Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 20 Campus Express (5)
Teacher Zhu probably saw my mood, stretched out his hand and pulled me in front of him, and said to me earnestly: "Last time, my method was improper. I stimulated you too much and hurt the feelings of teachers and students. I called you today to thank you." I apologize." She found my homework, opened it, put it in front of me, and suddenly asked, "How do you write the word 'heart' in the heart?" Without thinking, I imitated Teacher Zhu's usual metaphor and said: " Stir-fry sesame seeds in a half pot, stir-fry three times and skip two."

I was secretly proud that I remembered this word firmly.Teacher Zhu smiled, pointed to the word "heart" in my composition and said, "Look, why did you jump one?"Then, Mr. Zhu pointed out a few wrong sentences to me and asked me to revise them one by one in person.

Finally, Teacher Zhu encouraged me and said: "Your composition is very literary. From now on, you need to read, write, and revise more. Work hard!"

A few words dispelled my shame and fear.

From then on, I "returned" to Teacher Zhu and often asked her for advice on composition.My writing level has improved rapidly, and I am very happy that several compositions and diaries are still being read as "model essays" in class.

Through the writing method of wanting to promote before suppressing, the little author leads the reader's thoughts to the little author's writing unconsciously--I write typos in a "crazy" way, and the teacher's two different educations have different influences on "me" .It prominently embodies the naughty image of the young author as well as the teacher's unique heuristic teaching and his deep love for students.The content of the article is novel, plain and natural, full of childlike interest.

Teacher chasing stars is also crazy

penvega

In your mind, what does a teacher look like?Maybe you will say that the teacher is serious.However, our art teacher Mr. Liu is a "crazy" groupie who is very popular with us.

In an art class, we learned to pinch the portraits of people. Looking at the faces of Zhang Fei, Baogong and Huangdi in the book, no one was interested.Mr. Liu seemed to understand our thoughts, and brought a lot of posters from the office, pasted them on the blackboard one by one, and said: "The focus of pinching the profile picture is to pinch the character's characteristics. Everyone knows that their idols have What are the characteristics?" "I know." "Well, today, let's make our own idols!" Immediately, cheers erupted in the class.After a while, everyone was done.Teacher Liu took off the poster from the blackboard, wrote the words "A Gathering of Stars", and then asked us to go up and introduce our idols one by one.Everyone was very busy, "This is Edison Chen with a long tongue." "This is Ge You with a bald head." "This is Zhao Wei with big eyes."... Soon, at school In the window, there appeared the clay sculptures made in our class, which were really lifelike and full of poses.

In Mr. Liu’s office, there are also “bright stars”. The group photo of F4 is displayed on the computer screen; under the glass plate of the desk are the cartoon portraits of Wu Jianhao, Andy Lau, Su Youpeng and others drawn by Mr. Liu; there are many prints in the drawer. Gadgets with stars.We often go to Teacher Liu's office to see these stars and listen to their news.The teacher received warmly every time, and took this opportunity to teach us many skills of drawing comics, and let us learn a lot of knowledge that is not in textbooks.

You see, school is not a boring place, and teachers don't always scold others with a straight face.We have a "crazy" star chasing teacher who learns while playing and has fun while learning.The school has become a happy paradise for us to study and entertain!
The key to this article standing out from many exercises on the same subject is to grasp the vivid example of the teacher's "chasing stars".Teacher Liu is kind and funny, good at grasping the psychology of students, and is deeply loved by students.The layout of the article is reasonable, the sentences are popular and fluent, close to life, making people feel friendly when reading.Such a teacher, I believe all students will like it.

teacher, you are not late
Ma Chao
The class bell rang, and the classroom fell silent, only the "rustling" sound of flipping books was heard.But teacher Wang, the head teacher, was uncharacteristically not showing up in the classroom on time.The students looked at each other in blank dismay: Teacher Wang always walked into the classroom with the bell ringing!Teacher Wang, what happened to you today?Didn't you already tell us that the city leaders came to our class today?
Hey, are you still engrossed in the homework we just handed in and didn't hear the bell?No, the small alarm clock we bought with lucky money is still on your desk. You said it will always remind you to go to class on time.

The classroom was terribly quiet, occasionally hearing the "squeak" sound when the chair was twisted.I followed the sound and looked: the city leader has closed the textbook, put the pen into the jacket pocket, showing a helpless look; the principal also sighed softly; anger appeared on the dean's face; the teachers looked left and right, fidgeting... …

Unbearable, what an unbearable 2 minutes!Time, why do you go so fast, can't you wait for our teacher Wang?
Oh yes.Recently, your heart is not very good. Is the hateful illness haunting you again?Then you should have a good rest! ——Impossible!You have never missed a class due to illness.

