Cyberpunk: Legendary Life

Performance report: This book has been on the shelves with thousands of orders. It was recommended by the editor four days ago. The current order count is 2,000.

Within half a month of being put on the shelves, the number of orders increased by 1,000. Paofeng is already very satisfied with this result and continues to hit 3,000 orders per product.

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Conclusion: Keyword "punk".

The reason why I want to talk about ‘Punk’ is because I have a new understanding of the growth line of ‘Sasha’.

In terms of the overall structure of the book, Instant Noodles adopts a character-centered unit plot writing method.

From the first five-chapter story of the opening chapter "Car Accident", we can tell that it is about Gloria and David.

Although there are many characters appearing, at least the priority is clear, and the core of the unit drama "Biotechnology" is around Sasha.

By connecting several elements such as the Badlands Commission, Joanne Couch, Sasha's fall, and biotechnology experiments, a story was completed, which I think is pretty good.

In fact, it is very risky for a unit drama with a length of more than 100,000 words to unfold the story with 'Sasha' as the core character.

One is that Sasha appeared late and is not familiar with her.

The second one is Sasha who only appeared in the MV and is far less popular among fans than the others.

Therefore, it is very likely that Sasha will not be able to sustain a story on his own.

But Sasha's emotions are full, whether it's her original experience or her state after resurrection.

After witnessing the cruelty and cruelty of biotechnology companies, Sasha's emotions will be further amplified, making the tone of the entire story become more depressing and restrictive.

Even though Tang Yu and the others successfully completed the Bad Land commission and each achieved gains and growth, they still could not offset this depression, and instead felt even more uncomfortable.

Rebecca was silent, Panan was silent, Mann was silent, and Tang Yu was silent as well.

at this time.

If there is an emotion that can turn into a sharp point to pierce this oppression and restraint, then you can feel the heartfelt joy.

And this emotion must be ‘punk’.

In fact, the original climax was this concert, but it was later changed a lot.

The detailed outline of the previous version was to lay out the reasons why the concert must be held.

For example, what happened to Sasha as a single mother, Mann and others want to uncover the truth, biotechnology is doing evil things, Joanne Couch has blood on her hands, etc.

Wait until everyone's emotions are in place, and then take action with Emperor Tang in mind.

Tang Yu took action against the biotechnology company. It was impossible to use the power of Arasaka Company to open fire like last time.

Because countering biotechnology is private work, Tang Yu can only rely on himself.

Tang Yu needs a weapon, a weapon that can make the company tremble, a weapon that can destroy the company.

‘Punk’ is the best weapon.

With motivation and purpose, let's write about how Tang Yu carefully planned this concert, and finally detonated the whole audience.

It conforms to Tang Yu's character design of planning and then acting, and it won't feel any abrupt.

But instant noodles always felt like something was missing.

It seems that after writing 400,000 words, Tang Yu in Instant Noodles has become more and more like a cold corporate dog.

If it weren't for the occasional memories of the crazy years before his rebirth, it would be difficult for Tang Yu to express even a trace of "crazy", "arrogant" and "lang" in his heart.

In other words, Instant Noodles doesn't want the crazy Tang Yu to only live in his heart.

In other words, the passionate punk in Tang Yu's heart is still there, and he doesn't need to be forced to do anything by anyone.

That's why Tang Yu just asked Sasha if he wanted to go to the concert, and Sasha said yes.

Emperor Tang took action.

In other words, it is more like Tang Yu himself wanted to come to such a concert.

Hence the conversation between Tang Yu and Kerry in the beach house, and the risk of burning down the biotechnology building.

only.

Why Tang Yu must burn down the biotechnology building, the relevant large-scale psychological description, and the logical preposition have all been cut off by Instant Noodles.

Because, the "punk" understood by instant noodles is actually an emotion, an impulse, a kind of bohemianism, and a kind of consciousness that turns the body into fire.

Too much logical psychological description and careful planning and preparation will greatly dilute the "punk" flavor.

In addition, in order to keep the plot compact, instant noodles have cut off some details.

Otherwise, from the end of Kerry's talk to the start of the concert, several chapters would need to be written to prepare, plan, and analyze, until the final step is to make everything perfect and move forward with the concert.

But this is not the desired emotion for instant noodles.

Preparing for a rainy day applies to many places, but not to punk.

The chapters related to the concert greatly speeded up the pace of the story to ensure that the emotional progression would not be interrupted, and some of the logical prerequisites were abandoned, which seemed to conflict with Tang Yu's previous calm character.

Therefore, when some Yanzu see this, they will feel a little strange, think that Tang Yu's various actions are not right, and will be worried about Tang Huang's risky behavior.

But turning my broken body into a raging fire is exactly the feeling that instant noodles want to write.

So everyone is taking a risk and the biotech building has to be burned down.

Otherwise, Emperor Tang's temperament would be stuck halfway, neither rising nor falling.

Just like Tang Yu's middle-class cry when he was running at the beach that night, he must have that kind of temperament.

Coincidentally, there were a lot of differences in the section where Tang Yu Zhong Er shouted, but the instant noodles still insisted on retaining it.

Tang Yu is indeed a senior executive of the company, with careful thoughts and ruthless methods.

But we can never forget that Tang Yu's life includes not only the company, but also music, his brothers, and his sisters.

the most important is.

Emperor Tang still had a heart that dared to overturn the world.

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Finally, explain the character line.

Everyone wants to see the scenes of Lucy, Violet, and Rebecca, and they will definitely arrange them carefully.

The character lines of Gloria and Sasha have gradually become clearer, and I think the writing is quite exciting.

The character lines of these two characters are two sets, with a lot of blank parts, and the timeline is early, so they can only be written in the early stages and cultivated slowly.

Lucy, Vixen, and Rebecca are different. They have high fandom elements and relatively sufficient background story lines, so they can only be put into the later part to write a long novel.

Strive to write a more delicate, touching and enjoyable story.

I also ask everyone, Yanzu, to be a little patient with instant noodles.

Every line will be fully concluded, every character will have its own ending, every pit will be filled, every setting will be perfected, and every loophole will be patched (forget it).

Finally emphasized again.

It's a HE ending.

It's a HE ending.

It's a HE ending.

So feel free to follow the story.

It's like playing a brand new large-scale DLC of Cyberpunk 2077 game, or experiencing the corporate dog life of being reborn and traveling to Night City.

All Yanzu are responsible for taking over the throne of the Tang Dynasty.

Instant Noodles is responsible for taking David's place.

That's it.