Backtracking to the Age of Literature and Art

Chapter 619 Reading Comprehension (Second Change)

Looking at the manuscript on the table, Yu Dong smiled, then got up and replaced his teacup with a pinch of new tea.

After the new tea leaves were brewed, he walked to the corridor outside.

Jinling in early June was already very hot, but the two rows of camphor planted in front of the apartment building left a shade. Standing in the corridor, Yu Dong looked down and saw Yu Hua and the others playing cards under the shade of the trees.

Bi Feiyu just played a hand of cards, wanted to stretch his neck, looked up and saw Yu Dong standing in the corridor watching them.

"Hehe, why is Yu Yuanwai free now?"

Yu Dong smiled and said, "The writing is over."

Bi Feiyu was taken aback: "Have you finished writing?"

The other three also looked up.

"Finished?"

Yu Hua threw the cards in his hand on the table, and ran upstairs, Bi Feiyu was behind and didn't catch them.

Mo Yan put the cards on the table with a smile, and walked upstairs.

Yu Hua has already gone upstairs, "I'm done writing, where's the manuscript?"

Yu Dong blinked at Yu Hua, "You're in the study, what are you doing?"

"What am I doing? Let me see, I want to see what kind of masterpiece you have written after two months of retreat." He then went into the room.

Yu Dong grabbed him by the collar, "If you say that, I won't show it to you."

"Let go, this is the little gown your sister-in-law just bought for me."

While the two were arguing, Mo Yan also came up. He ignored the two of them and went directly into the room, then went to the study to get the manuscript and sat on the sofa.

Yu Hua yelled, "Okay, Mo Yan, steal a chicken, right?"

Mo Yan stared at the manuscript without even looking at Yu Hua, "I advise you, tell me something sweet, Fei Yu and Xiaobo will also come up later, and I have to decide who will read after me. .”

Yu Hua could bend and stretch, and walked over with a smile, "I'll get up early tomorrow morning to pick the cucumbers that Feiyu planted for you to eat."

Mo Yan nodded in satisfaction, "Sit down next to me, I'll give it to you after reading the first page."

Bi Feiyu and Wang Xiaobo also came up here, and asked Yu Dong who was standing at the door, "Where are the two of them?"

Yu Dong pouted his lips in the room: "It's the seat inside."

"In a hurry." Bi Feiyu walked over with a smile, and then put two stacks of cards in front of Yu Hua and Mo Yan: "This is the card for the two of you. After the book is finished, we will continue the frontier."

Yu Hua and Mo Yan wanted to talk to him, and they were all staring at Yu Dong's new book.

Bi Feiyu and Wang Xiaobo looked at each other and smiled, then sat beside them, waiting for Yu Hua and Mo Yan to finish watching, and then they would watch.

……

A few of them were reading the manuscript, while Yu Dong ran downstairs and lay comfortably on the recliner left by Yu Hua.

The afternoon sun was blocked by the thick leaves, and a gust of wind blew through and stirred the leaves so that the sun could take the opportunity to sneak through the gaps.

The sunlight that sneaked in had just touched the corner of Yu Dong's clothes when it was brushed away by the leaves again.

Yu Dong closed his eyes, as if he could hear the sound of the sun sneaking in and fleeing quietly, which also took his thoughts away. Along the road beside the playground, the sound of cicadas, shouts, and water waves slowly mixed together , making summer rich and warm.

It is naturally a big dream to give back to a good day.

So, Yu Dong fell asleep.

When Dong woke up, the sun was already hanging in the west, waiting to get off work.

He rubbed his eyes in a daze, then went upstairs to his home in a daze.

Mo Yan's group of four was still sitting on the sofa, in the same posture as before Yu Dong went downstairs.

"Haven't you finished it yet?" Yu Dong muttered.

Wang Xiaobo was at the end of the list, and he looked at Yu Dong, "It's so long, how can I finish it in a while, I guess it will take a while."

"Then take your time, I'll cook, and Teacher Cheng will be back soon."

Cheng Yanqiu was at the piano room this afternoon, giving extra lessons to a few students who were going to participate in the competition, so he definitely didn't have time to come back and cook.

When Yu Hua heard the word "rice", she nodded and said, "Well, don't make it too meaty. I've been eating a lot of meat recently. Don't drink white wine. Get some beer and chill it with well water."

Yu Dong rolled his eyes: "Did I say I would keep you guys for dinner?"

Yu Hua patted the manuscript in his hand: "We have been working hard to proofread the manuscript for you, and seeing that I have found more than a dozen typos and even a grammatical error, you can't justify it if you don't invite us to dinner. "

Yu Dong didn't bother to talk to Yu Hua, but it was impossible for him to really ignore Yu Hua's meal.

Since they wanted to take care of it, they simply called Fu Jing and the others. They haven't had a meal together in this period of time, so they can have a good meal tonight.

But it was getting late, and it was too late for him to start cooking, so he simply called the restaurant at the door to make the food and deliver it. By the way, there was also the cold beer that Yu Hua wanted.

He was almost done with work here, and Mo Yan was the first to finish the manuscript.

Holding the last page of the manuscript, Mo Yan tilted his head to look at Yu Dong, and muttered, "How did you manage to write a suspenseful story to the depths of human nature? Or, how did you write a story so deep into human nature?" Written so suspensefully?"

"Suspenseful?" Yu Dong asked with a smile.

"Suspense, when I first read it, I thought it was a suspense mystery novel, but after watching it, it felt a bit magical and realistic. After reading it, I realized that this is all your tricks, or realism. "Mo Yan shook his head, and said: "I like your handling of the curse very much. You didn't directly deny the curse, but blurred the curse. I know that the reason why you did this is not to make some gods and ghosts. It's a ghost, but it's because things like curses are originally integrated into life, and what happened to the Qin family later has indeed a lot to do with this curse."

Yu Dong nodded: "Mo Yan, your reading comprehension is very good. I really think so. Originally, I wanted to express this idea further, but after thinking about it, I still left it there and let the readers figure it out by themselves." Ponder."

After reading the manuscript in her hand, Yu Hua pulled Mo Yan with her hand, "Give me the second one quickly."

Mo Yan gave the final manuscript to Yu Hua, and said, "Actually, I still feel sorry for some things. For example, you didn't give a detailed description of A Yuan's past. This person is unknown. We only know that he was a tailor. Suddenly it's underground, and you haven't even said which side he's on."

Yu Dong didn't speak, but Yu Hua said, "Those details are irrelevant, so it's good not to write. I think Yu Yuanwai's handling is good. The main body is clear and firm, and it's not good if there are too many small branches."

Bi Feiyu said: "I think what Mo Yan said is reasonable. The role of A Yuan can indeed be expanded. From his perspective, it is true that many things can be discovered, which are related to war."

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