College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 82 Saying "An" (1)
(2005 Beijing volume)

composition test questions
Composition with the title "Say 'An'". The word "an" contains the meanings of "stable", "safe", "tranquility", "easy" and "settled in...".It is required to choose an angle by yourself and write an argumentative essay, the number of words: no less than 800 words.

Question Analysis
Following the 2004 Beijing composition topic with "tolerance" as the topic, the 2005 Beijing college entrance examination composition took "Speaking of 'An'" as the topic proposition composition.Both "tolerance" and "saying 'an'" were hot topics in the society at that time. Such composition propositions are full of sense of the times, and candidates have something to say, which can play a very good guiding role. The 2005 college entrance examination composition "Say 'An'" covers a wider range than the 2004 "Tolerance" and gives candidates more room for thinking. Candidates can pursue peace based on the information in their lives, society and the world as a whole Write about the social environment. The composition of the college entrance examination in 2005 also reflected the transformation from knowledge conception to ability conception in the reform of the new teaching materials. The conception was more novel and opened up the thinking.In terms of subject matter, compared with the Beijing college entrance examination composition questions from 2002 to 2004, the 2005 college entrance examination composition test questions clearly require that the subject matter of the composition be an argumentative essay, which requires special attention when examining the questions. "Say 'an'", the focus is on "speaking", and it is up to the examinee to decide what to say, because "an" has extremely rich connotations, and you can choose one connotation to say, or you can choose several connotations to "speak miscellaneously". The word "Shuo" embodies the restrictive feature of the proposition of the article, that is, it must be reasoned and discussed; "An" embodies the open feature of the proposition.In short, it is not difficult to write this question well, but it is not easy to come up with new ones.The key to writing this question well is to review the question.

Writing Ideas Tips
When formulating ideas on this topic, the safest way is to use the word "an" to form words.Try to dig out new angles, if you really can't find a better one, you can use the words provided in the stem. "An" represents inner peace, but also has a certain negative meaning. The tester hopes that candidates can dig out positive meanings from this "negative". "An" involves a wide range. Candidates can start from the aspects of society, life, environment, psychology, history, reality, etc., as well as cultural traditions, human pursuits, and ideological realms.Specifically, you can write about the importance of stability to the long-term stability of the country, you can also write about "born in sorrow, die in peace", or you can write about the comfort and tranquility of the soul, etc.As long as it makes sense, the idea has its own characteristics.

Full score sample essay
say "an"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

As the saying goes: "The weather is not as good as the right place, and the right place is not as good as the harmony of people", and the key to "harmony" lies in "safety". "An" means stability and harmony.The safety of the family means that the households receive thousands of auspiciousness; the safety of the country means the prosperity of the country; the safety of the universe means the harmony of all things.The one who is safe is the foundation of harmony.Therefore, it is said: peace is the foundation, and peace is the most precious.

Throughout the past and present, at home and abroad, where the country is prosperous and the people are at peace, there is no goodness to be uneasy.In ancient times, the Western Han Dynasty rested and recuperated to comfort the people and achieved "the rule of culture and scenery"; Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty was sympathetic to the people's sentiments, lightened the corvee and paid less taxes, and the "enlightened rule" made the society stable, and then achieved the "prosperous age of Zhenguan"; , reuse virtuous ministers, rule the world stably, and achieve the glory of Kaiyuan; Kangqian made great efforts to govern, quelled rebellion, maintained unity, social stability and harmony, and achieved Kangqian scenery.During the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, wars broke out year after year, the people were in dire straits, and the hearts of the people were scattered; the three kingdoms stood together and fought endlessly, and the people suffered.This is the so-called: Chaos is the source of disaster.

Past experience guide for the future.In ancient times, separation and reunion resulted in the destruction of the country and family, and the separation of wives and children.Taking this as a mirror, Taiwan has been separated from the mainland for a long time, and the people of the country pay attention to it. However, the Taiwan independence elements are determined to go their own way, and the acts of Taiwan independence continue unabated. This will not only affect the unity of the motherland, but also affect the peace of the Asia-Pacific region, and even the stability of the world. The Chinese government Standing at the height of benefiting the people and the world, proposing the policy of one country, two systems, and resolving the Taiwan issue in a peaceful manner, this is an unprecedented feat.The prosperity and stability of Hong Kong and Macao after the return of the motherland fully prove the correctness of the policy of one country, two systems, and peace and stability are the general trend.Not long ago, the Kuomintang Chairman Lien Chan’s trip to the mainland contributed to the reunification of the motherland and social stability and development. The prosperity of the motherland requires stability, and social stability requires reunification. The best way to complete the great cause of reunification is to negotiate peacefully and create a brilliant future together!

