College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 51 Humanistic Accomplishment and Development

(2004 Zhejiang volume)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

Investigations by relevant departments show that the proportion of people in a province whose humanities and social science literacy is up to standard is only 75% of the total population, which is quite disproportionate to the economic development of the province.The survey believes that: humanistic quality reflects a person's basic cultivation and quality, embodies the values ​​​​of the relationship between man and nature, man and society, and man and man; lack of humanistic literacy and loss of humanistic spirit will inevitably restrict individuals and society The sustainable development of the country and the nation.Therefore, while building a material home, we should attach great importance to the construction of a spiritual home.

After reading the above material, what do you think?Please write an article on the topic of "Humanistic Literacy and Development".You can narrate experiences, what you have seen and heard, talk about experiences and feelings, tell stories, make comments, expand your imagination, express your feelings, and so on.

[Notice]

①The written content must be within the scope of the topic. The materials quoted in the test questions can be used by candidates in the article. ②Determine your own ideas, choose your own angle, and draw up your own topic. ③Except for poetry, there is no limit to the style of writing. ④No less than 800 words. ⑤No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
In 2004, the composition proposition of the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province was still in the form of materials plus topics.The topic material comes from the 2003 first investigation report on the public's humanistic quality and needs in Zhejiang Province.The material embodies the thinking of paying attention to life, society and development, and reminds us to attach great importance to the construction of spiritual home while building material home.Aiming at the problems existing in the current society's morality, values, and cultural outlook, the propositioner directs the content of the topic directly to the humanistic spirit.From this trend, we can see the expansion and innovation of this year's college entrance examination essay questions in Zhejiang Province: beyond the "I" and putting me in the society, it is not only about thinking about "I", but also about dissecting "I" directly. In the face of social thinking, we must think about the past and future of the country and the nation, pursue a higher level of thinking, think about the humanistic spirit, and explore the deep cultural connotation.

Writing Ideas Tips
The key to writing such topics is to analyze the internal relationship between things with a dialectical perspective.So, what is the relationship between "humanistic quality" and "development"?There is a passage in the materials: "The lack of humanistic quality and the loss of humanistic spirit will inevitably restrict the sustainable development of individuals and society, the country, and the nation." This passage at least suggests the following points: [-]. It is necessary to improve humanistic quality.[-]. Improving humanistic quality is the basis for realizing development, and development cannot be realized without improving humanistic quality.[-]. This "development" should refer to sustainable development.[-]. Humanistic literacy is related to personal development, and personal development is related to the development of the country and nation.[-]. Since it is the improvement of "literacy", there must be a long process. Its natural enemies are "quick for quick success", "achievement projects", "GDP worship", "qualified football" and so on.After clarifying the above information, candidates can start writing.

Full score sample essay
Find the lost spiritual world

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

When you see a child on the bus who offered to give up his seat to an old man, would you give him an approving look?When you see a girl who is all dressed up spit gum on the floor, do you stop her?when you...

These situations happen to us every day, but we are used to it. Perhaps because of this, we will not praise that child, nor will we stop that girl. We will no longer do what we can, because our My heart is numb.

The Lei Feng spirit that was once all the rage has now disappeared without a trace. In that era of extreme material scarcity, people relied on spiritual resources to enrich their lives.Just like many laws of nature, one ebbs and another ebbs and flows. Nowadays, material life is much more abundant, while people's spiritual resources are gradually fading away.No wonder some people sigh: "Today's society is intriguing, and we are all too tired to live!" But, is this really the case?
I remember my mother told me stories about my father when I was young.She said that once my father saw a man who dropped his schoolbag while riding a bicycle, he picked up the schoolbag and chased him for several stops...At that time, I thought my father was great, and I made up my mind to be like my father good.So, every time I clean up, I take the lead and pick up the dirtiest and most tiring work. Although it is dirty and tiring, I am very happy, because I am doing the same thing as my father.

