Cute new Two-dimensional life record

In the evening, Xuehui gave a lecture to Shizuka Hiratsuka who asked for the commission without telling them, and then reluctantly took out the beef to be cooked tonight under Shizuka Hiratsuka's giggling promise.

The vegan punishment dish I thought about before really didn't come true, Mr. Biqigu, I broke my promise!

After eating dinner and taking a shower, Xuehui and Hiratsuka Shizuka nestled on the sofa in the living room, eating potato chips, rubbing Street Fighter with the handle, completely looking like a ruined house with clothes on.

Xuehui found another reason why Shizuka Hiratsuka couldn't get married.

However, Xuehui really likes the appearance of Hiratsuka Jing. Without the serious teacher in school, she is dressed in a refreshing dress with a smile like a little girl. Every time she wins Xuehui, she will He would sway from side to side excitedly, but he didn't know that Xue Hui had deliberately let go of these things.

If you really want to keep winning, you won't see such a smile.

Smelling the fragrance from Hiratsuka Jing beside her, and her yelling voice, Xue Hui felt a sudden sense of belonging in his heart.

"Om~"

Suddenly, the sound of mobile phone vibrating came, Xue Hui subconsciously lowered his head to look at the mobile phone, and Hiratsuka Jing who was beside him immediately said "Good opportunity!", accompanied by Long's series of continuous moves and big moves, Wave Fist took Xue Hui away Chun Li.

"A little shame, okay, sister!" Xue Hui said, put down the handle and picked up the phone, and found that it was Yukinoshita Yukino's message.

There are very few contacts on Xuehui's mobile phone. Apart from the two friends who can talk to each other in high school, there is only Shizuka Hiratsuka. I have never contacted by mobile phone.

Facing Xuehui's accusation, Hiratsuka Shizuka didn't feel ashamed at all. After she smiled indifferently, she leaned over and looked at Xuehui's cell phone, and then said playfully, "Oh, it turned out to be a message from Yukinoshita? I didn't expect You guys are growing so fast!"

"No!"

When Hiratsuka Jing approached, the whole body was close to Xue Hui's body, with his head resting on his shoulder, and his exquisite figure completely pressed on half of Xue Hui's body, making his heart beat faster.

Although after almost two weeks of getting along with each other day and night, Xuehui is already very familiar with him, but Xuehui, who has been single for two lifetimes, still can't bear such contact. He reached out and pressed Hiratsuka Shizuka's cheek to push him away. go.

"It's not something you provoked, it's today's commission. Also, it's late and go to bed early, staying up late is not good for the skin." After finishing speaking, Xuehui disappeared from Hiratsuka Shizuka's sight.

"Is it bad for the skin?" Hiratsuka Shizuka pinched her skin, then turned off the TV, and was going to contact her junior students in the bedroom to ask if there was any way to maintain the skin.

Back in the room, Xue Hui leaned on the bed, clicked on the message from Yukino Yukinoshita on the mobile phone, and saw a large number of English vocabulary and a long string of nomenclature composed of Chinese characters.

"Neptune, Dark Flame... What's wrong is not that I am the world, the covenant of blood... How should these words be understood? Why are they used in these places? After a lot of explanations, the meaning is unclear. Now Are all light novels of this type?"

Looking at the message sent by Yukino Yukinoshita, I can't help but sigh the seriousness of this girl. It is really not very good to read this manuscript word by word, and pay attention to understand the words and sentences that I don't understand. To be honest, Xuehui really couldn't do it by himself.

After explaining the words that he could explain, Xue Hui wrote at the back of the message: "Let's ask, how much have you seen?"

After 5 minutes, the phone vibrated again, Xue Hui estimated that the other party should have remembered those contents before replying.

"I just read the seventh page. Not to mention the grammatical mistakes, I really can't understand this kind of light novel."

"This is just an isolated phenomenon. After all, this can only be regarded as a work for self-entertainment. Normal publishing houses will not adopt it. My personal suggestion is to read the 10th page. According to your opinion, it will last overnight." It’s not necessarily finished.”

This time, Xue Xia came back very quickly, Xue Hui clicked on it, and couldn't help but smile wryly.

"Since it is something that has been promised, then it must be done seriously. This is my rule."

This girl is really serious.

Time, already 11 o'clock at night.

