College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 71 Symbols of Beijing (3)
When I got home from school, I put the car aside and never locked it. A few children gathered at the small stone table and bench in the yard to do their homework and read texts. "Raise your head to look at the bright moon, and lower your head to think of your hometown." Several children raised their heads to look at the small crescent moon rising in the blue sky through the dense leaves, and then lowered their heads to "think of their hometown".Yes, our hometown is this beautiful courtyard.Occasionally some blond-haired and blue-eyed "foreigners" came to the courtyard, and they all lamented the square courtyard, the tall Guohuai, the harmony of the neighbors, and the coolness of the well water, and their eyes showed irrepressible envy .Grandma said that this is a building that cannot be found outside of Beijing, and it is a symbol of Beijing. I said: "I don't understand, why?" If they are the same height, you will understand.” Maybe grandma is right, the courtyard is a symbol of Beijing.

When I was 15 years old, the rumble of bulldozers echoed in the courtyard.

The word "demolition" written in white came to the wall of the courtyard in a big circle. The day the bulldozers came, I cried. I couldn't believe it. The most beautiful, quietest and kindest place I lived in for more than ten years The siheyuan was razed to the ground under the claws of this big guy. With tears in my eyes, I asked my grandma, "Didn't you say that the siheyuan is a symbol of Beijing? The jujube tree is taller than me, but why is the siheyuan gone?" !” Grandma’s eyes were sparkling, and she put her arms around me and said, “My child, you are right. Siheyuan and Guohuai are symbols of Beijing. They will never disappear. Look over there, red, yellow and blue. Fitness Paradise, the big butterfly in Xidan, and Wangfujing Pedestrian Street are also symbols of Beijing, just like grandma and you, old and young!" I nodded, tears still streaming down my face.

Now, whenever I see the surviving courtyards, I always feel uncontrollable kindness and sadness in my heart, and I miss my childhood and my courtyards.But seeing the tall new buildings, I will feel happy and proud of the new symbol of Beijing.

Siheyuan is tea, fresh and quiet; new buildings are coffee, modern and refreshing.I love courtyard houses and new buildings. I love Beijing and its symbols.

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The author intercepted three fragments at the age of five, ten and 15 to form the main body of the article, respectively "I was five years old with songs in my ears", "I was ten years old with the sound of reading books" and "I was 15 years old with the sound of reading , The rumble of bulldozers rings in my ears." Leading up, the idea is ingenious, and the structure of the article is light and flexible.The language is beautiful, concise and intoxicating to read.

wonderful words
The brilliant fragrance of spring flowers decorates my desolate heart; the luxuriance of summer trees becomes overcast, erasing my gloomy expression; the bleak and desolate autumn wind stirs my fragile heartstrings; the bitter snow in winter clears up my chaotic thoughts.

Siheyuan is tea, fresh and quiet; new buildings are coffee, modern and refreshing.

symbol of beijing

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Accumulated thousands of years of cultural heritage, coincidentally, how many literati rushed to you, the ancient capital Beijing, literati took root here, your broad mind warmed them, your affectionate water and soil nurtured them, your loving hands comforted you took them.In their poems, essays, and biographies; in their residences, their souls return; in their veins, there is the breath that you left in the depths of their souls, but they are gone, but you still exist forever , so the traces left by your literati children have become your eternal symbols.

Is it the residence of Sanlihe where Qian Zhongshu once lived?A master Confucian who has learned both Chinese and Western cultures, but does not seek to be famous, "sings his voice, but seeks the voice of his friends". The great Confucianist has passed away, but future generations can still feel the rigorous academic style when looking up to him.Pacing and walking, I seem to see the figure of "Guan Cone Chapter" compiled by myself under a solitary lamp.

Walking through Badaowan where Lu Xun once lived, the wisteria in the courtyard is still in full bloom. Zhang Shuying, the old servant who has been serving the Zhou family all his life, still walks through the courtyard on tiptoe, guarding the former residence of the Zhou family, and going forward to visit. The guests chattered about Mr. Big and Mr. Two.

Walking past the earth altar where Shi Tiesheng wandered when he was lost and lost, the thousand-year-old cypresses are silent, verdant and lush. Looking back, the roses are in full bloom and the butterflies are dancing enthusiastically, just like the eyes of a mother watching affectionately.

Walking through Taoranting in the south of the city, Gao Junyu and Shi Pingmei are sleeping peacefully, the green hills are speechless, and their epitaphs are engraved on the stele: "I am a sword, I am a spark, I wish to live as bright as lightning, and I wish to die as bright as a comet." Xunhu." Tao Ranting was speechless, stagnant for a long time.

