College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 92 Turning point (2)
The man said: "You can't understand, I need a turning point, a turning point in my life!" He excitedly waved the spatula in his hand, and a drop of oil splashed on my arm, which was very hot, like the ardent hope for the future in the eyes of a man.I said, "Why didn't you look forward to this invisible and intangible thing before?" "Before..." the man put all the food on a white porcelain plate, "Oh, at that time, I was so stupid, I always thought that day after day, it was just a meal. If you do a good job, you will get better, but... alas!"

In the small room, the man's wife, an ordinary woman, sat on a small stool without saying a word.She never said a word.She was not such a woman before.She was as noisy as a normal housewife, until one day, her "miserable sister" in the "same trench" suddenly won a large sum of money, and since then she has stayed away from this lane and started a new life.The woman went crazy that day and repeated the words of the "sister" like a man: "Life needs a turning point! Otherwise, just like us, you may not be able to get ahead after a lifetime of hard work!" Then, the woman suddenly fell silent, saying that it was a psychological The above disease is called aphasia.

"I've been buying lottery tickets since then, and this family and I really need a change to live a better life," the man said.

I fixed the camera on the man's eyes and asked, "Buying a lottery ticket is a turning point in your life?"

In the lens is a very determined but also very blind eyes.I asked again: "You just want to make this family better and better, and it hasn't changed?" "No!" The man said. "So, when you didn't know there was such a thing as a turning point, you..." I asked.The eyes in the camera suddenly became very excited: "Didn't I tell you when I didn't know? I work stupidly all day, work, work, work! It's just to make life better! Ha! But this is useless! There is no turning point, All of this is useless!"

I readjusted the camera and asked, "What is your so-called turning point? How did it come about?"

The man said: "The turning point is that thing that can make our family better and live a prosperous life in one fell swoop. How did it come about? Uh... lottery tickets... what do you think?"

The figure of the man in the camera is old and helpless.I asked: "Could the turning point be brought about by the lottery?" The man's eyes were empty, muttering something, and beside him was his very silent wife.I just got up and said goodbye.Suddenly the door opened and a boy ran in.When the boy saw the man and the woman, he smiled mockingly and said, "I'm sick again!" Then he turned to me: "I've heard it all. Quantity changes to qualitative change. Without the accumulation of quantity, there is no turning point. They don't even understand!"

I left, and the last shot that flashed in the camera was the man's helpless face. I didn't expect to end this interview with the words in the high school political book.

From quantitative change to qualitative change, the man has actually completed a turning point in his life unknowingly, but, contrary to his expectations, indulging in the turning point brought about by luck, he has changed from a workshop technician to a laid-off worker. Worker.

Success and failure may be just judgments from the outside world, but the real turning point a person experiences is his betrayal of his original beliefs and his determination to control his destiny.

score review
This is a short novel.Candidates unfold the plot through "I"'s interview with an ordinary worker's family. Through the current "hot" lottery phenomenon, it reflects the pessimism of the little people under the lottery frenzy and the mentality of the society eager for quick success, revealing "the real truth of a person's experience." A turning point is a betrayal of the original belief", which is a thought-provoking life truth.The language of the novel is refined, the characters are full, and the ending of the story is thought-provoking and deafening.

Turning point
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

The winding path in the forest is more poetic and romantic because of those twists and turns. An exciting movie often has twists and turns in the plot, which is still lingering in the aftertaste.In our lives, many things become more and more beautiful because of the turning point.

A book is wonderful because of its twists and turns. The heroine Scarlett in "Gone with the Wind" has transformed from a delicate young lady into a tough and truly beautiful sonorous rose due to the changes of the times and the blood of self-esteem in her body. Such a transformation is real and wonderful, and such a turning point Make "Gone with the Wind" an unforgettable classic. In "Wuthering Heights", the hero Heathcliff has transformed from a simple and loving boy into a vengeful devil whose humanity has been annihilated because of love. This tragedy caused by love is breathtaking, because this The turning point is sudden and exciting, and such a sudden change in human nature highlights the deep imprint of love in his heart, and more decisive turning points at the unexpected endings such as Hitchcock and O. Henry contain infinite possibilities. charm.I think the turning point of these works, no matter they are beautiful or amazing, will make us realize the author's intention to the greatest extent, so as to get thinking. They are undoubtedly wonderful.

