College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 16 Words with "three" (2)
Ten years of hard work in the audience can support one minute on the stage; ten years of hard work in reading can support one's world fame.Is there no "triangular" support in it?The answer is yes.Without the support of the "triangle" composed of will, goal and pursuit, there is no success; without the support of the "triangle" of will, goal and pursuit, how can the dazzling brilliance not be overshadowed?

After Sima Qian suffered the humiliation of castration, it was precisely because of the support of faith, perseverance and pursuit that he completed the historical masterpiece "Historical Records".

Gou Jian, the King of Yue, endured all kinds of humiliation and humiliation, but his ambition, determination and perseverance supported him. In the end, he defeated the Wu army with less and defeated the Wu army, and his reputation will last forever.

A weightlifter who broke the world record said: "I can support the world record, but I can't lift the sweat that I usually leave." Oh, it turns out that the world record is also supported by will, belief and sweat.

What can support astonishing miracles is also astonishingly ordinary and simple. It is no longer ordinary to be ordinary to the extreme, and it is no longer simple to persist in simplicity to the end.

Scientific theories come from the support of countless irrefutable experiments; correct claims come from the support of millions of people who sincerely support them.We are bound to be led astray by prejudice if we disregard the supports upon which we can lean.

Only by brewing and cultivating your own supporting strength can you hold up tomorrow's dream and turn it into glory.

The "triangle theorem" teaches us: To gain a foothold in this increasingly competitive society, only by grasping the "three points and three lines" in our own life can we succeed.Without the support of beliefs, dreams, and self-confidence in life, how can we exchange for the splendor of life?
The power of support is great, the process of support is difficult, and the result of support is also silent.Only by grasping the "triangle" of life can we support our own glorious life.

score review
The article is rich in examples, and a large number of typical examples are used to list and arrange, which is quite dialectical.The argumentative language in the article has a strong explanatory momentum, full of coherent and aggressive feeling.It starts from the pyramid and ends with the topic of "supporting our own glorious life", which is also a small bright spot.

Sansheng is lucky to meet you

(a candidate from Hubei)

In the previous life, in this life, in the next life, all my luck in these three lives is just to be able to meet you.

--Inscription

The Buddha said that cause and effect have fate, and thousands of years of reincarnation are all caused by fate.I think, the last life is also the previous life, I must have looked back thousands of times, searched for billions of times, only then I met you, the only you in the crowd!

I am a child cursed by fate.When I was very young, God took away my mother... a familiar figure disappeared in the blink of an eye, and that feeling, that heartache, ran through my entire life.Since then, I have become sensitive and suspicious, reticent, closed-minded, insecure, and lacking in humanity.

I thought I was going to live like this forever, sleeping with emptiness, sleeping with loneliness.However, Sansheng is lucky, I met you...

I still remember the first time I saw you, it was in that cool late autumn when withered and yellow leaves were flying all over the sky.You appeared in my sight as the class teacher in the third grade of primary school: you are slightly fat, with short hair, and you are dressed in black. You give warmth when you smile, and seriousness when you don’t smile.At that time, I was used to guarding my own spiritual world alone and not allowing outsiders to get involved. It was the strength that was disguised until the end, and it was also the tranquility that no one could break, and I didn't have any extra feelings for you.

The strange thing is that you didn't ignore me because of my indifference, and let me be a study committee member, in charge of the affairs of the class.Whenever there is an opportunity, they praise me, and whenever they have time, they talk to me, encourage me to communicate with others, and constantly teach me some basic principles of life.You love me, I know, but the ice in my heart is so firm, so cold...

Time flies between your care and my indifference. Three years have passed in a flash. I left you and entered a key junior high school. I have lost a lot of contact with you. However, you have never given up on your influence and love for me. love.

In the past few years, you have cared for me more, asked about my health, and your love is as strong as water.

I still remember the afternoon before the high school entrance examination.You asked someone to send me a letter, and seeing the familiar handwriting on the envelope, I felt the most beautiful family affection in the world: Come on, take the exam well, I always believe that you are the best!My tears flowed down my cheeks, and there was a warm current surging in my heart. I seemed to hear the sound of the ice in my heart beginning to break, and I couldn't help laughing. This was the first time I was happy and joyful after my mother "gone". smile.

After being admitted to a key high school in the county, the distance between our school and your home has become farther, but our hearts have become closer.You often come to see me with fruits and give me all the maternal love.

Your letters and phone calls have become my source of warmth, your visits and heart-to-heart talks have become my happy homeland, your remittances and rice and vegetables have become my happy granary, and when I long for them, you are the timely rain like spring.

