College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 29 Face (1)
(2005 Jiangxi volume)

composition test questions
"Face" is a word that everyone is familiar with, and its connotation is rich.Usually we often think of scenes related to "face" and think about issues related to "face".

Please write an article on the topic of "face".

[Notice]

Written content must be within the scope of the topic. ② Make up your own mind. ③The style is optional. ④The topic is self-made. ⑤ Not less than 800 words. ⑥No plagiarism.

Question Analysis
This is a relatively broad topic, and the difficulty of reviewing the questions is not too great. Candidates can have something to say, whether it is making up a story or expressing their feelings.Although it has been stated in the question stem that there is no limit to the style of writing, it is difficult to get a high score simply by writing an explanatory text that introduces the face.The sentence "scenes related to 'face'" in the question stem hints to candidates that candidates can write narrative articles, because "scenes" can only be vivid and lifelike by using various descriptions. The sentence "Think about problems related to 'face'" reminds candidates that they can contact various phenomena related to "face" in life, and explain their causes, processes and results. From this perspective, candidates can use argumentative essay style .Regardless of the style of writing, candidates only need to combine their actual situation, give full play to their writing expertise, deeply dig out the meaning behind the topic, and express their feelings.

Writing Ideas Tips
The face is the most expressive and changeable part in the human body, and it can most truly reflect a person's emotional changes.Candidates can grasp this change and write about their understanding of a person's complex personality, which will also be a good entry point.Secondly, candidates can also think of "washing the face" and further extend to people's living habits; they can think of "artificial beauty face" and think of cheating; they can think of "face" and connect it with moral issues; they can also think of "facade" , Then think of service attitude, and so on.There are still many places that can be associated, but the key to writing this topic well is to dig deep into the meaning of "face".

Full score sample essay
smiling face
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

A smiling face is the spring breeze in March, which sows hope, awakens life, and brews a spring with sincerity; a smiling face is the sunshine of winter, with love on the left and sympathy on the right, lighting the torch of faith and warming the desolation of widowhood and loneliness; The smiling face is the gentle hand of the mother, holding up the loneliness, smoothing the sadness, and wiping away the helpless tears.

People are colorful because they have a face with rich expressions and profound meanings; they are cute because they have a face that always smiles and is innocent.A smile is beautiful on the face, and sweetness is true in the heart.

Smiling face, confident and strong, soft and unyielding, calm and unrestrained with the same change.No wonder, "The swan song of historians, Li Sao without rhyme" finally made you, the great man who turned humiliation into strength, contempt into fighting spirit with a face that always kept a smile, and "combined the changes of the past and the present, and became the words of the family".See Yong Fu under the death penalty, because of "Historical Records", you have left the greatest wealth to the world; because of your smiling face, you have left us with eternal respect.

A smiling face is admirable; a smiling person is the most unrestrained.With a smile on his face, kindness comes from the heart, the best kindness is like water, the white plums are noble, and he is willing to give, "suddenly like a night of fragrance and hair, scattered into the universe and thousands of miles of spring".With a smile on his face, do his best, be content in dedication, and feel at ease in infection.

The smiling face makes the Mona Lisa fascinate the whole world, and makes the face of the "father of rice" famous all over the world. How confident is that face? !When he was still a rural teacher, he was determined to subvert the world; when he was famous all over the world, he was still willing to work on farming and research.All he desires is to keep all people free from hunger.What a lovely face that is!I like to watch a thousand waves of rice beans, and Yuan Longping is the most romantic!

Smiling face, moved with heart, undertaken with love.A smiling face not only makes our hearts bloom like flowers, but also makes us cry.Xu Benyu's smile is enough to make each of us burst into tears.When he walked into the mountain with that smiling face, and with the immature arms of a freshly graduated college student, he shouldered the crumbling classroom, poverty, and responsibilities that did not belong to him. Are you speechless?

Perhaps, a person's smile is not enough to fill children's eyes with sunshine.His smile stings us, his face beams with happiness as he shoulders the responsibility.

If we say that a smiling face is a delicate flower, it can infect the surroundings and transform into a colorful spring.If a smiling face is a stalwart tree, it can move the world and make rows of trees build a green Great Wall that shelters wind and sand.Smile and make our face more lovely.We who smile should use the power of a smile to take care of our surroundings, influence our surroundings, and shoulder responsibilities bravely, until everyone's face is full of brilliance that never fades.

score review
The beginning of this composition gives readers a strong "visual impact". The use of rhetorical techniques of parallelism makes the sentences neat and well-proportioned, and the use of metaphors makes the sentences come alive.Moreover, candidates are good at handling materials skillfully. Instead of adopting a straightforward method of narration, they do not simply list facts, but change the form of expression, quote representative sentences, etc., which is refreshing.

wonderful words
If we say that a smiling face is a delicate flower, it can infect the surroundings and transform into a colorful spring.

just for that face
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

We human beings care about "face" very much. For "face", we can pay a lot, even at the cost of our lives. This kind of detachment and magnanimity are the treasures of the human spirit, shining with a light that never fades.

The wheel of history is constantly rolling, sailing to the deep distance, and the dust raised is everywhere, telling the heroic deeds.

Xiang Yu, the former Overlord of Chu, could not change the fact that the Chu Kingdom was destroyed even with his unrivaled powers.Beside the Wujiang River, he has been surrounded by layers of enemy troops, and the song of Chu, which symbolizes prosperity, floats in the air, distant and melodious.At this moment, his extremely resolute heart began to become weak. Seeing countless brothers lying around, he regretted his self-willedness and regretted that the good situation of Chu State and the lives of his brothers were ruined in his own hands.With deep self-blame, he put the knife on his neck. In an instant, blood stained the banks of the Wujiang River, reflecting half of the sky.The setting sun is like blood, and Chu Ge is still sad and lingering.A giant fell, but left future generations with infinite emotion.

