College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 26 Crested Pork Belly and Leopard Tail (2)
If everyone has a path to learn from the scriptures in their hearts, and to meet hardships and challenges with an open mind; if everyone sees not only the "leopard tail" surrounded by flowers and applause, but also prays for a colorful "pork belly", Then what we get are not just those few words of praise?

The road of learning scriptures without demons is a road that is completely different from the south.

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This argumentative essay has a fascinating title and inspires people to think.The author's "unique" insights, unique writing style, novel and unique, make people's eyes bright after reading.The structure of the article is rigorous and logical.Pros and Cons Contrastive Argument is another highlight of this article.

Leopard gallops
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

In the Olympic main stadium, countless spectators are waiting quietly, countless flashing lights are waiting quietly, countless commentators are waiting quietly, the moon in the night sky is waiting quietly, coach Sun Haiping Also waiting quietly.

All players stand on the same starting line together.Liu Xiang's leopard-like eyes stared at the finish line, he patted his chest with his hands, and raised his hands high... Get ready-bang!

Liu Xiang started running like a crazy leopard on the plain, one step, two steps, three steps, his right leg was raised to the highest point, snap!Press down hard, use all the strength of your left foot to push down on the ground, your right foot will land on the ground steadily, and you will pass the first hurdle easily...

It was the fierce leopard eyes again, staring at the front, clenched its teeth, and seemed to exhaust all its strength, and started the second column: one step, two steps, three steps, the right leg was lifted to the highest point, snap!Push down hard, use your left foot... the second bar is over!

At this time, all the Chinese audience followed Liu Xiang closely; Coach Sun Haiping held the medicine bottle tightly with his left hand, pressed his chest with his right hand whose heartbeat had already exceeded 120, and fixed his eyes on Liu Xiang.

At the beginning of the third hurdle, the fierce expression was still there, one step, two steps, three steps... The right foot landed steadily, and Liu Xiang became excited, because in the first three hurdles he was the weakest, he did not suffer; Sun Haiping My heart is calm...

Go to the penultimate column.It is still the pair of fierce leopard eyes, but there is more confidence in the eyes.One step, two steps, three steps, lift the right leg up to the highest point, pop! ... and passed with ease.Liu Xiang started to go crazy, Sun Haiping clenched the medicine bottle again, and all the Chinese audience held their breath.The "France" next to him was locked by Liu Xiang's aura and fell down!Start to enter the last bar, one step, two steps, three steps, the right leg is lifted up to the highest point, snap!Press down hard, use all the strength of the left foot to push down, and the right foot lands on the ground steadily... The host shouted Liu Xiang, and Liu Xiang was about to reach the finish line. He no longer stared at the front, but was full of confidence Glancing left and right, a lion shook its head... Countless audiences were boiling, countless flashlights were boiling, countless commentators were boiling, Sun Haiping...

The perfect first three hurdles, the perfect last three hurdles, excellent hurdle skills, and a confident look sent Liu Xiang to the top of the world. Leopard - gallop!
With elegant crested head and powerful leopard tail, Liu Xiang's flying is so perfect.That's the speed of success, and it's the speed that the new era needs.A good beginning is half the battle, and a strong ending is the other half.Leopard is speeding up!China is flying!
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The examinee was ingenious and used "leopard galloping" to praise the Chinese athlete Liu Xiang, described the whole process of his hurdles, and compared Liu Xiang's three stages of preparation "in place", "hurdles" in the middle, and finally "crossing the line" to "phoenix hurdles". Head", "Pork Belly" and "Leopard Tail", vivid images.The article is cleverly conceived and novel in form.The description of details is also one of the biggest features of this article.

Footprint
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

The moon is full and the moon is waning, and the journey of 365 days has left a series of clear and continuous footprints behind me...

--Inscription

A. crested

Sunny Wednesday, June 2004, 6
Looking at the figures of the seniors and sisters who are busy evaluating points and filling out applications today, I suddenly feel that the burden on my shoulders has become heavier, and it will be my turn at this time next year.

In the composition class, the teacher said that we should pay attention to the crested head, pork belly and leopard tail when writing. I couldn't help but think of my journey to realize my dream.If I didn't take the critical first step, and didn't have a beautiful crested head, it would be rare to get a pork belly, and even more rare to get a leopard tail.Thinking back to myself when I first entered high school, and then looking at my pitiful score in the last exam, and then looking at the eye-catching date on the calendar, I know the journey to realize my dream. The moon is full and the moon is waxing. I only have 365 days. I told myself that it was time to set off, so I carefully sorted out the textbooks and notes, and prepared to set off...

If you want your dream to take off, you must work hard from the first step.

