College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 6 Asking (2)
After Rutherford confirmed the existence of atomic nuclei from the small scattering experiment of alpha particles, he found that the mass number of the atomic nucleus did not match the number of protons. The earth drove the development of atomic physics.This is unimaginable for a person who only knows how to repeat experiments and is not good at questioning and thinking.If you are like the student of Rutherford, who only knows how to work hard, is not good at questioning, and does not think at all. If you succeed, you don’t know why you succeed, but if you fail, you don’t know why you failed. It seems that you work hard, but in fact you waste a lot of time. This is impossible to achieve.The reason why he got nothing is because he lacked the guidance of asking.

Ask, make human beings go to the high-tech field, make human beings overcome nature and self.Questions are the sunshine and rain created by human beings, and they are the ladder to success.

Copernicus said: "The vocation of man is to be brave in exploration."

Let asking and exploring go hand in hand.Let us ask the sky and the earth, and gain something from everything; let us ask ourselves and others, keep summing up, absorbing, and enriching.Let us ask and search up and down.

score review
The article is written very grandly, galloping vertically and horizontally, opening and closing, like flowing clouds and flowing water.The explanation of the problem is profound and thorough, and the classic examples are organically combined with rational analysis.The examples of Angbrugg and Rutherford cited are both typical and ingenious, proving and strengthening the central point from two angles of asking themselves and asking others respectively.The article is supported by sub-arguments, which not only makes the difficulty easier, but also makes the thinking clear, the logic is rigorous, and the structure is rigorous.

wonderful words
Asking is an oasis with rich water and grass in the desert, which always inspires the travelers who travel through the desert hungry and thirsty; asking, is the bright North Star that hangs forever in the northern night sky in the dark night, pointing out the direction for the warriors who lost their way in the fearless exploration .

classic case
Angbrugg, Aristotle, Galileo, Rutherford, etc.

ask questions to win

(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

With the development of society, we need more knowledge.On TV, knowledge quiz programs are becoming more and more popular, and websites about love questions on the Internet are also becoming more and more prosperous.Because people understand such a truth: love to ask will win.

A person's knowledge is limited, there will always be many unknown areas and blind spots of knowledge.And the knowledge he has accumulated is like a circle, the more he knows, the larger the area of ​​the circle; the more things he doesn't know, the more things he needs to ask.Walking into the rolling river of history, I saw many wise men coming to us.We first lament and then meditate on their stories, and finally we will realize a truth: Only those who ask questions will win.

Xunzi said, ask questions and then be talented.Li Shizhen is a rare medical genius and a master of questions.He went all over the country to collect medicinal materials, and kept asking the local people about medicine-related issues.Wang Anshi is a great writer, statesman, and also a curious person who likes to ask questions.He read the scriptures, but he couldn't understand the meaning of the scriptures, so he read the books of various schools of thought and asked the books. Not only that, he also humbly asked farmers and female workers for advice.Afterwards, he only knew the basics of the scriptures, which enabled him to achieve superhuman achievements in literature.

Zheng Banqiao once said that the word "knowledge" needs to be disassembled to understand, and you must ask questions in learning, and you can learn by asking good questions.Some people have learned but not asked, even if they read thousands of books, they are just a dull man.Reading is easy to ask, if you can't ask once, you might as well ask again; if you can't ask one person, you might as well ask dozens of people.To clear up doubts and reveal the truth, one must ask the world, the past and the present.

However, many people today lack a spirit of inquiring.In school, we need to learn a lot of new knowledge every day, and of course there will be some things we don't understand.However, some students do not ask questions and do not ask to understand it.They always feel that asking questions is a stupid and dishonorable thing, and they always have the mentality of being lazy and lucky that they won't pass the exam if they don't know the exam anyway.What a wrong and sad way of thinking, you know, even the sage Confucius has to ask three times about everything, let alone us?Ask questions to win.If you don't understand and don't ask, then you will never understand, never make progress, and never succeed.If there are no problems, science will not progress; if there are no problems, society will not develop; if there are no problems to solve, human beings will not be smart.Love to ask, and then to find the answer, will have the hope of success.

Love to ask is a positive attitude towards life and the choice of a wise man.Scientists keep asking questions and solving them, so there is scientific progress; philosophers keep asking questions and solving them, so there is social development; medical scientists keep asking questions and solving them, so that human beings can overcome various diseases, Have a healthy body.Love to ask is not a halo on the head of a great man, but the sunshine on you and me.Only Aiwen can possess the wisdom of life and achieve success!
Love to ask will win!
score review
The author's thinking is active and broad-minded, and he selects materials from the nature, significance, function of questioning, the root cause and harm of non-questioning, etc., and makes arguments, which are reasonable, powerful and sensible.The combination of parallel and prose sentences in the article, varying in length, and the use of various rhetorical techniques such as metaphor, parallelism, comparison, and rhetorical questions, not only brighten the text, but also enhance the persuasion and appeal of the article.

Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb
(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

Walking on the rugged road covered with layers of gravel, I am at a loss, holding an umbrella that has been battered by the rain and the sun, I lament; I look up at the long journey I will embark on, and I pray; I am delighted by the singing of countless great men.

Facing the ups and downs of life, looking up at the stalwart of success, and trekking through the jungle full of thorns, I complain about how difficult life is.I want to ask why success does not favor my harbor.

ask a celebrity

I asked the football king who was invincible on the green field and dedicated his life to football. He patted my thin shoulder with his rough and powerful big black hand and told me confidently: "As long as you really give, God will not Treat you badly." I asked the wealthy businessman who was firmly seated on the throne of the richest man in the world.He smiled, pointed to a mountain in front of him and said: "Turn over, and you will see the bright sunshine." I asked about the university that conquered the world with its majestic singing despite its unsatisfactory appearance and figure. music professor.He shook his stubby neck and wrote the words "be brave to fight hard".

I use my heart to appreciate their teachings.

ask the great man

I asked Beethoven.He stretched out his fingers and plucked at the piano.The melodious sound of the piano floated into my ears, and my heart flew to the distance with the music.Suddenly, the rhythm of the piano seemed to go crazy, rushing to the climax, and my heart also rose, straight into the sky.Suddenly, the sound of the piano became low again, and my heart fell into the trough again, into the icy sea water.In the end, the sound of the piano returned to warmth and harmony, which made me feel relaxed and relaxed.I bowed deeply to him and walked away smiling.

ask a hero

I asked Chairman Mao.He lit a cigarette, looked at the slowly rising and spreading smoke ring, and said kindly: "Have you ever seen the water of the Yellow River? Its momentum of swallowing thousands of miles like a tiger flows from the cold Qinghai-Tibet Plateau." , It was formed after countless rocks and waves." I smiled and used my heart to feel the momentum of the Yellow River.He finally took out his pen and wrote "Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb".

I am no longer at a loss, no longer lamenting, these people who have gone through vicissitudes of life have told me everything with their hearts.I no longer complain about the ill-fated fate, and no longer pray for a smooth road ahead. I use my heart to meet the ups and downs of the road ahead.

score review
This article is a masterpiece of argumentative prose examination room.The language of the article is beautiful and smooth, and rhetorical techniques and philosophical sentences are often used.The examinee was dexterous in reviewing questions and had a broad mind. He led the full text with Chairman Mao's poems throughout, not only highlighting the main purpose, but also summarizing the full text.

wonderful words
Walking on the rugged road covered with layers of gravel, I am at a loss; holding an umbrella that has been battered by the rain and the sun, I lament; I look forward to the long journey I will embark on, and I pray; I am delighted by the singing of countless great men.

Facing the ups and downs of life, looking up at the stalwart of success, and trekking through the jungle full of thorns, I complain about how difficult it is.I want to ask why success does not favor my harbor.

classic case
Ball King, Beethoven, Chairman Mao, etc.

ask the soul

(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

What exactly is a human soul?
To put it bluntly, it is a certain spirit of human beings. "The road is long and long, I will search up and down", this is the soul of old master Qu; Make me unhappy", this is Li Bai's soul; "It is enough to freeze to death in my hut alone", this is Du Fu's soul.

In the long river of history, in the smog and rain of the past dynasties, looking up, those dazzling brilliance are still shining, I think, that is the soul!It is these souls that condense into the pride of our nation, take us through 5000 years of civilization, and become our backbone.

If the first god was Prometheus, then Spartacus was the first man.Since he and his brother lay down in a pool of blood while clenching the broken iron chains, people who have been humiliated and hurt no longer believe in tears.I once asked myself, what is supporting his inner strength?So, in the blurred and vicissitudes of the lens, a pair of terrifying eyes, protruding skin appeared, and a cold voice came: "I heard that the two men living in prison, Kang Pa Nella and Gramsci? I am like them, just to guard the Sun City in my dream, and also, for my unyielding soul!"

oh!Sun City, it is it that supports their souls to stand high above the heads of all living beings.All their pride and unyielding are like a backbone in their extremely difficult journey, and their souls are like an endless blood, through the ages, they are dead and alive.

