My Cartoonist Guide

"I think we should fight for it, otherwise, we will regret it."

After Shang Haozhi and Wang Wenhong left, the editor-in-chief and team leader of "Young Leap" sat around the conference table and continued to work on "Steel Smelting".

Otani was extremely confident in "Steel Making" and Shen Xin, and after the meeting began, he gave his own evaluation.

Yasuda Chi remained silent, clasping his fingers with both hands.

Murakami's eyes looked at Otani, a little wary, for fear that he would be misled by him.

After seeing the first episode of "Steel Refining", Otani had great expectations for "Steel Refining". Now that he has witnessed the setting, he admires "Steel Refining" even more.

If Otani has the right to sign the contract, Murakami has no doubt, Otani will immediately pick up the pen and write his name on the contract.

"What's the reason?"

Murakami will not make a decision just because of one or two people.

In addition to knowing everyone's attitude towards this comic, he also needs to know the reasons.

"Does this still need to be said?" Murakami coughed, "I know that many people will have an idea, if they can find a substitute in China, why should they borrow someone else's? Obviously the cost will be higher. But I don't think, " Can you find a substitute for this type of comics?"

"It goes without saying that Mr. Shen's painting skills are obvious to all. Even if it is "Young Leap", how many cartoonists can compare to Mr. Shen? You can tell. When "Slam Dunk" first came out, I thought Teacher Yuchuan is no worse than Teacher Shen, but do you still feel that way now?

"Never talk about the plot, nor the setting, just look at the painting skills. How different is the style of Mr. Shen's first episode of "Hire of Chess" from the last episode, don't you need to say more? Although we are looking at the draft, However, people always see how it compares to "Hire of Go"? I think it's more mature.

"The settings of "Steel Refining" are also good. I won't talk about things like alchemy and the gate of truth, but the settings like mechanical armor, artificial humans, and human pillars are also very innovative. In particular, these settings are not They exist alone and are closely related to each other. In addition, "Steel Refining" is also good. In particular, the role-fighting scenes are very smooth. If I am an ordinary reader, I can't see at all, Mr. Shen was painting before Realistic comics."

Otani said a lot in one breath, and Yasuda felt that his words were a bit exaggerated, but after careful reflection, he felt that Otani did not make a mistake. "Gang Lian" does have these characteristics.

"Group leader Xiaogu, I know you like Teacher Shen's work very much, but you can't just mention the advantages and not the disadvantages."

The middle-aged man with short shredded hair and a face with Chinese characters raised objections.

Kotani frowned and glanced at the speaker.

This person, like him, is the leader of "Shoun Leap", Yasumi Nomura.

Murakami crossed his fingers and looked at Nomura expectantly, "What are the shortcomings, tell me? Let's discuss it together."

Nomura nodded, "This is a passionate and adventurous manga, shouldn't it be wrong?"

The people sitting nodded.

"Team leader Otani just said something, that's correct. From the previous few words, Mr. Shen really does not seem to be a novice in adventure comics. Those fighting scenes are better than many cartoonists, but they are only limited to the scenes. Everyone. Maybe I still have doubts about my words. Please recall the setting of "Steel Refining". For an adventure comic, "Refining Steel" lacks a very crucial link, it does not have a complete power system!"

Power system! ?

This word immediately appeared in the minds of other people.

Yasuda nodded again and again, "Yes. I said, it seems that something is missing, "Steelmaking" lacks a complete power system."

A part of the power system is to classify different roles according to their strengths.

"Just like a ninja, there are lower, middle, and upper ninjas. In the case of ‘leapfrogging’, the middle ninja is better than the lower ninja, and the upper ninja is better than the middle ninja.

"In order to ensure that the strength of each character is not disordered during the story, the cartoonist must divide the character's strength. The final boss level must be max, and the protagonist will also have different levels of level upgrades as the story unfolds. This is also the default routine by everyone.

"The "Steel Refining" doesn't have these... Just like Skar, it is said that he killed many alchemists in many countries. Then, I want to ask why alchemists in other countries can't kill him? His strength is in the whole What is the level in the manga? Who is stronger and weaker between the protagonist and him? If I am a reader, how should I judge their strength? More importantly, if there is no complete power system, how can the reader be objective? Feel the progress of the protagonist? Is this kind of manga still a kingly manga?"

Facing Nomura's aggressive questioning, Otani was speechless.

He has always been fascinated by the setting of "Steel Refining", but he has forgotten the power system.

In the late stage of Wangdao comics, if there is a collapse, the most likely thing to collapse is the power system.

The protagonist upgrades too slowly, the rhythm will be dragged down, and the plot does not burn; the upgrade is too fast, and the protagonist is invincible in the middle stage, and the subsequent plot cannot progress.

Generally speaking, when the protagonist upgrades, it has to be linked to the plot, which is where the editor is more concerned.

"Steelmaking" does not have such a division.

Shen Xin may have forgotten it, but this possibility is extremely small~www.readwn.com~ Complicated settings can be made, and power division is impossible.

It is really not good, there is the simplest division, like what B, A, S, SS.

Or, the same national alchemist can also be divided into bronze, silver, gold, etc. according to different strengths.

However, in the setting and background, this piece of content is not involved at all.

This shows that all national alchemists are of the same level, and there is no difference between superior and inferior.

"I'm afraid... Teacher Shen never thought about grading, right? Of course, the higher the strength, the stronger the ability, but an excellent person cannot have only strength, but also needs..." The middle-aged man with messy hair suddenly said , Pointed to his temple, "Intelligence."

Murakami glanced at the deputy editor-in-chief Ayumi Nishida and snapped his fingers, "So, how do you reflect the protagonist's progress?"

"Isn't there still a'door'?" Nishida asked rhetorically.

"Eh?"

Others have forgotten the "door".

"Ms. Shen wrote very clearly. Open the'door' and you can see the truth. According to the'equivalent exchange', if you lose a part of your body, you will also get a part of the door. What is this part of me? I think this may be the key. To be honest, I think everyone reads this comic too simple-since it involves life, the content will not be easy.

"As for how to reflect the protagonist's progress... In fact, in the first chapter, Edward also said that the alchemist is a scientist, and the level of achievement of a scientist is not divided by force, but should be an improvement in wisdom. If the progress of the story is similar to my thoughts, I think this comic has the value of simultaneous serialization."

Ayumi Nishida was the first to express his views.

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