College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 59 Language and Communication (2)
There are sonatas in various languages ​​in the vast world.The rumbling of huge waves is the call sign of the sea, the bursting of pines is the murmur of the woods;However, these various sonatas failed to merge into a high-level harmony after all. Only we human beings know how to use language to communicate all sounds, so that the river of words can merge into the sea of ​​soul.

You see, we have learned a foreign language, so that we bid farewell to the years of old age and death; English, an international language, makes black and white people feel like brothers; a smart Polish even invented Esperanto, which makes people feel our hearts in communication. It's so close.

However, sometimes we have no choice but to find that the river of the soul will stagnate, and the bridge of language will be frozen.Although the natural estrangement has given us colorful discourse, it has also presented us with such a difficult problem: how can the countless colors merge into one?
The issue of language and communication is, above all, an issue of cultural tolerance and convergence.More than once, we have seen one party denounce the other party's dialect as "bird language" in a dialect, and we have also witnessed more than one party's bullet-hole-like eyes looking at the other party with a different accent.In fact, for a nation or even a culture, language is the first element of its inheritance and maintenance. Respecting and accepting a language is often the starting point of sincere communication and the premise of inclusive and accepting a culture or a group.If we kill the Tibetan language indiscriminately, there will be no Chinese-Tibetan love and beauty; the Prussians raped the public opinion in France to promote German hegemony, and what they got in return was the rejection of the French people from the depths of their hearts and emotions.

Communication, pay attention to harmony but difference, care about openness and honesty, and mutual affection.The diversity of languages ​​will not become a barrier to communication, but it must be the most authentic source of communication.Along with English came not only the ABCD International Phonetic Alphabet, but also Shakespeare, Shelley's brilliant emotions, and Cambridge and Oxford's Fan Binbin; with Chinese, it was not only square characters and flat rhythms, but also Qu Tao, Li Du The beauty of Tang Poetry and Song Ci is hazy...and when the two languages ​​and these two charming sounds intersect and play together, what is even more beautiful is the mutual expansion of Chinese and English cultures, and the heart-to-heart connection of the Chinese and English people.

Communication begins with language and stagnates due to different languages. There are 56 nationalities and thousands of dialects; more than 190 countries and countless languages... Could this just mean the embarrassment of looking at each other and the helplessness of breaking up? ?When we let go of our horizons, open our hearts, absorb the essence of other people's languages ​​with the heart of great unity, tolerance and tolerance, and promote the charm of our own literature, we will find that each language is a star, which is connected together. A spiritual starry sky of understanding, generosity, and blending.

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The center of this article is prominent and the thinking is clear. At the beginning of the article, we use natural phenomena to feel the excitement of things, and enter the spiritual field of interpersonal communication; At the end of the chapter, the prospect of cultural harmony and spiritual integration is given.The content of the article is substantial, sincere, well-selected examples, rigorous in structure, sophisticated in writing, rich in embellishments, and beautiful in color.

Sound is better than silence

(Candidate [-] from Guangdong)

Bai Juyi wrote the eternal quatrain in "Pipa Xing" "Don't have sorrow and hatred for life, at this time, silence is better than sound".Perhaps, this is the best portrayal of thousands of words in silence at that time.But sometimes, or more often, sound is better than silence.

Language is an important difference between human beings and other animals, and it must have its own advantages.It is a bridge between people, it is a useful means to defuse hatred, it is the basis of cooperation between countries...

The person I admire most in this life is Zhu Zhiwu.It's not that he is willing to let go of his personal grievances and stand up for the country, but that he can use a few words to make Master Qin retreat from the border and save a country, a country that is about to perish. "If Zheng's death is beneficial to the king, dare to bother the deacon" "The country is contemptuous, and the king knows how difficult it is" "How can the death of Zheng be used to accompany the neighbor? The neighbor is thick, but the king is thin" "And the king tastes Jin The emperor bestowed it, and Xu Jun was anxious and flawed, and set up a plan in the morning and evening." These sentences hit the key point, concise and clear, and made Qin Bo feel the harm of Zheng's death and make him give up attacking Zheng.This is the power of language to promote communication!How can people not admire it?
The most admired person in this life is Cao Zhi.Just imagine how powerful words were when Cao Zhi was deliberately made things difficult by his own brother.Cao Pi asked Cao Zhi to write a poem in seven steps. Could it be that silence is better than sound at this time?With amazing wisdom, Cao Zhi recited the seven-step poem "Cooking beans burns Osmunda, and the beans weep in the cauldron. They grow from the same root, so why is it too urgent to cook?".This is the charm of language. This short four-line poem made Cao Pi save Cao Zhi's life.At the same time, this is also a kind of communication between them.How can such a powerful person not be admired?
The person I admire the most in this life is Chu Long.A small minister was able to use verbal communication to persuade the Queen Mother Zhao to send her most beloved son, Lord Chang'an, as a hostage.Chu Long's phrase "Parents love their sons, they have far-reaching plans" often echoes in my ears, reminding me of the power of language in communication.

