This is My Holy Grail Battle
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The real scene——
The biggest controversy in the FA volume is the artificial human, Hiss (Zig), let’s just call it Zig here, after all, we are talking about the original book.
Everyone should know what the reputation of this character is like. In China, almost everyone shouts and beats her.In fact, the reason is not that the various characters gave him things, nor was it that Joan of Arc posted back.
Instead Ziggy won.
That's right, Ziggy won.I analyzed FA from an author's professional perspective, and this is the conclusion I came to.As the creator, Higashiide did not achieve 'inhumanity'.
As a cyborg who was just born, how can he defeat Amakusa who has been preparing for sixty years and has made unremitting efforts and obsession?How can He De? ? ?
When Dongide was writing, everyone who portrayed this character shouted and beaten.In fact, the character itself is white, and there is no need to discredit it.In essence, fate, even all the male protagonists of Xingyue are cheating.And why would Ziggy get hacked for cheating?
There is not much problem with the setting of the role of Ziggy.The biggest problem lies in—the problem of casting.
Fa's script was very problematic, so he had to take the blame.Because he is the protagonist, because he is the protagonist, because he is the protagonist.
If Zieg follows the setting, he is destined to shine in FA.Among countless artificial lives, he was the first to awaken self-awareness, and his life was destined to burn.But I want to ask here, is this artificial human enough to take on the character of the protagonist?
The answer is, no.
I don't think Ziggy is enough to take on the important role of the protagonist. If you have to write Ziggy as the protagonist, then you should do one thing, and that is to let Ziggy take the lunch before the end of the Holy Grail War.
Yes, if you want Chigurh to be the protagonist, you must not let Chigurh live to the end.In the final analysis, four words - what virtue and what ability!
If you keep the perspective fixed on Zieg, you will find that this character does not have the courage to hold the Holy Grail at all.Just compare it with my protagonist.
So if I were to write, I would let Zieg die with a dazzling light for the sake of ending and fluency after expressing the lyrics!
Life is eternal beauty, only stopping is not a blasphemy!
When Chigurh died fighting for his own ideals, I believe that not only will no one hate him, but many people will follow him, right?Of course, before death, one needs a vigorous emotion and passion.It's like Shirou went to hell without complaint or regret until his death for Sakura.
And at the moment of death, he bloomed his own belief, and he will get his soul because of it!
what a script~
The artificial man with a short life has experienced the beauty of the world, but without a soul, he used his short life to pursue the deepest emotion in his heart.However, human beings with a complete life pursue ruthless eternity.How ironic and clear-cut.
I think if Chigurh is the protagonist, then Chigurh must be killed in Tuliphas!
With his long-cherished wish, he rushed towards the light of the God-killing Spear.Or bump into Amakusa Shiro Tokisada's sword without complaint or regret!When he died in battle, he would also receive blessings from countless people.
Just like my protagonist, I believe most people see my setting at first glance.You can guess that the protagonist will not win the first Holy Grail War, no matter in terms of plot, rationality and length of the story.
The second game will also be lost, although a large part of the reason is because of the setting of God's perspective.After all, it is impossible to end in such a short time.
This is also the shortcoming of the current web articles, because they have to be written longer.It is impossible to end abruptly, so everyone can guess that the protagonist did not win.When reading, there will be a feeling of anticipation, but there is no way.
If the writing wins, not only will the plot of the novel collapse, but even the readers will feel sick.Forcibly winning is the most deadly manipulation, which is disgusting and at the same time makes the plot collapse.
This is the case with FA, it's nothing if Ziggy hangs too much.The real reason is that he won too much, he shouldn't have won.
My protagonist doesn't have enough ability. He can be undefeated in hand-to-hand combat but doesn't have the slightest offensive ability.He has neither the spirit of a hero nor the indomitable heart.
He looks forward to being a hero, and even feels a little inferior.He is very afraid of death, and greedily wants to suck the taste of life.I like the down-to-earth feeling, but dare not reveal my inner voice.
Once faced with an unknown situation, he begins to be vigilant about everything around him, and even because he has experienced more than one Holy Grail War, he has extreme distrust of his master.
Including the allies of this Holy Grail War, even if they are their own allies, they will add a word-now.If he wanted to win, he would not hesitate even if he betrayed his allies.
Before, he clearly knew the information about the Fourth World War and the Fifth World War, but he didn't dare to do anything, so he could only drag on.Under such circumstances, how can He De hold up the Holy Grail?
He was just a mortal who was pushed into the Holy Grail War by the mastermind behind the scenes, and he was completely afraid to fight the Heroic Spirits.
So, he fought and died again and again.But he is constantly working hard for his goals, persevering and never giving up.He experienced the pain of being baptized by the spear of the king's army, the test of Sasaki Kojiro's long sword, pierced by Medea's magic cannon, and shot into a hedgehog by the king's treasure.He almost died under the iron stake of the execution king, and he has already experienced the pain of despair!
Keep working hard, keep giving, keep bleeding... But even so, he still didn't succeed.
Yes, the Holy Grail is the stage for heroes.The feast of countless legendary heroes, each of which is a heroic soul left in the legend.
Ordinary people can't compare with them, so how can the newly created artificial man survive to the end?
He can't, and Ziggy can't!
Chigurh is not dead, which is the biggest problem.When Dongide wrote it, he wasn't ruthless enough!Not cruel enough!
He doesn't have the selfless heart of the creator like Lao Xu and Mushroom. Mushroom is a doomsdayist, and Lao Xu is a warrior of love.The entire Fourth War is a tragedy, and most of the lines of Wu Warrior Lang are also tragedies, or the Fifth War itself is also a tragedy!
Also, some people say that the protagonist is the Virgin Mary, I just want to say: N...
Cough cough, quality quality.Phew~ I'm so mad.I probably understand the reason why there are so many Notre Dames on the Internet. The feeling is not that there are many Notre Dames, but that there are many 'By the Notre Dames'.
As for me, my favorite novel authors are Lao Xu and Martin.Anyone who knows them should know the style of the works of these two people, right?Hey~
If every named character were given a bookmark upon death, the book A Song of Ice and Fire would be filled with bookmarks;
If there is a boat of people, then after Lao Xu writes, the whole boat will turn into a ghost boat when it reaches its destination;
If I were to write an original, I would think about how each character should bloom in the depths of the soul before death.
Yes, death is the highest priority plot for me.In other words, a life without regrets is the climax/climax I consider first.But I don't deliberately turn the death of every follower into a climax, such as the big dog.
Someone should have seen the picture of the dead man bookmarked in A Song of Ice and Fire, right?Very exaggerated.In short, it is the personal style of dying first in the prologue. It seems that the protagonist will die in the next moment with "Kucha", without any fuss.
Other books know that the protagonist has a halo, but Martin's readers are most afraid that their favorite character will be in danger, because any character in A Song of Ice and Fire may be killed in the next moment.Fully verified that sentence, people will die if they die.
In Ma Fatty's words, "I hope that readers will feel distressed when they see characters wandering on the verge of life and death." 'The host at the time wiped his sweat and replied:'You really did it. '
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