College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 58 Language and Communication (1)
(Guangdong volume in 2004)

composition test questions
Read the fable below and write an essay as required.

In ancient times, people in Dongou (now along the southern coast of Zhejiang Province) lived in thatched huts, and fires often broke out, which caused great pain.A merchant from Dongou went to the state of Jin. He heard that there was a woman named Feng Fu in the state of Jin who was good at fighting tigers. Wherever he appeared, there were no tigers.The Dongou merchants reported the news to the king after returning.Because there is no difference in the pronunciation of "fire" and "tiger" in Dongou dialect, the monarch mistakenly thought that Feng Fu was good at "fighting fire", so he invited Feng Fu from the state of Jin with grand etiquette.The next day there was a fire in the market, everyone ran to tell Feng Fu, Feng Fu rolled up her sleeves and ran out with the crowd, but couldn't find the tiger.When the fire reached the palace, everyone pushed Mrs. Feng into the fire, and Mrs. Feng was burned to death.The businessman was also convicted for it. (Adapted from "Yu Ion·Feng Fu")
Due to language communication problems, the characters in the above-mentioned fables repeatedly misunderstood each other, and Feng's wife died in the sea of ​​fire.It can be seen that the success or failure of language communication has a huge impact sometimes.Please write an article on the topic of "Language and Communication", which can be combined with personal knowledge, feelings or experience in language learning.

[Notice]

①What you write must be within the scope of the topic.The allegorical materials quoted in the test questions can be used or not by candidates in the article. ② Make up your own mind. ③Style of choice (except poetry). ④The topic is self-made. ⑤ Not less than 800 words. ⑥No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
The 2004 college entrance examination Guangdong composition questions used fables as the proposition material.The preposition of this composition question has strong practical significance and is life-oriented.Because of the reality and life-oriented characteristics of this composition question and the regional characteristics of Guangdong, as a high school graduate in Guangdong who has received 12 years of formal school education from elementary school and studied Chinese lessons uninterruptedly, "Language " and the role of "communication" as the specific object of assessment, candidates should have something to say.The fables provided in the question are translated into vernacular Chinese, so there will be no obstacles in understanding the meaning of the question, and the topic of "language and communication" clearly limits the scope and angle of writing. There is a deviation.Therefore, this composition question is not difficult.

Writing Ideas Tips
Although the title has limited the angle of writing, the "space" is still very large. In order to avoid ambiguity, the angle should be chosen to be smaller. On the premise that the relationship between "and communication" must be written, you can start from the following Angle writing: mother tongue and foreign language; national language and dialect; written and spoken language; vernacular and classical Chinese; language and other methods (such as music, art, dance, flags, signals, etc.); language expression skills; changes in language communication methods, etc.Of course, candidates with rich materials and strong language skills can fly freely in the kingdom of "language".

Full score sample essay
Light up the world's tomorrow
(Candidate [-] from Guangdong)

I like Chinese characters with round accents and cadences, and I also like the smooth and smooth English, which is natural and unrestrained; I like to read a vast number of Chinese classics, and I also like to taste exotic masterpieces with unique characteristics; Verbal communication.

Turning over the world map, the names of more than a hundred countries come into view, making people dazzled in an instant.The United States, France, Japan, South Korea... The names of the countries remind people of the different languages, and they can't help but think of the problem of communication.

Language is a bridge of communication, and language communication can shorten the distance between each other.If there is a language barrier, there will definitely be some difficulties in communication.Poetry is a treasure of Chinese culture, and its language is colorful and full of profound meaning.We can understand the quiet beauty of "the bright moon shines among the pines, and the clear spring stones flow upwards", and we can also appreciate the "sparse shadows, horizontal slanting water, clear and shallow water, dark fragrance floating in the moon and dusk", but if we are friends from foreign countries, we are separated by language How do you take him to walk in this poetic and picturesque world?In the same way, if we don't understand the language of a foreign country, how can we appreciate the mystery and charm of a foreign culture?

Communication is the task of language, and language exists for and serves communication.As early as the Yuan Dynasty, Marco Polo traveled to China and was attracted by the magical oriental culture. He decided to stay in China and wrote down the ancient oriental culture with notes, and finally left behind the famous "Marco Polo's Travel Notes".It is conceivable how this great traveler went from not knowing Chinese to using Chinese freely and constantly digging out the cultural connotation of Chinese language.It was by mastering the Han language that Marco Polo saw a real oriental world and understood the true connotation of a civilized country.

