College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 21 Location and Value (1)
(2005 National Volume 2)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

In the corner of the factory, several rusted iron ingots of various shapes chatted unwillingly.

A: I want to be a robot, and modernization needs me most.

B: I am willing to be a screw, many places cannot do without me.

C: I think the values ​​of robots and screws are different!
Ding: They are all looking for a position that suits them.

In life, everyone's position may be different, but each has its own value. Please use "position and value" as the topic and write an article of no less than 800 words.Choose your own concept, choose your own style, and draw up your own title.Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
The topic of "position and value" belongs to the category of outlook on life and values, and is also a relational topic composition. Candidates must correctly view the relationship between position and value.We say that everyone living in a certain social class will have his own corresponding position, and each position also has its corresponding value.The understanding of the level of position and the size of value can reflect a person's world outlook, outlook on life and values.Today's middle school students have a strong sense of individuality, think more about the individual in everything, and tend to ignore the overall value.Therefore, although the topic of "position and value" focuses on the "little self", from the perspective of moral orientation, it has found its place and embodies its value.In one's life, one needs to have a position that is most suitable for oneself. The key is to find the right position. Only when you find the right position can you truly reflect your own value.Therefore, we can say that the proposition of "position and value" plays a leading role in how candidates can find their own position and realize their self-worth in the future.

Writing Ideas Tips
According to the materials, there can be many ideas. For example, no matter how high or low a person's status is, as long as he works hard and contributes, he is equally valuable; if he finds a suitable position, he can express his own value; the value of life lies in the society's needs, not in what kind of situation Position; we have to correctly treat the relationship between position and value, and so on.Of course, candidates can expand their associations and start from the materials.For example, there is nothing wrong with wanting to be a robot. Life is to pursue a good position to achieve high value; an ordinary position can achieve extraordinary value; There is no value at all; the position is not directly proportional to the value, the key lies in what you do; valuable figures in history have prominent positions...

Full score sample essay
look forward, look back

(A candidate from Heilongjiang)

Let me ask you, is a drop of water useful?

Maybe it can't wet a petal, maybe it can't wash the cups and dishes, maybe it can't wash away the mud and dirt, maybe it can't make waves, but this is not the answer.Have you ever seen a thirsty traveler in the desert longing for it?Have you ever heard the roar of the sea full of its cries?

A philosopher said it well: "Although the water drop is small, it can reflect the brilliance of the sun." Everything has its own meaning of existence, but... Looking forward, seeing the height of others, do you feel inferior?Looking back, seeing the shortness of others, complacent?wrong!You have your own path under your feet, and you have your own dedication.

On the ancient battlefield where the flames of war are billowing, unknown soldiers can still charge forward, and outstanding warriors can plan their own strategies. A clear division of labor and a well-organized formation are the keys to attacking a city and defending a territory.Traveling through the corridors of history, looking for the ordinary and great shining points, the banquet of singing and dancing, and the peaceful market, is it the "Zhenguan Prosperity" full of talents?Conquering thieves has the brave Qin Shubao, and the state affairs and people's livelihood have the "conspiracy to stop the house".The proper position has made that history-worthy warrior, counselor and king.

With green mountains and green waters, and elegant clothes, is it Li Taibai who is accompanied by poetry and wine? "Let's put the white deer among the green cliffs, and visit famous mountains by riding as soon as you have to go." Between glasses of wine, there are papers full of chapters.He is an official in the court, but he is not familiar with the darkness of the officialdom.Even if he is depressed, it still makes Gao Lishi grind his ink and take off his boots.How can the unruly poetic immortal endure the strife and darkness in the court?Riding upside down on a green ox, expressing love for the mountains and rivers, taking the breeze as a companion, and the bright moon as a friend, and finding one's own position, poets can become real poets.

