College entrance examination full score composition classification Daquan

Chapter 30 Face (2)
Life is only a few short decades, but how did Bai Juyi travel through thousands of years, so that future generations will always look up and admire him?Spirit, the pale face reveals the spirit, the spirit of daring to write the sufferings of the world into poems.In a secular world, in a world where the spirit is subservient to the powerful, he alone guards the innocence of his heart and insists on his own beliefs. History remembers him, and the people who created history remember him. The yellowed history books contain the essence of life. Fragrance, the light of the soul.

That pale face was like a bright moon illuminating every corner of the world.

Upright and upright, stay upright and upright.

Sorrowful and angry, writing a letter and history according to the world.

Who played the eternal swan song of "Historians", and who sang Li Sao without rhyme?It was that face full of fortitude.

Once in such a dangerous environment, enduring the world's ridicule and inner pain, Tai Shigong wrote history with his fortitude and integrity, and wrote the vicissitudes of 2000 years.Therefore, his name was recorded in the annals of history together with his immortal works, and the face with two drops of clear tears was also deposited in the long river of history together with his spirit, leaving a glorious evaluation of him by later generations: Upright and upright, stay upright and upright.Sorrowful and angry, writing a letter and history according to the world.

He Dang altogether cuts the candles at the west window, but talks about the rain in Bashan.

Under the dim light, that face was full of parting sorrows, but it all came from the love for the motherland, friends, and relatives...so the traces of melancholy melted into the continuous rain, making it look extraordinarily ethereal .

The sound of rain hitting banana leaves will always make people feel a little bit sad and sentimental.On the poet's window eaves, raindrops fall and the splashes are always shattered immediately, and the human heart is always fragile and cannot withstand too much separation.In this lonely rainy night, the motherland, friendship, and family affection are the only comfort for the poet's soul.On that distant night, amidst the sound of ticking rain, the poet's face full of parting sorrows was expressing his love for the motherland and longing for friends and relatives.

score review
The article is ingeniously conceived. Candidates select four character fragments and organize them into an essay. The four characters live in different eras and have different experiences and encounters, but they all have one thing in common, that is, the spirit represented by the face, an upward spirit.This kind of conception deepens the main idea layer by layer, which is very innovative.

Celebrity Quotes
The geese on the edge of the cloud break the sky and the moon, and the sheep on the Longshang return to the grass. ——Wen Tingyun's "Su Wu Temple" Why should we cut the candles in the west window together, but talk about the night rain in Bashan. ——Li Shangyin
classic case
Su Wu Shepherd, Bai Juyi, Sima Qian, Li Shangyin
The "Face" of the Three Kingdoms
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

"The rolling Yangtze River flows eastward, and the waves wipe out the heroes...", history revolves on the track of unity and division, and the curtain of the Three Kingdoms is opened.

The situation of war is changeable, and the Romance of the Three Kingdoms is actually a war about face.

Kong Ming's Face - Wisdom and Sadness

As soon as Wolong came out to see the world, you, a fledgling, burned Cao Ying three times, making Cao Jun frightened by the news, and your face was full of wisdom and strategy.Feather fan scarf is your demeanor, writing the history of wisdom.From borrowing arrows from straw boats to Sanqi Gongjin, from capturing Menghuo seven times to leaving Qishan six times, a wise smile spread throughout the Central Plains.

You are wise and at the same time full of sadness in your face.Before the first emperor started his business, he collapsed in the middle way. You were entrusted by the late emperor, "accepted when the army was defeated, and ordered to be in danger." You mourned for the late emperor who did not listen to your good advice. You mourned for the incompetence of the later master. You mourned yourself Failed to fulfill the late emperor's last wish.

Meng De's face - insidious and heroic

Later generations commented on your insidiousness, cutting off your hair and acting as the head, but your face is full of insidiousness. After Yang Xiu's death, your face was full of insidious nature.

But what I value more is your heroism, to challenge Dong Zhuo, to punish Lu Bu, to destroy Yuan Shu, to conquer Yuan Shao... You led the soldiers to fight in the north and south, showing your heroism. "The moon and stars are scarce, and the black magpie flies south", you write poems horizontally, your heroic spirit is rippling on your face, you welcome Yunchang, and bury Guan Yu generously, your heroic temperament fills your smiling face again.

The face of Yun Chang - honesty and arrogance

Later generations will say your integrity, and the love of Taoyuan's three sworn brothers will always be reflected on your face.Even though Cao Cao warmly entertained you, you still followed Liu Bei through five passes; even though you had issued a military order, you resolutely let Cao Cao go on Huarong Road, leaving a sincere smile.

But loneliness appeared on your face again.You underestimate the veteran Huang Zhong and the tiger Ma Chao.You always thought that with you in Lumeng, he would never want to take it away, so he went out of the city without authorization, and finally was cornered under the attack of Wei and Wu, defeated Maicheng, leaving infinite desolation, and loneliness once again expressed feelings on your face.

Fair face - narrow wisdom

You are as famous as Kong Ming, everyone knows your strategies and talents, and everyone knows your wise face.In the Battle of Chibi, the face of wisdom is full of endless demeanor.