Looking back now, I often feel that I am stupid and ridiculous, but besides that, I ask myself: Isn’t the innocence there, the kindness in childhood, not touching?Take off the numb coat, appreciate it with a primitive and kind heart, and I will be moved by my "stupidity".Especially now, I will cherish my "stupidity" even more.

"At the beginning of human beings, nature is good", I believe that everyone has a pure and kind heart when they are young, but later they are bound by hypocrisy and numbness. As long as they break free from the shackles of hypocrisy, the original heart will be back.So, while lamenting that "society is sinister", why don't we try our best to reform society?

Fortunately, there are still so many people who treat others with sincerity in our society.Tens of thousands of people attended the funeral of a people's policeman who died heroically in pursuit of gangsters, and people silently saw the hero off.People burst into tears, is it sympathy, admiration, or praise for him?I think it's more regret for my numb past, and I am determined to learn from heroes. It is precisely because of such heroes that people are gradually shedding the shackles of numbness and hypocrisy.

We are delighted to find that today, when material conditions are abundant, people are trying to find the lost humanistic spirit, and people's spiritual world is constantly enriching.I think that material life and spiritual world should not ebb and flow, but should promote each other. Our society is developing like this. Don’t you feel happy to live in such a society where material life is as rich as spiritual world?

score review
The examinee correctly understood the given topic, fully proved the importance of humanistic quality and humanistic spirit for the sustainable development of individuals, society, country, and nation with his own experience and social reality, and called for the return of the spiritual home.Close contact with reality, sincere feelings, and plain language are the outstanding features of this article.

Touched, point a piece of heart fragrance

(Candidate No. [-] from Zhejiang)

There are more and more tall buildings, and the space is getting smaller and smaller.More and more indifference, less and less warmth.However, moving is interpreting the connotation of humanity in its light but touching way.

--Inscription

There were tears, and I still felt full.Opening the window in the morning, watching the sunlight penetrate every leaf, talking to life in a silent and simple way, I was moved.Walking in the evening, watching the sunset, and savoring Li Shangyin's artistic conception of "the sunset is infinitely good, but it's almost dusk", I was moved.

Being moved, ignites a piece of heart fragrance in the spiritual home, haunting people's life.

The times are developing, and while the economy is developing rapidly, has our spiritual home been barren?Are we missing a corner of our soul?
In a hurry, how many people stop to listen to the voice of the soul?Most people have been tempered too rough by life, and gradually become indifferent.

On the streets of Manhattan, New York, there is a lot of traffic.A little girl stayed under a tree and refused to leave.People were surprised to find that she was waiting for the last leaves of autumn to fall.The child is innocent, and she will be moved by an ordinary natural replacement.

A man who lacks emotion is not a real man.

A society that lacks emotion cannot talk about real development.It lacks the nutrients of humanity, and it can only go to barrenness in the end.

How long have we not been moved by those beautiful words.The chicness of Li Bai, the melancholy of Du Fu, the vastness of Tolstoy, the grandeur of Hugo...

How long has it been since we were moved by those noble figures.Qu Yuan, who created a warmer sun for the people in winter; Wen Tianxiang, who sowed "no one in life has died since ancient times, and keeps his loyal heart to reflect history"; Su Wu, who watched the 3000-year-old man alone...

To be moved is not simply to shed tears, not to be superficially sad. To be moved is a kind of humanistic spirit and a spiritual resonance between people.

In today's highly developed material world, where does our spiritual path lead?Learn to be moved.

When each heart is no longer far from another heart, our society will have a few more warmth.When everyone can feel the vibration of others' hearts, our society will become harmonious.

"I came into this world to see the sun." Don't we be moved by Balmont's words?

Light a heart fragrance, our material home and spiritual home will be full of everlasting flowers, and go to the distance.

score review
This is a very thoughtful article, and what is more shining is its language characteristics.The platform established for the topic of "moving" in this article has a fairly high ideological foundation. Setting the common and common emotional response of "moving" under the dual background of building a spiritual home and a material home has extraordinary significance. .

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