College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 75
Fighting on the chessboard, the Chu River and the Han Dynasty are clearly defined, and I will always think of Chu King Xiang Yu and Han King Liu Bang.Yu Ji's suicide and Wu Zhi's throwing herself into the river made more people fall for Xiang Yu; Liu Bang at the Hongmen Banquet seemed to be just a villain, and few people would be excited when they heard the singing of "the wind rises and the clouds fly" .But the wheel of history has proved that Liu Bang can accomplish a great cause better than Xiang Yu.It was at his suggestion that Zhang Qian led the camel bell to the desert; it was also he who made Wei Qing wave the flag and dance the flying sand in the desert.They are all heroes, and they all have "spirituality", but the meanings of the word "spirituality" are different: the king of Chu is full of spirit, while the king of Han is full of spirit.

On the court of the great Han Dynasty, we have talked about Liu Bang, the king of the Han Dynasty, so we have to talk about Han Xin and Sima Qian.

"Han Xin orders troops, the more the better", is an idiom we are all too familiar with.How high-spirited it is to call soldiers on the battlefield, but we still remember the humiliation he suffered back then.What kind of will and courage allowed him to suppress the anger in his heart and achieve future glory.

"A man can bend and stretch" means spirit, a strong will and spirit.

"The swan song of historians, "Li Sao" without rhyme", this is Mr. Lu Xun's high evaluation of "Historical Records".If Sima Qian lacked a strong will, an open-minded spirit, and the courage to save his life from corruption, we would not be able to judge this rhymeless "Li Sao" today.

We really can't underestimate this spirit.

As a woman, Wu Zetian is definitely our pride.As the only female emperor in history, she created the glory and prosperity of Chengzhen Temple and Qi Kaiyuan, and her spirit is convincing.There are not a few women in power in history, but no one like her opened the beaded curtain and put on a golden dragon robe to dominate the world.Her spirit is not only here, but also because she left a tablet without words, allowing future generations to comment on her own merits and demerits.This female emperor really used the word "spirit" to the extreme.

Throughout the ages, this spirit has always been around us. From Yang Liwei's realization of the Chinese people's dream of flying into the sky in 2003, to Fei Junlong and Nie Haisheng's launch in 2005, the spirit of China has amazed the world.In the lives of ordinary people, there are too many people and things that are full of spirit and move us: Tai Lihua, who climbed from the bottom of life to the peak of art, and Wang Shunyou, a postman who delivered letters by himself and a horse, carried the family with his thin shoulders. Hong Zhanhui, who has a heavy burden and brings up his unrelated younger sister... These ordinary and great people always embody great spirit.

"Taiji gives birth to the two appearances, the two appearances give birth to the four images, and the four images give birth to all things." Just like the spirit, it has created many beautiful things in this world.

score review
The good use of allusions, the famous sentences of famous people at your fingertips, and the naturalness without elaboration are the main successes of this full-score composition.In addition, the language is rich and beautiful. Sentences such as "the wind rises and the clouds fly", "the swan song of the historian, the rhymeless "Li Sao"" and other sentences closely match the content, showing the candidates' profound language skills.

classic case
Mao Zedong, Xiang Yu, Liu Bang, Han Xin, Sima Qian, Yang Liwei, Fei Junlong, Nie Haisheng, Tai Lihua, Wang Shunyou, Hong Zhanhui, etc.

Talk about spirits

(a candidate from Hunan Province)

Looking up at the long river of history, the emergence and disappearance of life are like a drop in the ocean.But what is it, the collision of life drawn like thunder and lightning, hanging rainbows in the sky of life, leaving first-class character and first-class life commentary to future generations?

It is the spirit that travels through time and space and never fades for thousands of years!For many years, "soul" has injected vitality into people's spirit and added depth to people's life with its rich connotation.

Is it the overlord of Western Chu whose soul was buried in Wujiang?Behind you, the water of Wujiang River washes away your stalwart.Recalling your broken boat, recalling your anger, your tears melted into the Wujiang River.So on that bitter and rainy night, you raised the sharp sword in your hand without hesitation, and let Wujiang witness a great life go to loneliness and perish.For you, there are different opinions: If you learn from Goujian's "hard-working people, the heavens live up to it, three thousand Yuejia can swallow Wu" and bear the humiliation, history will be rewritten.But you just waved your sleeves: If you are a man, you should go on the golden horse and the iron horse, and return the horse leather shroud!Thousands of years later, the Wujiang River is still turbulent.Xiang Yu, who refuses to cross the Jiangdong, you know: every wave of the Wujiang River is full of people's devotion and admiration for you.The emperor's chair did not leave a place for you, but you will be engraved in history forever with your spirit of being able to carry a tripod and your will to face death as home, exuding a light like glass for thousands of years.

