College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 41 Happiness and our way of thinking (1)
(2004 National Volume 3)

composition test questions
(Guangxi, Hainan, Tibet, Shaanxi, Inner Mongolia and other regions)
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

A certain website "4220 chat room" has such a conversation.

A: Let me tell you a story.An old lady had two daughters. The eldest daughter married the owner of a washing and dyeing shop, and the younger daughter married the owner of an umbrella shop.The old lady worries about her daughter every day: on rainy days, she is worried that the clothes in the laundry shop will not dry; on sunny days, she is afraid that the umbrellas in the umbrella shop will not be sold.Later, a wise man enlightened her: "The old lady is very lucky. On rainy days, the younger daughter's business is booming; on sunny days, the eldest daughter has a lot of customers. What day are you not happy!"

B: Wonderful!By changing the angle and way of thinking, we will have new feelings and discoveries.

C: Is this how happiness comes from?

D: Ah Q!

[Notice]

Please use "happiness and our way of thinking" as the topic, make up your own ideas, choose your own style, and draw up your own title, and write an article of no less than 800 words.Written content must be within the scope of the topic.

Question Analysis
The 2004 National Volume 3 is the same as the National Volume 1, and also selects a conversation in the "4220 Chat Room" of a certain website as the composition material.The difference is that the topic of volume 1 is "encountering setbacks and magnifying pain", while the topic of volume 3 is "happiness and our way of thinking", one is "pain" and the other is "happiness and happiness".The material in this topic mainly describes that different people have different views on the advice given to the old lady by "smart people". Some people think that in the face of objective problems, changing the way of thinking can make themselves happy, while The way of thinking to obtain happiness belongs to Ah Q-style self-deception.This kind of debate has triggered the candidates' thinking and provided help for the candidates to argue.

Writing Ideas Tips
The materials provided by this composition question are quite familiar to candidates, and they can use their rich imagination to select materials based on them. The main thing is to grasp whether thinking and happiness are related, and how related it is. "Mode of thinking" affects the feeling of "happiness". Whether it is happiness or pain depends on the angle of our thinking; different ways of thinking determine people's different views on things, luck and misfortune come from the heart; there is no absolute happiness in the world Happiness, change the way of thinking, life will be full of happiness and joy.

Full score sample essay
left hand right hand
(Candidate No. [-] from Hainan)

A reed will not be happy;

When she is happy, it is because she starts to think.

--Inscription

I ask you: "A drop of water, is it happy?"

If you know that Dishui worked hard to expand his chest and turned into a sea, did a few push-ups and then surged up—you think, it is happy.But if you think that a drop of water lies dormant long in the roaring waves, you think it is unhappy.

Schopenhauer said: "Things themselves are unchanged, what makes them change is people's views on things."

When the young and strong boy was imprisoned by the enemy into a death row that never sees the light of day, the enemy did not kill him, and the only punishment was to drown him in the darkness.Within a month, the boy died of no illness.When you die, your eyes are wide open, there is no light, and there is only unfathomable emptiness and desolation.It is a bit cruel for us to discuss whether teenagers are happy or not, but this tells us: Without thoughts, happiness is a delusion.

Thought is the source of happiness, but not all wells spring up happiness - that's the difference in the way of thinking.

I still remember the man who was watching the sky and worrying about the sky, and I still remember those Greek sages who got into the barrel to bask in the sun.They are thinking all the time, but they are not happy all the time.Today, when we talk about "unfounded worry" and "cynicism", we should be alarmed by a stick that hits our heads: if our thinking takes a wrong turn, we will enter the happy graveyard.

Heidegger once said an elegant saying: "Man should dwell poetically."

Because of this poetry, survival becomes life.

When the words I wrote jumped out one by one, I began to look at happiness.Today we live in sunny and colorful youth during the day. No matter who they are, they think we are happy and happy. In fact, we ask ourselves, and it is true. However, we often hear that in the dead of night, many young souls walk alone in the world. In addition to being happy and happy, it seems that it is not happy or happy.

Our minds are like fledglings hovering at a crossroads.In every direction there are possible footprints for us.We are constantly picking up or throwing away happiness in a colorful way of thinking.

Some say we are the "beat generation".I disagree.Because we have thoughts and know how to embark on different thinking journeys to find happiness.

Some people say that we are the new human beings of "Ah Q".I disagree.Because our new ideas are not as presumptuous and inappropriate as "Ah Q".

Do you think we think weird?
Do you think we are happy, not happy?
We are happy; our happiness is the smart left hand.

We think; our way of thinking is the right hand of reason.

When the left hand and the right hand meet and blend properly, it is poetic.

score review
Poetry is the form of this article, and philosophy is the god of this article. I dare not say that the two can be combined, but I have to say that the prototype has already appeared, so it can be said that the potential of the candidate is huge.In addition, the rigorous speculative nature of candidates is also a major feature of this article.

wonderful words
Thought is the source of happiness, but not all wells spring up happiness - that's the difference in the way of thinking.

Take a wrong turn in thinking, and you're in a happy graveyard.

We are constantly picking up or throwing away happiness in a colorful way of thinking.

writers' stories
(Candidate No. [-] from Hainan)

Cold spring nights or bleak winter mornings, silent rainy nights or noisy streets, peacefully alone or together, I often think of them inadvertently——I really feel their existence so clearly.