Every flower has its own unique color, every star has its own brilliance, every breeze brings coolness, every drop of nectar moistens the rice fields, just as everyone has their own value of life and their own social contribution .But whether you can find the position that suits you is the key.Not to mention that Ban Chao joined the army and changed his position appropriately in exchange for greater contributions, not to mention Tao Qian retreated to the countryside and left immortal poems by appropriately changing angles. Now this high-speed earth needs you to fully demonstrate your value. With your rational eyes, look forward and see the call of the times; look backward and see the hope of society.Take your legs, what are you waiting for?And go find your own position and realize the flash of your life!
Not every river flows into the sea, but it can irrigate the farmland; not every flower is kept in the greenhouse, but it can decorate the mountains; not everyone stands on the cusp of the storm, but, the position is right, please give as much as you want!
Looking forward and looking back, the smiles of farmers and the faces of leaders are equally brilliant.

score review
The reasoning of the article is wonderful, and he is good at using poetic language to discuss and express his feelings. He also pays attention to forging aphorisms and maxims to strengthen and beautify his reasoning, such as "every flower has its own unique color, every star has its own brilliance, and every breeze Every drop of nectar will moisten the paddy fields", etc., where the brush and ink are swayed, the spirit is flying, showing the author's profound Chinese skills and superb writing ability.

Find the right position, blooming brilliance

(A candidate from Heilongjiang)

Tigers roar in the deep mountains, fish fly in the shallow bottom, camels walk in the desert, geese fly into the sky...everything in the world has its own world, and the secret of life is to find its own position and bloom its own brilliance.

To find the right position, you need to examine yourself, recognize yourself, and listen to the call of self-worth with a calm heart.Don't be surprised by favor or disgrace, just watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court;

If I were a mountain, I would stand with a kind of dignity, let the mountain flowers bloom brilliantly, let the mountain wind blow my face, let the language of dreams permeate every corner, and let my value be displayed under the sun; if I were water, I would flow into a stream This kind of majesty makes the boat sail far, the fish are happy, makes every trickle go forward, and makes my value sing in the wind.

To find the right position, you need to believe in yourself, affirm yourself, and hold a heavy ideal with an unyielding heart.

Maybe we "float like nothing, the sky and the earth are like a gull", maybe we "the boat will pass away, and the river and the sea will send the rest of our life", maybe we "laugh up to the sky and go out", different people have different ways of living, but the saying "I am born Material must be useful", how bold and free and easy it is.A true hero is a scarred star who rises in self-belief, self-affirmation.

Find the right location, that is Zhang Qian's "hollowing out" camel bells, that is Su Wu's loyalty and staunchness in shepherding sheep, that is the long sands of Zhaojun's departure, that is Wei Qing's banner hunting to meet the desert, and that is Yue Fei's sword and halberd. Roaring up to the sky, with strong ambitions, it is the waves of Zheng He's voyage to the West, with great ambitions.

Find the right position, don't let the fog cover your eyes, and don't let the strong wind blow away your beliefs.Even if my purple grapes turn into dew in late autumn, even if my flowers are nestled in the arms of others, we still keep our eyes open, looking for the opportunity of life, and waiting for the opportunity to come.

Blooming brilliance, bravely meet the challenges of life, let life be like a sword clanging and flashing cold light, let life be like a ray of fragrance from a plum blossom.Living high in the temple and caring about the common people, being far away from the rivers and lakes and being optimistic and open-minded.

Blooming brilliance, even if I am just a small flying insect, I have to fly hard and spread my wings to embrace my dreams.

No one is doomed to be mediocre because of being ordinary. The ordinary "Lei Feng" is the "screw" of a harmonious society, and the ordinary "Jiao Yulu" is a monument with a clean sleeve. As long as you and I find our own positions, ordinary positions will have life The bright colors and ordinary efforts can also converge into rivers and seas.Everyone is their own hero. If you find the right position, you will be like a dragon skimming the shoals and small rivers, hitting the water three thousand times on the vast ocean;

Facing the Ocean, Spring and Blossom.Find the right position and bloom brilliance.

