College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 77 Vision (2)
So in my vision of life, maturity no longer means the increase of age in the ID card, and indifference is no longer the result of deliberate pursuit.Let others take a step when walking, reach out to help others when they are in trouble, and never forget to send care and blessings to friends when competition is fierce... Maturity is so simple, and it is so persevering. What is indifferent is the desire for fame and wealth, and what is gained is people. True love in the world!
Zhuge Liang said in the "Book of Commandments": "If you are not indifferent, you will not be able to show your ambitions, and if you are not peaceful, you will not be able to reach far."If life is like this, it can be extremely mature and indifferent, and the true nature of life is also contained in this!

May my little vision of life always be in my heart.

score review
This article can be said to be unique in conception.Candidates start from the ordinary environment, reminiscing about their ordinary school career and immature mental journey of dreaming of perfection, interspersed with the influence of the great poet Su Dongpo on their growth in life, and finally it will be a matter of course, and finally confess what is the maturity in the vision of life—— dull.

wonderful words
Those who share the same interests will have a tacit understanding even if they are thousands of miles apart;

Celebrity Quotes
Sitting on the ground and traveling [-] miles a day, surveying the sky and looking at a thousand rivers in the distance. ——Mao Zedong
There is no ambition without indifference, and no far-reaching without tranquility. ——Zhuge Liang
愿景
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

Last year in this door today, the face of peach blossoms in red.

The human face does not know where to go, Peach Blossom still laughs spring breeze.

--Inscription

Daiyu, do you know?Whenever I close my eyes, a scene will appear in my mind, and I will think of your death.As a result, my heart was full of haze, and I lost all vision.

The setting sun is like blood, and the autumn wind is bleak.Inside the peach blossom curtain, what you are facing is the thin figure in the rhombic mirror, what you are facing is the dim screen wall, what you are facing is the screen painted with autumn scenery, and what you are facing is the carved railings and jade brickwork under the afterglow.So, at this time, are you also thinking about something, and do you also have your own vision?

I think there are.However, your vision is like falling flowers in front of you, dancing in the wind, dancing the most beautiful dance, but they are about to fall after all! "Flowers wither and flowers fly all over the sky, who will pity when the red disappears and the fragrance is gone?... The person who buried the flowers today laughs like a fool, who will be buried in the next year?..." Singing "The Song of Burying Flowers", you use a kit to collect fallen flowers , Let them be "clean in nature and clean in quality". When you bury the fallen flowers with the pure land, you also bury your beautiful vision in the fragrant hill at the end of the sky.

You have visions, they're just dead, aren't they?You cannot prevent their death, not even your death.You are an orchid in an empty valley, you do not belong to the alleys of Huaiyang, nor do you belong to the deep courtyard of the Yan Yushi in Jinling, nor do you belong to the Xiaoxiang Pavilion where the wind and dew are cold, you only belong to the Sansheng Stone That perfect world.Facing the secular soil and dirty river water, you will not be acclimatized!Then, is it not inevitable that you and your vision will wither and wither?

Your tears fell from your cheeks and fell on the fiery red Xue Tao paper, turning into endless poetry.In your poems, your yearning for love, life and all good things flow, and your vision with a touch of sadness flows.

Now, I finally understand, you have the most beautiful vision in this world!I can't have a vision, otherwise, it's just a misinterpretation of you!If we are good friends, you must not allow me to do this, right?

right!I will let the tears of struggle soak my buds, let the blood rain of sacrifice fill my body, pursue all good things, realize my and your unfinished vision, and turn it into an eternal fragrance in the long river of history!Even if one day, I have turned into a ball of spring mud, I have realized my vision, and the fragrance I once exuded will fill every corner of the world!
I closed my eyes again.I saw your weak willow and Fufeng's figure, and I saw your windy and misty temples.This time, you smiled—a smile like a flower.

score review
This is a lyrical prose. The full text pays attention to the succession and reflection, and the writing is beautiful, showing the candidate's high literary quality.The inscription at the beginning of the chapter uses the Qijue of Cui Hu, a poet of the Tang Dynasty, which not only adds charm to the article, but also has a certain predictive effect, which can be described as ingenious.

愿景
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

Desires have been tempered into goals; pursuits have been tempered into ideals; longings have been tempered into beliefs.Ten years of sharpening a sword is tempering good steel into a sharp edge, and waiting once in ten years is tempering vision into belief.