Walking through the Ming city walls and the Bell and Drum Towers, which escaped the catastrophe of "removing the four olds" during the Cultural Revolution, one seems to hear the sad words of Mr. Liang Sicheng: "If an ancient civilization in the East loses its own characteristics in architecture, it will greatly hinder the view. It seemed to see Lin Huiyin's sadness and tears when he argued with Beijing Mayor Wu Han.

On the shore of Shichahai, there is Chu Anping, who is "[-] degrees absent-minded, and [-] degrees flustered"; by the Kunming Lake, there is Jin Yuelin talking and laughing; under the moonlight in the lotus pond, there is Zhu Ziqing expressing his feelings.I walked through the narrow alleys, the long alleys, and the deep courtyards, and there was a cultural atmosphere everywhere, and a hidden symbolic culture everywhere.

In the ancient capital of Beijing, you have raised a group of children who love literature. They have grown old and passed away, and they have become orchids that have lost their roots and duckweed.When their souls go away, the first stop they stay in must be in your heart.The rigor, integrity, integrity, and loyalty they left behind, and the cultural atmosphere they left behind, are your eternal and eternal symbols, Beijing!
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The examinee positioned the symbols of Beijing as "traces of literati", which is a unique idea and perspective, unconventional, and one of the highlights of the article.In addition, candidates are also quite ingenious in arranging and tailoring rich themes, showing the student's extensive knowledge and profound cultural accumulation.

classic case
Qian Zhongshu, Lu Xun, Shi Tiesheng, Gao Junyu, Shi Pingmei, Liang Sicheng, Lin Huiyin, Chu Anping, Jin Yuelin, Zhu Ziqing, etc.

symbol of beijing

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Every time I walk on Ping'an Avenue, I can't help feeling a kind of heartache.There are wide roads between the gray walls on both sides, and under the antique eaves, there are a variety of foreign trade commodities for sale.Some people may think that this is protecting Beijing's cultural heritage and preserving Beijing's symbols.In my opinion, it is better not to have such nondescript symbols, but to leave behind real symbols that can tell history to future generations.

Beijing is an ancient cultural capital, so there are naturally many symbolic buildings that can inherit history.Take the courtyard house as an example. In the past, Beijing was full of antique courtyard houses.However, in order to build Beijing into an international city, countless courtyard houses disappeared overnight.Instead, there are high-rise buildings imitating Britain and America.I don't know how Beijing people feel when bulldozers tear down ancient walls. Is it joy or sorrow?Are we happy that Beijing is going international, or are we sad that things passed down from our ancestors are destroyed in our hands?

I think, there must still be some people who are sad, otherwise, why have so many antique buildings been built?It's just that in these antique restaurants and on those antique streets, we no longer taste the fragrance of history, and no longer find traces of history.Because after all, they are not buildings that have really experienced the scouring of time, that really carry the weight of history, and that can really tell something to future generations.Seeing these things that people build out of grief makes me even more sad.

Fortunately, there are still courtyards preserved.However, at the same time as I was relieved, I was overshadowed by a greater disappointment.Because I saw that there are very few people from Beijing who go to visit the courtyard house. However, if I ask any Beijinger on the street for some common sense about the courtyard house, there are very few people who do not respond with "sorry".Seeing these, I just feel like my heart is immersed in ice water all at once.I thought that as long as the real courtyards were left, the symbols of Beijing would not be lost, but I was wrong.Siheyuan carries the unique culture of Beijing.The courtyard house has been left behind, but has the culture really been left behind?Are the symbols of Beijing really not lost?
So I understand why it is difficult for those antique buildings to give people a sense of antiquity, because the people who build and view the buildings have no "ancient" in their hearts, so I understand why many cultural heritages are lost so easily, because too many people do not Realizing their value, I have already discarded them in my heart; so I understand that if we want to truly retain the symbols of Beijing, we must first make every Beijinger aware of the mission of inheriting history on his shoulders.

As a Beijinger, we should try our best to preserve the original buildings handed down from our ancestors, and we should also preserve the cultural symbols that represent thousands of years of history in our hearts!

After all, none of us would like to hear our descendants' Beijing dialect mixed with London accents.

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The deep meaning of the text comes from the profound thoughts of the candidates.The student was "heartbroken" by the disappearance of some historically symbolic buildings in the ancient capital of Beijing, and rejoiced at the few remaining "symbols"... The language of the article is simple, the sentences are plain, the writing is fluent, and the feelings are sincere.Candidates can lead people to reflect with their own thinking, and the spirit is precious.

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