College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 34 Running experience (2)
Many times, we only think about ourselves.In the process of running, they don't care about others at all. In fact, many people are just unintentional. Facing the cruel competition for survival, everyone has no reason to choose a way: that is to run forward, keep running, and put all People are all left behind.

In fact, we can run in another way, with happiness, gratitude, and a pure heart. Maybe we will run to "heaven" and see the color of heaven.

What is the color of heaven, what do you see and what do you not see, I don't know, maybe start again, run on the road of life, you will inadvertently see the color of heaven.

score review
This article adopts the combination of narration and reasoning, and the method of contrasting the front and the back, highlighting the visual theme of "don't forget to appreciate the scenery along the way while running".The expression of the article is concise and powerful, and the use of rhetorical techniques such as metaphor, comparison, and parallelism is just right.

galloping ocean

(a candidate from Hunan Province)

Water comes from afar, begins as a trickle, grows and enriches itself in a never-ending flow.Regardless of the snow in the mountains or the clear springs in the ground, they are closely united by the same survival philosophy, and the rustling is the simple promise they will never give up.

The water quickened the pace of progress, rushing left and right in the dense forest, rampaging, and continued the running track recklessly.In the heart of water, there is only the idea of ​​galloping towards the ideal. It doesn't care about the face of the sky, the expression of the mountain, or even the friendly greetings from the branches.The self-confessed glamorous petals quietly fall into the chest of the water, but they can't wrap around the direction of the water, and instead fall into unprecedented confusion.The sunlight pierces the spine of the water sharply and strongly, but the water is so clear that there is no gap to hit. It doesn't care about the scorching heat in this field at all. It despises the clichés of Maemi's irresistible loneliness and runs unrepentantly until it reaches the edge of the cliff.

The empty valley bottom is an unknown destiny, even the wind never reveals the slightest secret, will the water stop?Just here looking up at the freedom of the white clouds, listening to the carelessness of the wind blowing through the branches?No!Water will not stop running towards the goal, it refuses to be imprisoned on the cliff.The water used to flow unrestrainedly because the heart was far away, and the wind and rain used to be full of love.The ideal of water is the ocean. It once wanted to be a small wave in the sea, raising its beauty quietly. It also wanted to be a turbulent wave in the vast ocean. Stepping over the cliff, leaping towards the depths of destiny with the most beautiful posture, the water is fragmented in a dazzling moment, and the splashing water droplets are like pairs of vivid eyes, revealing the inspiration of wisdom and the spark of life, the soul of water is shining brightly be sublimated.

The fluttering water gathers again and embarks on a long journey again. At the bottom of the valley, there is only the fragrance of the scattered water, which permeates the entire hill.

Water runs forward endlessly, its heart is calm but it also makes noises, it keeps growing while running, and the white waves rush to the ocean, even if it evaporates one day and returns to the original point, it will still strive for its ideal again Running, that is not the reincarnation of fate, it is a rebirth!
The water is still running forward, its ideals will never run aground or hit the rocks, just like the fluttering of flags, I seem to see the essence of youth, which lies in running with ideals, being confident and daring to show strength and full will.

score review
The writing style of the article is elegant and free, the sentences are well-proportioned, and the emotions are rich. The examinee described the temperament of water in a very witty and witty way, expressing his own thoughts and thoughts and his own unique viewpoints very skillfully, giving people enlightenment and deep thinking.

Run, the beauty of the repeated process
(a candidate from Hunan Province)

Perhaps from the day when humans switched to standing on two feet, the meaning of the word "run" has already existed in their brains.Primitive humans ran for food and for survival.This is an instinctive need.

With the development of human beings, running has also developed to this day, so it has become more abundant: some people run for fame and fortune, running around all day long, until the day he ends.However, the results of his "running" did not disappear with him. In the end, all he got was the two-meter-square soil; some people ran for power, struggling to walk among various forces, but running did not Bring any health to him, but the heart disease and corruption; when it comes to health, some people also run for health, but no matter how hard they try, the loss of health is still an irreversible theorem.

Those who use running as a tool to achieve a certain purpose have led "running", a sport that was born together with human beings, into the abyss of private thoughts.In my opinion, there is only one purpose of running, that is to "run", to enjoy the process of running, and the relaxation, comfort, tranquility and happiness it brings to people.Running is a dialogue between the body and the mind. When experiencing the speed and the breeze passing by, listen to your heartbeat.All the noisy surroundings were thrown away in an instant, and all that was left was silence.The sound of breathing around the mouth is nothing but the overflow of inner peace from the corner of the mouth.The reciprocation of jumping up and landing is like a cycle of emotions, and the notes between the curtains rise and fall, dancing on the quiet score, playing their own rhapsody.

You can see: the parents and children flying kites on the grass, they are running; the lovers chasing each other under the shade of the trees, they are running; the elderly couple holding hands in the park, they are running; The child who couldn't walk properly was also running towards the parents squatting on the other side of the aisle.They are all people who know how to run; they are all people who know how to enjoy running.Therefore, they are happy, so they are truly "healthy".

