College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 15 Words with "three" (1)
(Hubei volume in 2006)

composition test questions
Read the sentence below, and write a composition according to request. (60 points)
In Chinese, "three" is a meaningful number that makes up many words.For example: "Think twice before acting", "Three reflections on myself", "Inference from one example", "Three people walk together, there must be my teacher", "Three cobblers, the best Zhuge Liang" and so on.These words are not only a summary of social life phenomena or life experience, but also imply certain cultural connotations and philosophy of life.

Please write an article based on your association and perception of the above words or other words with "three" (note the meaning of "three" in the word) that you are familiar with. Think about words.

Requirements: self-defined concept, self-made title, self-selected style, no less than 800 words.

Question Analysis
This is a topical composition without a title in a situational style. First, create a writing situation for the material to reduce the difficulty of reviewing the questions, then attach prompts to indicate the writing angle, hint the theme intention, and finally put forward the composition requirements.The topic with "three" words is broad in content, with many angles, and it is not difficult. Candidates are easy to write.Compared with the 2005 Hubei composition test questions, it is much easier.However, it is best for candidates not to stick to the words listed in the materials, and try to avoid collisions in the selection of materials, such as "three visits to the thatched cottage", "one fence with three stakes", "one monk carries water to drink, two monks carry water to drink, three A monk has no water to drink", and so on, you can write a different composition as much as possible under the premise of being faithful to the material.When conceiving, choose small points, think deeply (you can explore the root of the word "three"), and don't fall into the quagmire of listing phenomena. It looks lively on the surface, but in fact it has no ideological connotation and is empty.Overall, although the 2006 Hubei college entrance examination composition questions were unexpected, they were reasonable, concise, open, flexible and independent, and should be regarded as a relatively classic composition question.

Writing Ideas Tips
Candidates can start from the following three angles when reviewing questions.

1. The meaning of "three".The numbers expressed include "Three people walk together, there must be my teacher", "Three cobblers are worth one Zhuge Liang";

2. The angle of "three".They are good at thinking (thinking twice before acting), self-reflection (examining yourself three times), learning methods (drawing inferences from one example), modest learning (three people must have my teacher), and cooperation spirit (three cobblers are worth one Zhuge Liang) and so on.

3. The integration of "three".You can write "personal cultivation" (think twice, examine yourself three times, draw inferences from one example, etc.), and you can write "group consciousness" (three people must have my teacher, three cobblers are better than one Zhuge Liang, etc.).There are many viewpoints that can be combined, just make sense.

Full score sample essay
Sanchakou

(a candidate from Hubei)

The three I were guarding three different forks. The first two gradually became desperate, so they could only choose to escape. They fled to the third fork together. The three I met at the same time to make a solemn choice.

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一
"Is the exam coming soon?" My mother sat on the sofa and asked me.

"Understood!" I got up and went back to my room, closed the door heavily, leaned my back against the door, and took a deep breath.

Why can I not do what I like, but study is an exception?

I always say to myself, since I don't like it, can't I choose to give up?The distance in time makes me feel hesitant besides hesitation.I became stubborn and extreme, choosing the way forward.

I like literature and music. In the dead of night, I put on my Walkman and lean on my desk alone, let my mind fly, let my soul wander, and enjoy the joy of being free; but this can't last long, the "me" at the fork It always pulls me back in reality, and walks towards a job that is higher than me.I had no choice but to pray to the god of luck, but I have always been passive and depressed in my studies.

I always have the mentality that I can get away with it, but how can I be so lucky every time!
I became inexplicably panicked, from invisible pressure.

I began to choose to escape, escaped to the first fork, and I became less like myself...

two

"I haven't seen you for a long time... how are you doing now?" Gradually, I was afraid of hearing these words from my old friend, and always felt that the distance between each other was getting farther and farther.I hated that abstract thing called distance that made us strangers to each other and less of ourselves than we used to be.

"Shall we go out and play together some other day?"

"Ah."

A few days later, there was another text message, "I'm sorry, we won't rest that day, so we can't go." "Oh—it's okay." Actually, when I grow up, I feel more and more that sometimes the agreement is not necessary to be kept. It is no longer like when I was a child, I hooked my two little fingers together and promised not to change it for 100 years. Thinking about it now, it is really ridiculous.

