College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 70 Symbols of Beijing (2)
With the development of the city, more and more symbols will emerge in Beijing, but I always believe that the courtyard is the most primitive and freshest symbol representing Beijing.

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This is a lyrical work borrowed from the scenery, the scenes are intertwined and evocative.The author outlines a picture of a leisurely and comfortable life for readers with sincere emotions and elegant pen and ink, highlighting the humanistic meaning of courtyards as symbols of Beijing.At the end, the examinees once again chose to move people with emotion, calling for the protection of the simplicity and freshness of the courtyard house, and hinting at the tenacious vitality of the courtyard house.

symbol of beijing

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Please save the symbol of Beijing.

Beijing is a city with a long history. The carvings of the years have left precious symbols in every corner of Beijing, waiting for people to pick them up slowly.But what do people do with this favor?
Think of the square courtyard with blue-gray tiles and ancient rhyme, which embraces the friendship and happiness between neighbors. The courtyard is undoubtedly a symbol of Beijing, but now, how many grays are left at the foot of the imperial city?How much neighborhood warmth is left in the world?Amidst the roar, the courtyard house, a symbol of Beijing, fell to pieces.

Think of the huqin, the flowers on the facial makeup, and the joys and sorrows of thousands of years being performed on a stage.Peking Opera is undoubtedly a symbol of Beijing, but now, how many couplets are linked to the "small world of the stage, big stage of the world"?How many people can detail the classics in the repertoire?Amidst the hustle and bustle, Peking Opera, as a symbol of Beijing, has gone further and further.

Think of the tinkling irons, the shouts of peddlers, and the alleys are full of vitality because of the simple and musical shouts.The hawker's yelling is a symbol of Beijing, but now, how many people are left to sing the song "Sharpening the scissors—grinding the kitchen knife—"?How lonely is it without the yelling candied haws?In the silence, shouting, as a symbol of Beijing, disappeared into the blue sky.

Thinking of the juggling at that bridge, thinking of the calligraphy and painting of Liulichang... I stood at the ruins of the city wall of the Yuan Dynasty and looked out.In the past, there were distant mountains, the setting sun, and a noisy Beijing flowing happily under my feet.But now, the tall Sitong Bridge makes me feel the insignificance of history, and there is also an inexplicable sadness, for those gone, fleeting, symbols of Beijing.

Please save the symbol of Beijing!

When we walk in the prosperous Wangfujing, when we look up at the double helix in Zhongguancun, when we walk up to the Millennium Monument, and when we walk into the Capital Museum, we can feel the pride and pride these new symbols bring to Beijing.But we should not forget that the reason why Beijing becomes Beijing is because of those old symbols that are about to become history, those people, things, and things that serve as the foundation of Beijing with wordless support, old people without wrinkles are sad, and there are no ruins The ruins are weak, and the antiques without dust are pale.Similarly, Beijing without courtyard houses, Peking opera, shouting, juggling on Tianqiao, and Liulichang calligraphy and painting is mediocre and superficial.Before these ancient symbols disappear, when Beijing is still Beijing, I want to shout: Please save the symbols of Beijing!
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The article begins with "Please save the symbol of Beijing", which is concise and clear, and it is deafening.The use of parallel sentences in the penultimate paragraph of the article expounds the importance of protecting the ancient symbols of Beijing from a rational point of view. The article ends with "Please save the symbols of Beijing".

symbol of beijing

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

In the world's cultural coordinates, every city occupies an important position. The elegance of Paris, the modesty of London, and the simplicity of Athens are all talked about by children in those cities.We are the children of Beijing, and the symbols of Beijing are deeply imprinted in our lives - the narrow alleys of the courtyard, the high-pitched Chinese opera, the bricks and tiles in the Forbidden City...

However, with the impact of the tide of globalization, it seems that our symbols are facing the crisis of being diluted and disappearing.How will an open Beijing and an Olympic Beijing draw its own symbols?

