The Two-dimensional Life of the Traveler is So Salty

Chapter 60: A Precise Strike Against Xia Shizi

Ye Zheng put down the book in his hand, after school in the afternoon, instead of going to the service department, he went to the bookstore to buy a copy of "Love Metronome" written by Xia Shizi.

After all, I have decided to have a good communication. It would be too much if I didn't even read the novels of the other party.

I have to say that Xia Shizi's writing style is really good. Although the theme of the novel is just a clichéd youth love theme, her writing style perfectly and vividly shows the girl's longing for love. Sweet tooth loss state, but it will not make people disgusted, but it will give people a natural feeling.

A heroine like this should of course get a beautiful love!

Unlike other youth novels that abuse the mind and stomach and make people want to stop, Xia Shizi's novels are also attractive to read on.

After reading it for the second time, Ye Zheng also guessed why Machida Sonoko insisted on letting him communicate with the other party. He probably wasn't the first one to be asked like this. Xia Shizi's novel is indeed very good, but it is precisely because of it Great, so the novel is actually a failure.

Ye Zheng's "The Cutest Sister in the World" is only going to be written for the time being. He is very clear about this, because there is no way to continue writing it, unless Ye Zheng is willing to change the original theme and introduce other characters besides Sagiri. Or it is the second best thing, but Ye Zheng is not willing.

He expressed all the emotions he had accumulated towards Sagiri through this novel. Unless he accumulated enough inspiration again in the process of getting along with Sagiri, he would not write "The Loveliest Sister in the World" again. "The sequel.

Xia Shizi's "Love Metronome" is similar to this. Although it seems that it is not written according to the actual situation but expresses the girl's longing, the ending of the first part of the novel already gives people a sense of satisfaction.

At least Ye Zheng couldn't think of any need to publish the second part. The first part of the story can directly declare the end of the whole play, and only need to add the plot of the male and female protagonists revealing their feelings to each other and then getting together.

However, it is obvious that it is impossible for Undead Sichuan Bookstore to publish only one novel with such a good first volume, even if it knows that the second volume's reputation is definitely not as good as the first volume, it is enough to make money.

As for Xia Shizi, she probably doesn't want the story to end here. After all, it is her first novel, and a high school girl full of fantasies, the love she longs for certainly does not end with the hero and heroine together after the first volume.

Girls who love fantasy will definitely be more greedy to understand the importance of themselves in the hearts of boys, want to know the choices of boys when faced with different situations, and want to see two men and women enter the palace of marriage...

Ye Zheng guessed very simply from the first volume of the novel that Xia Shizi should have no love experience. Although Ye Zheng in the past and present lives has no love experience either, but at least he has been in the society in the last life. :

The love in the first volume is full of teenage fantasies, too beautiful, too illusory, not like someone who has really experienced love at all.

So the current situation is probably that Xia Shizi can't write the second volume that she wants in her heart, and the deadline should be very close, and it may even have passed, but she is dragged by Machida Sonoko as the deputy editor-in-chief.

Other editors focus on immediate interests, but Machida Yuanzi is probably optimistic about Xia Shizi's potential and pays more attention to long-term interests. Does the root of the contradiction lie in the second volume of Xia Shizi? So Machida Yuanzi has read "The World's Most "Lovely Sister" only hoped that the two of them could communicate, hoping to inspire Xia Shizi through this way.

Ye Zheng was a little embarrassed. In fact, Xia Shizi did burst out with countless inspirations, but unfortunately they were all about how she died. They must not be used to write the second volume of the novel. Maybe when she will stop writing romance novels and write horror novels It can be used, or her novels have changed to a hatchet instead of sugar...

[I don't think Teacher Xia Shizi has ever been in a relationship, has she? 】

Ye Zheng sent a question sentence to Xia Shizi in an affirmative tone,

Seeing that the time was almost up to the appointed time, he was not going to read her novel for the third time, so he stopped what he was doing, and shared his thoughts on the novel and his guesses about the current situation she faced after reading the second time. The document is saved, it is estimated that it will be used later.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa is in a pretty good mood today, yesterday because of the bastard Izumi Masamune's inspiration, although it didn't help her plight in the novel, but at least she vented all the recent pressure, and sleeping in the classroom during the day was much better.

After returning to her residence after school in the afternoon, she discovered the news about Ye Zheng. Although she was still a little dissatisfied with his behavior, it was understandable. Writing a manuscript all night and going to bed early the next day after handing in the manuscript, such things are common among writers. is too common.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa is not an unreasonable person, in other words, her willfulness will only be towards her acquaintances, although currently the only one who can make her willful is Machida Sonoko. In the eyes of her parents, Kasumigaoka Shiwa is too independent She is a well-behaved daughter, except for the fact that she has no friends, which really worries them, she really didn't let her parents worry about it.

This is also the reason why Kasumigaoka Shiwa was able to go to school alone in Tokyo. Her family's financial conditions are not bad, and she is very well-behaved and independent.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's inner self-willedness will not be shown to others. Except for going to class and sleeping, she is very cold and dignified at other times. As for the accidental exposure of her true self yesterday, it was also caused by pressure Emotional, after resting and calming down during the day, she has been able to face the person "Izumi Masamune" normally.