I remembered: Is it because of your three-year-old son, Bingbing?The naughty Bingbing sprained his foot the day before yesterday, and the top of his foot was swollen like a steamed bun.At this time, are you in the hospital with him, or are you rushing to school quickly? ——This is even more impossible!You said that it is a crime for a teacher to miss class due to private matters!

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Time flies by second by second.Teacher, teacher!How we look forward to a miracle - at this moment you are standing at the door and walking towards the podium...

Finally, we looked forward to the familiar footsteps, still so firm, calm and down-to-earth.Finally, I saw Teacher Wang's lovely figure, still in that plain dress, still with short ear-length hair, and still with a friendly smile on his face, only the bright eyes in the past seemed to be covered with shadows and looked a little tired.

You walked up to the podium and said calmly: "Students, I am very sorry, I am late for 2 minutes." After a pause, you said: "What did the teacher do during these 2 minutes? Please tell me the reason why the teacher is late." Imagine it reasonably, and dictate to each other at the same table. If my lateness can activate the wings of the imagination of the students, then I am willing to accept any criticism." You turned around and wrote five characters on the blackboard: "reasonable imagination".

The classroom suddenly seemed to explode. The students were chattering, the teachers were discussing quietly, and the city leader and the principal were listening and whispering.But at this moment, smiles appeared on their faces...

There are many compositions written about teachers. The key to the novelty of this article lies in the fresh and creative selection of materials.At the beginning of the article, suspense was intentionally set up, and detailed descriptions of psychological activities were inserted appropriately. It was not until the end that the truth became clear: Teacher Wang was late on purpose in order to stimulate the imagination of the students and let them learn the lesson of "reasonable imagination".The article focuses on the lateness of the teacher, and selects several sufficient imaginations, each with its own characteristics and a strong sense of life, reflecting the deep love between teachers and students.

My A, B, C teachers
Anonymous
Teacher A
Teacher A is the general-style art teacher in our class. Teacher A looks weird and has a weird temper.

With a pair of round glasses on his small nose, he looks gentle and kind.However, you must not expect him to treat everyone gently. No one in our class likes to listen to his class. Everyone allows their mouths to move freely and chatter.At this time, Teacher A will come up with his way to deal with us-kick the podium with leather shoes, the sound is very loud and special, and the students will be quiet when they are frightened.Unexpectedly, this method is quite useful.

Once, the naughty male student sitting at the end finished drinking the milk and filled the milk bag with air.The class was over, the students were in a mess, Teacher A kicked up the podium again, the male student took the opportunity to step on the milk bag, only to hear a "bang", it was like setting off firecrackers!As a result, the students roared with laughter.well! Teacher A really doesn't understand why the art class is always so messy?

Teacher B
Teacher B is our music teacher. Teacher B is a bit like a child, he often plays with us in class.Once get out of class was over, a student in our class who had learned martial arts asked Teacher B to play. Teacher B said with a smile: "Come on, how about trying your martial arts today? Let's have a 'judo' competition!" The classmate laughed loudly: "If you compete with me, you will definitely lose!" The open-air style started, and the students in our class clapped their hands and shouted: "Mr. B, come on, Teacher B, come on!" Teacher B's hair almost stood on end in anger.At this moment, the classmate took the opportunity to turn sideways, causing Teacher B to almost fall over. Teacher B had no choice but to admit defeat: "I won't come, I won't come, I lost!" The students laughed haha. Teacher B is so cute.It would be nice to have more teachers like this.

Teacher C
Teacher C has taught us mathematics since the sixth grade. All the teachers in the school said that she is very good at teaching mathematics. Our class is also proud of having such a teacher who shocks the whole school. The first impression that Mr. C gave me was that the class was humorous.Once, we were confused by a difficult problem posed by teacher C. What A ran over and back.Unexpectedly, Teacher C walked in with a smile, drew a clock on the blackboard, and drew a half circle with red chalk, and then explained the question to us in her unique, humorous tone.Finally, we suddenly opened up.It's really interesting to listen to Mr. C's class.

My teachers are various, but they are all my friends, my teachers.The six years of primary school are about to pass, but the image of the teacher in my mind will never be erased!

The times are advancing and the society is updating. Today's teachers are no longer the "old image" of the past.The author of this article highlights the characteristics of the characters by describing the different behavioral characteristics, teaching styles, and the art of interacting with students of the art teacher, music teacher, and mathematics teacher, and uses humorous language in the description of specific scenes to enhance the The interestingness of the article.

cell phone sound in class

汤勇
Tell you something, don't tell others, our class teacher's mobile phone is not a good guy.