Please collect~~~

Chapter 13 The Sleeping Snow

The next day, Xuehui came to the classroom yawning, and after sitting down, he saw Hikigu who was also yawning.

"How did you read the manuscript last night?"

"I can't watch it until one third, and I feel like my brain is about to explode. How about you?"

"I didn't read much, the few pages I turned in the club classroom yesterday are enough to evaluate." Xue Hui said.Although he didn't translate it after returning, he has been serving as the translator of Yukinoshita Yukino.

The other party seemed to think that Xuehui was also watching, so every time he saw a Chinese-two vocabulary that he didn't understand or could not understand, he sent a message to Xuehui to ask him to explain, as if he had found a laborer.

The girls are so serious, how could Xuehui not reply, so he had to explain one by one, and the two of them just sent messages one by one, and it was 2 o'clock in the morning before they knew it.

In the early morning of the next day, Xuehui had to get up early to exercise and prepare breakfast. He was so sleepy that he said something to Yukinoshita, and then went to bed. Later, when Yukinoshita sent a good night message, he I only saw it when I woke up in the morning.Although with the help of Xuehui, the progress was only two-thirds past when he fell asleep. This night, Yukinoshita Yukino probably didn't rest.

"You are really welcome, let's take a look anyway." Mr. Hikigu felt a little annoyed when he heard Xuehui's answer. Although he thought Zaimozuo's original manuscript was not good-looking at all, it was written by the other party seriously. , I should take a look at it more or less.

"Don't look at me with such eyes. Even if the manuscript is submitted for submission, the editor will not turn over three pages. Just the beginning alone is doomed to the failure of this novel. Whether you can read the content behind It doesn't make much sense. If you really want to help the other party, let the other party know how to write a novel first."

Xuehui said so, and Bi Qigu also felt that he was a little bit behind. Although he has a good score in Chinese, he always writes some articles that make Hiratsuka vomit blood calmly, but it does not mean that his ability to distinguish is low. For Xuehui He still agrees with the words, the beginning is really bad, and the vocabulary used in it made him, who graduated from the second illness, feel uncomfortable for a while.

It's a pity that he can only put forward his own ideas, and he is not very familiar with the writing of light novels, so Hikigaya asked: "It seems that I have thought of a good way after listening to you?"

"Thanks to someone, I couldn't go to bed early last night, so I made an outline of the light novel, as well as some precautions such as the way of using words in the novel." Taking out two sheets of paper from the bag, Xue Hui pointed at Hikigu I gestured.

Last night seemed to be infected by Yukinoshita Yukino's selfless earnestness. Xuehui also turned on the computer, and while replying to Yukinoshita's message, he typed out two texts, which was regarded as a contribution to the work of this club. a force.

After school in the afternoon, Hikigu was on duty, and Yuigahama was dragged by Yumiko Miura to talk behind him, so Xuehui had to arrange things alone, and went to the service department first.

Opening the door, she saw Yukinoshita Yukino sitting on her seat.

As Xue Hui expected, this girl didn't sleep last night and read the manuscript all night, and now she is hiding in the club classroom to catch up on sleep.

Seeing the girl's peaceful sleeping face and little head, Xue Hui didn't bother her, quietly moved a chair and sat beside her, then took out a sketchbook and pencils, and started to draw.

Before completing a task of "contracting three consecutive meals a week", Xue Hui directly obtained 1500 exchange points.Adhering to the new idea that if you don't go, you can't come, Xue Hui exchanged 500 points for elementary painting skills, and then began to record things in his life.

To sum up, I have drawn 10 pictures so far, including 5 pictures of Shizuka Hiratsuka, 3 pictures of Yukinoshita Yukino, 1 picture of Yuigahama Yui, and 1 picture of school scenery.

Well, Mr. Hikigaya was not shortlisted.

What I am drawing now is the 11th one.

A decision made on the spur of the moment may become a precious memory over time.

Although it is only a rudimentary painting skill, the speed of Xue Hui who has already drawn 10 pictures is not slow at all. Gradually, a Yukinoshita Yukino resting on a chair comes alive on the paper in black and white .

After finishing the painting, he closed the book and put it in his schoolbag. Because the movement of turning around was a little louder, Yukinoshita opened his eyes in a daze.

"Hmm~" Stretched as if no one else was there, bent his body into a beautiful curve, Yukinoshita rubbed his eyes, turned his head, saw Xuehui was looking at him with a smile, and then he was stunned .