The above is the feeling of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu after seeing Ye Zheng's message. This confidence disappeared immediately after receiving Ye Zheng's message a few minutes before 21:00.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu overestimated his tolerance for Ye Zheng, and underestimated the impact of the recent pressure on her, and the mood swings Ye Zheng brought to her yesterday, and even overestimated Ye Zheng's EQ performance towards strange women. Unexpectedly, Ye Zheng would ask such a direct question, he underestimated his ability to draw hatred.

After sleeping all day, it was rare to have dinner normally instead of instant noodles, and took a comfortable bath. The girl named Kasumigaoka Shiwa hummed a song and turned on the computer, logged in to Penguin, and saw the note "Izumi Masamune" Contact has sent a message.

Not in a hurry, she continued humming to make a cup of coffee and put it next to the computer, and picked up a pen and paper, ready to write down immediately when inspiration appeared.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was ready for everything, turned the pencil with one hand, and moved the mouse with the other hand to click on the message:

[I don't think Teacher Xia Shizi has ever been in a relationship, has she? 】

There was a snap, the sound of a pencil being broken by hand.

Author's message:

ps: Regarding the content of "Love Metronome", it is purely salty fish talking nonsense in a serious manner. I hope that I will not be slapped in the face by the big boss immediately. I am not afraid if there is a big boss. Anyway, it is a parallel world, and I will block it with four words, 233333

PS: Book friend group number: 470683737, password to enter the group: Xianyu

Chapter 61: Her Surprise

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has never been the kind of weak girl who can't even open the bottle cap of a drink and needs help from a boy.

From the pencil she broke in front of her, it was clear that the girl was not in a very good mood at this time.

[Scumbag who asks this kind of question from the very beginning, I'm sorry, I refuse to answer your sexual harassment question]

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was still restrained, not as direct as ten hours ago.

[Actually, as long as you have read your novels, many people may be able to see it, and this question is not considered sexual harassment anyway]

Ye Zheng was a little speechless. If he hadn't seen the message from the other party at noon today, based on her novels alone, Ye Zheng would have thought that Xia Shizi was a Yamato Nadeshiko-like girl full of longing for love.

But in fact, words are too deceptive, Xia Shizi now gives Ye Zheng the impression of a sickly girl with a black belly and a poisonous tongue.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu blushed a little, is it that obvious?Although it is true that I have never been in a relationship, when I write a novel, I write according to what I think love should be like, but is it really obvious that you have never been in a relationship?

If so, wouldn't it be telling all readers that Xia Shizi is a girl who has never been in love and longs for a beautiful love?

Such a declaration would make even Kasumigaoka Shiwa feel shy.

[The scumbag is really proficient, you can guess it with just a few clips like this, he must be a pervert who has played with the feelings of countless girls]

Even if she is a little shy, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu will not admit defeat. As for whether such words will offend others, she doesn't care. Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has no friends. Will change his personality to get friends.

[Although it's a bit embarrassing, the misunderstanding of Teacher Xia Shizi is indeed a bit hurtful. Like Teacher Xia Shizi, I have no love experience yet]

In fact, Ye Zheng's love experience is still very rich in a certain sense, of course it is only unrequited love. Although Ye Zheng really wants to experience ordinary love, Ye Zheng still feels very far away from this kind of experience. The cute truth is still hard.

[If the pervert thinks that you can shorten the distance between us by saying this, and want to use this to attack me, then you can only say that you are wishful thinking]

The corners of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's lips curled up, at least in this matter the two are on the same level.

[Ms. Kasumi Shiko thinks too much. In fact, I don’t have the idea of ​​getting in touch with Mr. Kasumi Shiko. This time, I can’t stand the harassment of Machida’s editor.]

Ye Zheng knows that such an answer is very impolite, even if he thinks so in his heart, he can't say it directly. After saying something like this, it may be difficult to communicate with normal works.

But he didn't want to continue to chat with her on this topic. Ye Zheng has already felt the difficulty of the girl opposite him from the previous messages. Then get away completely.

Since this is the case, it is better to cut the mess quickly. Anyway, after the exchange of works this time, even under the same editor, Ye Zheng doesn't think there will be any connection between the two.

As for Machida Sonoko's thoughts?It's fine if he doesn't cooperate. There is no such factor as Sagiri to consider in future works. If you are self-willed, you will be self-willed, and it doesn't matter.

[If this is the scumbag's hard-to-get, I admit that the scumbag succeeded]

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is so angry, how many times has this bastard on the other side made me angry?He's just a stranger, he's just a male high school student, why should the beautiful girl writer Xia Shizi be so angry for him.

However, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu knew that what the other party said that she didn't want to have more contact with her was true. The performance these days told her that the other party was indeed not playing hard to get, but this made her even more angry. Since childhood, when did Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu meet her? I've been treated like this.