Is it Tao Yuanming who leisurely saw Nanshan?When you came all the way singing "Returning to Come", the picture of history was so clear at that moment.What about five buckets of rice?The man is clanging, how can he allow the soul to settle into the vanity of the world?Dai Yue's "returning the lotus hoe" is the destination of your aspirations; it is your unyielding character not to bend your waist for five buckets of rice.When the morning dew slides along the leaf tip to the palm, you smile knowingly.This dew melts into your smile and makes the soul so bright.

In those embarrassing times, you chose the so-called leisure.You are just carrying a hoe and standing quietly in the corner of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, but it is enough to eclipse all dignitaries and literati.With your unique interests and personality, you really match the time when the meteors cut the sky.

Compared with these great men, I am but a drop in the ocean.However, I am willing to follow in the footsteps of great men and inherit the "spirit" that belongs to the Chinese.

From the cherry blossoms in March to the hibiscus in May, the days slipped away in an instant, and the dreams in my heart slipped by the pen.In the days of the third year of high school, you can choose to be agitated or calm.But what we should choose is to rise up unrelentingly!The wind, sand and rocks have come, and we still have to face the jungle ahead.We are high-spirited, we are impassioned, and we are desperate, just for the beauty of June that breaks out of the cocoon and becomes a butterfly.

Looking up at the past and the present, I seem to hear a voice roaring from the other side of time and space-this is the call and desire of history for spirit.Because: Only this "spirit" that belongs to China can carry the deep and deep Chinese history that never fades, and can create the straightest backbone of the Chinese people.As a result, the most powerful pulse of the Chinese nation keeps beating.

score review
This article is far-reaching and profound.From a historical point of view, the author cites "Xiang Yu who refused to cross Jiangdong" and "Tao Yuanming who did not bend his waist for five buckets of rice" to demonstrate the "spirit" of the Chinese nation, and calls for "cultivating the straightest backbone of the Chinese people".The vivid and appropriate metaphors, the changeable sentence patterns, and the ingenious use of question and exclamation sentences are also the success of this article.

Talk about spirits

(a candidate from Hunan Province)

"My wife's relationship with each other is a lifelong admiration. Or you can hold her in your arms and talk to each other in a room; or because of what you entrust, you can let go of the waves. Although the choice is different, the calmness is different. When you are happy with what you meet, you will be in it for a while. Self-sufficiency, self-sufficiency, never knowing that old age is coming."

Wang Xizhi's popular exposition should be the most accurate interpretation of the word "motivation" throughout the ages. "Yi" refers to the mind, which refers to a person's aspirations; "Qi", which refers to the spirit, refers to a person's character.It is a universal axiom that it is hard to find a bosom friend; it is also human nature to look for someone who is like you, and to be ecstatic to meet someone who is like you.

Xu Zhimo said: "I will seek my only soul mate in the vast sea of ​​people. If I get it, I am lucky; if I don't, it's my fate, that's all." A person who is straightforward and innocent like Xu Zhimo can be like that at the beginning of the 1000th century. In an era when the attitude towards marriage was still relatively conservative, it was really rare to risk the world's bad opinion, endure countless reprimands and criticisms, resolutely divorce, and find the true love in your heart.And the reason for his divorce was only that he had disagreements with his ex-wife Zhang Youyi and did not share his interests, which was unreasonable in the eyes of people at the time.However, is it really that unreasonable?I firmly believe that finding someone who is congenial to me is the purest and most firm desire in everyone's heart, and it is an inherent spiritual need. More than [-] years of Confucianism have taught people to obey the rituals and eliminate desires, but they have lost the ability to face up to their own hearts.I admire Xu Zhimo, because he respected his desire to seek a confidant and true love, and embarked on an extremely difficult road of searching.The understanding and admiration of the word "spirit" endowed him with courage and strength.

I once wrote to my friends and said: "Friendship is what we desire most at present, and it is also the most cherished thing." The friendship I am talking about is not a momentary excitement of calling for friends, nor is it a short-term companionship at any time. , but the connection between Bole and Zhong Ziqi, and the mutual appreciation between Bole and Maxima. "The friendship between gentlemen is as light as water", true friendship is based on mutual congeniality.Congeniality, in order to understand each other, empathy.Although this kind of friendship is calm and remote, it has a long history.

The desire for congeniality, the joy of being connected, in this regard, friendship and love are the same.

Throughout the ages, there are very few people who have found themselves, and not many people have found true love. From this point of view, I think I am lucky and happy.

Nevertheless, I still recommend that people listen to their inner desires and embark on the road of searching without hesitation.In the search, our understanding of "spirit" will become deeper and wider, and the rewards we will get will be extremely rich.

score review
The author expresses his unique life experience, the discussion fits the meaning of the topic, and the quotations reflect his education.The full text is coherent and natural.The opening quote of "Lanting Collection Preface" does not lose the highlight of the chapter.

