College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 55 Buying Mirrors (2)
Yesterday, warships with plaster flags sailed into our harbor, the advertisement of Daliwan was pasted on the scars of the whole China, and the ancient capital of the Six Dynasties was soaked in blood.We rose up to resist and sang "the big knife cuts off the devil's head" to defend our hometown.When we hated them, we found that these beasts had an iron will, unimaginable unity and discipline.So, we, who were scattered in the sand, were shocked, and thought of connecting our arms, building a united front, and forming the Great Wall of flesh and blood to resist it tenaciously.Finally, against the backdrop of this mirror, we found ourselves and finally won.

Today, the door of the country is wide open, and the Chinese nation is striding across the forest of the world.However, we find that we are often one step behind others.Porcelain is a treasure of China, but it cannot go to the world; the Japanese made a small improvement on the teacup, making it more suitable for Caucasians with high noses, so their teacups were sold all over the world.Animation, not the first of the Japanese, has become the second hot spot of its national growth, and the continuous output of Chinese teenagers' banknotes has shocked China.The Japanese are not smarter than us, but their shrewdness and meticulousness often become the chips of victory in the end.Faced with such a mirror, it is inevitable to feel a lot of emotion.

China is not a noun.Japan, however, is an exclamation point, making Yangyang China re-examine itself from this mirror.The ancients said: "With copper as a mirror, you can straighten your clothes; with people as a mirror, you can show gains and losses." Today, we might as well use Japan as a mirror.Some people may despise it, and some may resent it, but in today's fierce competition, we should be grateful for having such a mirror.Yesterday, we paid a high price for this mirror; today, we should prevent it early.

I remembered an old saying of my grandfather: "The wolf is coming, have you prepared your shotgun?" So, let us polish the mirror and welcome tomorrow.

score review
This "topic" composition is extremely well written.The great thing about this article is the overall conception.The article is high-level, high-minded, ideological and persuasive.The title of this article is "Japan in the Mirror", through the "comparison" of "the day before yesterday", "yesterday" and "today" between China and "Japan", it will wake people up and give people a warning!Candidates have clear thinking, careful structure, concise and literary language, and fluent and powerful writing, which is a rare masterpiece in the examination room.

Taking history as a mirror
(a candidate from Hubei)

The millstone of time roared, thunder pierced the sky, and the mirror of history suddenly became clear in the misty smoke and dust, and many tall or trivial figures appeared.Taking history as a mirror, the vast mist of Years Like Water illuminates the personality and reflects the spirit.

The spring breeze is proud of the horseshoe disease, and the two talented new champions each bought a mirror when they were parading around the street.The former was no match for the glory and wealth, high officials and rich salary, and betrayed the country for glory, and a generation of loyal officials surrendered to him.Ruling by Der Spiegel, he was nailed to the pillar of shame in history and was reviled by others.And the latter was a national hero who devoted his allegiance to the precarious Southern Song Dynasty, but was brutally killed. The long sigh in the storm pavilion touched the tears of many patriots; How many people's souls have been penetrated by his spirit.History will always reflect his proud and upright spine, and only when the country is in crisis can he show his true qualities as a hero.The bright mirror is also brighter because of loyalty. "Qingshan is fortunate to bury his loyal bones, and Baitie is innocent to cast a courtier." Taking history as a mirror is enough to highlight the nobility and despicableness of personality.

Li Shimin, a famous monarch of a generation, took history as a mirror and bought a mirror to rule, so that Tang could recuperate after the chaotic war and prosper economically.Reuse Wei Zheng, and finally created the "Government of Zhenguan".Later, using historical facts, he wrote the eternal saying "Using copper as a mirror, you can straighten your clothes; using history as a mirror, you can know the ups and downs; using people as a mirror, you can understand gains and losses".But the same kings, some are addicted to sensuality, spend money, spend a lot of money, get drunk and dream of death, and finally have to give up the great country and sing the song "Infinite country, sometimes easy to see, sometimes difficult" Song, taking history as a mirror, rich and strong The people are the great plan of the country.

For a certain spirit that exists in the world, such as justice and conscience, it is even more necessary to use history as a mirror and make a fair judgment.The Japanese government is trying to falsify the history of aggression against China and obliterate the heinous crimes committed by Japanese militarism in Asian countries.But the mirror of history is transparent: it reflects Hideki Tojo's eyes swollen with desire, and the tragic scene of the Nanjing Massacre.The smoke of World War II is not far away from us, and history cannot be desecrated.I was fortunate to hear the name of Hiroshi Oyama, a 70-year-old Japanese man who relentlessly questioned the history of aggression against China. This kind of justice across countries and nations is enough to move the world.Taking history as a mirror, we firmly believe that justice will last forever.

There is a bright mirror called history. I wish to buy one in this life, and hope that when I attain Bodhi in the next life, my heart will be calm, and I can also add a bit of light to the mirror of history.

Dare to ask all living beings, if you buy history as a mirror, can you not buy it?
score review
After reading this article, I can't help but appreciate the depth of the author's thinking and the strength of the questions.The level of the article is clear and the context is clear.The total-point-total structure, the rich historical materials make the article full and mellow, and the skillful pros and cons contrastive arguments, from ancient times to the present, are eloquent.

classic case
Qin Hui, Yue Fei, Li Shimin, Li Yu, Tojo Hideki, Oyama Hiroshi
Diagonal Idle Grass

(a candidate from Hubei)

[-]. In the spring breeze, buy a bright mirror and dance lightly

At dawn, a ray of sunshine rushed into the window.One turned over and pulled out a string of bird chirps.

Without the need of an ice pick, the snow and cold have been picked up by the spring breeze, and under the warm sunshine, fresh life is being bred petal by petal: buy a bright mirror to see yourself clearly.