Vision is a solid long road, but it has endured a long journey to make footprints; vision is a towering tree, but it has withstood the baptism of wind and rain and cultivated from seedlings.

A vision of life without suffering, without apparent repetition, without compression.In fact, I enjoy the confusion in the cradle with my eyes closed, and I am dazed in the arena with my eyes open.

The vision of the years is not suffering, it looks relaxed and free, and the clouds are rolling and the clouds are relaxing.In reality it was empty and boring, not only dull but almost lonely.

Get rid of the narrow inferiority complex and self-pity, make the vision broad and magnanimous in the kindness of caring for others, and show the vision open-minded and calm without being understood by others.

Extend the tentacles of thinking to the depths of confusion, the connotation of thinking makes the vision no longer thin but full of depth, the cause of thinking goes through the pain of blind spots, and the body of thinking makes the vision no longer shrink but thick and broad.

With a vision in his chest and a pursuit in his eyes, the romantic young man who scolded Fang Qiu has a stalwart physique, lofty aspirations, and steady steps.Let the sunshine embrace the blooming heart flower, be happy and worry-free despite hard work and poverty, and be fulfilled despite being tired and busy.

There will always be a lot of regretless faces in life, and you understand intellectually that "suffering is a fortune in life", but when you fall into adversity, struggle and helpless, and the suffering is like a giant strangling your throat, your belief, your tenacity Relying solely on a sliver of spiritual purpose can make you feel like there is no limit to the sea of ​​suffering. "A good man comes from hell", don't be afraid of wind, food, sleeping in the open, loneliness and threats, and scars all over.The fire of vision is burning, and it interprets the "suffering theory" in this way: When you overcome suffering, it is your wealth, and when suffering overcomes you, it is your humiliation.

The most important thing for a dancer with a vision is self-awareness. For 1 minute on stage, he has to practice ten years of hard work off stage for joy.If it wasn't for keeping fists in hand, songs in tune, and sweating all the time, it would be impossible to stand firm on the stage.

A strong person with a vision is long-lasting. Not only must he find a way to do a good thing, but more importantly, he must work hard to do good things and not do bad things throughout his life.Keep people's mind up to the grade, and make people's cultivation last to the realm.

A wise man with a vision depends on his perception. If he fails, he can learn lessons from it, and if he succeeds, he can perceive vigilance from it.A vision blueprint draws a sobriety and wisdom.

To change my own world, the vision gave me the motivation to pursue; to enter the world of tomorrow, the vision gave me colorful wings; to surpass the world of life, the vision gave me holy baptism.

score review
The "vision" is interpreted throughout the article, with rich images, especially the positive and negative analysis of "suffering is wealth" has a more individual understanding.In addition, the quotations in the article are natural and appropriate, and the expression of thoughts and the embodiment of the theme emerge spontaneously.The extremely powerful language is also quite interesting.

愿景
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

Willing to hold the hand of waiting and enjoy the wonderful scenery together.

—— Self encouragement

In autumn, the leaves quietly change into golden dresses, and when a gust of autumn wind blows, the leaves quietly leave the branches that once sang, and float down to the ground leisurely, so quiet and calm.Because they know that they planted their lives in the earth in order to wait for the spring breeze to blow through in the second year-this is a natural yearning scene.

Spring goes and spring comes, you need to wait; flowers bloom and wither, you need to wait; the tide ebbs and flows, you also need to wait.Nature is like this, let alone people?
When we were children, we were waiting to go to school; when we were teenagers, we were waiting to grow up; when we were out of school, we were waiting for success; as adults, we were waiting for love—this is the pursuit of life.

Willing to come from the heart, the scene needs human design.The colors of life are rich and varied.

Waiting also requires courage. The road of waiting, whether long or short, is not smooth sailing, and it is full of thorns and forks.Walking on such a road, you must have a spirit of "I fell down for the hundredth time and got up for the hundred and first time" in order to reach the other side of success.

Waiting also requires hard work, and success is often elusive.While waiting, striving for success is also essential.Opportunities will not wait for those who are not prepared, and success will not belong to those who have not struggled.Success is the result of waiting and the crystallization of struggle.So, work hard!Perhaps the next stop waiting is dazzling success.

