Primary school students' full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 25 Emotional record bag (5)
This article chooses "Dad's Tears" as the title, which is novel and unique, because the image of Dad usually seldom sheds tears.The father's bitter tears were deeply imprinted on the daughter's heart, and the sensible daughter secretly made up her mind: "Dad, don't worry, my daughter will not let you cry again!"

jealous mom
Liu Qian

My mother is a "jealous" mother.Classmates, that is not the sour vinegar you imagined, but another kind of vinegar.If you want to know what kind of vinegar she eats, you have to listen to me slowly...

I love to write a diary, and I often write about my father in the diary, such as "Greedy Dad", "Funny Dad", "Father and Daughter Love"... I wrote about my father's care for me and my father's characteristics.My mother was very happy at first, and carefully tutored and revised for me.But gradually, my mother became jealous.

One day, I started writing about my father again. My mother read it and muttered to the side: "There is a person who knows how to write about my father all day long. It seems that my mother is not important in her mind..." When I heard it, I knew this. There is something in the words-this is clearly talking about me, "They all say 'the only mother is good in the world'. In our house, it's almost the same as 'only the father is good'!" My father and I stayed silent.Seeing that my father and I didn't respond, my mother started nagging again.When I saw my father, he was not angry at all, just sitting on the sofa and secretly laughing.

I wanted to ask my father for help, and when I looked at my father, my father's eyes were full of complacency, as if to say: "Who told you that you only know how to write about me, and now you have offended your mother, your mother is 'jealous', Let's see what you do!"

Seeing my father's schadenfreude, I was angry and hated. I really regretted that I had written so many good things about him before, so I had no choice but to take out my "killer weapon"-acting like a baby.

So, I walked up to my mother, shook her arm, and said coquettishly, "Okay, my lord, my daughter is here to apologize." "Then... how do you correct the mistakes you made?" After hearing this, my mother asked happily. "For the sake of 'Atonement', let's write about you in today's diary!" After hearing these words, my mother was immediately elated, her brows were brimming with joy, and her complexion immediately "turned from cloudy to sunny".When I sat at the desk and picked up the pen, I thought: Mom, you asked me to write about you, so don't blame me for being merciless.No, I wrote this "Mother Who Loves Jealousy".

The intention of this article is ingenious, not according to the general idea, but to write that mothers are "jealous".The full text revolves around a family trifle to describe, but it overflows with infinite joy, and the harmony of the family makes family members feel happy.The unique and novel themes and the mother-daughter relationship full of life are the success of this article.

mama i long to be free
Liu Lang
Whenever I lie at the window and look at those children who are jumping around in the yard and sweating profusely, I feel a lot of emotion in my heart, because it is time for me to study again.

After school, I seldom go out to play, I am like a cheerful bird, locked in a cage, how I yearn for nature and breathe fresh air!But my mother is like an invisible big lock, locking me tightly, making me breathless.I really can't bear it, if this goes on, I will get sick.

Every Sunday, the students are happy.They go to the movies with their parents, and go to the park with their brothers and sisters... In short, their Sundays are relaxed and happy.But I am just the opposite, because my learning tasks are too heavy this day.

Early in the morning, my mother woke me up from the warm bed and asked me to read English.I opened my sleepy eyes and looked at my watch, it was only 6:30.Woke me up so early!There were 120 reluctances in my heart, but I had to listen to my mother's words, so I forced myself to open my eyes and read the book.After breakfast, I threw myself into the intense "battle" again. A pile of math exercises, Chinese exercises, and English exercises made me dazzled and dizzy.

At about 4 pm, the task was finally completed and the "battle" was over.I thought to myself: Oh!It's finally over.So, I asked my mother: "Mom, let me play in the yard for a while, even for a few minutes." But my mother said coldly: "Play, play, you know how to play! I see you You won’t be promising in the future. Mom won’t let you play for your own good. When you go to college in the future, you won’t be the one who is happy! Listen to your mother and listen to English tapes!” I walked away sullenly.I came to the balcony and looked at the carefree children, crying in my heart.I'm only now feeling what it's like to be alone.