Architecture is the colorful and colorful clothes of Beijing, and it is also our most intuitive symbol.I remember that Mr. Liang Sicheng once proposed to protect the old city of Beijing and build a new city next to the old city, but it was not adopted.As a result, in the sound of bulldozers, the courtyards fell one by one, and then overpasses and skyscrapers rose from the ground with such a speed that the world was amazed.However, a writer in the United States wrote: "The same Starbucks, the same glass building, standing on the side of the road in my hometown, but I can't tell whether it is Beijing, Tokyo, or New York..." Perhaps the grand Forbidden City, sporadic The courtyards in Beijing are still guarding the last line of defense in Beijing, but the quaintness of Chang’an Street has long been destroyed by the glare reflected by the glass of the National Center for the Performing Arts. It is conceivable that one day, the last courtyards will collapse to the ground amidst the sound of rumbling bulldozers , and when the Forbidden City is overwhelmed by more "huge" high-rise buildings, the writer's words may come true.In the Chinese-style buildings on Wangfujing Pedestrian Street, in the beautiful "Chinese red" on the base of the "Bird's Nest", I can see Beijing's efforts to protect its symbols, hoping that this effort will not be dispelled by calls for "modernization".

Culture is the root of this towering tree in Beijing, and it is our deeper symbol.Maybe you still remember Zhang Yimou’s Beijing 2004-minute presentation at the closing ceremony of the 8 Athens Olympics, Beijing opera, martial arts, girls playing the pipa in miniskirts... These are indeed from China and from Beijing, but they are more like cultural symbols The stacking is not a kind of calm display, but more like flattery.At that time, discussions on "Where is the culture in Beijing" started in Beijing.Zhongguancun and Financial Street symbolize Beijing's brand-new and modern culture, which is our pride. However, what makes us stand proudly among the world's cities is our unique traditional culture: the atmosphere of Han and Tang Dynasties, the style of Wei and Jin Dynasties, the style of Laozhuang The elegance and elegance of Confucius and Mencius are the cultural symbols of our China; Peking opera, Beijing dialect, and cross talk are unique in Beijing.Hope that in the "People's Olympics" in 2008, Beijing can freely present its own symbols.

Please paint the symbols of our Beijing carefully!Only in this way can we confidently say: Please come to Beijing to taste the soul of China; please go to Beijing to listen to the rhyme of the times!
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The success of this article is the author's vision of cultural inspection and cultural criticism throughout the article.What is even more commendable is that while critically examining and analyzing the cultural status quo in Beijing, the author is able to look at issues dialectically.The language of the article is concise, the citation is appropriate, and the rhythm of the parallelism sentence pattern also increases the expressive force of the article.

symbol of beijing

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

The brilliant fragrance of spring flowers decorates my desolate heart; the luxuriance of summer trees becomes overcast, erasing my gloomy expression; the bleak and desolate autumn wind stirs my fragile heartstrings; the bitter snow in winter clears up my chaotic thoughts.Whenever the seasons change, whenever I see these scenes, I will feel sad and miss my favorite courtyard house.

In my world, the courtyard is the most beautiful, it is a symbol of Beijing, an eternal memory...

When I was five years old, there were songs in my ears, echoing in the courtyard.

"Weave, weave, weave flower baskets, there is a child in the flower basket, and the child's name is Flower Basket..." Under the old pagoda tree in the courtyard, we little girls always like to play this kind of game, and the boys are running around Talking and making noise, holding a toy gun, making shooting sounds from his mouth.Boys, girls, everyone is so happy.As night fell, the whole family set up deck chairs and sat under the tree, and the boys and girls played hide-and-seek. I remember that I always liked to lie behind the vermilion gate of the courtyard, peeking out with my two small eyes.Tired of playing, I sat on the ground and listened to the old stories told by my grandparents. At that time, I always looked at the sky, waiting for the meeting of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, and waiting for the few magpies on the treetops to form a magpie bridge.Looking at it, I entered a sweet dream, and the courtyard in the dream became the home of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl.

When I was ten years old, I heard the sound of reading and writing, echoing in the courtyard.

(End of this chapter)