The college entrance examination is approaching, and you send a text message: "Son, dear: You have to study hard and take the exam well. I always think you are the best kid!" Teacher, you don't know, I cried again, you Always make me cry, make me cry with excitement, make me cry with joy...

Today is June [-]th, the first subject of the first day of the college entrance examination.At this moment, I think, you must be standing outside the examination room holding an insulated box, because you said that no matter how far you are from here, you will definitely come to the examination room.I don't know why you came late today, did you carry too much stuff, or was there a traffic jam?Is it difficult to save the fare on foot, or is it the wrong way? ...If you have come here from hundreds of miles away, I really want to run outside the examination room, hug you, kiss you, and say to you: "I want to call you mom, teacher!"

Mom, I was lucky to meet you in my third life. Although you are not my biological mother, you have fulfilled all my hopes for maternal love. Mom, I love you!It was you who taught me how to love, how to live, and how to pursue.God is fair, it took away a real mother, but gave me back a great maternal love!

Sansheng is lucky to meet you, I hope I will have the next "Sansheng", and the next one, life after life, I will always be lucky enough to meet you!
Mom, did you hear that?I hope that the mother who gave birth to me will go to heaven, and the mother who loves me will stay on earth forever!

I love you mom!

score review
The outstanding feature of this article is that it has real feelings, and can move people with emotion and scenery.The title of the opening chapter explains the three lives, emphasizes the importance and greatness of "you", and highlights the title of the essay.The Buddha's words entered the topic, which was natural and appropriate, and set the emotional tone for the following.Candidates pay attention to the description of details, from appearance, clothing, conversation, letter writing, test delivery and other details. The touching scenes are vivid, shocking and tearful.

Sansheng is fortunate
(a candidate from Hubei)

In the 24 solar terms, the memories flow golden and colorful, you have beautiful bones and exquisite clothes.

--Inscription

Beginning of Spring · softly lined with three spring grasses, softly spreading a ray of fragrance
The elf of light is colorfully dressed, red orange red green blue blue purple, that is the pride given to it by Yangchun, the elegance given to it by March, the dew on the petals reflects the softness of the whole world, I shake it off and hold it in the palm of my hand. The alluring face melted into a drop of color between the fingers, condensed into the only indelible memory.

Remember the fireworks that year?The fireworks on the night of March, the sky is full of abundance and strong, and there is an unknown fragrance of flowers floating in the dark. Your eyes are shining like waves, your lips are like red peaches, and your intoxicating beauty and enchantment are engraved in my heart. The picture, dare not and can not forget.From then on, I am sure that you belong to March, the grass in March is your gentle and boneless hands, and the sunshine in March is your shining smiling lips.

In March of that year, you were exactly nine years old, and I was eight years and nine months old.

Slight summer: a frame full of roses contends for beauty, and the three volts also feel quiet and cool
The roses bloomed again, as beautiful and fragrant as that year.The light spots of roses under the fence are fluttering and full of sadness.Close your eyes and be in a daze for a while, deep in your memory, your smiling lips are sweeter than this flower.

Remember the promise of that year?Under the roses, you are wearing a clean white shirt, a pair of old washed and whitened jeans, and a pair of dirty white sneakers. You squint your eyes, under your long soft eyelashes, looking through the eyelashes, your clear eyes are A quiet lake.You said to me, you are the rose flower and I am the rose leaf. Together we are the most beautiful rose flower in the world. Therefore, we cannot be separated, and we must be together forever.After you finished speaking, you looked at me and smiled happily, showing bright white teeth flashing in the sun, and I smelled the secret fragrance between your lips and teeth in a trance.

But where is the human heart that once said that it will never be separated, where is it now, how can it be willing to leave me alone to enjoy the fragrance of this piece of flowers?
Great Cold·All the Flowers Are Falling Yi Ren is thin, and the three-ninth cold weather can give me gentleness. The snowflakes in the air fall gracefully one by one, blooming the peerless beauty and tenderness.That's the dandruff that God forgot to wash my hair, my dear, I also forgot to wash my hair, but why did the sadness fall all over the floor?White roof, white house, white birds flying past my years without leaving a sound, standing in the snow and catching a snowflake, watching it turn into transparent water drops bit by bit, reflecting a tragic whiteness, the whole world is like A lavish service.

Remember the snowman from that year?The carrot you inserted into its face to make a nose is as pink as your little face, and you covered my face with a "huh" in the palm of your hand, and you said that you are the warm tenderness that Snow Maiden gave me.Missing is like these pieces of snowflakes, burying me inch by inch, blurring my sight but why can't you blur your sad face in memory, that snow girl who said she would give me warmth, how can you make a slip of the tongue?