Just now, when he woke up, he had been watching?

When he was stretching himself, he was also watching?

It was rare for Xuehui to see Yukinoshita showing a different expression on Yukinoshita's face, and said with a smile: "Good afternoon, Yukinoshita."

"Under..." Subconsciously wanting to say hello, Yukino Yukino quickly stopped and looked at Xuehui indifferently, "Did you see it all?"

"Well, I've seen it all." Xue Hui replied honestly.

"When did you come..."

"Let's think about it...about 20 minutes ago." Xue Hui said after thinking for a while.

20 minutes ago... Isn't that when I just fell asleep?

Yukinoshita Yukino never thought that her sleeping appearance would be exposed in front of a boy like this?And the other party just sat beside me for 20 minutes, and I didn't notice anything at all.

"Do you have anything else to say now..." Yukinoshita Yukino took a deep breath, maintaining her sanity that was about to collapse.

"Sleeping Beauty's sleeping face and the scene of waking up are amazing, thank you for the hospitality!"

After speaking, Xuehui gave Yukinoshita Yukino a thumbs up.

"Could it be that Mr. Hiratsuka is in estrus too? Sure enough, no matter how much you hide, you still can't cover up the fact that you're an ape? I think it's better to call the zoo and let them take you away for this kind of sexual harassment." He said, Yukinoshita Yukino directly took out her phone.

Are you really ready to fight?

Seeing that Yukinoshita unlocked the phone and prepared to dial, Xuehui also knew that it was not good to continue playing, and immediately said: "What, I'm sorry, what I said just now was a bit too much. I'm just sorry to see you sleeping so soundly Woke you up. Sorry, not next time."

"Do you want another time?"

"No, there won't be a next time." Xue Hui shook his head and confessed.

Yukinoshita Yukino wouldn't really call the zoo or anything, after seeing Xuehui bowing her head, she let out a sigh of relief and put away her phone.

Looking at Yukinoshita Yukino who was sitting there silently, with dark circles under his eyes, Xue Hui frowned and asked, "Did you read all the manuscripts last night?"

"As I said, I will try my best to do what I promised." Yukinoshita Yukino said, taking it for granted.

"So you stayed all night?"

"It's nothing, just for one night." Yukinoshita Yukino replied, hearing the concern in Xuehui's tone, she felt a little uncomfortable.

"I know you care about the entrustment, but it's better not to stay up late, your spirit is already very bad after just one night." Xue Hui sighed and tried to persuade him.

"I am very aware of my body, it will be fine to go back and rest tonight."

Yukinoshita Yukino straightened a strand of hair around her ear, and replied flatly.

Seeing this, Xue Hui knew that his words would not have much effect, so he didn't say anything else.

At this time, the door of the classroom was opened, and Yuigahama, Hikigaya, and Zaimukza walked in one by one.

Chapter 14

When the three came in, Xue Hui and Xue Nai had put away their previous emotions, except for Hikigu, the other two didn't see any problems at all.

Of course, Mr. Hikiya has no intention of poking it out, quietly participating in club activities and observing everything around him is his favorite thing at present.

When the group sat down, Caimuzuo couldn't wait to say: "Come on, tell us your evaluation."

"So, who will start first?" Bi Qigu said, looking at the expectant Cai Muzuo, he couldn't help praying for him.

Focusing on Yukinoshita Yukino, Yukino frowned, holding the manuscript covered with sticky notes and said, "Although I read it, I'm sorry that I don't understand it well."

"It's okay, it's okay, I have to listen to the opinions of ordinary people occasionally." Cai Muzao said that his condition was much better than yesterday, and he didn't mind.

"Then..." Yukinoshita paused and said, "It's boring, very boring, even reading has become a pain, I can't imagine how I got here last night."

Speaking of this, Yukinoshita glanced at Xuehui, and no one noticed the hidden movements.

"Woo..." Yukinoshita's words pierced Zaimuko's heart like a sharp arrow, causing him to hold his chest in pain, "Can you tell me, where is the boredom?"

"First of all, the grammar is messed up. Why do you use inverted sentences blindly? Is your way of expression so weak? Could it be that your Chinese was taught by a physical education teacher?"

Ah, the physical education teacher is lying down again?But this seems to be what I complained about in the message I sent last night?