Running is something that brings people happiness. What we want is not the end, and every end is just the beginning of the next start.What we want is the process, what we want to experience is speed, and the joy of going back and forth between rising and falling.The road you run is the road of taste; the road you run is the road of worry-free; the road you run is the road of happiness.

score review
This is an argumentative essay.Candidates set five "dots" in just five paragraphs - five different "runs": running for food, for survival, running for fame and fortune, running for power, running for enjoying relaxation, comfort, and tranquility, Running to enjoy family affection and running for the sake of running is a kind of happiness and joy.Finally, a set of parallel sentences is used to vividly describe various beautiful scenes of "running", sublimating the theme.

easy start
(a candidate from Hunan Province)

You can't fly with heavy money hanging on your wings.

--Inscription

Thoreau ran in the free country by the tranquil Walden Pond exclusive to Thoreau; in the vast and boundless world of science, the Curies and his wife galloped hand in hand with no distractions... Most people who pursue physical and mental relaxation Can pick up the fruits of victory faster.Facing the complicated temptations around us, we, who have just finished our slow-walking teenage years, should also easily promote our own leap while waiting for a new starting point in life.

People walk in the secular world, quietly waiting for the moment of adulthood to run at full speed in the slowly passing time.But after a long wait, we found that all kinds of desires and worldly concepts stuck to us like plasticine, accumulating heavier and heavier, and finally swelled infinitely, binding our legs and slowing down our pace.We can't hit the road lightly, and we can't run at full speed.They even cover our eyes and our pure heart, making our steps messy, spinning in the world of feasting and feasting...

When we are sober, we should ruthlessly grab these sticky guys, shake off the burdens on our bodies, and start running happily with a relaxed and pure heart.It turns out that abandoning the secular desires can make our eyes more focused and let us go straight to success. The desire for success ahead is not the quick success and instant benefit that the secular preaches, but a targeted goal; it turns out that abandoning the secular concepts can What makes one's footsteps more brisk, the kind of ease and comfort in running is not the clamoring drifting and self-exile in the world, but the wit of trying to get... Get rid of the world and start running easily, you will get infinite acceleration, and you will be on the starting line Rise to the blue sky faster and enjoy a more lofty and magnificent view!
Beethoven threw away the hustle and bustle of the world, and jumped to his heart's content in the kingdom of music; the Curies abandoned the turmoil of fame and fortune, and took further steps in the world of science; Picking chrysanthemums leisurely in the middle of the day...they wandered easily in life, sniffing the fragrance of the world.But Belikov was bound by the secular world, and Grandet was dragged to the side of death by money. They didn't run with all their strength and easily, and were finally involved in the turbid current of the world...

On the road of life, after learning to walk, you should learn to run easily.Let go of your desires, let go of the secular world, and go on the road with a happy heart. Success will smile at you at the end...

score review
This article is closely related to the topic and has a good idea.From a structural point of view, candidates first used poetic language to bring out the ease and joy of two celebrities running, and then unfolded it from both positive and negative aspects, using image metaphors to reveal the consequences of blind running.Typical use cases and rich examples are a major feature of the article.

run life
(a candidate from Hunan Province)

Life is a long journey.

Sometimes we just sit quietly and watch the sunset in the countryside; sometimes we walk slowly and enjoy the scenery.And when the distant horizon—the eternal longing in our hearts—calls us, then it's time for us to run.Run for life and experience the tastes of life together.

Running life, we experience a kind of hardship.

Real long-distance running requires good physical condition, while long-distance running in life requires the tenacity and unyielding mind.After all, the runway of life will not be a flower path covered with roses, but a sandy path full of difficulties and obstacles.We have to endure pain in the soles of the feet, difficulty in breathing, disturbances from the outside world, and the faint thought of giving up in our hearts.Too much hardship has caused countless people to lose their desire and direction, and life has become a comfortable walk.And those tenacious and unyielding souls continue to run on the journey of life.

Running life, we experience a kind of carefree.

When the distant horizon finally succumbs to your unremitting steps, when the distant shore finally steps under your feet, what we experience is the most thorough satisfaction from the depths of our hearts.Don't talk too much, don't care about the greatness or ordinaryness of the other side, just enjoy quietly, this is the only running life that belongs to you.And even if we can't reach our ideal state in the end, don't worry, there will be someone who will go to the distance along the road we have traveled.

When we have experienced this long running life, no matter how hard, fun and satisfying it has become the best memory in our hearts.And running is the most beautiful theme in life.

Tighten your shoelaces, don't hesitate, let's run together and experience this colorful life!
After experiencing the seemingly endless hardships at the beginning, we survived, the body has adapted to the feeling of running, and the mind no longer has intense confusion - the distant destination is approaching little by little, and people also have a kind of pleasure that belongs to running , This is the pleasure of experiencing the process of life.We no longer care about the disturbances of the outside world, we only focus on our own progress and growth every moment, and the light wind has become our best partner.Think about those great runners throughout the ages: Sima Qian, Li Bai, Van Gogh, Nietzsche... Everything outside can no longer restrain their footsteps. They are immersed in the wonderful experience in their hearts and draw a beautiful track in the journey of life .

Running life, we experience a kind of satisfaction.

score review
The author can associate "running figure" with "running life", and he has firmly grasped the topic and grasped the gist when writing.So, what are the similarities between life and running?After careful comparison, the author found the arguments of "running life, we experience a kind of hardship" and "running life, we experience a kind of pleasure", and finally used the experiences of many celebrities to prove that "running life, we experience a kind of satisfaction" "The point of view is a matter of course.

(End of this chapter)