No one understood the feeling of silence, I left the second fork sadly, wandering aimlessly, just like that.

three

When I was alone, I became surprisingly quiet, afraid of noise, and felt that what was hidden behind the noise were empty souls.

I wandered to the Sanchakou and looked at the three lost selves, who were equally sad and complained together, and there seemed to be a gap between each of us who stayed at different forks.I faced the three-way intersection, trying to keep the three of me calm.

If you really want to get out of that hesitation and despair, you must first recognize your different selves.I came to the center of the three forks again, inspecting the other forks, I no longer let the two I wander, I seem to see the trees of knowledge growing on the road paved with books, and the flowers of wisdom blooming , oh, that's my choice, smelling the fragrance of books, accompanied by beautiful music, I walk forward...

score review
The "Sanchakou" set up by the author is the combination of virtual and real, the route of the author's thinking, and the starting point of the author's spiritual purification. The fork can be said to be an excuse carefully arranged by the candidates, and it is enlightening to read.The natural subsections make the author's thinking clearer; the metaphorical hints add to the thickness of the article, all of which show the candidate's writing skills.

"Come and go" in the burden reduction

(a candidate from Hubei)

There is such a group of smart monkeys, they were angry that they ate four chestnuts at night but only three in the morning, so the master stomped his feet and said, "From now on, I will give you four chestnuts in the morning and three in the evening!" They were happy in their hearts.

How did the monkeys who thought they were smart know that the extra chestnut in the morning was "moved" from the four in the evening, and they didn't even get half a chestnut.

Sitting in the examination room, I couldn't help but think of us who are reducing the burden. We are somewhat similar to these monkeys, right?
We used to clamor that the life of studying at school twelve hours a day was too bitter and tiring.So, finally one day, our school time was compressed to eight hours.Everyone applauded.However, gradually, we, who are smarter than silly monkeys, discovered that "minus" didn't disappear out of thin air, it was just secretly transferred to the home.A sheet of papers, a book of exercises... We spent one section after another of "big exercises" and "evening self-study" at home.Why is this so?it's actually really easy.Just like in that story, the total number of chestnuts has not decreased, and our examination system and the method of selecting talents have not changed, so we are destined to pay the same efforts as the students of the previous session, the previous session...the students who did not reduce the burden, to be able to Cross the single-plank bridge of the college entrance examination.

Some people may ask: "Is the total number of chestnuts really only seven?" Alas, the owner is too poor after all, and he can only buy seven chestnuts. However, the little monkey is his pet, so he will Find a way to buy more chestnuts.After all, reducing the burden is a brand-new initiative of the country in terms of education. As a new thing, in a developing country with special national conditions like China, it still faces various difficulties.From a certain point of view, our burden reduction seems to be an increase in the country's burden.

Now, many of us are pressing on the big rock of "college entrance examination".How to reduce the psychological burden of "admission"?How to make it easier for more students to enter university?After all, this is a matter of national development, so I can't say much about it.However, no nation will neglect the cultivation of the next generation, not to mention the Chinese nation that has gone through 5000 years of vicissitudes!I believe that with the progress in all aspects and the development of the economy, "burden reduction" will definitely break through all kinds of resistance and achieve a real "burden reduction".

Then, in this transitional period, in order not to be hungry, the smart little monkeys should learn to find chestnuts to eat by themselves, and not be satisfied with the trick of "going around". To find a seaway with a suitable sail and wind direction, sail to the other side of victory.The sea is vast and boundless. We know that there is not only one such road, so why bother to enjoy the emptiness of "turning and turning"?

One day in the future, when we see teenage children living a colorful life under the sun, we will also have knowing smiles on our faces: they are no longer stupid Monkeys, because the master gave them more chestnuts, they are really happy "little monkeys".

score review
This article is derived from the story of "going up and down" and associating with the disadvantages of the current education. The author confidently analyzes the problems existing in the current education, which can be said to be unique.Using the story of "turning and falling" to compare the current situation of burden reduction, it shows the examinee's insight and ability to analyze and judge things, and pointedly points out that the root cause lies in the college entrance examination system, economic development and education system. rational thinking and opinions.Of course, some points of view are also debatable, and they can be described as flawless.

