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Chapter 68 Rules (2)
In the distant barbaric era, when tribal leaders distributed limited food among the tribe according to their age, civilization and law entered into the history of human survival and reproduction hand in hand; when the Code of Hammurabi was erected, when the haze of war covered The brilliance of civilization, when human beings move from war and disorder to peace and tranquility, rules have always run through it. They were destroyed by barbaric attacks since childhood. The strong vitality of rules lies in the fact that they are the embodiment of civilization and the gentlest concern for human nature. , Civilization lasts forever but rules never die!
The emergence of rules comes from human beings' cognition of the collective and respect for public interests. Therefore, rules are beneficial to people, but not only for private interests. Rules get rid of narrowness and ugliness in human nature. Equality and selflessness are strongly promoted.In the "9" incident, when the twin towers were full of smoke and every life was struggling on the verge of death, people would automatically make way for firefighters to pass through the crowd to rescue those in danger. The people of the land, the people's march is fast and orderly.At such a moment, there is no express rule to regulate people's behavior, but the most shining altruistic spirit in human nature automatically makes people reach a consensus at such a moment, so the rules are formed.Civilization brings rules, kindness and selflessness are bred in it, rules are born naturally, and happiness is born naturally.

If the rules are a net, then it is not for restraint, but for protection. It is an elastic net, and it is constantly improving and developing.The imperial examination system is undoubtedly a kind of rule. In the early days of its creation, it was a rule formulated for the selection of talents beneficial to the country. It broke the hereditary shackles of selection and gave everyone an equal opportunity to compete. The most advanced talent selection system has brought China into an extremely brilliant era of civilization, which has amazed the whole world and followed suit. It is the crystallization of Chinese people's unique wisdom and self-cultivation.However, the dimness of the officialdom and the pursuit of fame and fortune gradually revealed its shortcomings. Gradually, the imperial examination system fell into an absurd and boring situation. What it brought was distortion of human nature and a threat to the normal development of society.So it finally died.With the disintegration of the last feudal dynasty in China, it was buried in the dust of history. "Conformity" is a derogatory term, expressing people's deep understanding of the rules, and advocating the pursuit of the development and perfection of the rules.

Rules are born with civilization and will go hand in hand with it. "Without rules, you can't have a circle." In fact, the social circle and the cognition of human nature are included in it. Rules have created happiness for us, and they are a kind of happiness that can be shared by ourselves and others. Therefore, to respect the rules is to respect the right of oneself to enjoy happiness.

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This student has a unique vision and a novel idea, and puts forward the view that rules are "the embodiment of civilization and the gentlest concern for human nature", "kindness and selflessness are contained in it, rules are born naturally, and happiness is born naturally".In addition, the examples selected in the article are quite convincing, and the description is also extremely concise.

Awareness of rules
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Follow-up report: In the 2002 World Cup in South Korea, there were some violations of the rules on the field that people were very unwilling to see.In this regard, many people have stood up, accused the players and referees of not following the rules, and hoped that the stadium would be "pure".

Related links: As everyone knows, there are many cases of doing things without rules, too numerous to mention. The "Guanshengyuan mooncake" incident, the inside story of "real estate transactions"... the eternal rules of "genuine goods at a fair price" and "no deception" in shopping malls have been broken time and time again.And what about our A-A arena? "Ball-fixing" and "black whistle" are all ups and downs, and there are waves of resurgences, which make the majority of fans in Beijing hate them to the bone. The rules of "fair competition" are also ruthlessly trampled on time and time again... No tickets are bought for the bus, no queues... All kinds of cases of non-compliance are shocking.We walk casually on the street every day, as if we have stepped into the "animal world" with no rules.

Expert Comments: Regarding this phenomenon, our experts shouted in unison: What happened to our people, what happened to our society, and where did our rules go? !As we all know, China has joined the WTO and is about to face waves of opportunities and challenges.But whether it is the wolf or the wave, our rules cannot be broken.The first thing we have to do is to abide by the unified requirements of the WTO for member countries, that is, the basic norms.Mr. Long Yongtu once taught: "Entering the WTO first follows the rules." Yes, we have joined the WTO village, we must abide by the village rules of this village, otherwise the world will be in chaos.

Instant comment: The words of experts and scholars sounded the alarm for the people of the whole country. As the saying goes: "The state owns the state law, and the family has family rules." No matter where we are, we should abide by the "rules of the game", otherwise we will be the first to be out.But the rules should not be blindly adhered to. We should learn to "advance with the times", carefully analyze and study the rules, and give full play to our subjective initiative. We should not let the rules constrain us, but let them serve us to the greatest extent.

Current events: a family has rules and a family is strong, a country has rules and a country is strong, and the world has rules and the world is strong.May we all abide by the agreement in every square inch of land.

When the cuckoo calls, can spring be far behind?
When the oranges are red, will the harvest season be far behind?
We are thriving when we stop at the checkout counter of the bank and see that every citizen is waiting one meter away when it is not their turn. Will one day be far away?
Please always establish a sense of rules in your heart!
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The novelty of the subject matter is the biggest highlight of this article.The article used a form similar to a press release to describe the "news incident" that violated the rules at the 2002 World Cup in South Korea, and called on people to "always establish a sense of rules in their hearts."The article is ingeniously conceived and profound in meaning.