Most of the turning points in literary works are fictitious, but the turning points in life are real.Although some of them are painful, they eventually become the cornerstones of casting the miracle of life.Sima Qian wrote in "Historical Records": "Wen Wang detains and plays "Book of Changes", Zhong Nier writes "Spring and Autumn"; "Say Difficulty", "Lonely Anger"..."Many sages, after experiencing such a painful turning point, have a deeper understanding of the righteousness of life, relying on amazing vitality to continue the will of life, and wrote an article This classic handed down from generation to generation has made a lot of great achievements.It is during these turning points that the tenacity and magnanimity of the sages made their personalities and thoughts condense into a petal of eternal heart fragrance over the long river of history. It is also these turning points that have inspired more people and more sighs... …

I remember Lin Qingxuan said, "On the road of life, it is not where you put a door frame, that is the only exit. You can turn left or right; seek the exit of life."Yes, the road of our life must not be smooth and straight.Some turning points may be reluctant, just like the unhappiness in my heart when I was a child when I learned that I would leave the city where I had lived for a long time and move to Beijing. It is the strangers on the street who are reluctant to part with each other, after all, no one wants to face parting.After arriving in Beijing, I slowly adapted to it, met new friends, and had a new and wonderful life.Such a turning point, at first glance, is not good, it seems to be an end, but now that I think about it, it feels like a starting point.

We should face the turning point in life, joy or pain, with a smile. Life has its ups and downs, and we should treat life in the same way.May each turning point weave a memorable life path for you and me.

score review
This article is an argumentative prose with both emotional and beautiful words.Integrating emotions into reasoning, expressing emotions with reasoning, exuberant discussions, and overflowing with poetic sentiments, it can be called a superior work.Candidates transition from book life to real life, and then from real life to book life, opening and closing in a certain degree, which reflects the author's rigorous thinking logic.The special success of the article lies in the examinee's layout and choice of words and sentences.

wonderful words
The winding path in the forest is more poetic and romantic because of those twists and turns. An exciting movie often has twists and turns in the plot, which is still lingering in the aftertaste.

Turning point
(Candidate No. [-] in Beijing)

It is said that the genus of eagles and vultures is originally of the same family, and its name is falcon, which hunts in the fields every day.Every year, there is a severe drought, the vegetation withers, the roe and rabbit compete to die, and the falcons are hungry.Or fight for the sky, migrate to Hongmeng, and search for the top of the mountains; or squeeze your wings and feathers, beat the dust, and settle down in the carrion.The former is proud and turns into an eagle, while the latter is contemptuously called a vulture.

I heard this and said: the year of severe drought is the autumn of the turning point of the Falcon family.At this time, different ambitions lead to different futures.How to belong, only what you want.

All things in the world, the mystery of the turning point is not the only case, there is nowhere in the vast universe.Have you ever seen a clear spring clogged with a big rock?The turn of this spring is also.Those who choose to retreat hide themselves in the shade of stones, hide in the forest valley, and are not famous in the world, and they will rot for a long time;Do you also see that the breeze is blocked by the cliff?This is the turn of the wind.Those who choose to avoid will scatter outside the mountains and become invisible for a moment, and disappear in an instant; those who choose to advance will continue to grind for hundreds of millions of years, and they will be covered by flying sand in the red desert.However, the appearance of things depends on the choice of turning point.

And above the history, those who make great achievements also have to choose a turning point.Baili Xi's move and Sun Shu'ao's official position all stem from the fact that he never ceases to suffer from adversity.However, Shi Qian's heart is full of great ambitions but not easy, he was tortured without giving up, and resolutely chose to live under the weight of humiliation. In the end, there will be a history of swan song and rhymeless coquettish, which will make later generations of writers sigh.He also has the ambition of Marquis Wu, to inherit the virtues of the former emperor, to serve the loyalty of the country, and to point his sword at the Central Plains, endlessly.Even though Yao had a big plan in Jieting, he did not choose to retreat, and went out of the teacher again and again, and finally built a reputation of exhaustion, and won the eternal sigh.

From this point of view, those who turn around are mostly obstacles.Only those with great ambitions who do not say they are defeated can turn out to be outstanding.There are innumerable people who linger and return every small setback for thousands of years, and there are no ones who keep their names!I know that when Hualiu rides in the vast wilderness, there will be those who fall into the dust and mud, those who choose to die will die, those who choose to stand up will gain their feet; when apes climb on the cliff, there will be those who miss their hands and fold their arms, those who choose to be discouraged will die, and those who choose to fight hard Those who get magic skills.People must have those who hesitate in the wind and rain, those who choose to live in peace, find a cave to live in, and stay ignorant for a lifetime;Instead of bowing his waist for fighting rice, Tao Qian chose to go back to seclusion and abandon glory, so "Return to Come" has been passed down through the ages; facing the sword and halberd without yielding, Wen Tianxiang chose to die in the country and abandon the official title.

Yu Youshi sighed and said: In the place where the turning point is suitable, where to choose to go, everyone has their own wishes, which cannot be imposed; however, to spread righteousness in the world, and to spread its fragrance to future generations, it is none other than those who are not afraid of hardships and dangers, and who are determined and indignant!

score review
This is a masterpiece of classical Chinese prose.It is really commendable for candidates to use this unique form to express their affection in the tense college entrance examination arena.The article starts from "the genus of eagles and vultures" and touches on the history, either lyrical, or argumentative, and the mind travels far and wide, with brilliant literary talent.Or from succession to reunion, thinking about thousands of years, and showing talent.It shows the candidates' profound classical Chinese skills and rich knowledge.

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