Whether it is the unification of the motherland, the prosperity of the country, or the happiness and well-being of the people, it is inseparable from a stable social environment.Therefore, building a harmonious society is in the ascendant.The Party Central Committee put forward the policy of building a harmonious society from a historical perspective, and the people of the country were greatly encouraged; the implementation of the concept of scientific and technological development has won the hearts of the people.

The ancients said: When the government is in order and the people are in harmony, a hundred wastes will flourish.China should take "security" as its development background, and everything is based on peace, and stability is the most important thing.Wholeheartedly developing the economy and building a well-off society in an all-round way is in full swing, and stability and harmony have become increasingly important.Only with stability can China develop better and sing loudly on the road ahead.

Peace is the most important thing, and stability is the most important thing.

score review
It is really rare for this student to be able to lay out the full text at the height of history, from a high position.The focus of the article is on the word "An Ding". At the beginning of the article, the definition of "An" is explained; Dialectically analyze "security" and "chaos" from two sides; again, the author starts from the great cause of the reunification of the motherland, and demonstrates the great role that "security" will play in the completion of the great cause of the reunification of the motherland; then, the author demonstrates the importance of stability based on the current national conditions. sex; in the final conclusion, point out the main purpose - harmony is the most important thing, and stability is the most important thing.The whole article has clear context, complete structure, fluent and natural language, and covers a wide range of areas, which shows that the author's writing is quite deep.

say "an"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

The blue sea, the golden sandy beach, in the June morning breeze in France, a group of octogenarians in military uniform staggered forward, the clear sun shone on their faces, and the medals on their chests were shining brightly.

The military band played the welcome song, the salute was roaring, and the young officers and soldiers raised their right arms solemnly-the old people knew that this was a salute to them!The Queen stood up, the President stood up, people of all ages, colors and genders from all over the world also stood up and cheered in different languages ​​- the old people knew this was paying tribute to them!
This is Normandy - these octogenarians are all veterans of the land here 60 years ago.Many of their comrades are buried here, and they themselves were ready to spill their blood on the beach.The reason why they revisit their old place today is to receive the cheers and enjoy the glory.President Chirac awarded them the Medal of Honor again, and said in a speech that France and Europe are eternally grateful to them!

"We are not afraid of death, we are afraid of being forgotten." This is the state of mind of veterans.

The celebration in Normandy also attracted the attention of Chinese thousands of miles away, and some media began to look for Chinese who had participated in the landing operations.This news made me feel an indescribably complicated feeling: the Chinese who fought in Normandy deserve the greatest attention, but those veterans who fought with the Japanese invaders on our own land, don’t they? Should we also receive the same attention?Should we also choose an appropriate day, let them receive our cheers and compliments with medals on their chests, and then solemnly tell them: China and Asia are eternally grateful to them?

Perhaps, only in this way can the Chinese veterans feel at ease!

However, this idea may be too extravagant for Chinese veterans.In fact, the stories of some Chinese veterans sound poignant. Yang Yunfeng, a veteran who experienced the Marco Polo Bridge Incident, could only beg for a living. My grandfather was a veteran who participated in the War to Resist US Aggression and Aid Korea. There was no commemorative event for the [-]th anniversary of his victory in the war against US Aid Korea. , No matter what, he doesn't understand, when it comes to those old comrades who sacrificed, he can't stop crying...

The veterans exchanged their blood and lives for our peace, but we cannot let them live in peace. Are you at ease?
Are we a nation that doesn't know how to be grateful?It does not seem.The grace of dripping water should be reciprocated by the spring, isn't it our motto?Why are we not grateful to those veterans who gave their youth and even their lives for the independence of the country and the freedom and happiness of the people?

A nation that does not know how to be grateful will have no future.There are not many veterans left, and they are still dying. This year marks the [-]th anniversary of the victory of the Anti-Japanese War. I hope we can also see a grand celebration, and we can hear someone say "We are eternally grateful" to them, and be able to After all this, it’s comforting to hear the founders say, “I feel like it was all worth it, and I’m relieved.” If we miss this moment, we may never have another chance!By then, will we feel at ease?
score review
Through the Normandy celebration, the student raised thoughts about the situation of Chinese veterans, and the stark contrast between the situation of Chinese veterans and European veterans. It is poignant to read and shows the candidates' strong national self-esteem and sense of responsibility.The theme of the article is clear, to the point, and the discussion is well-founded. The candidate's love for Chinese veterans is vividly written on the paper, which is thought-provoking.

say "an"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

There is a saying in ancient times: self-cultivation, family harmony, state governance, and world peace.It can be seen that people in ancient times put self-cultivation first.I also think: To settle down in one's family, one's country, and one's state, one must first be at ease.

