College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 7 Going and Stopping (1)
(2006 Chongqing Roll)

composition test questions
1. Fragment composition.A glance at the station, please write a descriptive essay, 200 words.

2. Read the text below and write a composition according to the requirements.

"Going" and "stopping" are common phenomena in life, and their connotations are very rich, which can arouse our various feelings, associations and thinking about nature, society, history and life.Please write an article on the topic of "going and stopping".

[Notice]

①What you write must be within the scope of the topic. ②The title is drawn up by yourself. ③ Make up your own mind. ④ Except for poetry, there is no limit to the style of writing. ⑤ Not less than 600 words. ⑥No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
The 2006 Chongqing college entrance examination composition followed the trend of the 2005 Chongqing college entrance examination composition.The total score of the composition is 60 points, the small composition is 10 points, and the major composition is 50 points.The examination of the small composition follows the traditional way of proposition. This time, it mainly examines the students' descriptive ability, so that students can find things worth thinking about in ordinary life.The big composition is a relational topic composition, which focuses on testing students' critical thinking ability, and encourages students to look at problems from multiple angles and think in multiple directions.Two composition questions, one big and one small, can comprehensively test students' comprehensive writing ability, and provide students with more free space to develop.

Writing Ideas Tips
When writing a small composition, candidates should pay attention to several elements in the stem of the question: "station", "glance", and "descriptive article".The place where the scene takes place is the station, and the station is a place where people are greeted and sent away; "Glance" implies that the scene that candidates need to describe should be short and concise, not long-winded, but a specific scene should be highlighted.Composition requires writing in a descriptive way, so it must be specific, vivid, and vivid.You can write about the demeanor, actions, or words of passengers waiting at the station, or about the joy and expectations of migrant workers who just got off the train when they first arrived in the city, or about the ticket sellers at the station, and hawkers yelling everywhere, etc.

As the propositioner said, the connotation of "walking and stopping" in the composition is very rich. "Going" symbolizes progress and pursuit. Go; "stop" means "termination", and it can also mean "thinking" or "pause".The questioner hopes that candidates can start "association and thinking" and express "all kinds of feelings about nature, society, history and life".Candidates can stand at the height of history and express the changes in the history of the country, or the "stop and go" in the development of human civilization, or they can write about small things around them.However, the most important thing is that candidates need to grasp the dialectical relationship between "walking" and "stopping": "walking" is to move forward and approach the goal, "stop" is to advance better and approach the goal faster; "stop" It is to continue "walking" to accumulate strength, and "walking" is the purpose and ending of "stopping".

Full score sample essay
a glimpse of the station

(a candidate from Chongqing)

A car has just arrived.A child waved his hand, shouted "Mom, Mom, I miss you so much", and ran over.Before the car came to a complete stop, a young woman in her 30s couldn't wait to squeeze the door, threw her things on the platform, and hugged her daughter tightly in her arms. Tears slipped down her cheeks, and the little girl snuggled into her mother's arms, smiling sweetly...

A car started slowly and was about to set off.The hands of a pair of lovers are still tightly held together, unwilling to let go, the two just stare at each other like this, thousands of words seem to be conveyed in the tender eyes.The car finally started, and the girl shook off the boy's hand as if she made up her mind, her head still stuck out of the window.She kept waving at the boy, and the boy watched the girl go away, and ran after the car...

Every day, there are countless scenes of reluctance and hurried gatherings and departures at the station.Every car departs or arrives at the station full of stories.The joys and sorrows of life are also wonderfully concentrated here!
score review
This short composition mainly describes two small scenes in the station: "mother and daughter reunited after a long absence" and "lovers parting reluctantly".Through the detailed description of characters and scenes, the examinee wrote these two scenes vividly, which shows his superb language expression ability.The ending paragraph is also just right, which is really the finishing touch.

a glimpse of the station

(a candidate from Chongqing)

This is a very small rural station, with only a simple hut used as a ticket booth, a car, and a row of platforms.But under the sunshine, the small station was full of people, as if they wanted to wake up the mountain.

The car was about to drive away, and the passengers were still carrying goods on the car. There were special products from the mountains and melons and fruits from the field, which were heavily tied to the roof of the car.The driver pressed the horn to urge, and even the conductor had to come out to help carry the goods. There were a few people who came to see them off at the station standing by and waving their arms, wishing the relatives on the train a safe journey.

