College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 27: One Branch, One Leaf, One World (1)
(2005 Zhejiang volume)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

Tang poetry said: "One leaf falling knows the autumn of the world." Song poetry said: "The spring is full of gardens, and a branch of red apricot comes out of the wall."

When a leaf falls, you can know autumn, and when a branch blooms, you can see spring.Ordinary and subtle things are often the epitome of the great world, and the infinite is often stored in the limited.

Please write an article with the topic "One branch, one leaf, one world" with your own title.

[Notice]

①What you write must be within the scope of the topic. ②Determine your own conception and choose your own angle. ③Except for poetry, there is no limit to the style of writing. ④No less than 800 words. ⑤No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
This is a philosophical topic.Compared with the composition of the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province in 2004, the composition test questions of the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province in 2005 also appear rational and calm. The materials for the composition in 2005 were famous lines from Tang poetry and Song poetry, the topic was "one branch, one leaf, one world" full of seven-character quatrains, and the requirement was a very standardized "Three-Self Principle".But the introduction of ancient poems with traditional humanistic colors is refreshing.Like the 2004 topic "Humanistic Quality and Development", the 2005 topic is still relational, reflecting the relationship between "one branch and one leaf" and "one world". "A falling leaf" and "a branch of apricot" are partial and limited, while "Autumn in the world" and "Spring in the garden" are holistic and infinite.The overall and infinite situation can be deduced from the partial and limited knowledge, just as the idiom says "one glimpse can see the whole leopard".To see the small things, to see the whole picture of the things hidden behind from small phenomena and small things, this requires us to think more about life and pursue the spirit of pursuit to the end.In terms of style, this topic is more suitable for writing from the perspective of argumentative and lyrical prose.

Writing Ideas Tips
The key to conceiving this topic is to delineate the scope of writing and determine which aspect of life to write about.Of course, candidates can understand from Zheng Banqiao's "a branch and a leaf are always concerned" to "the yamen's house is lying down and listening to Xiaoxiaozhu, which is suspected to be the voice of the people's suffering". From the perspective of a harmonious society, it will be very good.You can also start with the Buddhist idea of ​​"one flower, one world, one grain of sand, one bodhi". Paying attention to the most subtle feeling in the heart is to pay attention to the world, and the effect will be very good.

Full score sample essay
A clear river

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Yijiang Qingliu is a world, it flows, it sings, and it contains the secrets of the world.

--Inscription

When I was young, my mother took me by the hand and took me to the fields.Next to the field is a stream.Every time I sat by the creek, my mother weeded in the field. "Mom, there is a little fish here, I want, I want a little fish!" "Son, be good, the little fish is just like you, you have to be in your mother's arms to be free. Water is like a mother. Without water, there will be no mother." , without a mother, can the baby do it?" "Well, I want a mother." The child coquettishly threw himself into his mother's arms.

Often the baby will ask the mother: "Where is the little fish going?"

Growing up, whenever I see rivers and streams, I will think of the conversations I had when I was a child.That is the source of beauty like a spring in my heart.Yijiang Qingliu will always be engraved in my heart.

There is a clear river, the water is crystal clear, and the blue sky and white clouds are reflected in it.It flows peacefully and orderly, fish jump up mischievously from time to time, birds sing from time to time, and flute sounds resound through the sky from time to time.Here is the epitome of the world, where there is a harmonious and magnificent scenery, where there is a peaceful and quiet atmosphere.

But tranquility and stability are not the highest state of Qingliu.The process of life is also performed here, and there is also vigorous vitality.There is such a dialogue: the fish said, you do not know I am crying, because I am in the water; the water said, I can feel your tears, because you are in my heart.

Such a beautiful dialogue, I only understand the analogy my mother used when I was a child, water is the mother of fish.Yes, water and fish are like mother and child.Once there are children and mothers in Yijiang Qingliu, there will be a whole world.

Many times, I always wonder why fish should live with water.Now I finally understand.Because just like the world, a clear river can only be active and full of vitality if it has life.

My mother said that the fish went to a place far and far away with my mother. Now I think, they should go to the ocean, to receive the nourishment of the ocean, and to meet the new challenges of the ocean, so that the fish can grow up and the clear current can integrate into the vast ocean. Sky.

Yes, every time I think about leaving home and going to a distant place, there are always many sadness and melancholy flowing in my heart, now I understand.Everything is like a clear stream, like a fish.

A clean river, a world, so all harmonious melodies will stay in the world forever...

score review
The title of this article not only has a beautiful artistic conception, but also points out the center.Candidates started with a short childhood story, and used the method of actual writing to transform the topic "one branch and one leaf" into "one river and clear stream", and told us their own thoughts on growth.The language of the article is vivid, the structure is rigorous, and the context is clear, but the small stories have great truth.

Branch · Leaf · World
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

When a leaf falls, you know autumn, when a leaf blooms, you can see spring.yes!Too many ordinary and subtle things are often the epitome of the universe, and the infinite is often collected in the limited.This is the insight of a wise man. Although "branches and leaves" cannot replace the whole world, the world reflects its own "light" from "branches and leaves" and shoots at all living beings.

The key is whether you can use your wise eyes to penetrate the vast world hidden among the "branches and leaves", and discover the infinite world hidden among the subtleties!

