College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 91 Turning point (1)
(2003 Beijing volume)

composition test questions
There are often memorable turns, both in personal history and in social life.In this regard, you will definitely feel, think, and understand.

Requirements: Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "Turning".In addition to poetry, style is not limited.

Question Analysis
In 2003, the composition questions of the Beijing college entrance examination changed from the mainstream "topic" composition form in the past, and adopted the "propositional composition" form.Candidates can write rich personal experience, or broad social life, but must highlight the "turning point".It is necessary to focus on "turning" to organize materials, sort out ideas, design levels, fully express one's personalized understanding of "turning", or demonstrate the unique "turning" process. "Turning" is an abstract concept, and it is not possible to describe the "virtual" as imaginary, but to make it concrete, visualized and organized.It is possible to show a process—enlarge the “period” of the turning point—and thus constitute an article with narrative as the main expression; it is possible to use specific examples and profound principles to analyze the causes, conditions, results, significance, and dialectics of the “turning point” In this way, it constitutes an article with discussion as the main method; it can also list life, society and other phenomena to express emotion and write understanding, so it becomes an article with mixed narrative and discussion.In short, the specific process, the description of the image, the expression of personality and the deep understanding are the necessary conditions for the success of the composition.

Writing Ideas Tips
To write this proposition well, the original situation of things is the foreshadowing, and it must be written clearly. Both the turning point and the result are the key. The turning point must be written convincingly, and the result must be able to form a sharp contrast.This is the key to writing this proposition well.Moreover, when reviewing questions, candidates should dig out profound connotations from seemingly trivial things.Many major events have taken place in social life, both international and domestic, some of which are turning points. How to understand the significance of these turning points, how to understand the historical role of these turning points, etc., candidates can use this as an entry point.In addition, you can also write about the impact of certain personal life turning points on the individual, your understanding of these events, and so on.

Full score sample essay
Turning point
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

People are constantly developing.The path of development is chosen by ourselves.What do you do when you are at the end of the road?Do you despair and cry, or try for a twist?
There is a poem to prove it: "The mountains and rivers are full of doubts and there is no way, and the willows are dark and the flowers are bright and there is another village." When the road comes to an end, you might as well make a proper circle, maybe you can welcome the freedom and freedom of sitting and watching the clouds rise.

The same is true for viewing the scenery, and the same for dealing with people.

In the Han Dynasty, Ban Chao was just learning articles and was very depressed.One day, he threw up his pen and shouted: "A man should hold a three-foot sword and make great achievements. How can he be so poor and old-fashioned?" So he joined the army, and then went to the Western Regions to operate for dozens of years. go down in history.Ban Chao's move not only left behind the allusion of "throwing a pen into the army", but also let us see the necessity of a timely turning point and the bright future of the road after a clear choice.If Ban Chao has been poor in articles, he will end up as a petty official with a knife and a pen, unknown to everyone, for people to come and drink.What's more, with Ban Gu's peak in front, how can there be a way for the article to go all the way?This pen was cast well, and it cast a famous guardian envoy of the Western Regions, who took over the power of the Western Regions.Ban Chao is very fortunate, and the Western Regions are very fortunate!

The ancients were like this, and today's people are also unambiguous.A magazine once read: A certain giant businessman was fond of literature when he was young.Under family pressure, he studied economics and embarked on a business career.After decades of struggling and earning a career, the literary dream in my heart has not disappeared.When he was exhausted from the business war, he suddenly quit the business world and joined a newspaper as an editor, fulfilling his old dream.Now it is fun to play with words and ink.

Whether you invest in a pen and join the army, or abandon business and pursue literature, the turning point is a key point. Only when there is a turning point can there be a new breakthrough in career and new development in the individual.Turning is not the same as escaping.To escape is to be overwhelmed, jump out of life, and find a material or spiritual paradise to "hide" yourself.This is an act of birth.The turning point is: to seek conditions that are more conducive to self-development, to find a stage that is more convenient for oneself to perform, is to make a new career in a new environment, which is an act of joining the WTO.Once born, once entered the world, how can they be considered equally?
Individuals need to change, so should the country.Since the reform and opening up, we have turned the corner in our groping again and again, pushing the giant ship of China onto the correct channel.However, it is not all smooth sailing ahead, there are hidden reefs and scenery, which requires us to make timely changes, big or small, in accordance with the changes of the times. Only in this way can we ensure that we reach the other shore of victory.