Xue Hui looked at Yukinoshita, and found that the other party was still flipping through the manuscript in his hand and continued, "I won't say much about phonetic and English grammar. After all, I haven't even mastered Chinese yet. I don't expect you to be good at English. There may be something outstanding. But here, why does the heroine take off her clothes? Has it become a fixed routine in light novels when there is a disagreement? What about the premise? What is the reason? What about emotional description? Your common sense is all in your Lost in delusions?"

"Woo!!!!" Under a series of merciless blows from Yukinoshita, Zaimuza knelt on the ground in pain.

"Eh... isn't that a bit too much?" Hikigu looked at Yukinoshita with a calm face and Xuehui with an expression of "I won't comfort him", and didn't know what to do.

You said dumpling?Didn't you see that she was almost asleep?

"Although there are still a lot of things to say, it doesn't matter what it looks like." Yukinoshita looked at Yuihama Yui, "Yuigahama-san, it's time for you to talk about your evaluation."

"Oh? Ah..." Ms. Tuanzi, who had almost fallen into a dormant state in front of a stack of manuscripts, woke up, looked at Yukinoshita who was talking to her, and Zaimoza who looked forward to it, and smiled silly Laughing, he said after thinking hard, "Well, you know a lot of rare Chinese characters!"

Tsk, sometimes natural idiots really don't hurt people without a trace.

Facing the girl's embarrassed expression, Zaimuza looked at Hikigaya sideways, choked up and said, "Hachiman, you must understand me, right?"

Putting on a rare smiling face, Hikigu looked at Zaimuza and said, "Well, as long as the illustrations are good enough, it doesn't matter what the content of the novel is, doesn't it?"

"Although it is true that some light novels are like this now, they are a little bit suspicious of map guns." Xue Hui said, but there was no blame in his tone. Eyeball works, so many people understand light novels like this.

"Even your partner, Hachiman, is like this? Hiratsuka-kun, you are my last straw!" Saikiza was still a little unwilling, and looked at Yukiki.

"Are you sure you want me to tell you?" Xue Hui narrowed his eyes, revealing a dangerous light.

"Woo... at least let me die!"

"Then, I have already said so much before, so let me summarize it a little bit." Xue Hui said so, and slowly spit out two words, "Dung."

"Pfft!" Zaimuza almost spat out a mouthful of blood.

But it wasn't over yet, Xuehui continued: "I won't talk about grammar. Put aside the vulgar title, may I ask if you carefully wrote out an outline before writing it? Could it be that you thought of where to write it? The type? Although there are such people, I don’t think you have this level now. Also, there are too many words with unclear meanings in the second grade, too many, too many, important things are said three times. Although It’s quite common to use these words in light novels, but you use them too much! Have you considered the reader’s feelings? You said you’re going to contribute? I think you’re just kidding yourself. Look at you I think such a manuscript is a waste of time and life. If it is submitted for submission, a patient editor may read three chapters, but an impatient editor may not even read a page. Grand prize? Achievement? Sorry nonexistent."

"Sure enough, it's exactly what I thought. Is the most innocuous thing the scariest?" Mr. Hikigu had a new understanding of Xue Hui, but fortunately he knew that the other party had something to say, so he didn't intervene.

Without waiting for the others to speak, Xue Hui asked, "How is it? Facing such evaluations, do you still have the courage to continue writing?"

Contrary to everyone's expectations, Zai Muzuo stood up abruptly, put his hands on his hips and laughed loudly: "Hmph, although the evaluation did hurt me, but as a swordsman general, how can I give up lightly because of this setback! And , Isn’t it great that my novels can be seen by others and hear their thoughts? I’ve decided that I’ll start writing again after I go back!”

"Could it be that you are a shivering M by accident?" Yuigahama Yui looked at the other party in horror, and put herself in the position. If she was judged so by others, she probably would have hid in Yukino's arms and cried?

Something seems wrong?

"Well, good reaction." Xuehui looked at Caimuzuo, without putting on a face anymore, took out the two printed papers from his bag, and put them in Caimuzuo's hand, "Although the ability There is still something lacking, but I feel your persistence, here are some methods and precautions in writing light novels that I compiled, take it and have a look, it should be of some help to you."

There were two pieces of paper, looking at what was written on them, Cai Muzuo was very excited, he looked like Xiaobai was going to hug his thigh when he met the master, but was pushed away by Xuehui who noticed it.