College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 20 Unexpected and Reasonable (2)
Climb to the Great Wall but trip over a shoelace, and you complain angrily about the "Cheng Yaojin" flying under your feet; fate gives you color, but you want to open a dyeing house; fate breaks me Glass, but I use them to weave crystal slippers that can dance the swan dance; the reason, wise friend, I know you know, life makes us really understand, unexpected but reasonable.

There are many mistakes, and the arrangement of fate is accepted in the dark. The twists and turns of the plot are bizarre and unbelievable, but the result gives us hard facts, which makes many creatures shake, sigh, and move...

The Dragon Boat Festival is approaching, and the rice dumplings are fragrant for thousands of miles. Cranes rise from Huxiang, and fly with rice dumplings.How could one not recall Qu Yuan's sorrow and sorrow, and his generous and elegiac songs were so calm. At that time, the public's response was unknown, and later generations lamented a lot, the disappearance of cultural celebrities, and the fall of stars into the sky.Throughout his life, Qu Yuan was full of justice and worried about the country and the people.When the treacherous slander harbors the king's suspicion, our amorous poet...

"Facing the sea, the spring is warm and the flowers are blooming", suddenly enlightened, my heart is clear, I heard that Haizi was lying on the rails, and I didn't know the turmoil of the people at that time, but as emotional animals, how can we not see the whole world with emotion, why can't we see through the world of mortals?The chaos and confusion of the society, the hesitation of the heart, and instant sobriety.The poet did not walk into the black hole of thought, and the slap of social and emotional waves is so decisive.

Napoleon, a hero of a generation and a genius in the world, gave us so many surprises. The French army swept across Europe and established the First French Empire with unprecedented economic and military prosperity.When the army was defeated at Waterloo, we, who were logical and thoughtful, certainly knew the reason. He aroused public outrage, and the iron hooves of the army trampled on the hearts of the European people. They were cruel and powerful.

Who said that people of the yellow race can't take the first place... At the moment when Liu Xiang, an Asian flying man, made an emotional statement, the Chinese people cheered and the world focused on it.When the flowers and applause come, please look at the dark face of our handsome Chinese guy, no other evidence or testimony is needed.You and I already understand, "The sharp edge of a sword comes from sharpening, and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from bitter cold."

Gibran said: "What exists is reasonable." Once upon a time, I didn't understand its meaning, but it can explain our propositions in a certain sense.A sunny day with a sudden heavy rain, the sun always comes after the storm, the mountains and rivers return but there are dark willows and flowers, Mr. Cao's dream of the Red Mansion, Wang Xifeng's shrewd life has missed Qingqing's life, there must be an intersection between chance and necessity.

The speed is dozens of miles, and you can reach the finish line when you run. Ouch, I fell into the mud. You said that life made a joke for you. I said that you don’t have long eyes.Isn't the ridicule here unexpected and reasonable?
score review
The article is quick in thinking, profound in meaning, closely related to the theme, and clear in writing and ambition.The language of the article is vivid, full of literary talent, strong lyricism, and the arrangement of paragraphs is ingenious and reasonable.Embellished with meaningful philosopher's verses, it is quite convincing.

classic case
Qu Yuan, Haizi, Napoleon, Liu Xiang, etc.
raindrops · dewdrops · teardrops
(A candidate from Anhui)

The dawn is breaking in the east, the morning light is twilight, and the goddess of dawn floats down to the earth, walking by the delicate and beautiful red rose, and seeing three crystal clear drops of water on the petals beckoning to her, asking her to stay.

"Glittering drops of water, what are you doing?" the happy goddess stopped and asked.

"Thank you, please be our referee."

"Oh, what's the matter?" the goddess asked in bewilderment.

"We belong to the same water drop, but our origins are different. Which water drop is more precious?"

The goddess didn't know what to say, so she paused for a moment, gathered herself together, pointed to one of the drops of water and said, "Then introduce yourself first!"

When Yuzhu heard that she was asked to speak first, she swayed triumphantly and said, "I, the clouds from high above, are the daughter of the sea, symbolizing the surging sea."

"I am the dewdrop formed before the dawn," the other one rushed to answer impatiently. "People praise me as the bridesmaid of the colorful morning glow, and the beautician of exotic flowers and plants."

The third water drop refused to speak for a long time, and the Goddess of Dawn asked kindly: "So, what about you, my dear little girl?"

"I am nothing," she replied coyly, "from a girl's bright eyes, which at first seemed to be a smile, then called friendship, soon burst into eyes, and are now called tears."

Hearing what she said, the first two drops of water curled their lips in unison, arrogantly, showing a contemptuous smile.The Goddess of Dawn smiled unexpectedly, so happy and natural, like a bright sun.Then she bent down, carefully put the teardrops in her hands, and even praised: "You still have self-knowledge, and you don't show off at all. Obviously, you are purer and more precious than them!"

"But, I am the daughter of the sea!" Yuzhu cried anxiously.

"But, I am the daughter of the vast sky!" Luzhu jumped up.

"Yes, that's right at all," said the Goddess of Dawn solemnly, "as for her, she is the sublimation of the pure feelings in the human heart, and then condenses into teardrops that burst out of the eyes. Nobility is not those who are born noble, prominent in status, beautiful in appearance, and bragging. There are many things in the world that do not use this as the standard for judging beauty, ugliness, goodness and evil. Therefore, it is beyond your expectations that I choose her as the most precious, but as long as you think about it a little, you will understand that this is reasonable. Therefore, you Take this as a lesson, think about it carefully, and think about your future."