[Hi~Hi~ I'm playing hard to get, so Teacher Xia Shizi has had enough fun and it's time to get down to business. This is what I thought after reading your work today. Please take a look and we can continue talking]

What kind of tone is this? It is obvious that the other party admits to be cowardly, but Xiazhiqiu Shiyu does not have the thrill of victory, but is full of depression.

And between the lines, he was telling himself that he just read the novel today, what is it, this made him read all the other works since his debut on Sunday after reading the manuscript of his new work. Isn't it an equal communication? Why does it seem that the other party is going to guide me to write.

Seeing a file sent by the other party, Kasumigaoka Shiyu opened it unconvinced, wanting to see what he could say about his work during this period of time.

Ye Zheng naturally didn't know Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's thoughts. Even if he knew, he would tell the other party that she was thinking too much, and he didn't have the idea of ​​guiding her. From the point of view of writing, Xia Shizi's writing was better than his own. There is more than one horizontal line, and there will be such an illusion that the other party is thinking too much.

On the other hand, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's mood was not as calm as Ye Zheng's. The document sent by Ye Zheng did not have a detailed format or section, and it was completely written down during the reading process.

For the convenience of sending, the electronic document is used. Although it is not recorded in the book and it seems a bit messy, but as the author of the novel himself, Kasumigaoka Shiwa is naturally very familiar with his own work. Kasumigaoka Shiyu was surprised when she understood the insights of her own novel.

Even at home, and just after taking a shower, her beautiful legs still wearing black pantyhose began to shake. This is Kasumigaoka Shiwa's long-standing habit, and she will behave like this when she is serious.

What a surprising scumbag, after reading the broken and marked Kasumigaoka Shiwa, I took a sip of coffee, and the next step is to comment on the whole work.

When I saw the first sentence: Teacher Xia Shizi himself should have no love experience, the description of love in the novel is too beautiful and dreamy, but it is precisely this reason that makes the novel have the potential to explode under the clichéd theme, and the superb writing style Guaranteed this...

Seeing this comment again, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu no longer felt dissatisfied at the beginning, or on the contrary, how can such a reader be annoying to the author because he can understand himself by relying on his own works?

That's awesome, scumbag.

However, after the evaluation of the novel, Ye Zheng's speculation about the status quo of the novel cast a haze over her good mood. It wasn't that what he said was wrong, but that he was too right, reminding her that those eyes were all in Qian's eyes The editor, really makes people unhappy! !

So, do you have any good ideas in this situation, scumbag?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu took a sip of coffee, and continued to slide the mouse down.

Author's message:

ps: Sahua, the recommended votes have exceeded 1000, and it took 26 days. It seems that the results are still very salty. When will one day achieve more than 1000 votes? ——Answer: When I go to bed later

PS2: Book friend group number: 470683737, password to enter the group: Xianyu

Chapter 62: Sayuka's Challenge

No, gone?

If Kasumigaoka Shiyu often hangs out on the Internet, she might say "I'm taking off my pants and you let me see this"

However, although Xia Shizi has a black belly and a vicious tongue occasionally, she doesn't know some Internet terms, but as a novel author, she is naturally a reader, and of course she is very aware of the pain caused by broken chapters!One day with a knife in hand, I will slaughter all the dogs in the world!

"Ha~ha~ha~ha~ Sure enough, the scumbag is the scumbag, how could I think you are a good person so easily?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's black silk beautiful legs shook quickly, and her whole body exuded black air, as if it would turn black again in the next second. The situation listed in Ye Zheng's document was indeed the reality she was facing. She thought she could get good advice, but it turned out There was nothing, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was about to explode.

【Scumbag, you bastard is really good at teasing girls, so I won't let you do what you want】

Ye Zheng looked at the message sent by Xia Shizi and felt baffled (black question mark?) When did he tease her?

Forget it, judging from the situation just now, this Xia Shizi's self-awareness is too exaggerated, so it's pointless to talk about it with her.

[I don't know what Teacher Xia Shizi is talking about, what is the specific situation of Teacher Xia Shizi now, I am referring to the second volume of the novel, please don't talk about other topics that are specious]

What a bastard, with such a simple and rude reply, the initiative of the conversation is completely in the hands of the other party. Kasumigaoka Shiyu doesn't like this situation, but there is nothing he can do about it.

[Just as the scumbag guessed, even with the help of editor Yuanzi, other editors are also under great pressure. The urging of the second volume manuscript is no longer once or twice, and I myself am very concerned about what has already been written. Not satisfied at all]

Biting her lip, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was very dissatisfied, not with Ye Zheng, but with those editors, and with herself. These days, she is really under a lot of pressure, otherwise she would not ask for other people's opinions if she is so proud .

What would the scumbag say?If she asked herself to compromise with the editor, then she would probably just block him and ignore him, but probably not. After all, he who can write such a new work must understand his own thoughts.

[The problem is actually focused on the novel manuscript. Why is Teacher Xia Shizi dissatisfied? I don’t care about the editor’s thoughts. As long as they write an excellent manuscript, their expressions will change faster than anyone else.]