A middle school cartoonist

As the editor-in-chief of the weekly magazine, Yoshida is very confident in his speed of observing comics because he needs to review a large number of comics... Moreover, this time, Makoto Takahashi took out four chapters of comics at once, and Yoshida finally didn't have to endure the torture of a certain middle school cartoonist's "poor taste of getting stuck at the critical moment"!

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However, Yoshida, who quickly read the first chapter of the comic in his hand, did not rush to observe the rest of the comics. Instead, he sorted out the comics while frowning and thinking... Because Yoshida felt that the comic he had just observed was not as exciting or interesting as he imagined!

The content of the first chapter of the comic begins with Saitama teacher punching an octopus-shaped monster!

The octopus monster that emerged from the sea appeared in the city where humans lived and destroyed and killed people. However, he was encountered by Saitama who was returning home from shopping... Then, before the octopus monster could finish his arrogant words, he was killed by Saitama with one punch!

Although Saitama's powerful strength has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people in the previous serialization, every time Yoshida observed Saitama showing his "one-punch invincible" strength, he still couldn't help but sigh and marvel!

Later, the octopus monster that was beaten by Saitama led to the subsequent plot of the comics-the invasion of the deep-sea tribe!

The deep-sea tribe comes from the deep sea. They are a group of huge fish monsters. They regard humans as food and try to become the overlord of the world. The octopus monster that was killed by Saitama with one punch before can only be regarded as a sentinel sent by the deep-sea tribe!

Led by the monster [Deep Sea King], the fish-shaped monsters of the Deep Sea Clan broke out of the sea and appeared in the coastal cities where humans lived, killing humans wantonly and destroying the cities wantonly... At the same time, the Hero Association issued an evacuation order while summoning nearby heroes to solve the disaster!

Just as the saying [Heroes emerge in troubled times] says, whenever humans face disasters, there will always be some talented humans who stand up, either turning the tide with their own strength, or fighting the disaster with their talents... Just when humans were facing persecution from the Deep Sea Clan, the A-level hero [Stinger] affiliated with the Hero Association stood up and stood in front of the Deep Sea Clan, blocking the invasion of the Deep Sea Clan monsters!

Before the A-class hero [Stinger] fought against the deep-sea monsters, he once boasted that he would [annihilate all without any injuries]. Even though he later used his favorite gun [Bamboo Shoot] and his ultimate move [Super Giant Spiral Stinger] to eliminate ten huge deep-sea monsters, he did not achieve the state of [annihilating all without any injuries]. Instead, he was beaten black and blue in the battle...

When seeing this part of the plot, Yoshida curled his lips in silence!

Is this Makoto Takahashi's alternative way of making people laugh? At this time, should Makoto Takahashi be reminded to study funny comics carefully, or should he boast about the unique design of a certain middle school cartoonist for funny plots?

Being able to kill ten huge deep-sea monsters by himself, from this point of view, the A-level hero [Stinger] still has a certain strength... However, this A-level hero [Stinger] who stood up at the critical moment was completely powerless when facing the king of the deep-sea tribe [Deep Sea King], and was killed instantly by the opponent!

Yes, the A-level hero [Stinger] who suddenly burst into a killing spree just now was killed instantly by the monster [Deep Sea King]... And the first chapter of the comic manuscript in Yoshida's hand just ended here!

From the beginning to the end, except for the appearance of Saitama teacher as a passerby at the beginning, the content of the entire chapter revolves around the deep-sea monsters... However, it is this kind of plot that makes Yoshida frown more and more!

When Yoshida heard his colleague Yujiro convey the prediction of [Cartoonist Side Great Prophet] Nizuma Eiji, he was still a little surprised! Because Yoshida didn't expect that Eiji Nizuma would give such an exaggerated evaluation, and in order to compete with Makoto Takahashi, he tore up the comics he had already completed... But when Yoshida finished reading the content of this episode, he was a little disappointed!

Although the style of the battle scenes in this episode of the comics is the same as those serialized in the previous comics, it is still as sharp and powerful as ever, but this alone cannot conceal the routine of the comics itself! This setting of [a stronger enemy will appear after defeating the enemy] is the mainstream of the [kingly way] comics in the weekly magazines today, which is more in line with the expectations of most readers, but for a responsible editor who has observed a large number of comics, it is a little disappointing...

Is the development of this plot... really what Eiji Nizuma expected, and is it also the plot that Makoto Takahashi likes and values ​​the most? Yoshida feels that he may have seen a fake comic!

In terms of the depiction of the battle scenes, the painting skills displayed by Makoto Takahashi in this "One Punch Man" comic have indeed surpassed the level of many cartoonists...

As for the development of the plot, even though this development is a bit cliché, it has to be admitted that this old-fashioned plot does have the support of many readers...

But just based on these... Yoshida does not think it is worth it for Eiji Nizuma to prepare for the battle!

Of course, it cannot be said that the comic draft of this episode has no highlights...

At least the only thing that Yoshida is looking forward to is how fierce the battle will be between this powerful monster [Deep Sea King] and Saitama teacher in the next plot!

So...

Is it because I have too high expectations for Acheng, or for this comic? Yoshida frowned and thought hard while sorting out the comic manuscript...

"Speaking of which, the reason why Acheng drew the content of this episode like this, could it be that..." Just when Yoshida couldn't help but want to question Takahashi Makoto, a responsible editor suddenly thought of another possibility! "...Acheng, that guy, is he planning to use the content of a whole episode to pave the way for the subsequent plot?"

Saitama teacher is very strong, no matter what kind of monster, he only needs one punch to solve it... However, it is precisely because of this that readers don't know how strong Saitama teacher is, because this cannot be directly expressed through comics!

How to judge the strength of the characters in the comics? The best way is naturally to show it through a battle!

The A-class hero of the Hero Association was killed by the monster [Deep Sea King] in one move, which is enough to show the powerful strength of [Deep Sea King]... Then if Saitama teacher defeated this [Deep Sea King] with one punch, does it mean that Saitama teacher's strength is far beyond the so-called A-class hero?

"So this episode doesn't seem to be a very colorful plot... It's just a deliberate foreshadowing for the content later, just a foreshadowing to show Saitama teacher's strength?" Yoshida, who thought more and more that there was such a possibility, couldn't help but exclaimed, "Tsk, a whole episode of content to lay the groundwork... Ah Cheng, that guy, is really bold! Isn't he worried that this will affect the performance of the comics?"

Just when Yoshida was about to verify his guess and carefully observed the remaining comics, he suddenly heard the sound of a piano! Yoshida looked up and saw a middle school cartoonist sitting in front of the piano, falling into a state of [self-absorption], concentrating on playing an unknown piece of music...

Then... a responsible editor went into a rage!

I was thinking hard about the shortcomings of the comics and how to improve the quality of the comics. I finally figured out the intention of setting up the comics in this way. It would be fine if Takahashi Makoto didn't remind me earlier... He actually had the leisure to play the piano over there! ! ? ?

"But, damn it! If I can beat him..." Yoshida has already started mumbling... Is this the embodiment of the legendary [blackening]?

Speaking of having the delusion of [using force to teach Takahashi Makoto to be a new person]... Yoshida, it's getting late, you should go to bed!