College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 56 Family Education (1)
(2004 Hunan roll)

composition test questions
Read the text below, according to what the article says.

At present, there are 18 million minors under the age of 3 in my country. Behind every child are pairs of eyes of affectionate concern.Parents attach more importance to their children's education than ever before.China's family education has also made great progress. The penetration of modern education awareness into the family, the establishment of a democratic and equal relationship between parents and children, and the parents' precepts and deeds like spring rain...all left a deep impression on us.But China's current family education also has many problems.Family education undoubtedly plays a decisive role in the growth of young people.You must have your own feelings and thoughts about family education.Please write an article of no less than 67 words on the topic of "Family Education", choose your own perspective, and draw up your own topic.

[Notice]

①The written content must be within the specified topic. ②Except for poetry, other styles are not limited. ③No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
In Hunan's composition questions in 2004, the previous material part was removed, and the topic was directly drawn out through the introductory words, which was convenient for candidates to conceive quickly.The guiding language first explained the large number of minors and the concern of the society, which provided a broad thinking background for candidates to write.Then tell the candidates that the "family education" in the question refers to family education in a narrow sense, and it is the current family education in China.The guide goes on to say: "Family education undoubtedly plays a decisive role in the growth of teenagers." Here, candidates are reminded that writing about family education should be linked to the healthy growth of teenagers.At the end of the guide, it says "You must have your own feelings and thoughts about family education", which reminds candidates that writing about family education must be based on their own feelings and thoughts.If candidates do not carefully read the materials (review the questions) and accurately grasp the intention of the proposition, it will be difficult to write an article that truly meets the requirements of the proposition.

Writing Ideas Tips
When writing about the topic of "family education", candidates can write not only about its success, but also about its existing problems; it can focus on writing about the family education it has received, and it can also focus on the society and write about some common phenomenon in family education; You can rewrite your own feelings, or you can rewrite your own thoughts.In addition, there are many angles to choose from. For example, some people attribute all the problems of minors to family education, and some people think that minors themselves have something to ask themselves; Human growth plays a vital role, and some people think that compared with society, the role of family education is limited; some people think that in the family, minors are the educated, and some people think that in modern educational concepts Among them, the relationship between parents and children is not a simple relationship between educators and educated... Faced with so many choices, if candidates can combine their own experience or start with deep feelings about related issues, at least they will be different in content and intention. Too many points will be lost; if it can be combined with social hot spots, such as the current excessive addiction of young people to the Internet, the article may have more weight.

Full score sample essay
he ferry for me

(a candidate from Hunan Province)

I think he was born in a gray age that lacks romance, a haggard age that is bleak but not vivid, and a little swaying can bring many surprises and sparkles.

It probably has something to do with the spiritual outlook of that era and his own experience. He is very stable and introverted. He doesn't like my arrogance and self-willedness.But he didn't know that I was very tired doing this, the result and process were predicted, and it was so stable that I felt that everything was very routine.

He had high expectations for me and gave me a pair of heavy wings, making me fly like a lonely wild goose.I studied hard, but I couldn't achieve the grades he hoped for.I gave up the passion and energy I should have had for him.

He never praised me, even though I got the royalties and certificates of honor.Once I saw a sentence from Xi Murong: "The innocence and innocence of youth lies in the fact that it is gone and never returned. It can be met but not sought." I realized that I had deviated from the road of youth and my own. dream.

He is a teacher, he always likes to say a lot of things to teach me, he told me not to say that if I don't understand something, it doesn't make sense, and told me that no matter how wronged I am, I have to take a step back.I didn't say that I don't like this tone of life, just because he is my hardworking and dedicated father, and I don't want to go against his words.

I remembered something from my childhood.He let me ride on his shoulders to take me to the circus, bought a lot of small fonts for me to practice calligraphy stroke by stroke, and took me to climb mountains far away on gray and rainy days.He thinks it will make me happy and let me have a childhood that I can recall.But he never knew that I didn't like watching circuses, practicing calligraphy and climbing mountains. I would rather play freely with children.

I really want to muster up the courage to tell him that without his restraint, I can still not change my original intention; without his navigation, I can still not bury my longing...

But one day I looked through his drawer and found that it was full of my large and small photos.I stood there for a long time, and suddenly realized that I was his hope and his dream, just like going to see the sea was my dream, we were all working hard to practice it, but we didn't think for each other from the perspective of the other.

Before, I always felt that there was a river between us, I was on this side, and he was on the other side.

Only now did I know that it wasn't him on the other side, he was ferrying for me.It's just that I sincerely hope that one day, he can hand me a paddle and let us take the direction together.

score review
The examinee was ingenious and cleverly used metaphors, comparing his father to his own ferryman.Minimize and visualize a broad generation gap problem.The article is full of sincere emotion, and the language is full of beauty and tension.It is indeed a good essay for the examination room.

Reminiscing about time gone by
(a candidate from Hunan Province)

In a season of peach and plum spring breeze and catkins flying all over the sky, a weak baby was born.Under the attention of pairs of eyes full of love, she began to thrive, and with it, she began to look at this strange world with curious eyes.She began to study, and under the careful guidance of her family, she began to experience a learning process from simple to deep, from little knowledge to more knowledge, and this included joy, pain, tears and laughter, as well as How many years of homecoming with endless love!
Joy arises in an instant, sitting in the cradle, looking at the whispering swallows, so grandpa taught her to recite "Helpless flowers fall, familiar swallows return", oh, Song Ci can fly; put it on the big round table in front of the window , pointing to the red lotus, so grandpa shook his head and read "you can pick lotus in the south of the Yangtze River, lotus leaves and He Tiantian", oh, the ancient Yuefu is colorful and exudes a faint fragrance; in the dark rainy night, accompanied by the prince and gray The story of the girl and the warmth of her mother, she crossed the Nile in her dream, crossed the Denmark Strait, and played games with the white-bearded grandfather Andersen; Under Qin Sang, listening to the stories of the Three Kingdoms told by her grandfather, she really wanted to ride a red rabbit horse and meet the majestic Guan Yunchang.These little joys made her have a strong interest in her future life and gave her endless knowledge.

Pain creates an indelible impression.When she held the little chick and laughed triumphantly, when she suddenly wanted to cut the flowery clothes, when she dropped the pen and slipped out to make snow dolls, when she talked back and was locked in a dark house, She received a solid "lesson" unceremoniously.So she felt wronged, more sad than that Qu Yuan, tears flowed eastward than that of the Empress of the Southern Tang Dynasty, she got a warm and reasonable explanation, she learned not to bully the weak, and a little Needle and thread are hard-won, I learned persistence, I learned patience, I learned the basic principles of being a human being, and gained strength that I couldn't get in school or books.

Tears and laughter enriched her ordinary life. Encouraged by her father, she climbed up the Great Wall, Mount Tai, Yueyang Tower, and the viewing platform. In order to have a majestic waist like a mountain, and a broad mind like the sea, every time she sheds tears, she cuddles with her family, this is the most peaceful haven; every time she laughs, she shares it with the whole family, this is the most beautiful place in the heart Shangri-La!
There are joys, pains, tears and laughter, this is her life like water.

Time flies like water, time flies like water, but what never goes away is that beautiful and meaningful happy time!
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