Portable Intelligent System

Xu Ling and Wang Chuqian chatted for a while, then separated.

Wang Chuqian has to go back to work, and Xu Ling has to go back to bed early. Tomorrow, she will go to the storytelling column to report.

After returning home, Xu Ling found Yu Wenwen's shoes at the door. There was no movement in the room. She should have been sleeping.

Xu Ling didn't knock on the door to ask about Yu Wenwen's party. After all, everyone has his own circle. Xu Ling has no right to interfere. What's more, Yu Wenwen has grown up and should have the ability to distinguish right from wrong.

After washing, Xu Ling went back to her room and said, "emmm... This is very interesting, but there are 70 typos in your 100 words. Are you sure you are not teasing me? What's more, the protagonist's speech is too poor. It's just like a writing brush. Sometimes he sticks to his enemy's sister's paper. That's enough. You've actually described the details, haven't you

"Big brother, you're a bad actor, aren't you? A person can kill a thousand people in a quarter of an hour. Are you chopping melons and vegetables or playing games? When writing, don't you have any brain? Do your family know that you are so naughty? "

……

In the future, I swept more than ten books at a time, but none of them came into my eyes.

Basically, the first three chapters are dissuaded by the author's quirky brain circuit.

In the age of material flow, few writers can write books with a quiet heart. Most of them have a dream of being a God, but they have no strength at all. They really have a higher heart than heaven and a thinner life than paper.

Alas!

The future sighed helplessly, played a game online, and continued to review the manuscript after venting.

Sometimes, in the future, I really want to bring the writer in front of me for a good training. If I can't, I can still have a fight.

Let your skin, let you not write a good book, let you diaphragm should be people.

"Hoo

Light up a cigarette again, sort out your mood a little in the future, and continue to scan the manuscript backstage.

Huh?

At this time, the name of a Book suddenly attracted his attention.

The story of killing the Dragon by relying on heaven?

Interesting name.

Take a look at the profile. Well, it's good. It's simple and clear. It's very attractive.

"I hope it's a good book. Don't let me down again."

The future prayed silently and looked at it carefully.

The style of writing is fluent and elegant.

And the most praiseworthy thing is that the author is very good at breaking sentences.

Almost dozens of words occupy a line, unlike other people's writing, more than a dozen sentences are crowded together, like a tofu, which seems to be particularly laborious and uncomfortable.

Nowadays, the pace of life is fast, and everything else is fast. Network novels are the product of fast food culture. Therefore, large paragraphs of text narration are taboos, which are easy to be abandoned by readers.

However, many old authors did not think of this.

Compared with plot and setting, segmentation is just a trivial detail.

But sometimes, details determine success or failure.

This author, with good ability, is a material for writing books.

The future is a silent praise, and the eyeball has been deeply attracted by the story of Yitian Tulong Ji.

So he cut off his cigarette and read all the manuscripts in one breath.

what the hell.

No more?

It's a little uncomfortable.

I want to know the next plot.

What are the secrets hidden in Yitian sword and Tulong sword?

How did Zhang Cuishan and Yin Susu end up? Did they get married?

After the Golden Lion coerces these two people to enter the isolated island, won't he kill them?

Alas, how did it break at the key point.

I'm curious.

The future is a little depressed, and my heart is tickling like a cat.

Forget it, wait until the author uploads the manuscript tomorrow. It's important to sign a contract first. You can't let such an excellent author run away.

After struggling for a while, the future rushed to the author's background to send a message that can be signed.

Network literature in addition to miracle works network, there are several websites doing, after all, this is a big cake, as long as there is a little economic mind, will go to share a piece of the cake.

Although those websites are not as big as miracle works, the flow of people is not a level; However, people have the self-knowledge that they don't sign up for the draft, but only buy out the excellent articles. The quantity is small, the quality is good, and the life is also interesting.

In the future, I don't want to let go of a new writer with great potential because of his slow hand.

According to this "warm wine" classmate's writing, it is very possible to write a Book of Fengshen.

After finishing the signing news in the future, I found that the author Wenjiu once again uploaded part of the manuscript of Yitian Tulong Ji.

As a result, he can't wait to open the place. When he looks at it, he is surprised.

Good guy, he uploaded 20000 words in one breath.

Ten full pages.

Hand speed is a problem. How can you become such a unicorn arm without being single for decades?

However, if the quantity increases, will the quality decline?

In the future, with curiosity, I began to read the following content of the story of relying on heaven to kill the dragon.