In the evening, after dinner, I want to watch TV for a while. Before the word "television" was uttered, my mother guessed it, and said to me loudly: "No, absolutely not! One is for your eyes, and the other is for your future!" In the future, in the future, I hate to death" future"!Could it be that if I watch TV, I will accomplish nothing in the future?My heart is like a bottle of five flavors, salty, sweet, bitter, spicy, I can't tell what it tastes like.After a while, my mother asked me to read English, and I read it aloud.While knitting a sweater, my mother said with a smile: "Hearing your reading, I think it is better than the most beautiful music!"

It's a holiday, and the students are very happy. The school organizes to go swimming in the summer palace. My mother refuses to let me go, even other sports.Therefore, in physical education class, I couldn't meet the standards in high jump, running and other events.Mom, do you know why?This is all the result of you taking care of me!

Mom, set me free!I can understand your hope that your child will become a dragon, but I can't study all day long, I also want to have my joy and freedom.I am still a child!I am eager to go to nature, and I am eager to go among children.Mom, when will you release this little bird and let it fly freely?

Mom, I long to be free!

In the article, the young author poured out her heartfelt feelings with the pen in her hand: Although she has received meticulous care and care from her mother, the author is not happy. She yearns for freedom very much, but lacks real freedom and exercise.In the article, we seem to hear a child's sincere call.In life, there may be quite a few mothers like this, and they should get inspiration and education from this composition, which is very meaningful.The psychological description of the article is true and delicate, and the expression of thoughts and feelings is very sufficient.

a letter of resignation
Lu Weixia

When I came home from school today, I was about to do my homework when I suddenly saw a note on the table.I took a closer look and it turned out to be a resignation report from my mother.I was shocked.Mom is self-employed, why should she resign?Isn't she doing well?To whom did she resign?Curiosity drove me to read quickly, and I saw on the paper: Comrade Lu Weixia:

Due to my limited level and weak working ability, you are dissatisfied with my work, and you often refuse to finish your meals.Therefore, I am going to resign from the post of "home chef", please ask Gao Ming for approval!
mom
9/20

I read my mother's resignation letter with a blushing face, and I suddenly understood what was going on.It turned out that my mother resigned because she thought I was too picky about food.This is bad, my mother won't cook for me, what should I eat!Yes, there is!I quickly took out the pen and paper and wrote: Dear Comrade Mom:
Your Resignation Letter has been received by your daughter, but I implore you to stay on as Home Cook.The main reason for me to criticize you is because my mouth is too "tricky", which makes you angry all the time.I hope you can forgive me, and I promise I won't be picky eaters anymore.Mother, please forgive me!

The final signature is "the good daughter who will love the food you cook the most in the future".

After a while, my mother came back.I hurriedly greeted him with a smile on my face, and handed the written "Review Book" to my mother respectfully.My mother looked at the "Review Book", first smiled, then immediately put on a straight face and ignored me.I had to act like a baby, apologize, and promise, all three prongs.Finally, my mother finally wrote and signed the "Review".I took a look, and it turned out that there was a smiling face of a big-headed doll drawn on the "Review Book". She smiled so happily!

This article has carefully arranged the "Resignation Letter" and "Review Letter", and the structure is unique and novel, which can attract readers.The full text has clear levels and fluent language, revealing the mother's love for the child and the child's understanding of the mother between the lines.

Parents' signature - make me happy and worry me
Pan Hua
Almost every homework needs to be signed by the parents, not to mention the unit test.Parents' signature really makes me happy and worried.