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These examples show us the charm of language in communication.Similarly, when you are not good at controlling language communication, it may cause serious consequences. Didn’t Feng’s wife in Jin State be burned alive in ancient times to illustrate this point?In modern times, the lack of communication between parents and children is not weakening the power of language?Maybe as long as parents and children take a little time to chat, many tragedies can be avoided.

Yes, we don't have Zou Ji's ability to satirize the king of Qi and accept advice, nor do we have the wisdom of Premier Zhou Enlai to answer reporters cleverly.But we all have the ability to express in words, why not make the most of it?

In today's knowledge economy, we should constantly improve our language communication skills, so that we can gain a foothold in society.

Remember, this is a society where words speak louder than words.

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This article begins with the introduction of "Silence is better than sound at this time" in "Pipa Xing", and then I changed my writing style and put forward my own point of view-more often, sound is better than silence, which makes people's eyes shine.The article is closely related to the topic, the materials are typical and substantial, the level of argumentation is clear, and the language is concise.The use of verse in the title is very clever.Rhetorical questions are used in many places to enhance the strength of the argument.Appropriate quotations from poems reflect that candidates have a certain cultural heritage.

Language - the acceleration of communication
(Candidate [-] from Guangdong)

Only when swallows crow to each other can they return in light rain;Only when the wolf howls fiercely can it summon a pack of wolves to defend against the enemy; when the eagle chirps sharply, it can deter the enemy from hunting without loss.If you lose the common language in the crowd and are helplessly silent, then you are a poor "independent person".Communication requires language, and language is the acceleration of communication.

Language is the heavenly sword and dagger of the soldiers on the expedition, and the trump card for invincibility, if you use it correctly.It was the language that made Su and Qin unite the six countries and made the strong Qin tremble with fear; it was the language that made Zhuge Liang persuade Soochow and killed 83 Cao Jun in the sea of ​​fire; it was the language that made Zhou Enlai a blockbuster at the Asian-African Conference and made Asian and African countries look at China with admiration; It is language, which makes Shui Junyi and Bai Yansong move the hearts of hundreds of millions of viewers, and makes us have a higher evaluation of CCTV... Language is the booster of friendship, the glue of family affection, and the detonator of love. Because language is the acceleration of communication!
If the common language is lost, if everyone cannot use the language correctly, it is hard to imagine what a terrible world the earth will be, and what a barren desert the human mind will be.Such a world is a prehistoric society that lost skyscrapers, good fields and good rice, lost the four great inventions, lost modern civilization, and lost ancient glory.Such a mind loses the sympathy of "the bright moon rises on the sea, and we share this moment at the end of the world", loses the shock of "I smile to the sky from the sky, and saves two Kunluns", loses the confidence of "living for 200 years, will hit the water for [-] years" Lost the admiration of "I am not afraid of being broken to pieces, and want to stay innocent in the world", and lost the emotional barren desert of "life and death are broad, and I will talk to you; hold my hand, and grow old together".How important is language!How necessary is language!Language can connect the ages, allowing ancient civilizations to keep pace with the times through communication, develop continuously, and create today's brilliance.Language can transcend time and space, allowing Socrates, Plato, Shakespeare, Zhong Ni, Taibai and Lu Xun to communicate with us silently and have spiritual dialogues.

In the communication between lovers, language is a romantic and magical bridge; in the communication between teachers and students, language is a solid and durable ladder; in the communication between father and son, language is a simple paddle; in the communication between friends, language is a faithful Sincere stamp.Language adds color to communication, and communication is brilliant in language.

Let language become the closest friend of communication!The correct and common language is the acceleration of communication.

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The title of the article is "Language-the Acceleration of Communication" which grasps the essence of the topic "Language and Communication", and points out the relationship between the two, and runs through the whole text with "Language as the Acceleration of Communication", which is the reason why the full text fits the topic. Foundation.The whole article is well-conceived, well-structured, and broad-minded.

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