After saying that, the goddess sucked the teardrops, stepped on the colorful clouds, hummed soft songs, and disappeared without a trace.

score review
A major feature of this article is the use of dialogue to vividly depict the characteristics of raindrops, dewdrops, and teardrops.Using a symbolic writing technique, teardrops symbolize a class of people in modern society who are modest and prudent, neither arrogant nor impetuous, hard-working, unknown, and selfless.The language is fluent and beautiful, the structure is reasonable and rigorous, rich in profound philosophy, and makes people think deeply. It is a rare and excellent work.

unexpected and reasonable

——The Life of Van Gogh

(A candidate from Anhui)

Van Gogh's life is best described as loneliness.

It is not an exaggeration to interpret Van Gogh's works with eternity.

But he was born so unexpectedly, maybe it is because he lived so lonely that his death is reasonable; just like his works, the silence during his lifetime is so unexpected, and it is also reasonable that his works become a mess after death middle.

"If there is no something infinite, something deep, something real in my life, I will not miss it." Van Gogh once said this, and I love Van Gogh like I love my own life , Van Gogh's paintings, Van Gogh's melancholy... From this sentence, I realized Van Gogh's despair, the indifference of the world, and the pain of not being appreciated by others has tortured him out of shape.He was a good horse, but there was no bole in that era, and there was no one, so Van Gogh lived alone, and that kind of life was more painful than death, especially when he really felt that kind of life. When loneliness is more painful than death, in order to end this pain, he would rather choose death.

When the red blood dripped on the sunflower, I understood that it was Van Gogh's last whisper to the world in order to get rid of loneliness and indifference.

Living so unexpectedly, so death is also reasonable.

After all, I can't help thinking, is it really because Van Gogh was destined to be a star, so he has been alone all the time?But why doesn't God even give him the loneliness of "overwhelming heights"?Why let a person who is originally eternal and admired by others live in mediocrity?Why does he even think that he is just a grain of millet and has no right to be respected by others?I don't know!Since God created a genius, why did he let him live in loneliness and pain?Could it be that genius is a title that can only be given after the trigger is pulled and the page is covered with blood?I don't know!I am afraid of such unexpected and reasonable!
And his paintings, like his people, have been silent in the world for decades, and they became popular after his death!People rushed to call out astonishing numbers at the auction of Van Gogh's works. Although it is reasonable, but Van Gogh is gone, what he has is unexpected loneliness, but he cannot enjoy people's admiration and appreciation for him. pious!

score review
This article takes Van Gogh's life as a clue, describing his unexpected silence during his lifetime and the reason for his fame after his death. The writing is beautiful, and there is irony in his helplessness.In particular, the question sentences in the penultimate paragraph of the article are strong and powerful, expressing the author's injustice and at the same time accusing the injustice of the society!
"Love Forever" three-act drama
(a candidate from Henan)

At a recent class meeting, the teacher creatively let us watch a set of three-act plays about "Love", and made a brief comment, and asked us to share our feelings after watching.

Act One

Location: A battlefield filled with gunpowder.

Time: Anti-Japanese War period

Characters: Platoon leader and soldier Xiao Wu
Plot: The platoon leader and Xiao Wu have been sticking to this strategic high ground. The enemy's firepower is still fierce, and many soldiers have died gloriously.Suddenly, there was a roar, and a bomb fell from the sky, but Xiao Wu unexpectedly rushed to the platoon leader, covering him with his thin body... What surprised the audience was that the place where he was lying on his stomach was blown into a big hole, while he and the platoon leader are safe and sound.

Second act

Location: street

Time: dark night
Characters: The Blind and the Passerby
Plot: A blind man was walking in the streets with a lantern in his hand. People along the way felt strange, so they asked the blind man, and the blind man replied: Although I can't see the road, but if I walk with a lantern, others will be able to see me and not bump into me. Me, and he, too, could see the road.

Act Three

Location: Hospital

Characters: Little Tom and his parents

Plot: Little Tom unfortunately got a terminal illness, his parents were distraught, and they wanted to fulfill his last wish for Little Tom, so they asked him what else he wanted.Little Tom unexpectedly replied: "I want to transplant my healthy body organs to those who need them." The parents looked at each other for a long time, and then agreed.Because they know that little Tom has been full of love since he was a child and always likes to help others. This is inseparable from their good teaching, practice and setting an example.So, although little Tom is about to leave them, his life continues while his organs are helping others...

Teacher's comment: In fact, sometimes seemingly unexpected things are also reasonable, because those actions all come from our inner desire for love and selfless and fearless devotion of love!
Comprehension: Yes!Acts of love may seem unexpected, but they are reasonable. When we have the courage to give love to help others overcome difficulties, it also benefits us!In other words, helping others is also helping yourself!
While helping the flowers to pollinate the bees, they also get the raw materials for making honey from them; while the rain water nourishes the vegetation, it also frees itself from the shackles of the dark clouds; while we dedicate our love, we also purify our hearts and get happiness from it!

score review
This article is cleverly conceived, and the whole article is constructed in the form of drama, which is novel, unique, natural and clear.This book selects three things in real life that are originally low-key and gloomy, but the ending is always so unexpected, ending in a comedy, full of the author's positive and optimistic thoughts and feelings.The "teacher's comment" and "perception" at the end highlight the center, sublimate the theme, and reflect the profound humanistic quality of the article.

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