Waiting is a kind of enjoyment. In the process of waiting, you will taste the ups and downs of life.While enjoying the rainbow, you will also enjoy the wind and rain.Only in this way can this trip be worthwhile, and this trip is worthwhile.

Waiting is sometimes a kind of helplessness.Recently, people are telling each other that the new cultural market in Balitai will disappear around Christmas this year.Although it does not have the prosperity of Jin Street, the nobility of Fifth Avenue, and the simplicity of Ancient Culture Street, it is my favorite place to go during my lunch break in the third year of junior high school. There are traces of my youth there, and now it will disappear. I can't do anything about it, all I can do is wait, wait for it to disappear.well!Helpless waiting.It turns out that when people face things that they cannot control, let alone change, all they can do is wait.

Wish is yearning, wish is expectation, wish is a kind of eternal hope.Waiting is actually a kind of hope.We have not yet reached the point where we are dying, and there are still many things we can do and many things to wait for.You can also change your current situation and make your life as perfect as possible.

Although some people say "time does not wait for me", although some people say "1 years is too long, just seize the day and night", but some things cannot be rushed, and we must wait with a normal heart.Because the impetuous beauty can only be a flower in the mirror of the moon in the water.

Waiting is a belief; waiting is an attitude; waiting is a pursuit; waiting is also a choice.

Choosing to wait will make us more mature; choosing to wait will make us stronger; choosing to wait will make us richer.

I am willing to hold the hand of waiting and enjoy the wonderful scenery together!

score review
The language of this article is simple and the discussion is calm.When conceiving, candidates turn "vision" into "waiting", turn difficult into easy, flat into strange, and have bright views.In addition, the author is good at turning long sentences into short ones, which makes the whole article's sentence pattern uneven, making it fluent and pleasant to read.

愿景
(Candidate No. [-] in Tianjin)

No war, I held up the anti-war sign, a bullet pierced my forehead, I fell down, but my sign was still standing.

It will never fall, that is my vision: I want the world to be free from war.

I am a reporter, and the battle has just started. I came to this strange land with a video camera. In order to obtain first-hand information about the news, I braved the hail of bullets and went to and from various cities, shuttling through the streets and alleys.

These short three months let me know what a hell on earth is.

Here, people don’t have enough to eat and don’t wear warm clothes; here, people have no source of drinking water and can only rely on rainwater to live; here, people bleed every day; here, people die every day; Familiar faces disappear around me; here, every day, there are familiar smiles drifting away with the wind; here, my eyes and lens make me feel the cruelty of war, and at the same time, I feel more strongly in my heart How nice it would be if there were no wars!

Going through war is like a cleansing of the soul.

But I was shocked when I followed people down the street with a camera.With all kinds of "weapons" in their hands, people took to the streets to demonstrate against the invaders. There were old people, women, and children. In their eyes, I couldn't see the sadness of losing a loved one. Seeing the fear brought to them by the war, there was only a trace of determination, bravery, and anger in their eyes. I was shocked by this nation.How much I hope there is no war, how powerful this nation will be, and at the same time, I firmly believe that it will become stronger sooner or later, because this nation will not be defeated.

I know that I have not left. As I am dying, I recall the journey I have gone through in the past three months and recall the history.

In the thousands of years of human history, there have been no wars for only 400 years, and peace has only allowed mankind to enjoy happiness for 400 years, but the shadow of war has been dispelled. Can't we learn a lesson?After two world wars, Europe suffered heavy losses and the European people were miserable; after the Iran-Iraq war, it caused chaos in the Arab world, the people of the Middle East fell into dire straits, and the originally beautiful and rich land was riddled with holes. .It is greed and selfish desires that devour people's hearts, start a war, realize it, let love help you, put down the butcher knife, and become a Buddha immediately.

There was a sharp pain in my head, and I knew that the god of death was waving to me. I tried my best to say a word, but before I could speak, the last second of my life flew away.

At the moment when I was drifting into the distance, I seemed to feel that people heard the cry in my heart. My heart told them, and then I used their heart to tell the whole world: We don't want war.

score review
Candidates start clearly and express their own vision: I hope that the earth we live in will be free of war.In order to better express the theme of the article, the author creates a story scenario through delicate conception, and chooses a very unique identity perspective-a war reporter.Unique perspective and ingenious conception are the secrets of the success of this article.

(End of this chapter)