College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 67 Rules (1)
(2002 Beijing volume)

composition test questions
Read the material below and write a composition according to the requirements.

Several students watched a World Cup football match and chatted about the rules with great interest.

Classmate A: Rules are too important.If the athletes don't abide by the rules and the referees don't enforce the law fairly, there will be no exciting games!

Classmate B: Yes!There are no rules.No school rules, no traffic rules, okay?

Classmate C: But sometimes those who don’t follow the rules take advantage, while those who follow the rules suffer.

Classmate B: That's another matter.

Classmate D: But the rules are not rigid, if they are not suitable, they have to be changed.Aren't many "game" rules revised now?
[Notice]

Please use "rules" (including "rules and...") as the topic, make up your own ideas, draw up your own topic, and write a composition of no less than 800 words.In addition to poetry, style is not limited.

Question Analysis
In 2002, the topic of "rules" was brought up through the dialogues of several students in Beijing's college entrance examination composition test. The form was novel, and the conversations involved competition rules, school rules, traffic rules, etc., which are not very unfamiliar to students. Sending out feelings will help candidates quickly enter the writing state.The prompt "contains 'rules and...'" reminds candidates that they can choose a wider range of topic combinations, such as "rules and freedom", "rules and development" for writing, and do not have to stick to the test materials.

Writing Ideas Tips
It can be seen from the materials that the conversations of students B, C, and D essentially suggested three directions for argumentation: first, the importance of rules; second, the attitude and results of the rules; third, the rules also need to be revised.In particular, the last two points of view embody a dialectical way of thinking that looks at problems from a developmental perspective.When examining the ideas of the questions, candidates also need to use dialectical thinking to dig out the profound meaning of the proposition.

Full score sample essay
rule carol
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

One: God and Satan
The angel football team led by God played a football game with the devil football team led by Satan.After 10 and [-] minutes of the battle, the result of the game was surprising: the Angels, which were clearly superior in strength, lost by a big score.God was puzzled, so he had to ask Satan.Satan made it clear: "I invited Chinese referees." God suddenly realized.

Competition needs rules, just like life needs air. Without the restrictions of rules, God may not necessarily win.

Part Two: Man and Nature
Humans and nature have always been in conflict.This struggle is brutal: at first it was cruel by nature, now it is cruel by man.

Man flouts all the rules when he does violence to nature, but nature obeys all the rules when he takes revenge on man.

Man and nature are an eternal topic.Human beings live in nature, but the rapid development of modern civilization has destroyed the balance between human beings and nature. Human arrogance has brought more and more dangers to the world. Abandoned things, when nature can no longer bear this kind of ravages, she began to take revenge: frequent sandstorms, dangerous rainstorms and floods, red tides that cover the ocean, unprecedented ozone holes and greenhouse effects... Nature follows her rules, It has sounded the alarm for mankind time and time again.

Man lives in nature, and if he wants to live in harmony with nature, he must follow the rules of nature.

Part Three: China and the WTO
China has successfully joined the WTO, and the challenges we face are unprecedented, one of which is the change of rules.

China has a glorious civilization of 5000 years. However, the side effect of this civilization is that some backward concepts are deeply rooted. There is still a market for local protectionism, human favors are bought and sold from time to time, and the phenomenon of unfair competition still exists.Some market rules in China are out of touch with the world.

However, joining the WTO will change all that.The rules of fair competition will be fully enforced.Monopoly and local protection will also be broken.The new rules will bring new vitality to China.

Four: Other

As the saying goes: "If you don't follow the rules, you can't make a circle." Rules are like the flight path of an airplane.As long as you and I abide by the rules, we can fly on our respective routes without incident. If someone breaks the rules and deviates from the scheduled route, a collision will be inevitable.Perhaps breaking the rules can take advantage of the moment, but those who play with fire will set themselves on fire, and those who wantonly trample on the rules will be punished with the most severe rules.

Fifth: Conclusion
Rules make our lives better.

score review
The student explained the importance of "rules" from multiple perspectives.The article has a strong sense of the times, grasps the pulse of the times, and captures the most sensitive information of the times.In addition, the sentences in the article are also very philosophical, showing the examinee's unique ability to analyze and summarize.

wonderful words
Competition needs rules, just like life needs air. Without the restrictions of rules, God may not necessarily win.

Maitreya rule
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

One day in the sky, one year on earth.The rapid development of the mortal economy has stimulated the balanced heavenly economy, and at the same time, the eyes of the Jade Emperor have been red-hot. In order to narrow the gap between the two places, with a wave of the Jade Emperor's imperial pen, a number of heavenly enterprises have been established one after another.

All the immortals are already in place, only Tianting Transportation Company still lacks the post of manager.Regarding the pillar industry of Tianting, the Jade Emperor did not dare to be careless.In the end, he decided to send Li Jing, who is upright, and Maitreya, who is the most popular, to pretend to be mortals to go down to the world to learn scriptures.

Three days later, the two returned from their studies.The Jade Emperor has always respected Li Jing, so he ordered him to take the helm first, and Maitreya as a backup, who can be appointed at any time.