(postscript)
In the autumn of 2003, you disappeared into my world without a sound. I thought of your gentle face over and over again on the edge of the barrenness, and missed the spring, summer, autumn and winter you shared with me.You said that you were born in March in Yangchun, so "three" is your lucky number. You said that you have been stuck with me, a little ghost since you were five years old, so I am the happiness that you can't get rid of for three lives. , you left me for three years and three months, I will paint spring grass, summer flowers, and winter snow to miss you deeply, and I will write three springs, three volts, and three nines to express our friendship deeply to miss.Dear, greet me softly, when will you come back, like the monsoon passing through, like waking up from a dream overnight, with the memory of Fenfei?

score review
This article uses the change of time to describe the precipitation of friendship, which is inextricably linked; uses the beauty of the scenery to describe the sincerity of emotion, and the language is sensual and vivid.In addition, candidates are proficient in writing subheadings, and the content of the three parts is progressive.The quotation and transformation of verses are also more appropriate.

Introspection
(a candidate from Hubei)

The ancients mostly regarded the "three" as the big, where is the big?It lies in Liu Bei's piety of "visiting the thatched cottage three times", Confucius' modesty of "three people walk together, there must be my teacher", and more importantly, it lies in the humility and prudence of "three reflections on myself". ?Today, we also need this kind of moral cultivation of "three reflections on ourselves".

Standing upright does not start from one step, like shaking clothes in the dust, washing feet in the mud, how can you transcend the dust and be free from vulgarity?If you don't take a step back in life, like a moth throwing a candle, or a sheep touching a feudal clan, how can you be upright?This requires our "three provinces" of our own pursuit and ambition, and this requires us to "three provinces" of our own affairs and life. However, if the arrogance of the giant tree is shaken by the cockroach, and the ignorance of the age is unknown, no matter how high the ambition and ideal are, Also missed success.Self-reliance requires our own confidence and wisdom to find; self-improvement requires our perseverance and reflection.Being in the world is not smooth and smooth, not flattery, but a sincere process of self-examination and a noble spirit of self-examination.

Introspecting myself, knowledge books must not be empty, empty is literary and logical; people's hearts must not be false, and reality is what they want.The humility of the soul and the prudence of people are the solid fortress against the temptation of material desires and the indestructible golden body against the erosion of material desires.Nothing in the world can match the purity of the soul and the nobility of self-examination.In this case, then you might as well ask yourself, am I still sticking to the pure land of my soul?When the world is washed, is the soul still as white as a lotus flower?Otherwise, you have to think twice and introspect to clean up the pollution, and think twice and introspect to get rid of the turbidity.

Reflecting on myself again, I know that the solitary cloud comes out of Xiu, there is no connection between going and staying, the bright mirror hangs in the sky, and the two are irrelevant.Self-examination requires our hearts to be peaceful, and our feelings to be sincere, so that we can look at the world from the bottom of our hearts.The brilliance and vanity of the surface are too dazzling, because it blocks the truth; the exaggerated colors and lines are too noisy, because it only reflects the dazzling brilliance and hides the deadly dark wound.How, then, do we look beyond our earthly eyes?After tranquility, we will know "Zhiyuan", and after indifference, we will know "Mingzhi". Let us open our introspective eyes, observe our life from a calm and peaceful heart, and enjoy our life.

Introspecting myself three times, I don’t have much interest in knowledge, and there are plenty of haze and haze among the basins, fists and stones;Introspection, let us empty the desires in our hearts, and regain even the slightest happiness and touch around us; Even if there is only the slightest perseverance and faith around you, you can find the belonging of your heart and the other shore of your soul after introspection.

The ancients introspected themselves three times, the first is words and deeds, the second is deeds, and the third is self-cultivation.Today, when we examine ourselves three times, what we should introspect is our pursuit, belief and sentiment.I hope that after self-examination, we will not be shocked by honor or disgrace, just watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, leave no trace, and follow the wind and clouds in the sky.

score review
Although this article uses the proposition of "self-examination" as the starting point, the incision is very small, but the explanation of the principle of "three reflections on myself" is clear and orderly.From a structural point of view, it belongs to the total fraction formula.Summarize first, then sub-state, and then summarize.From the content point of view, first summarize the ancient and modern people who must "examine themselves three times", and then explain their views from the perspectives of ambition, humility, morality, meditation, and indifference. People are convinced and moved.

(End of this chapter)