One day in math class, the students were all listening with great interest.Suddenly, a cricket-like cry sounded in the classroom.The teacher stopped the lecture, pulled out the mobile phone from his waist, looked at the number, and went to answer the call in the corridor outside.We were waiting quietly, and the teacher's hearty laughter came from outside the corridor, and we didn't know what happy things we were talking about.A few minutes later, I heard the teacher say: "I'm not talking anymore, I'm still in class." Then, with a "snap", the phone turned off.The teacher returned to the class and continued to give us lectures.

It was the same the day before yesterday. In the second quarter of the morning, the teacher had just been on for 10 minutes, and the annoying "harassing call" came again. This time the teacher didn't answer and hung up, but he didn't attend class, but called back The short message is probably because it costs money to answer it.The teacher pressed it slowly, and all the students waited patiently.The short message was finally sent, and there was not much time left in the class.

I don't know who invented the mobile phone. It was supposed to bring convenience to people.But the sound of the mobile phone in the classroom is like a killer, wasting a lot of precious time for our primary school students, so I say that the mobile phone is harmful.Now when we hear the sound of the mobile phone in class, we know that the task of this class is difficult to complete, and we have a sense of fear of the sound of "crickets".However, the teacher in our class is really "famous", so many people call him on their mobile phones.

"Ding Lingling", the get out of class is over, the teacher hastened to finish the rest of the content, hurriedly assigned the homework, and hurriedly left with the textbook.Everything is caused by mobile phones, I hate the sound of mobile phones in class!

Being able to express your true feelings is very important in composition.Express what you think, this kind of article can give people an impact.The young author did not cover up hypocrisy at all, exposing the phenomenon that teachers use mobile phones in class.The article is frank in language and sincere in emotion, vividly describing the author's inner distress and desire to be understood.

teacher love silent
Anonymous
Three-foot podium, three-inch tongue, three thousand peaches and plums, and three-inch pen.Ten years of trees, ten years of wind, one hundred thousand beams, ten years of rain.The teacher is the hard-working gardener. Every process of my growth is bathed in her sunshine and rain.Her care is like a warm spring breeze, warming our young and ignorant hearts.

Teacher, our most affectionate title.

Teacher, our most respectable person!

Recalling the primary school life in the past five years, teacher, how much motherly love you have given me.I remember how many mornings I watched the national flag rising with my students; how many weekends I was tired of correcting my homework in the office; how many nights I worked tirelessly to prepare lessons under the dim light... …In the classroom, you are a strict teacher, you are strict with kindness, and strict with love; in the classroom, you are our good friend, play with us, and talk to us!
At that time, the school launched a brush interest class, and because you were outstanding in calligraphy at school, you took on the heavy responsibility of an instructor.Since then, I have seen your busy figure every day.At that time, I was also practicing writing brushes, but the difference was that my mother forced me to practice. There were a thousand and 1 reluctances in my heart, but there was no way, my mother’s life was inevitable!So, I was absent-minded when I was practicing the brush, and I interrupted your lecture from time to time, and quietly talked about your faults behind your back... Later, you know, you said that I was worthless under the eyes of everyone, you said: "A woman The child is so lazy, what will he do in society in the future?" After hearing this, I was also angry, turned my head to one side, and sulked.The next day, you called me to the office, apologized to me, and patiently reasoned with me, telling me the benefits of writing brushes.I listened and listened, my heart was as uncomfortable as thousands of needles, and the disappointing tears rolled out of my eyes. I apologized to you guiltily. After listening, you touched my head and smiled. I laughed... from then on, I really fell in love with brushes from the bottom of my heart!

The teacher gave me a golden key to help me open the treasure house of knowledge; the teacher is also a living "mirror" for me, showing the "I" hidden in the dark corner.The teacher's love is silent, the teacher's love is selfless, and the teacher's love is infinite...

Teacher, are you happy?If you are not happy, I will send you a forest, because a leaf represents a piece of happiness, and may unlimited happiness accompany you; teacher, are you happy?If you are not happy, I will send you an East China Sea, because every drop of water represents a piece of happiness. May you be full of peaches and plums, and be happy forever!
The teacher's silent love can infect the students the most. This student wrote out his respect and attachment to the teacher with an affectionate pen.There are specific examples of brush practice, as well as lyrical descriptions. The narrative and lyric are just right and complement each other.

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