Get out of the "rules"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Glen, my love.I like to step on this unmanned path alone in the season when no one is there, not because I want to pretend to be Tao Yuanming's hermit style, nor because I want to pursue the romance of "traveling on the snow to find plums" or the detachment of "fishing alone in the cold river and snow".Just because I want to get out of the self-centered rules made by human beings, be cultivated in the spirit of nature, and find my true self lost in the chaos of the city.

The quiet deep pool is like a hidden hermit, reflecting the faint afterglow of the setting sun.Sitting on the big rock by the pool, I noticed that groups of fish gathered and waved their tails to me freely.I was surprised, and suddenly thought of the fish in the fishing pond, they are not life, but dolls, and they have the power to decide their fate.The fish swimming in the pool live peacefully and carefree. They are not blessed by the gods, but just live in the most common rules of nature...

Thinking about it crazily, to the point of being sad, seeing my sincere face and tearful eyes reflected in the water, I know that I can vent as much as I want at this time.In the rules of nature, all things are integrated and moved by each other.We can move the people and things around us, and the surrounding mountains, rivers, vegetation, insects, fish and birds can also move us, and reach the state of "singing alone but crying".And out of this deep valley, stepping into the society we face every day, under the rules of human beings, men should greet each other and women should smile charmingly. Human beings can no longer perceive the purity of nature and the delicacy and sweetness of life.

Facing the wilderness, facing the deep pool, feeling the comfort of nature, and returning to the normal rules, I feel that life can be so fresh and free.I told the sky about the depression in my heart, but the sky gave me a knowing smile and told me: "Let go of those selfish rules, maybe you will find that the rules of nature are also suitable for you humans." From the day he was born, he felt that he was the darling of the world, and he could completely break the rules and transform society at will.It is true that this kind of psychology has created a so-called civilized world. However, with the passage of history, self-fixed practices have gradually become human-created rules. This rule is beneficial to development, but there are also selfish elements. Gradually built a barrier between human beings and nature, blocking the communication between the laws that dominate the world and our rules, so the self-created rules gradually became idealistic and distorted, causing many people to lose their true nature.

Maybe it's time for people to reflect, or step out of the rules like me, walk into the embrace of nature, rationalize the gains and losses of life, and reflect on their selfishness and narrowness.Rediscover the laws of nature that also apply to us.

Walking out of the deep valley, I asked the old man who lived here strangely why he didn't surround the pool and collect tickets.The old man said quietly: "Tickets are the rules of human beings, but nature hopes to embrace each of her children with open arms selflessly. She doesn't need or want to ask for tickets."

Yes, mother nature is broad and tolerant, she is still waiting hard, her smartest child who is lost, walks out of the little rules set by herself, returns, and composes a real civilized and full life harmoniously and beautifully...

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This is a well-designed and arranged article.Structurally, one "in" and one "out", the completeness is almost seamless, and the reading has a beginning and an end, with strong coherence.In addition, the language of the article is fluent and concise, reflecting the candidate's proficient language skills.

One man's war

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

It is now two o'clock in the middle of the night, and I am sitting at the table without turning on the light, and the darkness spreads around me silently like water, slowly but surely.Tomorrow should be a fine day, the plane will take off on time and land on the land of X state.

I haven't been as calm as I am now for a long time. The words in the newspaper are too hypocritical. I am not a so-called "patriot". I also love my country and my patients, but when I am human, I practice medicine. When the rules were ridiculed, I had to choose to leave.

Most people already know what happened to me in the past few months.I was rated as the worst in the hospital's year-end evaluation because I refused to take black money, and I was laid off by "optimization". I couldn't stand holding the money back and forth under the cover of a white coat. whispers.They have tarnished the noble and holy name of a doctor, violated the rules of this society, and violated their own conscience.When I refused to join them, they smiled and said to me: "Hey! Isn't life just a game?" But they forgot that the game also has rules, and no one can escape.So I decided to use my throat that was not yet hoarse to make my own voice, and I told the leader about it, but I was too naive, my blood hit the iron wall of reality, and it dripped in vain.I, from a famous brain surgeon in China, became a member of the bottom of society.

In this way, I started a personal war.This war is passive, with great disparity in strength, and the smoke of gunpowder cannot be seen.I was forced to fire the first shot in this arduous war because I defended the rules of the game of my life and my principles as a human being.No hospital wanted me, I was unemployed, and I was so disappointed because of all this, it made this war look so ridiculous, like my own self-consolation.Until one day, a university hospital in ×country ×state hired me, and I lived a normal life.

I have always believed that rules are the spiritual pillar of a country and a society, a person's dignity, and a passport to walk in society.Without rules, ugliness will grow everywhere, kindness and love will wither quickly, and people will live blindly and panicked.

My name is Guo Pinzheng. I am a brain surgery expert. I fought a one-man war and lost.

But, I don't regret it!

The above is my confession before leaving.

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The title of the article is novel and unique. Through "one man's war", it makes people understand that "one man's war" is actually a war between beauty and ugliness, good and evil, truth and falsehood.The article criticizes the disadvantages of the times, has profound meanings, and makes people think deeply.

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