The Two-dimensional Life of the Traveler is So Salty

【It’s really a commercial speech. Those who don’t know think that the scumbag is a social animal who left school early, not a male high school student】

Although her mouth was unforgiving, the upturned corners of her mouth and the slow shaking of her legs all showed the girl's joy. Obviously, Ye Zheng's answer was very suitable for her. This is a like-minded author.

Ye Zheng is already immune to her address and poisonous tongue, anyway, he is a netizen who is going to communicate only once, not to mention that he can even ignore the people under the snow that he gets along with every day.

Naturally, he doesn't take the behavior of people he doesn't care about.

[The second volume is always poorly written about the emotional changes between the two, the conflicts are not obvious enough, and the newly added characters cannot promote the plot...]

Although she complained about the other party's speech at the first time, Kasumigaoka Shiyu quickly got down to business and intermittently sent the problems she encountered in the writing process one by one.

Even though Ye Zheng had already seen this girl's message bombardment at noon, it was a bit helpless for him to come again all of a sudden. How could he reply to so many messages at once?

[Although it is a bit presumptuous, I wonder if you can let me read the manuscript of the second volume?Teacher Xia Shizi just said that, I don’t have any idea]

Ye Zheng knew it was unreasonable to make such a request, after all, the two could be said to be strangers chatting for the first time, and the manuscript he was about to read was a sequel to an unpublished best-selling light novel.

Unexpectedly, after Ye Zheng sent this text, Xia Shizi immediately sent a document. From the performance just now, we can know that the person on the other side is not stupid and sweet. Ye Zheng was surprised by his trust.

What he didn't know was that the manuscript of his new work had already been read countless times by the girl across from him. Although it was against the rules, it was Machida Yuanko's behavior after confirming the girl's character, and Ye Zheng, who was also recognized by Machida Yuanzi , naturally gained the girl's trust.

Although Ye Zheng was a little moved, he didn't take it to heart, but focused on the manuscript sent by the other party. How should I put it, the presence of the new girl Zhenwei in the second volume is too low.

The new characters did not take on the task of promoting the plot at all. In other words, Sayuka's position is too stable, and the challenge for Shinyui is to completely crush the situation.

How much does Xia Shizi prefer Sayuka?Ye Zheng couldn't complain, he didn't know whether it was intentional or unintentional, but the appearance of the newly added heroine was meaningless.

If she wants to write about the harem theme, it is understandable that other female characters except the main palace are not prepared to spend too much ink, but it is obviously not the case. But after meeting Sayuka, he was instantly killed in one round, time and time again...

Ye Zheng rubbed his brows. If it can be seen from the first volume that Xia Shizi has no love experience, then from the plot of the second volume, Ye Zheng estimates that the character "Sha Yujia" should be created based on Xia Shizi himself .

This reason can also perfectly explain why the beginning of the love triangle turned into two people showing their affection for Zhen Wei in the middle stage. The author's preference is unsolvable.

【Sayuka was modeled after teacher Kasumi Shiko, right?Is Teacher Xia Shizi so unconfident in herself? 】

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu blushed, and she was a little shy to be guessed by the reality through the novel, but she couldn't pretend that she didn't see the second half of the sentence. What does it mean that I don't have confidence in myself.

But Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is not stupid, but he has always been obsessed with the authorities, or even if he finds out, he is unwilling to change it, not because he has no confidence in himself, but because he does not want the relationship between the two of them to be inharmonious.

Little three or something, no need, female number two or something, just eat dog food on the side.

【Ms. Kasumi Shiko wants to use the role of Shinyui to challenge the relationship between Naoto and Sayuka. The beginning of the second volume is well prepared, but after the middle period, the plot is too pale, and it looks like it is completely powerless.

In fact, the role of Sayuka was portrayed very well. Teacher Xia Shizi does not have to be afraid of her being challenged at all. Instead, she should make her challenge more difficult. Such a direction should be more attractive]

I also know this kind of thing, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is biting her pencil, of course she knows what he said, and she also knows where her problem is, and she has tried hard, but she just can't write well!

God knows how confusing she is for a girl who doesn't even have any love experience when writing about a love triangle, and she still has no way to get inspiration.

Ye Zheng saw that there was no reaction on the other side, and he didn't know what Xia Shizi was thinking, so he hesitated for a while, and then typed out a paragraph and sent it:

【Teacher Xia Shizi, you...】

Author's message:

PS: I seem to have said that breaking chapters is not good at the beginning?Have it?Nothing, broken chapters are the best~~~

PS: Book friend group number: 470683737, password to enter the group: Xianyu

Chapter 63: Kasumigaoka Shiwa's Surprise (Revised)

【Teacher Xia Shizi, have you heard of 'Bai Xue'】

That's right, the first thing Ye Zheng thinks of about the love triangle is the "Bai Bai Xiang Bo" in his previous life, or more precisely, the "Bai Xue Fever" caused by "White Xiang Bo 2"

Since this memory can be recalled, it means that there is no such thing as the game "White and White" in this world, and naturally there will be no partisan farce that swept the entire Internet.

The second volume of Xia Shizi's novel is going to take the route of a love triangle, and Ye Zheng naturally has no experience, but this does not prevent him from stealing wa2 from his previous life to inspire Xia Shizi.

In fact, when it comes to love triangles, besides "White Love", Ye Zheng's memory also has another masterpiece "school days", and, in fact, the situation in Xia Shizi's novel is more similar to that of the three protagonists in Rizai's campus. Appropriate, after all, Zhenwei's appearance is more like the world of Xiyuan Temple.

