"The following is the content of alchemy upgrade."

"A time and place were agreed upon, and Sean went home to make alchemy. A few days later, Sean was promoted to level 6."

"We also successfully refined a combination potion."

"Well, Sean's promotion through alchemy is a good way to grow. Refining the combined potion also shows that Sean has certain attainments in alchemy."

"Of course, the alchemy process can be described in more detail, such as Sean's concentration, difficulties and breakthroughs he encountered during alchemy. This will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's growth process."

“Then there’s the fourth main line, which is going on adventures in the wild.”

Q version Vic quickly flipped through a few pages of the Book of the World and then said.

"After making preparations (including melee weapons, etc.), Sean set off, describing what he saw along the way, communicating with his teammates, explaining the settings, describing Sean's performance on the way (such as using potions, dealing with unfamiliar situations, etc.), describing everyone The envy and jealousy are once again set off by the side characters.”

"This is quite reasonable."

"Sean is ready to go, and what he sees along the way and communicates with his teammates can reveal his character and relationships."

"Explaining settings can also allow high-dimensional observers to better understand some of the rules of this world."

"The description of Sean's behavior during the journey is quite realistic, such as his unfamiliarity when using potions, which is in line with Sean's growth process."

"The envy and jealousy of everyone also highlight Sean's excellence from the side."

"Of course, you can also be more detailed when describing what you see along the way, such as the scenery along the way, the people and things you encounter. This will make high-dimensional observers feel more immersive."

"Then it's about fighting monsters."

"Arrive at the destination, fight monsters, and describe it in detail."

"Well, fighting monsters is a common plot in novels, but it's not easy to write well."

“Describing the process of fighting monsters in detail can increase the tension and excitement of the story.”

"You can describe in detail the monster's appearance, abilities, attack methods, and the response strategies of Sean and his teammates. This will allow high-dimensional observers to feel the intensity of the battle more."

"And then there's the twist in the battle."

"It was found that the monster was difficult to defeat, and several of Sean's teammates died. Sean used Combination Potion I after exhausting his mana and thinking, to counterattack, and clean up the battlefield after the war. Describe everyone's mood and summary."

"This episode is very dramatic."

"From the monster becoming stronger to Sean's counterattack, this plot twist will be quite fascinating."

"The deaths of Sean's teammates will make high-dimensional observers feel the cruelty of the battle even more. Sean's use of combined potions to fight back also shows Sean's wisdom and adaptability. ="

"It is also important to clean up the battlefield after the war and describe everyone's mood and summary. This can allow high-dimensional observers to better understand the results and impact of the battle."

"However, we can describe Sean's mana exhaustion in more detail, such as Sean's exhaustion and despair. This will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's plight at that time."

"Then there's the fun-loving counter-killing plot." Q version Vic continued to read the contents of the Book of the World.

"A heavy treasure (can be used to make a staff) and hundreds of seven-leaf white flowers were found in the depths. Sean first deployed a shield, and then both sides turned against each other at the same time. Sean used Combination Potion II, then used spells to strengthen himself, and pulled out a melee weapon. Kill them all (because of insufficient magic power, they can only fight in close combat. One person tried to escape, but was killed by Sean using the ejection technique. It can describe the thoughts and duel of the last person who wanted to die with Sean), describing the psychology of everyone, and Sean's failure Slightly injured, but ecstatic.”

"After returning to the city, you can alchemy with peace of mind. If you succeed and reach level 7, you can consider purchasing items and describing other life scenes. You can add more mini-plots or write in diary style. It will last for three and a half months. It is mid-April at this time. "

"It is a reasonable plot development to continue alchemy and upgrade after returning to the city. Purchasing items and describing other life scenes can enrich Sean's life and allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's daily life."

“Adding subplots and diary-style descriptions can also add interest and realism to the story.”

"However, the alchemy process can be described in more detail, such as Sean's concentration, difficulties and breakthroughs encountered during alchemy. This will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand Sean's growth process."

"The follow-up is the connection content of the plot."

"Confirm the news of the war, join the caravan, become a mercenary, and set off together to Hogel City in the Kingdom of Karis. During the half month of the journey, many soldiers interrogated and described the caravan's bribery, etc."

"This episode is very realistic."

"After confirming the news of the war, he joined the caravan and became a mercenary. This is in line with Sean's character and growth needs."

"The experiences along the way were also very rich, and plots such as soldier interrogation and caravan bribery added to the realism and interest of the story."

"Moreover, it could be more detailed when describing soldiers' interrogations and caravan bribes."

"For example, the expressions, tone and interrogation process of the soldiers, as well as the method and amount of bribes paid by the caravan, will allow high-dimensional observers to better understand the plot of the story."

"What follows is the classic twists and turns."

"If you encounter danger on the way, work together to defeat it. You can consider monsters and robbers (explain the reasons for becoming robbers). On the way, you will learn about the spine of the trainee-level ore-eating beast and the matching seeds. Purchase it and upgrade it to level 8 on the way. There are also cliffs. Part of the preparation, this time is May)"

"This paragraph is just average."

"Encountering danger on the way and joining forces to break it is a common plot in fantasy novels, but it is not easy to write well."

"Explaining the reasons for the robbers and the situation of the monsters can allow high-dimensional observers to better understand the source of the danger. Learning about the information of the trainee-level mineral-eating beast spine and purchasing it also increases the interest and suspense of the story."

"Moreover, the cliff is also a clever foreshadowing, but it can still be more detailed in the process of describing the danger and joining forces to break it, such as the specific manifestation of the danger, Sean and his teammates' response strategies, and the details of the battle, so that high-dimensional observers can feel the intensity of the battle more."

Q version of Vic said lightly.

...

After listening to the description of Q version of Vic, the illusory Vic and the real Vic nodded with satisfaction.

In fact, what Q version of Vic said can be fully known in the higher narrative layer, and will not be affected by the information distortion between different narrative layers.

Because Q version of Vic is actually a projection created by them detecting a certain intelligent existence in the higher narrative layer and using it as a template.

What it says can be completely replicated at a higher narrative level.

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