairs, ignore political affairs, and still wear your black hat for corruption and corruption, and seal your tens of thousands of acres of land.Why don't you—Tan Sitong—just sit and watch this old man wearing poppies die? "Looking at the door, thinking about Zhang Jian, I waited for Dugan for a while. I smiled to the sky, and I went to Kunlun with my heart and gall." What’s more, please let him put his life in the mouth of Caishi lightly with the spirit of “please be the same as the heir”, and let him wake up the sleeping subjects with the passing of the meteor.

Follow the rules, it is true that one night or a lifetime of sleep can be exchanged, but there is the brilliance of meteors - only in the Warring States period was there a theory of contention; only in the history of thousands of years of ancient poetry has left a brocade that cannot be tolerated by the world. A bachelor with heart embroidery; the Republic of China, can sprout and grow in the blood of the predecessors. Look at the beauty of meteors piercing the night sky!Although there is no advantage of maneuvering, although there is no good name of "Mr. Hao", although there is no glory of being sought after by most people, "Meteor" will always be remembered by history one day.

score review
This is an excellent work in the examination room that uses symbolic techniques to interpret the topic.The article is rich in examples. The deeds of Xue Baochai, Lin Daiyu, pre-Qin scholars, Li Bai, Tan Sitong and others were used as arguments successively. The arguments are rigorous, well-founded, and powerful.The ingenious use of a large number of famous poems also adds luster to the article, demonstrating the author's profound literary accomplishment.

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