College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 5 Asking (1)
(Sichuan volume in 2006)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

In life, some people like to ask questions, some people don't; some people advocate asking when in doubt, and some people think twice before asking.Ask the sky and the earth, ask about the past and the present, "asking" is everywhere in our lives.

Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "Ask".Make up your own ideas, choose your own style, and draw up your own title.The content written must be within the scope of the topic and plagiarism is not allowed.

Question Analysis
2006 was the first independent college entrance examination proposition in Sichuan Province after the reform and opening up, and the topic composition "Question" was a good question with a unique approach and deep knowledge in the ordinary.It belongs to the traditional "inspired" topic composition topic, which not only inherits and innovates, but also appears broad and profound. It is still difficult to get a high score.First of all, judging from the introduction, there are two sentences in the introduction. The first sentence generally indicates the various situations of "asking" in life: it is good to ask or not to ask, if you have doubts, ask and think twice; the second sentence It further leads the meaning of the text to the depth, not only specifying the category of "asking", but also emphasizing the necessity and inevitability of "asking".From ancient times to the present, the development of civilization, the change of society, etc., all start from "asking", send to "asking", and finally "to" asking... In short, the scope of this topic is wide, whether it is the way of writing "asking", " The object of "asking" (for example, people who are diligent and inquisitive, the deeds of famous people in ancient and modern times, etc.), or the content of "asking" (for example, problems encountered in daily study, problems encountered in life, esoteric astronomical and geographical questions, etc.) etc.); whether it is discussing the nature, purpose, meaning, or function of "asking", it is all relevant.When writing, candidates need to grasp the lead, dig deeper, choose one angle or multiple angles, and express their views according to the requirements of the test questions.

Writing Ideas Tips
There are two ways of writing.3000. Keep close to daily study and life, and choose personal experiences to write about. What are the benefits of "Good Ask"? What is the performance of a person who is "good at asking"?What are the commendable qualities?What spirit is worth promoting?How can I become "good at asking"? What's wrong with "don't ask"? "Ask when in doubt" okay?Is it a sign of blindness and recklessness? Is "asking when in doubt" good behavior?And "think twice and ask again" right? What are the benefits of "think twice"?What's the downside?etc.1300. You can stand at the height of human civilization, cast your eyes on the historical sky, and write about the deeds of famous people in China and abroad, both ancient and modern.For example, Confucius was knowledgeable, but he was still "not ashamed to ask" and asked others for advice with an open mind; Edison had more than [-] inventions in his life, and more than [-] patents were applied for. And get inspiration.The full text can use one-way thinking, or positive thinking, or go one step further, using two-way thinking, multi-directional thinking to write.

Full score sample essay
There is no limit to the sea of ​​learning, asking questions is sailing
(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

There is a way to everything, knowledge is boundless, learning is boundless, and asking questions is sailing.

--Inscription

There is a way to everything, knowledge is boundless, learning is boundless, and asking questions is sailing.I know this truth, is yesterday.Today, I understand better that there are times in the world where you may ask more questions, and other times you may wish to meditate quietly; some things can be asked everywhere, but some things cannot be asked.

Gu Cheng is right, "The night gave me black eyes, but I use them to find light"; Cangjie created characters, telling us that "asking" has to shut the door, that is to say, when facing the vast world and all living beings, you must Learn to think with your eyes and mind, learn the skill of "asking", don't ask blindly when you have doubts, think twice before asking.

"The whole world is turbid and I am alone, and everyone is drunk and I am sober." Standing on the bank of the Miluo River, Qu Yuan, you are struggling to find a way to save the Chu State, you ask the world, but no one listens to you , The jackal is in power and the sky is about to fall.The only thing that can answer is your heart of "nine deaths and no regrets", and the only thing you can do is "the road is long and the road is long, I will search up and down"...

"When will the bright moon come? Ask the blue sky for wine." Su Shi, a politician and poet with great ambitions and full of knowledge.You are so talented that you could have benefited the whole world, but fate relegated you to the remote Huangzhou.You raise your glass to ask the sky, and look at the moon with the wine, but the sky is overcast and the moon is hidden deep in the palace.The only thing that can answer you is your beating heart for the people, only your broad and open-minded mind: why ask about unfair fate;

I "asked" myself, but heard the desolate voice of history; I "asked" myself, and heard the strong voice of modern times...