Unload the burden of the soul, walk in the spring breeze, hold a mirror in hand, let the light in the mirror expose poverty and desolation, accumulate wisdom and dreams, and make the mood transparent and bright.It is a longing full of songs.

Unable to withstand the temptation of poetry, buy a bright mirror to illuminate colorful colors; pluck the strings, and the sultry melody will fall; the short paper will run obliquely, and compose the movement of life...

Let the spring breeze blow over your cheeks, hold a book in your hand, buy a mirror for yourself, get peace of mind from "a gentleman is safe from poverty, and a man knows his fate" Let the soul sublimate.Unleash the detachment and free and easy, show off the wildness and grandeur in your bones, and always tell yourself: cry when you cry, and show your personality when you laugh.

In the spring breeze, I bought a bright mirror and danced lightly.

[-]. On a moonlit night, buy a mirror and keep it silently
In the misty starry sky, a golden lone boat hangs in the dark blue sky quietly wandering in the clouds, the melting moonlight flows quietly, and the gorgeous silver wraps a trace of coolness, laying out the gentleness of the ground.

Stand silently on the earth, look up at the deep sky, buy a bright mirror from the bright moon, reflect your own figure, listen to the wind blowing from the end of the years, with the vicissitudes of life and ups and downs in your mind, it seems like time flows.Check out the memories like flying beads and jade in detail, and tell your gratitude to life.

Buy a bright mirror, let the rising and falling tidal stream collide with the dam of life, let the ups and downs of angry waves roar out the rhythm of the years.The lone boat of life drifts alone, passing the cold window for several years with waving hands... Suddenly looking back, in those stormy days, I always bought a bright mirror from the beautiful moonlight, showing the figure struggling with the lamp in the middle of the night, and the The deep wrinkles on the teacher's forehead.Buy a mirror and let me read it as a meat when I am hungry, as a fur when I am cold, as a friend when I am alone, and as a golden stone when I am sad.

Facing the moonlight, buy a bright mirror, hold a handful of clear light in your hand, and touch the creamy skin.Suddenly, I realized that the nature of this night decorated with thick black is so lovely!With this bright mirror, you will not let your heart be confused and wandering, and you will not let your heart feel sad... On the contrary, you will realize the charm of "the bright moon shines among the pines, the clear spring stone flows upwards", and you will find the "noise of cicadas". The more tranquil the forest, the more secluded the birdsong and the mountains.” Ethereal.

On a moonlit night, I buy a bright mirror and keep it quietly.

In the spring breeze, on a bright moon night, low paper is slanted to make grass, buy a mirror, and the mood gradually clears up...

score review
If it is said that Lu You's "short paper running obliquely and making grass" is to express his dissatisfaction and anger in leisure: then this article uses it in reverse, and truly writes about a teenager's love for the "Tianmei" free life. "Desire" and pursuit.The sentence pattern of the article combining parts and pieces shows the literary quality of the examinee; the leading of the subheadings and the integrated structure reflect the ability to structure the article.

Mirror high hanging
(a candidate from Hubei)

"Crack!" Master, I slapped the gavel:

Ascension!

May I have your name?Where do you live... what, what?You said Master Ben recognizes you?You are... oh!You are that famous actress!A few days ago, I just appeared on TV to clarify the scandal... Who do you want to sue?Hey, you want to sue the lighting engineer and cameraman in the program that day?What are you suing them?Oh, you said they made you ugly... Don't worry, don't worry, speak slowly!You said the gaffer didn't bring out the softest light to cover up your crow's feet?You said that the photographer only took photos of the front but not your most beautiful profile face and nose with a 45-degree angle?I get it, you're going to sue them for making your flaws too obvious.

I said, you big sister!Are you forty?secret? !cough!Wrinkles on the face are a gift of time. If you want to be a real actor, you have to rely on your acting skills. Now the concept has changed. Just being beautiful is nothing!Such a case, my master forbids it!You go home and buy a bright mirror to take more pictures. When can you see clearly before you come out to "photogenic"?

"Crack!" Master and I patted the gavel:

next!
You... Yo ho!There are so many!Stand up, stand up!The pleadings are presented, sir, and I'll take a look.Hmm... "Sue American airports for discrimination against Chinese people"... Is this okay?Are anti-China forces on the rise again?Come here, tell me in detail, what is going on here?

Ah... um... oh, so that's how it is... I said you were wrong about this!Isn’t it because many Chinese people have bad habits in airports and regard the clean lobby as their own floor in American airports?
Oops, you really need to reflect on yourself... Throw your ugliness abroad... I won't punish you today, my lord.So is America!Relying on the value of the U.S. dollar, I am running amok. Today I will talk about the "China Threat Theory", and tomorrow I will make a plan for the Iraq war... No, there is a "prisoner abuse scandal" recently!

In fact, the hearts of the people of the world are like mirrors. Who doesn't know what Bush is thinking?Dominate!

"Crack!" Master and I patted the gavel three times:

You... ah?Are you going to sue my master? !Tell me that the drink I drank yesterday was paid by the public?Hehe... Hey, I'm sorry.I... I'll add it right now... Hehe.You go slowly!

Ouch, what a surprise!

Looking back, the four characters "Mirror Hanging High" hanging in the hall are shining brightly.

score review
The title of the article "Mirror Hanging High" is quoted from the huge plaque on the ancient government hall, and the article appears in the form of a trial case, and it is written in the tone of the case judge. It is indeed an example of the past serving the present, and it is indeed refreshing.What is even more commendable is that the use of the second person is natural and appropriate, and the transition and inheritance are harmonious and natural. The relevant content has angles, layers, and depth, reflecting the appearance of all living beings in today's society from small to large.

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