The car started, full of a car of passengers and heavy goods, full of people's desire for a better life, and drove out of the station.At this time, the sun was already hanging in the sky. Under the warm sunlight, there were a few sparrows jumping on the ground looking for food on the platform. When these sparrows flew away, the small station returned to its usual tranquility.

score review
Through a few simple strokes, this short composition vividly depicts the unique scene of a small rural station: passengers carrying special products in the mountains, drivers honking their horns, relatives seeing off, etc. The scenes are warm and touching, which shows the author's profound language Skills!

a glimpse of the station

When I got out of the bus, I saw a group of motorcycle guys with helmets and disheveled clothes rushing over. They followed closely beside the passengers, all of them were full of enthusiasm, with a simple plastic helmet hanging on their arms, and they kept talking. Ask: "Miss, where are you going? Do you want to take a car?" Even though it is broad daylight, I still feel that riding a motorcycle is not safe. I am afraid of being stalked by them. I dare not look at them. After a certain distance, there were only a few people following me. Suddenly, a middle-aged man asked me again: "Miss, where are you going?"

I looked up at him, he was of medium build, wearing a cheap arhat shirt, his eyes were a little cloudy, but he looked energetic. If you catch them, you will be fined, but they are repeatedly banned.Yes, our society is still rich and poor. These people can't afford to rent taxis, so they have to rely on motorcycles to carry passengers to make ends meet.If they don't come to pull the cart, maybe the young and old in the family will starve... Thinking of this, I smiled and nodded, and took the helmet in his hand.

score review
"Character depiction of lifelike image" is the biggest feature of this article.Through the psychological portrayal of a little girl who is afraid of being deceived but kind-hearted, it describes a real and touching scene.When portraying the characters, the young author also paid attention to the "combination of point and surface" when portraying the characters. He not only portrayed the image of a group of characters-a group of motorcycle guys with helmets and disheveled clothes, but also focused on describing the medium-sized, dressed A middle-aged man in a cheap arhat shirt, which is very rare in the composition of the examination room.

go and stop

(a candidate from Chongqing)

Liu Yuxi said: "Although it is hard work to scouring thousands of drums, you can only get gold when you blow all the sand." But is this really the case in real life?That's not necessarily the case, no matter how tenacious the sails on the giant ship are, no matter how strong they are, there will be times when they will be swept away by strong winds.The same is true in life. If you follow your own path, it only shows that your willpower is relatively strong, but it does not mean that you will definitely succeed.So sometimes it is good to choose to stop.

There was such a scene in "Happy Dictionary": a young man was answering questions on the answering platform, and his pregnant wife was quietly waiting for the good news of his victory in the auditorium.However, when he successfully passed three levels, he chose to give up.This kind of situation is rare, because under Xiaoya's auspices, the contestants always answered in the affirmative to her "do you want to continue?", but that young man firmly said "stop" beyond everyone's expectations.Just when the cynicism of the audience was pouring at him, they were conquered by his answer in front of Xiaoya.Xiaoya asked: "If your child asks you why you don't go forward, how will you answer?" "Some things don't have to reach the end, and you may get more if you stop." "Then if your child only gets 80 points in the test If you are not motivated, how do you educate him?" "I would say: 'If you try your best, then I don't blame you.' Life doesn't have to reach the most glorious peak, the key is to enjoy the process of going. "It was his two answers that won bursts of applause and the deepest admiration from the audience.

If you climb a mountain, stop when you are tired, first enjoy the tranquility of thousands of dust and green waves, lush wild flowers and weeds, feel a different kind of happiness, and then continue to climb, the feeling of "being at the top of the mountain and seeing all the small mountains at a glance" will be great. Spontaneously, the kind of lofty ambitions have also been realized.But if you continue to climb when you are tired, it will be difficult to reach the top of the mountain, and you may even suffocate from exhaustion.

Therefore, sometimes stop and go is also a good strategy.Even if you fall down, it is just a body, as long as you persist in not letting your will fall down.Because the will to fall is the most terrible thing.

It is up to you to go or stop, as long as you regard yourself as a sail, then do it according to your strength!After all, the process is the most important.When you fail, don't forget: the sail will fall down sometimes, but it's just stopping there to take a breath.It's not too late to go when you have enough rest!Maybe go faster.

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