Tao Yuanming who "picked chrysanthemums under the eastern fence", Li Bai who "broke his eyebrows and bowed his waist to serve the powerful", Lu Fangweng who "would lie in a lonely village without self-sorrow", Tan Sitong who "smiled to the sky from the side of the knife"...and the earth On the other side, Jack London who wrote "The Call of the Wild", Hemingway who wrote "The Old Man and the Sea", Byron and Pushkin under the "Banner of Freedom"... Really, I feel their thoughts so clearly The way and the joy and happiness they have, I can even see that they follow their own thinking to different fates.

However, in my heart, the most deeply carved is that wandering female writer, her name is Sanmao.Perhaps, there are many Chinese who have been to the Sahara Desert. She is not the first, and she will never be the last, but she is definitely the most special one.

No one can tell me, where is the beauty of the Sahara desert, is the hot sand dunes under the scorching sun beautiful?Is the endless lonely wilderness beautiful in the silent night?Are dark-skinned Aboriginal people who speak a language we don't understand considered beautiful?For a long time, no one has been able to tell me the answers to many, many questions.

Later!I approached Sanmao, because I was amazed by her courage to survive, and I was amazed that she could live happily and happily in that barren land, and even lingered!In this way, I followed her footsteps to that strange land.

oh!I saw……

Under the scorching sun, among the hot sand dunes, cactus stands proudly, showing me the unyielding beauty of life.

On the top of the endless wilderness in the silent night, there is an endless starry sky. In the starry night, I know what happiness is, the kind of great happiness that feels the nature.

The dark-skinned, enthusiastic and open aborigines will dance happily around the fire when the night comes.In the singing of foreign countries, I appreciate a kind of happiness that I have never experienced before!
Following Sanmao's footsteps, I realized a truth: if we change our way of thinking, we will have a kind of joy and happiness that we have never had before.

Sanmao may not know that in the writing of a writer called "Merry Tough Guy" on the other side of the Pacific Ocean, there is such an old man named Santiago, who went through all kinds of hardships during the fishing process and finally caught a big fish. Besieged by sharks while returning home, he fought alone until the big fish was eaten up.

When the story of "The Old Man and the Sea" spread all over the world, some people eulogized the greatness of the old man, some praised the old man's unyielding, and some praised the old man's strength.But I think it is precisely because he felt happiness and joy in the struggle—a kind of happiness and joy that others cannot understand in the struggle that reflects that he has not aged, that he will have the greatness, unyielding, and strength later.

Life is actually very simple. Don’t think that every day is so ordinary and similar. If you change your thinking, we will realize the happiness and joy of life!

Life itself is not peaceful, there are frustrated rains, depressed clouds, sad clouds, and annoying winds.However, if we change our way of thinking, we will feel the happiness and joy of life, and we will face tomorrow with full confidence in happiness and joy, and the spring will bloom!

score review
This article uses the colorful stories of the writers to vividly interpret the rich connotation of happiness.At the end of the article, the theme is revealed with the finishing touch—the way of thinking determines happiness or not, and the content fits the topic.The article material is rich and typical, combining narration and discussion, detailed and subtle, beautiful language, and brilliant writing, which demonstrates the candidate's good literary quality and thinking quality.

Zhaojunxing

(A Candidate from Shaanxi)

Sitting blankly in the car, looking out the window at the poplar trees receding slowly, I don't know what the grassland in the distance is like at this time.Behind me is the ancient road under the setting sun. Miyagi at the other end of the ancient road is getting farther and farther away from me. Can I still come back?
The sound of hooves makes my heart wander.Looking back, I found for the first time that the palace under the setting sun was so beautiful, but now, I no longer belong to that palace, and all the joy and happiness there no longer belong to me.The palaces and buildings there are so magnificent, the flowers and trees there are so charming, and the songs and songs there are so melodious... I once rode a flat boat with my sisters in the mirror-like lake of Taiye Pool. Facing the wind and moon on the lake, playing the piano and singing.How happy I was at that time!But now, only the pipa in my arms accompanied me to the wild Mobei, and I would no longer be seen in the happy singing and dancing in Chang'an City!
Tears overflowed from my eyes.

Staring blankly out of the car window, the wormwood on the side of the ancient road kept bending over in the wind. Are they also feeling sorry for me?Two little birds flew from the sky, landed next to my car and flew away, chirping as if talking about something, are they talking to me?
The sound of hooves makes my heart wander.The bird must be comforting me. Looking at the palace in the twilight, I actually found it a little decayed and a little dirty.I clearly remember that in the palace, I spent every night alone on the cold jade pillow, and spent every day in jealousy and jealousy. Their greed and exploitation, and the lonely tears of their sisters.I had hoped that the emperor would favor me, but how could I bow down to Mao Yanshou!

Maybe on the vast and boundless grassland, I can no longer be accompanied by green lights, no longer be with loneliness, no longer have to face hypocrisy, and no longer have to endure sadness alone.There, the vast world can let me gallop, and the simple folk customs can give me comfort.I have a generous Shanyu husband and lovely children. Isn’t family happiness the greatest happiness?In the distance, there seems to be a rough pastoral song of the shepherd.

I smiled, joy welling up from the bottom of my heart.

The sunset glow in the sky is brilliant, and Chang'an City has long since disappeared.The wind brushes my cheeks, the wind is blowing from the north, it brings the calling of the grassland to me.I smiled, it was a happy smile, a happy smile, because I understand that sadness can become happiness.Suffering can also be turned into happiness-it all depends on how you think!
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