……

B. Pork belly

Sunday Rain, March 2005, 3

The results of the second model have come down, and I am very happy to see my name on the report card. At the same time, I can clearly feel the uncontrollable commotion of the students in their studies. , it seems that everyone is praying that the countdown to the college entrance examination on the blackboard will be faster.In fact, I also hope to go to the examination room earlier and use the results of my hard work to take the actual college entrance examination, but time is still moving forward at its eternal pace... Just when I was standing on the edge of impetuousness and complacency, the teacher warned me: "Indifference leads to enlightenment, tranquility leads to far-reaching." So I opened the diary and injected myself with a sedative again: "Steady! I want to make further progress, and I will be the winner who laughs till the end!" Days, 365 days of the 287-day journey have passed.In the remaining time, I will continue to keep my feet on the ground and stick to it!Because I want to give myself a dream-seeking process, a full and rich pork belly to get the most attractive leopard tail.

"The road is a long way to go, and I will go up and down to find out."

……

C. leopard tail

Thursday, August 2005, 6 was sunny

In a blink of an eye, two days of intense and fulfilling college entrance examinations came to an end, and I walked steadily.When I walked out of the examination room yesterday afternoon, I was full of motivation and relaxation, and I seemed to have heard the sound of flowers blooming.I went to school to evaluate my score this morning, and the result was about the same as my original goal.Looking at the envious eyes cast by my classmates, I couldn't express my joy in my heart.Looking back at the tears of excitement in searching for dreams, and the stubbornness of getting up after falling down... No pains, no gains, I succeeded. After the beautiful crested head and full pork belly, I finally have an attractive The tail of the leopard, the full moon and the waning of the moon, my clear footprints have been left on the 365-day journey...

"After the storm, I saw the beautiful rainbow in the sky."

score review
This article is very innovative. Candidates use the montage technique quite uniquely in the form of writing a diary.According to the requirements of the topic and combined with their own experience, candidates divide their experience of preparing for the college entrance examination into three stages: crested head, pig belly and leopard tail. They use the documentary style of diary to express their feelings at each stage, explaining the reasons behind the success It's my hard work.The title of the article covers the three stages of phoenix head, pork belly, and leopard tail, which is rare.

Youth begins at 40

(a candidate from Jiangsu)

My mother is an ordinary worker. She is over forty years old and has gained weight. In my opinion, she is a good wife and mother.Prepare breakfast for my father and me in the morning, wash and dry clothes at noon, and go to bed after dinner and watching soap operas in the evening.In addition to working, doing housework, and taking care of me and my dad, the typical image of a housewife who eats and sleeps.It's just that when I stayed at home for a holiday, I suddenly discovered that my mother had changed.

I thought that the flower beds were only for weeds to enjoy, but unexpectedly there were a few decent flowers. "That's what your mother planted." Dad's words made me stunned again.I dropped the bag and went to pick up rice to eat. "Have you washed your hands? How old are you and you forget about it!" "Ah?" I put down my chopsticks, blinking my eyes at a loss. You must know that "washing hands" was only taught by my elementary school teacher, and my mother never said it.Of course, I obediently washed my hands.The dishes on the dinner table include steamed fish, which I like, and it is naturally not polite at home, so my chopsticks never leave it. "If you only eat fish, can your nutrition be balanced? There are many vitamins in vegetables, you should eat more!" I was overwhelmed in my heart. My mother used the two professional terms just right, so I couldn't eat them even though I was not happy. Less food.

The meal ended successfully, I turned on the TV, it was the Golden Theater, just about to call my mother, but I heard her voice, "I'm going for a walk with your father, you can get some fruit for yourself—" My God, walking, isn't this something young couples do?Mom is over forty years old.I pinched myself hard, and a "wow" proved that I heard correctly.After the TV series ended, Mom and Dad came back empty-handed, "Why don't you buy something for a walk?" I was curious.Normally, they should buy me something when they go out, but what's wrong? "What do you want to buy? I still have everything to eat and use. Going for a walk will help you digest." What my mother said made me unable to answer a word. I can only look at my father, and now I can only get out of his something.So, the ear-whispering began. "Your mother often goes out with me recently, and when she comes back from a walk, she will watch them dance in the field in front of the park, and occasionally learn from them. Now, she has also quit soap operas, and always orders me to watch the news. Write it down, it's study..." I laughed out loud, but my mother heard me, so she asked me with a smile: "Is the whispering between the father and daughter over? Go upstairs when it's over. You have to take a shower before going to bed. Have a cup of hot milk, do you hear?" I smiled and fulfilled them one by one.

When I went upstairs, I heard my mother singing, and it was a song that I could sing. I sang along. My mother was surprised and asked me how I could sing. I laughed, "I shouldn't ask you this." words?"