Celebrity Quotes
The wife's relationship with each other, I look up to the whole life, or I take it into my arms, and talk in the same room; or because of the entrustment, I let go of the waves.Although there are many choices, calmness is different.When he is happy with what he meets, he gets it for himself for a while, and he is happy and self-sufficient, never knowing that old age is coming. ——Wang Xizhi's "Lanting Collection Preface"

I will seek my only soul mate in the vast sea of ​​people.If I get it, I am lucky; if I don’t, it’s my fate, that’s all. ——Xu Zhimo
Talk about spirits

(a candidate from Hunan Province)

Spirituality is the natural attribute of honest people!Madam was born between heaven and earth, got the essence of the sun and the moon, the spirit of heaven and earth, conceived in ten months, and once she gave birth, she became the spirit of all things from then on, how could she be careless?Spirituality is the emotion of real people.People in the world range from emperors and generals to civilians in white clothes; the wise are like saints and great sages, and the foolish are like peasants in the wilderness. Who has no spirit?Gai is born in this world, how can it be smooth sailing and everything goes well, who has no setbacks?Don't you see that Han Xin has the talent to help the world, sweep away the ambitions of the four directions, and was humiliated by his crotch;Therefore, there are many twists and turns in life, and it is difficult to have a smooth road.However, if a person encounters setbacks or encounters violence, how should he deal with it?When a man is angry, he may bleed for five steps, or fall to the ground with his head, which is really not advisable.If in the past, Han Xin couldn't bear the humiliation for a while, drew his swords and faced each other, and died, how would he be able to achieve his future achievements?It is not a pity to lose a scoundrel in the world, but losing Han Xin because of his spirit will only make future generations sigh!When the prince is angry, he bleeds and leaves the pestle, and the life is ruined, which is not advisable.In the past, Wu Sangui "became a confidante in anger at the crown", but he led the Qing soldiers into the customs and killed thousands of miles. First in Yangzhou, then in Jiading, the corpse was on the pillow, even if he calmed down his own spirit, it is hard to wash away his infamy through the ages!It's normal to be emotional, but it's not enough.

Anyone who wants to achieve a great cause must be tenacious and forbearing, able to endure what ordinary people cannot bear, and use his own mind to control his will.This is what Su Zi said, "Don't panic when you suddenly face it, and don't get angry when it happens for no reason."This statement is light and simple, but it is really difficult to do it, and the ancient heroes can't help being impulsive.Zhang Zifang, the hero of the great Han Dynasty, once wanted to assassinate the Emperor Qin out of a moment of anger when he was young. He survived and was taught by Huang Shigong.Xiang Yu is also an outstanding man, otherwise he would be called lonely in the south, and the princes would not dare to look up!However, Xiang Yu didn't know that a ruler should not act on his will, but should balance his plans and think carefully, and rely on the courage of ordinary people to show off his momentary arrogance, and compete with the King of Han for the world. Sincerely "things of a kind flock together"!On the other hand, Liu Bang, the king of the Han Dynasty, could be a corporal, treat others leniently, accept loyal words and not act in a low spirit, so it is no wonder that Xiang Yu's defeat is complete after all the virtuous people have arrived? !Although Xiang Yu has won consecutive battles and is invincible with his single-handed spirit, his single-handed spirit is limited. As for the chasm, he has already become "a man whose strength is at the end of his strength and cannot penetrate Lu Jin"!Xiang Yu sits on the world and loses to the King of Han, Wujiang slays himself and says that the sky wants to kill me, but he really doesn't know that he is defeated by himself and uses his own will!The ancients said: "Small intolerance will lead to chaos and big plans." Sun Tzu said: "If you are angry and make random plans, you will fail." These are all reasonable words!Therefore, those who are ambitious should cultivate their own body to control their own spirit, and only then can they succeed.

In today's world, there are also many people who are arrogant.Ma Jiajue killed his classmate because of a moment of anger, and ruined his bright future. It is really sad and deplorable!This kind of people can confront each other with swords and sticks if they disagree with each other in a few words, thinking that this kind of chivalrous demeanor will make everyone laugh!As everyone knows, there is no one who draws his sword for no reason and strikes without a reason.Can An Ke be stingy and forget his life?A great chivalrous man is for the country and the people, for the Dao and righteousness, and will never act recklessly for his own will.This kind of people who are arrogant and falsely called chivalrous people should teach them with righteous words.

From this point of view, in life, there are many worries, and those who are not good at planning cannot overcome them; if you want to achieve a great cause, there are many dangers and obstacles, and only those with ambition and wisdom can achieve it!It is very valuable for a person to have spirit. It is normal for us to be young and vigorous.However, the spirit must be carefully controlled. If you use your spirit to act, you will make a big mistake, and it will be too late to regret!
Those who are motivated should cherish it, be cautious, and make good use of it.

score review
This article is a rather majestic article written in the ancient vernacular written language of "the text is not very profound and the words are not very vulgar".Candidates positioned "motivation" as "emotion" in their writing, with clear thinking and penetrating style; they cite examples and have clear views, which fully demonstrate the candidates' literary and historical knowledge and accumulation of understanding.

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