Language communication broadens our horizons, allowing us to get in close contact with foreign cultures while enjoying our own culture.By learning foreign languages, I understand Tagore's "May life be as gorgeous as summer flowers, and death as quiet and beautiful as autumn leaves", and I understand Keats's "He who lies here, his name is written in the water" , I can roam Wonderland together with Alice, and I can also witness scenes of human tragedy in Notre Dame de Paris.When I open the Internet, I can read foreign news, learn about major events happening in another country, and also enter chat rooms to communicate with foreign friends.

The understanding of language brings the convenience of communication, and at the same time, successful communication allows us to have a deeper understanding of foreign languages ​​and cultures.Language and communication have brought common development and common prosperity to the world, and will allow human beings to work together towards a better tomorrow based on mutual understanding.

score review
Prose language, poetic artistic conception, keen eyesight, unique insights, and eloquent eloquence; ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, with magnificent momentum, extensive quotations, candidates talk eloquently, and the reasoning is thorough, which is convincing!This article has a clear point of view, with high ideological and persuasive force.The full text states the meaning of "Language and Communication".

"Love" is hard to say
(Candidate [-] from Guangdong)

After drinking the last sip of milk, I silently put the 145-point paper in front of my father. He raised his eyes and snorted, signed his name and continued to read the newspaper.My lips moved, trying to say something, but I gave up anyway, I'm used to it anyway.After packing up my things, I closed the door, and the soft closing sound was like a sigh.Without looking back, I strode towards the school...

In fact, I also want him to smile at me and say "I did well in the exam"...

My father and I seem to be natural enemies. Since we were young, we have never stopped fighting.It's a boy's nature to be mischievous. Whenever I got into trouble, he would keep silent and whip his belt around.Probably because of his stubbornness, I didn't cry. There was a crisp slapping sound and my mother's cries, and finally ended with a loud "bang" slamming the door-I rushed out.

My mother often told me that he actually loves me, but he just doesn't know how to express it. I want to try to communicate with him.communicate?I sneered, how can I communicate with a machine like him?He even smiled at the street-sweeping lady whom he didn't know, but he was stingy and refused to show it to me. The only language he used to express his "love" was the endless ringing of the belt.And when I repay his love, there are more door slams than words...

After thinking about it, I came to the school. "Hey!" My friend approached mysteriously, "Do you know what day it is today? Father's Day!" Suddenly, the cold old face came to mind again, and I said disgustedly: "What's the matter with me?" "You don't show something to your father?" What? I couldn’t wait to give it away last night, and when I said ‘I love you’ to my dad, he actually cried!” My friend said excitedly, and then dragged me to the boutique…

Holding a bottle of Erguotou and a box of beautifully packaged belts, I returned home nervously.Giving the belt, how ironic, is he going to whip me again?
"Dad, today is Father's Day, this is a gift for you." I said calmly.He froze for a moment, and slowly opened the gift.Unexpectedly, he didn't fly into a rage, but sighed heavily: "Your mother is not here today, let me have a drink." That's okay, be bold.

There was an eerie silence, save for the clink of glasses.Both of them were slightly drunk, I looked at my father and said quietly: "Dad, I...I...I love you..." I passed it very lightly and quickly, and I don't know if he heard, "I don't have any other words." I mean, it’s just that your belt is about to break..." Before I could finish speaking, my father came out of his throat: "You did well in the exam today..." My eyes suddenly became hot.He picked up the wine glass, tilted his head up and poured it down suddenly, his eyes sparkled and turned red.He hurriedly concealed: "This wine... this wine is too strong..." I smiled and choked up: "It's a bit strong..." After finishing speaking, he raised his glass and drank it, hot tears flowed into his mouth ...the tears of love are sweet...

A single "I love you" dissolves countless feelings...

score review
This article adopts the narrative writing method, through the description of the relationship between father and son, from estrangement or even opposition to the language expression of "I love you", which communicates the soul and resolves emotional barriers. It illustrates the important role of language, which is quite meaningful; It is more realistic and vivid, the content is substantial, and the feelings are sincere. It is a better composition.

Use language to link the starry sky of the soul

(Candidate [-] from Guangdong)

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