In fact, before the enemy pursued him, he could have crossed the river by boat and made a comeback in the future.But he thought that he had no face to face Jiangdong's elders, he thought he had to apologize with death, so, because of that "face" and his pride, Xiang Yu killed himself in Wujiang, no one knows how much Jiangdong's elders are grieved!Although Xiang Yu was finally defeated by Liu Bang, his domineering and arrogance will always stab Liu Bang in the public's reputation!

Meng Ke said: "If a man has no ambition, he is like a beast." Because people have their own dignity and ambition, they are very concerned about their own reputation. "A man can be killed, but not humiliated." .

However, if you care too much about your own face, it will become a cowardly act that dare not face reality.

In ancient Greece, there was a young man who discovered irrational numbers, but was hunted down.This is the era of Pythagorean school rule, an era where justice and evil, truth and paradox are intertwined, and "authority" is afraid, just because the young man has discovered facts that his own theory cannot explain.The young man fled everywhere, and he did not forget to tell the people around him about his discoveries along the way.The evil Pythagoreans found him and threw him into the vast sea, causing a storm.

A talented young man just passed away with the wind. He discovered the truth that belonged to the whole world, but he paid the price with his life, just because the Pythagoreans cared too much about their "faces", and they dared not face themselves The fact that the position of authority has been shaken has led to a shocking grievance.

We must not forget the examples of the ancients. As a generation of young people in their prime, we must have lofty aspirations, strive for more honors, discover mistakes, correct them with a broad heart, and shape ourselves into charismatic people. !

score review
This is a fairly standard argumentative essay.In the opening paragraph, the central argument is put forward: "face" has a very high status in people's hearts.Next, I will take Xiang Yu as an example to show that Chinese people care about "face" very much.Take the example of the Pythagorean school in ancient Greece who killed a young man who discovered the truth of irrational numbers with a stick to illustrate that foreigners also care about "face".The method of pros and cons makes the article very rigorous.At the end of the article, a call is made to sublimate the purpose.The article directly points to the spiritual world of human beings and has a certain depth.

the true meaning of the face
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

Dear friend, you are looking at me, I feel that you are looking into my eyes, looking for the footsteps of the years, following your doubts: "face, what is it?"

Oh, and what to say about the face?

The medical scientist said: "The face is the first part we look at when examining a patient."

A moralist said: "The face can reveal a person's inner quality."

The biologist said: "The face reflects the growth status of a person."

You blinked your eyes, as if you understood something, but you still asked: "This is all about the appearance of the face, does the face have connotation?"

Really, about the face, it should have its unique connotation.

Behind the smiling face is a benevolent and friendly heart.Such a face gives strength to others and leaves confidence in oneself; such a heart warms others and also warms oneself; with a smiling face, there is a clear heart, because that face always reveals caring and fragrance, To convey hope to the hearts of others.

And the ferocious face, that is the ugliest face in the world, looming an evil heart.It makes people unpredictable, but also makes people guard; because of this ferocious face, there is an invisible wall between people, which isolates many beautiful things in the world and leaves many regrets.

Therefore, the connotation of the face is that the face can be used to observe the heart.With a smile, there is a happy preface and good memories.

My friend, you looked at me again, staring at my face with blurred eyes, still looking for the answer: "Does the face in various poses have a deeper connotation?"

Those who only show sadness and pessimism on their faces are helpless and ignorant; those who are indifferent to everything outside and self-enclosed are ruthless and incompetent; their faces are full of optimistic sunshine, and their hearts are full of enterprising light. Regret; and the real brave, dare to challenge life, dare to enhance the expression of self-confidence, not afraid of the hardships and thorns along the way, showing determination until reaching the pinnacle of success.Passing the test depends on courage, and even the fighting spirit of not admitting defeat on the face.

In fact, the connotation of the face can be comprehended through the senses.

A person who reveals the philosophy of "spring blossoms and autumn fruits" to the world, the seriousness is the expression he bestows on the cultivators; a person who sends lights and water bags to passers-by, he gives warmth as an expression to strangers ;A person who dissipates friction and eases it, his generosity and tolerance are always on his face.

Oh, young friend, you are still looking at me, wondering if these random meanings I have scribbled down touch the true meaning of the face?
score review
This article imitates "Memory" in "Two Prose Poems" in the third volume of high school Chinese. Students who have studied this text must still remember it.This is one of the highlights of this article.The writing style of the article is beautiful, organically combining imitation and innovation, showing a certain writing personality.

face, person, spirit
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

The ever-changing world hides the ever-changing faces and contains thousands of spirits.

--Inscription

The geese on the edge of the cloud break the sky and the moon, and the sheep on the Longshang return to the grass.

On the shore of Lake Baikal, have you seen that face full of clank?
"The geese on the edge of the clouds break the sky and the moon, and the sheep on the Longshang return to the grassland." Su Wu herded sheep and lived in the frontier fortress for 19 years. What has not changed with the passage of time is the love of serving the country, not being tempted by fame and fortune, not giving in to lust, and always keeping a clean heart, the iron bones of a man and the heart of a child.

That thin face is also full of the meaning of serving the country, and it will always live in the dictionary of people's hearts.

Writing admonishing current affairs, caring for common people, tens of thousands of households are vying to pass on the new Yuefu.

The West Lake is built on the embankment, the gods return to Dongluo, and the old poet will be worshiped forever for thousands of years.

(End of this chapter)