Those with ambition must first feel at ease.A person with lofty ideals must first have a heart.Determine the direction of the heart, and the ambition will break through all obstacles like a bamboo, and achieve a career.Zhuge Kongming's loyalty is well known to everyone in the world. The phrase "dedicate yourself to death" illuminates the name "Fulong". Kongming put his heart on the unification of the Han Dynasty. People will always surround him with good stories.Marshal Yue Fei put his heart at ease in the Song Dynasty, and the song "Man Jianghong" sang the heroic spirit of "serving the country with loyalty and loyalty". Those who are ambitious have peace of mind and their hearts are like a rock.

Those who rule must first feel at ease.In Bing Xin's poem, it is written: "If the heart is as clear as ice, the sky will not be shocked." A person who governs a country must first be able to prevent the sky from falling.When the heart is safe and stable, the country is safe and stable.The story of Goujian's national humiliation proved once again that the ruler is at ease.I remember reading the phrase "never forget, never recite" from a book, which is appropriate here. The so-called national enmity should not be forgotten, and the sky should not be shocked; family shame should not be remembered, and the heart should be as clear as ice.Rulers, rest assured.The heart is as clear as ice.

A wise man must first be at ease.Once doubted, once confused, put your heart at ease, you are a wise man.To be able to be flattered or humiliated, let the flowers bloom in front of the court, to stay unintentional, to see the clouds in the sky, this is the person who puts his heart at ease, and dies of depression when he fails in the first day. Maybe he is a poet or a writer. family; people who may be well-educated and wealthy, but who don’t know how to laugh at the situation and feel at ease are definitely not wise.A wise man is chic, humorous, serious, joking, brave, and reassuring.Wise men, rest assured.Heart than mirror lake.

Those who know must be at ease first.The Buddha said: "Crossing people and crossing themselves." Perhaps this is the highest state of peace of mind.Competing with others for fame and fortune is not as peaceful and relaxed as staying humble and returning to the garden; comparing power and strength with others is not as open-minded and clear as crossing others.When the water is clear, there will be no fish, and when people observe it, there will be no disciples.Only those who know how to be magnanimous, know how not to see the world too clearly, know how to look at gains and losses with a smile, and look at honors and disgraces indifferently are the ones who know and know how to look at gains and losses with a smile.Those who know, rest assured.The heart is like the sky.

An family, an country, and people in Anbang must first feel at ease.A person whose heart is as peaceful as a rock is a "spirited person"; a person who makes his heart as clear as ice is a "governor"; a person who compares his heart to a mirror lake must be a "wise man"; a person who makes his heart look like a sky is a "knower" .

Anxin, Anjia, Anbang, and then the world.

score review
The beginning of the article starts with "self-cultivation", leading to the center of this article: "To settle down in one's home, country, and state, you must first feel at ease." , must first be at ease", "those who know, must first be at ease" four sub-arguments, reasoning layer by layer.In each paragraph of reasoning, it also expresses the "four states of peace of mind" of "heart as rock", "heart as clear as ice", "heart as mirror lake", and "heart as sky".The article integrates emotion and reason, opens and closes properly, retracts freely, and the language is quite charming.

say "an"

(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

Ancient man-made characters, metaphorical meaning.What is "An"?There is a woman in the room is "an".

Women, who are as soft as water, had such a humble status in ancient times. They closed their doors all day long, sitting at home, weaving and spinning, or carrying water starch clothes. There are women at home, and the room is safe.Women should also be the backbone of the family.

But how many rumors slander women in this world!What "beautiful women are troublesome", what "beautiful women are unlucky", it seems that it is so reasonable and reasonable for all the evils to be placed on women.

King Zhou is lewd and promiscuous, and the people are in dire straits, but why does he always say that Daji is the culprit of the country's disaster?

Tang Xuanzong's obsession seems to be related to Yang Yuhuan's obsession and becomes easier to forgive, so why sing a "Song of Everlasting Regret" to praise him for eternity?Wu Sangui's "becoming a beauty in a rage" made his status as a love saint surpass that of a "rebellious official and thief", but why did Chen Yuanyuan become a "disaster" and was despised by others?Lin Juemin's heroism comes from his misfortune towards his wife. A piece of "Letter with Wife" has made him a glorious life and a good reputation through the ages, but who would have thought of the miserable and confusing second half of his poor wife like a flower?
Women make the country uneasy?Women make the family restless?
(End of this chapter)