I thought of the little Beethoven, with his whirlwind music, strangling the throat of fate.As a peasant all his life, Millet resisted the exquisite atelier art in Paris. He always had a quiet contempt for the upper class. When people described the scene of the prince naming ceremony to him, he sighed: "Poor little prince!" He just stubbornly painted the peasants under his pen. Under the tranquility laid by the copper yellow, I suddenly understood his soul, which was a kind of spiritual excitement and unspeakable inner throbbing.For Miller, no amount of wealth can stop his pursuit of perfection. He just bravely pursues the nobility of his soul, and he is never willing to give up even a place the size of a wooden shoe on his own land.

I have been asking, what is the human soul?Their voices told me in unison: "Once a person has a certain spirit and fights endlessly for it, his soul will stand in the sky and live forever."

The soul is a pure land planted in the bones by God, which makes the humble life pure, dignified and magnificent.

score review
The first paragraph of the article is a single sentence into a paragraph, and it starts with a question, which is thought-provoking.The second paragraph directly answers, the soul "is a certain spirit of man".Then use parallel sentences to present "a certain spirit" through a set of typical materials.Next, the examinee discussed the soul of the great man in concise language.In the end, it was a matter of course and a conclusion was drawn.The context of the article is clear, the structure is rigorous, and the language is fluent, which can be regarded as a masterpiece in the examination room.

Shaoling Wentian
(Candidate No. [-] in Sichuan)

On the bank of Huanhua River, the rainstorm has just stopped, and the thatched hut is broken by the autumn wind.

(Du Fu: Zhengsheng. Neighbor: Old Chou)

(Amidst the sound of drum music, Du Fu walked up slowly with a bamboo stick in his hand) Nian Bai: The wind and rain shake the night, and the mountains and rivers fall into autumn.What a pity that the house is broken, I only miss He Haiqing.I think of Du Fu, who studied poetry and books when I was young, had the heart to help the country, and the ambition to help the world, but Chang'an is hard to tolerate, and now I have a white head and white hair, living in a poor cottage.Heaven!How unfair you are!
\[Erhuang Guiban\] (singing) There is Du Fu looking at the sky in displeasure.

\[Duozi\] (singing) Ask the emperor how unfair he is.

\[Erhuang Yizi\] (transition) Sighs that Du Fu has made a long-cherished wish since he was a child, to serve the country, protect the territory, and make the country peaceful and the people safe.Therefore, in the cold window, I studied hard, learned from Confucius and Mencius, and learned from Sun Wu. When I waited until the opening of the subject selection in the new year, Du Fu went to the capital to take the examination for an official.I expected to see Longyan in three articles, but they didn't get any official titles. An Shi was in chaos, Chang'an was in chaos, and the Tang Dynasty was also in chaos. Du Fu was wandering and wandering around. (translated)

\[Big Guoban\] (transfer) \[Two yellows and two streams\] Look at the Zhumen door full of wine; look at the deep ravines and valleys filled with bones; look at the red and green flowers of Luo Qilong; look at the Huer Selling girls is a tragedy. (translated)

\[Two yellow three beats\] Oh my god, have you ever opened half of your eyes to see the world.

(Entering the stage to the sound of Neighbor Weng's drum)
Neighbor Weng: (singing) \[Two yellow three beats\] Is getting up and down in the backyard, and I hear someone calling Huang Tian.I came to look carefully before the court, but it turned out to be Mr. Du.Nian Bai: I thought which one, but it turned out to be Mr. Du. The swirling wind just now must have blown the thatch away from the house again. Don’t shout, I’ll just cover it for you.

Du Fu: (reading) Thank you very much!

(Singing) \[Xipi guide board\] My old neighbor Yan knows my lofty aspirations. (translated)

\[Xipi 一字\] How can we keep the country and the country by repairing a house? I asked the sky full of anger. (translated)

\[Xipi Erliu\] Ask the heavens when will you give me a three-foot sword to cut off the width of the Hulu community.Ask the heavens when will I lend me thousands of rooms in Guangsha, so that all poor people in the world will be happy.Regardless of the flying sand and rocks, the violent wind and rain, I will naturally be as safe as a mountain without the wind and rain.Ask the sky, have you ever opened your eyes to help him fulfill his wish early. (translated)

\[Xipi Sanban\] is not in vain, the common people love and praise the blue sky.

Neighbor: (Bai) Mr. Du, the house has been repaired.

Du Fu: Thank you very much. (translated)

\[Xipi Sanban\]Let him turn my thatched hut upside down by the strong wind, and my heart is with the people.

(End)
score review
In the form of a script, candidates integrated Du Fu's life experience and famous poems into one furnace, expressing sympathy for Du Fu's fate and admiration for his spirit.The form of the article is novel, unique and refreshing.At the same time, it also reflects the student's flying literary talents and extraordinary courage.

(End of this chapter)