Ruan Ji, a former man, wept bitterly when he was poor.We can't blame him because he was in such a dark, high-pressure dynasty.As the envoys of the era of "facing the sea, the spring is warm and the flowers are blooming", we certainly will not follow his cry of desperation.Of course you can do it if you want to do it, and if you don't, you will resolutely switch.Dare to fight hard and dare to turn around, this is the mental outlook we should have in the new century.

score review
The argumentation is clear and well-structured.The author first puts forward the topic: "What should we do when people are at the end of the road?"Afterwards, from ancient and modern aspects, it was demonstrated that the "turning point" was a breakthrough in the career, and the writing was concentrated.Then it is further connected with reality, highlighting the center.In addition, the argumentation methods of the article are diverse, including positive and negative arguments, and hierarchical arguments, from small to large, from special to general, so that the article is more convincing.

Turning point
——The Resurrection of Ten Haizis
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

May 2003, 3 sunny
"The sacrificed black wool sheep died in the middle of March and April/Behind everyone, you live in March and April"

This poem is dedicated to you - Haizi, the king of the earth who disappeared in the middle of March and April.

Every year on this day, I will think of you and all your poems.

"Spring/All Ten Haizis Resurrected" This is the last short poem you left to the world, and then you left, with your unchanging persistence throughout your life, went to heaven, and continued to sing your night songs.

But, I think, if you really are still living in heaven, then you have to admit that your death is a turning point in your life.Because I saw it, I really saw the resurrection of the ten Haizis in the spring——your poems, together with your spirit, appear alive in this world and illuminate it.

I can really feel the loneliness of your life.In such an era, writing is a truly lonely road.Many literati merged into the trend, chasing fame, status and betraying their souls.Only you, and a few others, hold on to your heart, struggling in the dark, praying for the dawn.It's a pity that in the end, no one understands your poems or your feelings.So, you are finally exhausted physically and mentally, and you would rather sleep than wake up.So, 14 years ago today, you deliberately left...

But fortunately, you left behind your poems and your unchanging persistence throughout your life.Society was shaken, and the literary world was shaken.People start to re-examine their value orientation and try to understand you.You have become a myth in the literary world, a martyr in poetry.So, I saw ten Haizis resurrected in the spring, and I saw an important turning point in your life.

Everyone has a time of frustration, but not every death of a frustrated person will be a turning point in life.Only those who live with their hearts, love with their hearts, and pursue their ideals with their lives will finally be recognized by people.

It is a bit sad to say that death is the turning point of life.But perhaps, the death of a worthy person will somewhat dilute the sadness—like Qu Yuan, or Wang Guowei.Haizi, you have pursued your dreams all your life, and your spirit will last forever in the world after death.This is eternal life!

Haizi, when you were alive, you must have never thought that you would be appreciated by others after death, right?Valuable things will only attract people's attention after they disappear, just like your thin red-haired brother Van Gogh, who waited silently all his life, and was reborn again after death.Death is your common turning point!

The little star is never noticed, but when it turns into a shooting star and faces death, it attracts attention.In many cases, the turning point is only between life and death, and the distance of a line is far apart.Because the beauty of the past is often precious.

Life is not more brilliant and more beautiful.Many people live a glorious life, but are cast aside after death.What blooms like a flower will wither like a flower, this is the law of nature.Death has become an important turning point for those who have been silent all their lives but their spirit lives forever in the world, turning their thoughts into a different kind of beauty.

There are turning points everywhere in life, and the most important turning point is death—it will give your life a fair score, or make you from mediocrity to attention, or make you from illustrious to popular cast aside.

Haizi, today, I miss you again.I hope this diary will testify to your spiritual resurrection and the turning point of your life.

Today, 14 years later, spring is still warm and flowers are blooming.I miss Haizi who died early here...

score review
This is an atmospheric work full of passionate chants and deep sentiments.The author's understanding of Haizi's "high mountains and flowing water" and his perception of the realm of life penetrating history make this article more dignified and rational in its passion and poetry.Thorough thinking and sophisticated language are the main features of this article.

Turning point
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

People who are in a difficult life are often more eager for a turning point in life, which can make their life leap in the fastest way.

Look at the man over there who is buying a lottery ticket. His clothes and appearance are nothing more than ordinary. The nylon bag issued by the unit is placed at his feet, and inside is the food to eat tonight.The man chose that set of numbers again: his own birthday plus his wife's birthday plus his son's birthday.I pushed the camera towards him again: "Next time, I will definitely hit it next time." I pointed to the camera in my hand: "Okay, I will go to your house for an interview today, you see..." "Oh! Good Okay, come on." The man picked up his bag and beckoned me to go with him.

(End of this chapter)