Facing the dark society, Mao Zedong "independent cold autumn" and "asked the vast land", the land was speechless, and the Xiangshui went north.In the face of failure, Mao Zedong asked the world - where is the way out for China?The Soviets said, "The city surrounds the countryside."After failing again, Mao Zedong was speechless. He asked himself—where is the way out for the revolution?The lessons of countless times of blood finally condensed into a strong voice in his heart: the countryside surrounds the city...

On that winding path, there was an old man walking alone.His eyes were dark and his mood was depressed.Socialism has gone for 30 to [-] years. Why has China's economy been stagnant for a long time and people's lives have been poor for a long time?he asks.The clouds are silent, the grass is luxuriant, and the birds are carefree... His solid footprints are left on the path.Finally, a voice shook the land of China—reform and opening up, socialism with Chinese characteristics!

Now, China's economic rise has amazed the world.However, foreigners say: the best factories are in China, and the most advanced technology is in our hands.Well said and rightly said.It is better to ask yourself than to ask Buddha, immortals and gods; to ask others, it is better to ask yourself!Where to ask for the most advanced technology?To have only rely on yourself, rely on innovation.Cultivating innovative talents is our top priority!
The night gave me black eyes, and I will use them to find the light; God gave me a talking mouth, and I will use it to ask myself, others, and life.

Yes, there is a way to everything, knowledge is boundless, learning is boundless, and asking questions is sailing!Only when there is always wind in our hearts can we swim freely like Zhuangzi; only by asking questions everywhere on the road of life can we gradually drift away!
score review
The essay has a clear theme and a rigorous structure; the examples are typical and informative, exciting and powerful;

Celebrity Quotes
The night gave me black eyes, but I use them to find light. ——Gu Cheng

The whole world is turbid and I am pure alone; everyone is drunk and I am alone awake. ——Qu Yuan's road is long and long, and I will search for it up and down. —— Qu Yuan

When will the bright moon come? Ask the blue sky about the wine. --Su Shi

classic case
The creation of characters by Cangjie, Qu Yuan, Su Shi, the revolutionary road led by Mao Zedong, the reform and opening up led by Deng Xiaoping, etc.
ask life

(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

Rolling water is like the flow of life!Haohao's code is also like the tree of life!Asking about passing water and classics is like asking about life.

--Inscription

Standing on the bank of the big river, watching the rolling water, I asked life: Cheng, can you have the beauty of the bright moon shining on the flowers and the deep pool with slight waves?Can you have the detachment regardless of the adversity, regardless of success or failure?Can you have the open-mindedness to whip a horse and climb high and look far?Defeated, do you have the will to drop water through rocks and flow into the sea?Can you have the arrogance of being poor and strong, and not falling into the blue sky?Can you have the stubbornness of "If you want to benefit the life and death of the country, don't you avoid it because of misfortune and good fortune"?

[-]. The soul of the dead

History is always such a burden, it carries the precipitation of the past and the present, so that the latecomers can learn from the life of continuous reincarnation.

Do you still remember Qu Zi who walked alone by the Miluo River?The tragic and heroic leap in the chaotic world has made many people understand what is meant by "the kindness of my heart, even though I died nine times, I still have no regrets" in the waves of clear waves!It is the figure wandering by the river, the soul tumbling in the waves, persistently seeking the conversion of life in the age of "believe but see doubt, loyalty but be slandered", "the quality is originally clean and the clean is gone", he used The pandan-like body builds a sacred altar, immortalizing life in the nobility of devotion!
The heart is colorless, how can it show such bright red?Human beings have no character, how can they be so majestic?

I still remember the deafening cry in front of the thatched hut, "And there are tens of thousands of mansions, which can shelter the poor and happy people in the world?" How can the lives of "wandering" like "sand gulls" share the warmth of the common people? feelings?Even though the journey of life is always accompanied by "traveling at night" and "lonely boat", whoever regards the years as flowing and flashy, "it's as joyful as it is in a dry place", Du Fu, the "sage of poetry", swelled up with his unyielding spirit The sail of "helping the world".Interpret the essence of life, and let many crawlers rot in their knees!By the West Lake, the courtier made of white iron is a solemn warning to disregard the dignity of life!
Carrying forward the past and ushering in the future, the latecomers are constantly climbing.The wind blows from all directions, and the clothes are fluttering.Standing on the altar of history, ask about the ownership of life.