一
The homework is finally done. "Mom, sign for me quickly! The teacher will check tomorrow." I said while handing the composition to my mother.My mother is watching the TV series "Deep Love in the Rain", and she has been deeply attracted by the plot in the play, so she can't care about these "little things", so she has to deal with it again and again: "Okay, I got it! Go to bed I’ll sign it for you later.” After hearing this, I worriedly said: “Tomorrow the teacher will check in person, don’t forget to sign!” My mother said impatiently: “Don’t call me Got it." The next morning, when I was packing my schoolbag, I found that my mother really forgot to sign, so I had no choice but to ask my mother to wave a big pen!

two

One unit was over, and I only got 89 points. I was really upset. I was still one point short of my mother's minimum protection score. The teacher asked the parents to sign the test paper. What should I do?I shudder.After school, I went home with heavy steps, lowered my head, didn't even dare to look at my mother, and said weakly: "I only got 89 points in the math test today!" After hearing this, my mother quickly took out the paper from my schoolbag." "Research" for a while, glanced at me, and said: "Look, you can't do these calculation problems? How careless!" I moved to my mother, holding the paper carefully, and stammered. : "It won't show up next time. Old... the teacher wants the parents to sign." After hearing this, my mother reluctantly wrote a word "check" on the test paper.

three

The Chinese test scores came down, I got 96 points, the first in the class.I ran home jumping up and down, held up the test paper and told my mother, my mother was overjoyed after reading it, and praised repeatedly: "The test is good, my son is awesome!" After listening to my mother's praise, I was as happy as a happy bird , Said loudly: "Mother, please sign!" I saw my mother write such a sentence on the test paper with a smile: The child has made progress, thank you teacher!

To be honest, the parents' signature really made me happy and worried!

After reading this article, it may arouse the psychological resonance of many young readers.The little author grasped the seemingly ordinary thing of asking parents to sign, and described in detail the different performances of my mother and I in the face of different scores, so that people can truly understand the joy and sorrow of the little author.This article is like a slow heart song, which makes people feel different after reading it.

teacher, please listen to me

Qiu Jing
Tuesday, June 6th overcast

Teacher, at the parent meeting, you made a request that "you are not allowed to watch TV when you go home, especially cartoons".In this regard, I would like to offer my own opinion.

I know that you are a good teacher. You once practiced with us despite the scorching sun; you once repeated a question five or six times dryly in order to make your classmates understand... But, maybe you don’t know it?This time, even my child who has always been "obedient" did not follow your request.The "National Geographic Magazine" on the Daily Life Channel, I read it as soon as I catch it, and I must finish it after reading it.It not only allows us to understand the customs of various countries, but also makes me feel like I am on the scene, knowing rare animals and understanding world geography.Watching this kind of TV shows is really rewarding.As for those "Slam Dunk", "Baseball Heroes", etc., students who love sports also watch it, because it will bring them joy and enlightenment.

The world is colorful, and TV is a way for us to increase our wisdom, broaden our horizons, and get in touch with the society. Although some TV programs are called "not so good" by adults, we can't be blinded by generalizations!After all, these programs are in the minority.Like "Man and Nature", "National Geographic Magazine"... I love it very much. If I don't get these spiritual food from TV, it's like putting a black cloth on my eyes, and the world will never It became pitch black.What is the difference between such a monotonous life and a bird in a cage?

I think there should be nothing wrong with watching a "good show" in moderation.Those cartoons can also be watched selectively according to the size of the age group and each person's preferences. Teacher, do you think it is okay?
If you don’t want us to waste time watching TV programs and affect test scores, then you are wrong. Watching TV programs moderately will not cause the above-mentioned consequences, but can adjust the brain and make you nervous all day. Isn't it good to relax your brain for a while?

My point of view may be one-sided, please correct me.

In the form of keeping a diary, the young author frankly expressed his different views on the teacher's statement that "you are not allowed to watch TV".The whole article adopts the writing method of narrative and discussion, which is well-founded and sincere.The author asks the teacher about the teacher's views in a unique child's tone, and expresses his feelings directly, which is convincing to a certain extent.

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