score review
This article closely revolves around the center of "the brilliance can bloom when you find the right position", and analyzes it from multiple angles to make the reasoning go deeper step by step.Haizi's famous quotes are quoted at the end to make the article more charming and fragrant.The full text is novel in conception, rich in poetic flavor, echoing from beginning to end, and rigorous in structure.

sail pointing to lighthouse
(A candidate from Heilongjiang)

Life is like the sea, sometimes it roars wantonly and overwhelms mountains and seas, sometimes it restrains and hides, and the waves are calm.Human beings are like a flat boat on the sea of ​​life, swaying unsteadily, and like a bleak yellow leaf in the autumn wind. After experiencing the confusion of life and the hesitation of death, where should the course of life go?
History gives us rich materials, its heaviness and freshness, its boldness and perverseness, its persistence and evolution, all of which inspire people.People should have a suitable position and embody value from the basis of human nature, but there are many obstacles and obstacles on the road to find it, and wisdom and maturity are needed, and thinking is like a guiding light, which makes people rush on the road of ideals without hesitation.

Great people will inevitably stumble in the mud, and this often makes the great soul stubbornly lost. This kind of loss is tantamount to stripping off the flesh of the nation.Qu Yuan's maverick declared a break with the old era; Li Baitian's pure persistence brought about the vicissitudes of "three people in the opposite shadow"; Ji Kang's rare personality integrity ruined the ethereal and elegant; "Burning with anger" is only to uphold the righteousness of the national spirit...

I dare not think too much, let alone think too much, history makes me helplessly heavy.Such a great soul can't find a destination, because the thoughts are too profound and abrupt, so I applaud them and also because they can't change their minds.But if you think about it carefully, such a slight deviation in position will lead to permanent loss. Literati should put aside the secular world and concentrate on studying Taoism, and generals should forge their minds on the battlefield. Politics does not belong to them, their world is Qingya Baishan.

How to reflect the value after finding the location is another urgent problem.I always suspect that the reality is not as I wish, but it just reflects the value unconsciously.Pascal said: "Man is a reed that can think." Balzac has an epiphany about the various situations in the world under the boring quill pen, and Mao Zedong enjoys the confidence of strategizing on the barren and harsh loess high slope...but this is not Compulsive and mechanical coping is the instinct of creation at the moment of choosing this challenge. From then on, people have a quiet calm, a peaceful and stable mood, and a free and easy heart without any grievances, and everything comes from the call of humanity.

Acknowledging the diversity of this society is to give yourself more opportunities, and the position can be tried at multiple levels, and this attempt requires deep thinking. With thinking, you can do whatever you want on the course of life and seek spiritual liberation. And the independence of thinking, you will find the position of thinking again and again, and you will have the value embodiment of establishing society.

The sails should set sail, the lighthouse is ahead.

score review
The beginning of the article is beautiful, and in the writing, the arguments are made with metaphors, examples, and quotations, which enhance the rigor of the argument.In addition, candidates comment on the ancients without forgetting to observe the reality, reasoning seriously but not lacking in poetic comments; carefully crafting language, so that the article has a certain literary talent.

Yuner and Xiaohe

(a candidate from Guangxi)

The clouds in the sky would like to be a small river;
The river on the ground would like to be a cloud.

With a gentle breeze, Yun'er quietly looked at the beautiful land, bathed in the warm teachings of the sun, felt the vicissitudes of the sea for thousands of years, lit a spark, and fell asleep listening to the ancient and magical stories of the moon.However, Yun'er, who has grown up slowly, has her own troubles.

I'm tired of this easy life, how dull it is compared to the wonderful life of thrills and adventures.Yun'er lamented.

The small river rushes to the sea every day.When encountering steep rocks and dangers, it has no way out, even if its body is smashed to pieces, it has to face it head-on; with pain that has not been forgotten, it flows through the fine flat sand, wanting to appreciate the peach blossoms on the bank, singing sweetly amidst the fragrance of flowers and birds. Resting, and the inexplicable divine power behind it is still urging it to move forward, to move forward.Gradually, Xiaohe got tired.

(End of this chapter)