After Li Jing took office, he put up a warning sign of "rules are power" in the manager's office, which he learned from the mortal world.One month later, the company's output value increased slightly, but an extremely large number of anonymous letters flew into the hands of the Jade Emperor. It turned out that Li Jing was upright and controlled everyone with strict rules, which made the workers complain.Under pressure, the Jade Emperor had to replace Li Jing with Maitreya.Li Jing was aggrieved, and left with his seal.

A few days later, amidst the cheers of the immortals, Maitreya took office. Surrounded by the crowd, Maitreya came to the manager's office, saw the words "rule is power", smiled slightly, and looked back at the crowd and said: "This is a fool's theory. Also! When I was studying in the mortal world, I saw a manager who did not abide by the rules and indulged the employees. "Yes, yes..." Everyone quickly agreed.

After Maitreya took office, he immediately changed the word "rule" to "tolerance" and used it as a warning sign in his handling of affairs.After one month, the company's output value increased greatly, and tens of thousands of thank you letters were sent to Jade Emperor, who was very pleased.

Half a year later, the transportation company lost a lot of money, but the thank you letters from Jade Emperor continued unabated.The Jade Emperor couldn't sit still any longer, so he decided to go and see for himself.

One evening, Yuhuang came to the company alone in casual clothes, and saw that most of the company's employees had gone home, and the rest were chatting.The Jade Emperor walked into the manager's room with doubts and saw Maitreya reading the document with his back turned to him, so he concealed himself and stood aside.

"Okay, at the end of the month, I, Maitreya, are going to give out bonuses!" Mitreya took out the labor forms of the employees according to the regulations, "Sirius worked the most, give him a victory award. Tianma star only paid half a month's work, um, give him a holiday Oil awards are not easy. Little Bear didn't work. This..." Mi Le touched his bald head and fell into deep thought, "We should fire him according to the regulations!" Jade Emperor thought to himself, "Let's do this! Give Little Bear a safety award, the rules count. People's hearts are the most important thing." Maitreya decided. "Ah!" Jade Emperor almost shouted.

On the way back to the palace, the Jade Emperor understood the real reason for the company's downturn: there is no rule without rules, no matter what you do, you must have rules, let Li Jing do it!
A day later, Maitreya stepped down.

Half a year later, the company's laws and regulations were renewed and it was thriving.

score review
The successful application of contrastive techniques is the outstanding feature of this article.Through the comparison of Li Jing and Maitreya, the two mythological figures, the importance of following the rules is expounded.Candidates use heaven as a metaphor for the world, which has profound meanings and makes people think deeply.

Desire without rules and morality with rules

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

"When all norms and taboos do not exist, how far are you from evil?" This is a sentence on the poster of the horror film "The Invisible Man".When a transparent person faces the opaque world, the dormant desire in his heart begins to wake up, so there is the evil invisible man and this thrilling film.

The real anxiety does not come from the terrible plot in the film, but from my self-torture, "When there are no rules to restrict, will you do bad things?" My answer is: I will!This is a latent desire originating from human nature. Maybe there is evil in the heart of everyone outside, and once the shackles that imprison evil are opened, there will be many atrocities in human history.

In my opinion, the fundamental symbol of human civilization lies in the desire to control, which is also a symbol of human beings getting rid of barbarism.At first, the suppression of desires came from morality, which is a kind of concept accumulated from human beings' long-term social activities, knowing what should be done and what should not be done.This is the central way of Confucianism in ancient my country, but the ancients said: no virtue will perish, only virtue will be endangered.That is to say, morality without coercion is feeble.From this point of view, the "ruling the country by law" advocated by the Legalists is the method of governing society, while the so-called "ruling the country by virtue" of the Confucianists is just a "utopian" ideal.

We cannot restrain the derivation and flow of desires, but we can restrict the behaviors generated by desires. This is the rule based on morality.Our evil thoughts may subvert a certain morality thousands of times, but the punitive rules prevent evil thoughts from bursting out, and support the tree of morality, thus forming a society ruled by law.It can be said that "human nature is evil, but human deeds are always good."

Morality is the basic construction of rules, but violation of morality does not violate the rules. Wakefield in Nathaniel Hawthorne's works is such a character, perhaps out of his desire for wandering. Live in a hotel just one street away from home, and stay there for 20 years.This wanderer who ran away from home is more eye-catching, and readers can't help but measure his distance from social ethics and morality. He violated morality and broke away from the standard, but we can't say that he has any deviant behavior, and the experienced Huo Sang answered the difficult questions for us, and he wrote at the end: "In the seemingly chaotic world, each of us is placed in a certain position, and once we leave this position, we will be abandoned by this world forever. "This Wakefield will be deserted by the world, as it is.Here, Wakefield violated another rule, a social law.

As Mr. Spencer said to Holden in "The Catcher in the Rye", "Life is a ball game, and we have to abide by every rule of one kind or another." Yes, we live in this society and participate in such games. "Ball game" is to abide by the so-called "rules".

score review
Candidates use simple and concise sentences to talk about their own views, or quote the words of our ancient sages, or integrate the essence of Western philosophers' thoughts, making the whole article full of speculative light.

Respect the rules, enjoy the right to happiness
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

(End of this chapter)