The Wisdom of "Three"
(a candidate from Hubei)

I often hear someone smugly saying that they are "lucky in three lives", and I wonder: This person only has this life, so how can he get "three lives"?As time passed, I slowly realized that the knowledge of "three" is indeed not small.For example, phrases such as "Think twice before acting", "Infer other things from one example", "If three people walk together, there must be my teacher", the word "three" in them not only summarizes social life phenomena, life experience, or rich life philosophy, but also contains It contains a lot of wisdom, which is indeed thought-provoking and thought-provoking.

During the Three Kingdoms period, in order to achieve a great cause, Liu Bei "visited the thatched cottage three times" earnestly asked Zhuge Wolong to come out of the mountain three times, deduced the good story of "three visits to trouble the world's schemes, and two dynasties to help the veterans' hearts", which established the pattern of the three kingdoms in the world.The charm in the "three" tells us: "As long as you are sincere, gold and stone are the best." If you want to get help and support from others, you must treat others with sincerity, even if you are repeatedly rejected by the other party.

Confucius is a famous great thinker in the Spring and Autumn Period of our country and the founder of the Confucian school, and has always been honored as a "sage".However, this well-learned man sighed with emotion that "if three of us walk together, there must be my teacher".Confucius once studied under Tan Zi, Chang Hong, Shi Xiang, and Lao Dan. Although Tan Zi's disciples were not as knowledgeable as Confucius, Confucius' attitude of humbly studying was admirable.In Confucius' view, there must be something worth learning and learning from the talents and wisdom of all people.Today, the principle of "three cobblers, Zhuge Liang is the best" also shows that wisdom is hidden in the "three", hidden among all living beings.

In our review for the college entrance examination, we pay the most attention to "drawing inferences from one instance".From a specific problem solution, abstract an answering idea, summarize an answering method, and then solve similar problems.The same is true of learning, seeking similarities and differences from numerous luxuriant and chaotic life phenomena, looking for laws; and then using the laws to solve new problems.This kind of inductive reasoning and deductive reasoning mixed and repeated research process runs through the learning.

Now, the people of the country are looking forward to the realization of the "three links" of postal, commercial and air links between the two sides of the Taiwan Strait, and the third handshake of cooperation between the KMT and the Communist Party. This is a win-win opportunity and wisdom.It will enable the two sides of the strait to obtain more sufficient information, more convenient transportation, more smooth capital flow and more efficient resource allocation, so that each side can find its place and realize its potential, greatly improve the competitiveness of the cross-strait economies, accelerate the speed of common development, and promote the development of the Chinese nation. overall revitalization of the economy.Undoubtedly, it is in line with the common interests and long-cherished wishes of the people on both sides of the strait, and it contains bright prospects for national prosperity and national prosperity.

"Three" contains philosophy, and "three" contains wisdom.Seek people with sincerity, study with an open mind, seek the law with all your heart, and seek wealth through cooperation.Life is to gain enlightenment through repeated repetitions, to pick and choose among the complicated phenomena, to be ashamed to ask others, to learn knowledge and to develop talents among all living beings.This is true for us as individuals, and it is true for a nation as well.The reform and opening up and the revitalization of China cannot do without the support of all corners of the country, and also need the wisdom and help of guests and friends all over the world.

What a "three" wisdom!
score review
This composition in the examination room starts from the doubts about the "three", and revolves around the enlightenment of the wisdom of the "three" to life. The center is prominent and the meaning is rich.The full text expounds the wisdom contained in the word "three" from the four perspectives of seeking people sincerely, studying with an open mind, seeking the law with concentration, and seeking wealth through cooperation, and finally concludes the full text to deepen the main purpose.The content is thick, the structure is compact, and the hierarchy is well organized.

Grasp the support of the triangle
(a candidate from Hubei)

In the same plane, three points that are not on the same straight line are connected in sequence to form a triangle.The ancient Egyptian pharaoh took advantage of the stable, firm and pressure-resistant characteristics of this triangle to create the world miracle of the pyramid.The pyramid supports the permanent pressure with its unique structure according to the law of triangle.

The towering trees stand tall and straight, with luxuriant branches and leaves, which come from the triangular support formed by the roots and trunks that are deeply rooted in the earth.Therefore, a dead tree will wither.

Lingyun high-rise is majestic and majestic, and its momentum is shocking, precisely because of the silent support of the triangle formed by the solid foundation stone.Therefore, if the foundation sinks, the building will be in danger.

The strong pillars support the century-old bridge, and the tough steel rails support the roaring train.Because they all benefit from the support of the triangular structure.

(End of this chapter)