Tang poetry said: "One leaf falling knows the world's autumn." At this time, fallen leaves may have found a synonym for autumn.The rustling autumn wind blows the dead leaves from the trees, and when the dead leaves fall to the ground, it conveys the message of autumn to people.People who understand natural language can naturally feel the hints that nature gives us from it.Fallen leaves are indeed insignificant things to the big world, but we can find infinite information and infinite collections from them.There is even a saying: "The garden is full of spring and cannot be closed, a branch of red apricot comes out of the wall." At this moment, the red apricot seems to be the messenger of spring again, conveying the call of spring to see if those who are interested can receive it.

There is also an ancient saying: "One glimpse can see the whole leopard." This seems to have the same effect as "a leaf falls and the world is autumn"!Not just branches and leaves, not just the world, if we regard "Leopard" as the overall whole of things and "Yiban" as a small detail, then we have to say that the details may determine the overall situation in some aspects.This is not unreasonable. A big event may always be determined by a small detail, so the details often determine the success of a big event. We can also see the big from the details, and see the broad from the details. The so-called "see the whole leopard at a glance".

This is also the extension of branches and leaves and the world!
We have heard the story of "a horseshoe nailed and lost a horse"; we have also remembered the ancients' warning "a dike of a thousand miles is destroyed by an ant's nest". These are the infinite hidden in the finite, and we can fully If you can see the finite clearly, you can use a wider horizon to discover the epitome of infinity.

Branches and leaves and the world may give us more inspiration.

Newton's discovery of the law of universal gravitation is the result of his full digging of "branches and leaves".

He discovered the magic and vast law of gravitation in a falling apple.We have to say that Newton was a scientific giant who was good at discovering "the world in the branches and leaves".

A falling apple is indeed small enough, it depends on whether we can "see through" it.

A leaf, an apricot blossom, an apple, maybe they are all enough to support a vast world!

score review
This is a typical excellent work of argumentative essay.Candidates focus on the enlightenment brought by the relationship between branches and leaves and the world, through repeated demonstrations, progressively, to fully demonstrate their own views.The language of the article is concise and the thinking is clear. It is a rare masterpiece of argumentation.

See Weizhi
(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

Tang poetry said: When a leaf falls, the world is autumn.

Song Shiyun: The garden is full of spring and cannot be closed.A red apricot came out of the wall.

The ancients said: Take a peek and see the whole leopard.If you see the subtleties, you can know the work.One leaf, one world.A flower, and see the spring.Don't take small things lightly.In the limited, there is the infinite.

Look at the world, that's it.Dongting Lake, eight hundred miles.The Xiangjiang River is strong and the Yueyang is broad.Surround the lake and build farmland.Gather sand towers, gather armpit fur.The day is cut, and the month is busy.Looking at the present, it will cause great harm.The water of the Yangtze River is overflowing.Destroying river embankments, flooding towns, and people crying bitterly, unable to explain.Return the cultivated land to Dongting.Widely plant trees and build more dams.Although the matter is small, it means a lot.

The United States, called democracy, sends troops today and imposes sanctions tomorrow.Looking at the Middle East, the current situation is chaotic.Only when the war is leveled, terror begins.All the people, there is no stability.Who wants this kind of democracy?Look at a corner and understand the overall situation.The heart of a wolf is known to passers-by.

The same is true of people's determination.Zhao Lie urged: Although the good is small, it must be done; the evil is small, but it must not be done.It is a pity that the empress did not listen.The Kingdom of Shu fell, and the Han Dynasty declined.People laugh at it and don't want to return.Good habits should be cultivated bit by bit; bad habits should not be developed.Careful about the details.Don't study, Liu Adou.

Disciple rules, sages' instructions: When you go out, you will be fraternal, and when you enter, you will be filial.Love everyone, but be kind.Govern the world, level the family and the country.Cultivate your body first, then organize your family.Even if it is a house, it should be swept.

Premier Zhou, the man's watch.Clothes and crowns are clean, rites and rites week, close to the common people.Seeing foreign guests is called good.New China, dignified.Treat the people as if they were their own, loved by others, and passed on a good name.

I am a mortal, not a prime minister.Little things, still cautious.Middle school students must be polite, honest, united, and friendly.No beard and long hair.Don't dress up, wear different clothes.See teacher, say hello.Be respectful and filial to your parents.

One leaf, one world.Take a peek and see the whole leopard.When people are polite, they are kind; when people are rude, they do not know what is good.A good impression is very important.Every strand should be cherished.A grain of rice, don't throw it away lightly.To do things, you must be serious and careful.Although a house must be swept, even though a dress must be tidy.

score review
The article is written in the form of "San Zi Jing", which is novel in form and ingenious in conception.It is a major feature of this article that the questions are accurate and the words are earnest.The article is not constrained by the form of the "Three Character Classic", and has reached a certain depth in content, which is very worthy of recognition.

Comprehension, starting from the little bit

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

I can't see the sea, but I can feel its presence in a drop of water.

In a few months, I will be 19 years old. During these 19 years of cloudy, sunny, rainy and snowy years, life seems very far away.

The continuous and endless existence, we can't see it clearly, but the branches protruding from the trunk of life are blooming with the flowers of sentiment.

We are passers-by in life, and the distant sky cannot leave traces of flying over, and what we take away is just a little memory.When we stay at the moment when the pointers of life coincide, these tiny memories will bring us back to the moment of birth.

The mist of the setting sun embraces nostalgia. When we carry the bundle of firewood called memory and disappear behind the door called time, what our fingertips touch is the subtle and specific existence of the world.

(End of this chapter)