While sleeping with the book my mother bought, I suddenly felt that my mother no longer just revolved around me and my father, but began to plan for myself and enrich myself.It seems that the mother who was supposed to be in the premenopausal period has quietly returned to her youth, and she can feel youth with me, and she is in the Mood for Love again...

score review
Candidates use their wise eyes to pay attention to the subtle sparks of human affection that burst out in daily life, and write about the subtle changes in the middle-aged "premenopausal mother" and "quietly returning to youth".In particular, the author uses vivid details to describe the mother's speech and behavior, voice and smile, and thoughts, which are expressed eloquently.The picture of life is fresh and natural, simple and generous.The title of the article implied the excitement and fulfillment of the mother's "pork belly" life.The writing is exquisite and the image is moving.

Good Beginnings
(a candidate from Jiangsu)

Fu Wen said that in the ancient years, Pangu was powerful, and the chaos was first opened. The clear ones floated up and became the sky, and the turbid ones sank to form the earth. Yu Yu clarified, this is the beginning of the world.The heaven and the earth exist, and Nuwa's holy family, the water and the soil are fused together, and they are molded into a human form, which is the beginning of this human being.The fire lin raises its head, the phoenix dances in the nine heavens, and it is the head of the birds and beasts. This is the beginning of the birds and beasts.The world is boundless, everything is one, and everything has its beginning.

The Suiren clan gave the people fire, the Youchao clan taught the people how to live, and the Shennong clan taught the people how to farm.Since the third family, it has been prosperous for generations to come.These three people are the beginning of food and clothing for generations.The Yellow Emperor drives the chariot and controls the sword, destroys Chiyou in Kyushu, and begins the history of Yanhuang for thousands of years; King Wu hangs the people and punishes crimes, destroys Tang Yu Chaoge, and opens the Zhou Dynasty for [-] years.All dynasties who want to have a prosperous world must seek a good beginning, and if they start a country with disadvantages, they will have no hope of long-term survival. How can we seek peace and prosperity for the people and the country?

The tree that embraces is born at the end of the hair; the nine-story platform starts from the pile of soil; the journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.It can be seen that good beginnings are useful.Wei Zheng has a saying: "Those who seek the growth of trees must strengthen their roots; those who want to flow far must dredge their springs." Every gentleman who wants to develop a grand plan must seek a good end and never forget a good beginning.If there is no good beginning, even if there is a good end, there will be regrets at the beginning.Just like in the time of writing, if there is no phoenix head, there are only pig stomachs and leopard tails, and it is difficult to be perfect.

The ancients said: "A gentleman sees an opportunity, and a wise man knows his destiny." Therefore, a gentleman is unwilling to do nothing and live a mediocre life.But if you are talented, you must want to make a difference, and seek a good beginning and a good end.Since a person is the leader of a hundred spirits, he should strive for perfection, and should not give up one tenth of it.The ancients paid attention to a good end, keeping the late festival, regardless of the past, and not responsible for a good beginning.However, today's people are also very different from their ancestors. They often pursue ease and ease, and are unwilling to overcome thorns and thorns.Entrepreneurship is difficult, and nine out of ten people are afraid of it.However, once it has its beginning, it must be trembling, diligent and frugal, in order to achieve a good end, why?It is a pity that it was not easy at the beginning.Just like those who belong to the text, if you get it by chance, you already have a phoenix head, can you keep trying to find pork belly and leopard tail?Today's people, who have heard the words of a hundred schools of thought and received the capital of thousands of years, can be sages and teachers, and there are only one or two in ten, but no one can be a sage in the end, why?It is without the thought of a good beginning, how dare you be the first in the world.

In ancient times, Wang Xizhi regarded himself as inferior to the ancients.Thought that "everything is different in the world".I take this for granted.Today's people are all looking for the strength of the pig's belly, and the power of the leopard's tail, but there are few people who are heavy on the crested head, and every time they start with it.I thought that in Xiang Xu's preface, it would be absurd for Mr. Tang to not teach the way of good beginnings in the classroom.If you can teach people the way of a good beginning, and when everyone has a good start, then everyone will be able to end well.If everyone starts well, then everyone can take their karma; if everyone accomplishes his karma, then everything will be accomplished.If there are such people, they will not worry about enlightenment, nor worry about turmoil.As for the prosperity of things and the well-being of the people, the country is prosperous and the family is strong, and it is possible to get it.The way of good beginning is rare today, but common in ancient times.If everyone can attain the samadhi, then the world must be clear.

May Si's aspirations be forever, and the East will last forever!
score review
The reasoning of the article is thorough and logical, fully demonstrating the special importance of "beginning", the writing is fluent and natural, and the use of classical Chinese is quite skillful, which shows the author's profound ideological and cultural accumulation and excellent insight.

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