Thinking about the long distance between heaven and earth, there were ancients before us, and we asked loudly: who will come later?

[-]. Lake of life
Looking at historical classics, we inquired about all the lives in the world, only to be surprised to find that the growth methods of each life are different.Some are like wormwood between the tiles, some are like pine trees on the edge of cliffs, some are like pearls among clamshells, and some are like shooting stars in the sky.Life itself is a continuous process of perfection.Precipitation in inheritance, Nirvana in sublimation, let life shed its glitz and become pure and thick.

Maybe thousands of years of wind and sand have piled up sculptures in the desert; maybe thousands of miles of torrential rivers have washed away the air in the soul.Looking back suddenly, the lake of life is so thick!
[-]. Soul Comes Back

When the ancient "National Wind" blows, when the thousand-year-old Yumen flute plays, we ask the vast universe, thousands of miles away, who is waving the banner of a big man and looking eastward?Iron horses and glaciers, lonely villages lying dead, who sighed quietly at the dying moment?I have passed away in the past, how many days have passed, but the promise of life will not change!
The peaks and mountains are like clusters, and the rivers and mountains are like clusters. Who is waving a giant hand to prop up the ups and downs in the vast world?The scenery of Antarctica, the snow is fluttering, who is expressing the pride of Yanhuang in a foreign land?The sky is insignificant, the universe is vast, who is looking down at the universe?
That is the blood infused by the Yellow River, that is the descendant of Xuanyuan inheritance, that is the Chinese characters of Fangzheng that taught us to stand upright!

Love my love, manifest the spirit of the millennium, we will usher in the prosperous China that is dormant and soaring!

score review
The article is guided by "Ask Life", accompanied by inscriptions and three subtitles: "The Soul of the Dead", "The Lake of Life", and "The Soul Comes Back". By asking Qu Zi, Du Fu, Qin Hui, and history The classics, interrogating the vast universe, and contrasting with each other, demonstrate the greatness and nobility of the lives of heroes.The article is majestic, with the author's sharp eyes, sincere feelings, willingness to speak, and many good sentences, which can't help but make people nod their heads and say yes!
wonderful words
The heart is colorless, how can it show such bright red?Human beings have no character, how can they be so majestic?

Every life grows differently.Some are like wormwood between the tiles, some are like pine trees on the edge of cliffs, some are like pearls among clamshells, and some are like shooting stars in the sky.Life itself is a continuous process of perfection.Precipitation in inheritance, Nirvana in sublimation, let life shed its glitz and become pure and thick.

Celebrity Quotes
Gou Yu's heart is kind, even though he died nine times, he still has no regrets. ——Qu Yuan An De Guang Mansion has tens of thousands of buildings, which shelters the poor and poor people in the world. ——Du Fu

classic case
Qu Yuan throwing a stone into the river, Du Fu, Qin Hui, etc.
Ask, walk with explore

(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

The great world is full of countless unknown domains, forming mysteries one after another in front of human beings.People who naturally explore and decrypt often refuse to admit defeat and mobilize all intelligence, perseverance, and physical strength just to explore and conquer the unknown world.

Ask, always walk with exploration.Facing the grotesque world and all living beings, we ask the world, ourselves and others, in order to explore the truth hidden behind the phenomena.

We ask the world and get inspiration from the all-encompassing nature, society and daily life. In the middle of the 18th century, a doctor named Angbrugger in Vienna treated a dying patient, but he could not find out the crux of the problem.After the patient died, the autopsy found that the chest cavity was filled with pus.He asked himself what he would do if he encountered this situation in the future.In the end, he was inspired by the scene of beating a wine barrel with his knuckles, and explored the relationship between chest diseases and percussion sound changes.

We ask ourselves and others, exploring deeply from our own and others' experiences.Aristotle believed that if you push an object, when you stop pushing it, the object will return to rest. More than 1000 years later, this plausible assertion made Galileo question.He overturned this conclusion with an ideal experiment and laid the foundation of Newton's first law.

Asking is, in a sense, a definite goal.Asking leads to thinking; asking leads to thinking.Asking is an oasis with rich water and grass in the desert, which always inspires the travelers who travel through the desert hungry and thirsty; asking, is the bright North Star that hangs forever in the northern night sky in the dark night, pointing out the direction for the warriors who lost their way in the fearless exploration .

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