However, since he guessed that Sha Yujia was modeled after Xia Shizi, Ye Zheng couldn't have come up with the "hatchet" ending, otherwise the girl on the other side of the computer would probably try to find a way to kill herself with a hatchet.

As for the difference between the development of one man and two women in "Love Metronome" and "White Phase 2", it depends on how Xia Shizi handles it, and the so-called "party struggle" should not be as exaggerated as in the previous life.

After all, this is a novel, not a game, and Xia Shizi's partiality for Sayuka, even under the influence of Bai Xue, will definitely end with Zhenwei's sad exit. Faced with this ending, will the Zhenwei party, who is dissatisfied with this ending, send Xia Shizi a letter? blade?What happened to Guan Yezheng?

[Bai Xue?what is that? 】

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was really puzzled, but she didn't think too much about it. She knew that since the other party mentioned this word, she would probably explain it right away.

[It's nothing, don't care about this word, I haven't written a love triangle, but there are some materials I know about the thoughts of girls in a love triangle that I can refer to Teacher Xia Shizi]

Pata, this is the second pencil broken by Kasumigaoka Shiwa today.Gritting her teeth, Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help but began to shake her legs again.

Why is this bastard so proficient at breaking chapters?Why is the time to change the topic immediately after arousing girls' curiosity so skillfully?

【"Why are you so proficient!"

"How many times have you and XX...kissed!? How far do you have to push me away before you are willing?"]

Seeing the words sent by Ye Zheng, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was a little flustered, always feeling that the girl's mind had been discovered.

Wait, he just said that this is the idea of ​​the girls in the love triangle, right?So what's the situation now?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu shook her head, trying to quickly dispel the inexplicable thoughts that suddenly appeared in her mind.

【"It was me, it was me first, obviously I came first...

Either XX, XX, or XXX. "]

This is, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu bites the pencil more tightly, and feels that something has surfaced, is it inspiration?

【"Why did it become like this...

For the first time, I have someone I like;

For the first time, I made a lifelong friend.

These two happy things are intertwined.

And these two joys will bring me a lot of joy.

I should have had this kind of dream-like bliss.

But why,

It will become what it is now..."]

[Why did it become like this...

I like him, he didn't hesitate to lie to me, and turned to me.

Don't hesitate to give up your thoughts and make up for everything to me.

The relationship that spanned three years finally came true.

That should have been enough.

As long as my wish comes true, I should be able to reconcile.

But, why, did it become like this...]

That's right, it's inspiration. These sentences are great. Kasumigaoka Shiyu can clearly

Feeling the emotions that the girl wanted to express in Ye Zheng's text, and these emotions constantly stimulated her brain, making her gradually clear about the next plot of her novel.

[Why, still appear in front of me.

Why, agree with me to stay by your side.

Why, always say something unclear.

Why, always put on an attitude as if you don't hate me at all.

Why, did not come to listen to my piano.

Why, you can't accept me]

Changed again, another girl’s thinking, personality and thinking are different, but the same is right

Warm and sincere feelings, is this what you want to express, scumbag, sure enough, Zhen Wei's feelings should also be sincere and warm, not timid and easily defeated.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was trembling with excitement, feeling that the inspiration in her mind was continuously pouring up, and enough, the difficulty that had been imprisoning her thoughts had been disintegrated, and Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was confident that she would be able to write her own novel next.

[That's enough, the scumbag really understands girls, he really deserves to be called a scumbag, with such a proficient appearance, I don't know how many girls he has had a love triangle with]

The excited Xiazhiqiu Shiyu did not immediately enter the state of writing novels. Her current inspiration is gushing out, not the hope that she could catch a glimmer of inspiration as she thought before. Before starting to write novels, it feels like molesting the opposite person Very good.

[However, thank you for your words and deeds, Mr. Scumbag, Mr. Scumbag’s experience has helped me a lot. I am very confident in the next novel, and I can’t wait to start writing it]

Ye Zheng looked at the second message sent by Xia Shizi, chuckled and deleted the text in the input box, is she really a person with a bad personality, or is she actually a bit arrogant besides being black-bellied?

【Then teacher Xia Shizi, please do your best】

After sending this message, Ye Zheng covered the computer, and promised Machida Sonoko that the matter has been completed, and there is no need to contact this vicious black-bellied and poisonous tongue girl in the future, so Ye Zheng is not interested in correcting the other party misunderstanding.

【Scumbag, is it because I exposed the lie, so I changed the subject so clumsily? This is not at the level of a scumbag】

After happily sending this message, Kasumigaoka Shiyu leaned back on the chair and drank the cold coffee. Although the coffee was cold, she was in a happy mood and felt that the taste was better than before.

However, after waiting for 5 minutes, there was no notification on the computer chat interface. After 10 minutes, the profile picture of "Izumi Masamune" was dimmed. Obviously, the other party had gone offline.

This bastard! ! !

The good mood Kasumigaoka Shiyu had accumulated with great difficulty was wiped out easily again. After taking several deep breaths, she stood up and walked around the room a few times before Kasumigaoka Shiyu finally calmed down.

Letting you off first, I will settle the score with you after finishing the second volume of the novel, Kasumigaoka Shiyu sat down again and entered the code word state.

On the other hand, Ye Zheng didn't know Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's thoughts, even if he knew, he wouldn't care, what he was thinking about was tomorrow, last week...

(To beg for mercy, send another 500-word text as a bonus:

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