But why are you so narrow-minded?But why was Kong Ming killed three times, and still emptied of expressing the emotion of "how can he be bright when he is born?"It turns out that there are still narrow elements on your face.Kong Ming saw through your cruel tricks, and you said you wanted to kill Zhuge Liang, how sad and narrow-minded your face was at that time!

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The ancient wind blows along the track of history, leaving a permanent memory on the wall of history.Different faces show different styles, and different faces show different endings.

The Romance of the Three Kingdoms is actually a war about faces.

score review
The article uses the four main characters in "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" to express the theme that "face" has different meanings for different people.The first two paragraphs are concise and clear, and go straight to the point. The Romance of the Three Kingdoms is actually a war about faces. Different faces represent differences in people's hearts, spiritual worlds, and personality qualities.Four subsections and four subtitles are clear and clear, pointing out the characteristics of the four main characters.The last two paragraphs echo the previous text and deepen the theme.

The bright moon shines on our faces
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

How many princes' fluttering white clothes were blown by the wind in Tang Dynasty; how many women's black temples were wet by the rain in Song Dynasty?It was Zhang Jiuling's "The Moon Rises on the Sea, and the End of the World Shares This Time Together", Su Dongpo's "I hope people will last forever, and we will share the beauty together", or Li Qingzhao's "Looking for and looking, deserted and quiet", they are obsessed with the vicissitudes of life The face of hope, the face of expecting blessings, the face of longing and eagerness.

It was in Chang'an in the prosperous Tang Dynasty. People are familiar with and remember their anxious and hopeful faces: the powerful Tang Dynasty was suddenly "Anshi Rebellion", and Zhang Jiuling's loyal and thin face was so helpless and sad. Maybe, Only these two poems that have been handed down through the ages still have a trace of wishes and hopes, and this face still reveals the best wishes for the people of the world.

Li Qingzhao, this face is thinner than a "yellow flower", and those sad words poured her endless helplessness towards the world: the precarious Northern Song Dynasty broke up her and her husband, and she was helpless in the face of the Northern Song Dynasty. Looking at her delicate but angry face, "I still think of Xiang Yu, but I refuse to cross Jiangdong!" I often think: In such a dynasty, what kind of brave and strong woman was this, and what kind of stubborn and stubborn face was that. And tenacious.

They are all far away from us, but they are so close to us. It is these precious words that make history remember them, and let the world still look back at their loyal and firm faces.Although time has made it impossible for us to trace their appearance back then, I know that there must be a few familiar words engraved on their faces: steadfastness and loyalty.Why don't the excellent characters of these Chinese sons and daughters firmly stand on us!

Yes, how can I forget the face of Liu Xiang struggling hard and clenching his teeth in the Olympic Games; the face of Chinese cheering with tears in his eyes; We remember the vicissitudes of the smiling farmers' faces, these familiar and kind faces, the faces of the Chinese people!
History is far away, whether it is the poets who worried about the country and the people in the Tang and Song Dynasties, or us who are cheering today, looking up at the starry sky, we will all stand under the same blue sky, we all have the same face, sons and daughters of China The proud, faithful and brave face that has gone through vicissitudes.

The great river goes east, and the waves scour all the romantic figures of the ages. We remember their fluttering white clothes, their black hair wet by the rain, and we remember their fraternity, strong and loyal faces.History is remembered, words are remembered, and brave people are remembered.

Searching for searching is no longer deserted, and the bright moon is shining on the sea and the horizon. The bright moon is shining on the fraternal and strong faces of the ancients, and shining on the brave and proud faces of us today.

score review
The title of the article is very novel and unique.The conception of the article is also very exquisite. The first three ancient poems describe the vicissitudes of the poet, the poet's longing for life, and the essence of the national culture represented by the poet's face.The full text has a natural transition from ancient to modern. At the end, ancient poems are used again, and the conclusion is ingenious. The moon is still the same moon, and the poems are still those poems, but the style is very different, the momentum is extraordinary, and it has a strong appeal.

Anxiang
(a candidate from Jiangxi)

When the old alley appeared before my eyes again, I could barely recognize its appearance.In this snowy world, there seems to be only a quiet and winding old alley and a wanderer who has revisited his old place.

Ten years later, the old alley still maintains the vicissitudes of the ancient architectural style. The window lattices with peeling vermilion lacquer opened and closed in the cold wind, and the sound of "squeaky" seemed to be walking out of my childhood step by step.I looked up and saw the familiar small two-story attic, the walls were covered with dense creepers, above the attic, under the corner of the eaves, and behind the vines, separated by a thin layer of window paper, I seemed to see a picture of deja vu. The face is approaching from far and near, who is that, the old alley?
I think it might be an illusion, I walked in this quiet old alley, no one, not even a little familiar voice, the old alley was empty, it seemed that I had been stranger for ten years, the face of the old alley could not be seen clearly , I didn't knock on the door of a family, maybe I was really scared, I was afraid that the old lane would disappear in an instant in my memory, could it be that the memories cherished for ten years just passed away like this, I want to remember the face of the old lane .I plan to leave without taking away a little smell of the old alley. This may be a wise choice. Just remembering the eternal face of the old alley is a comfort to me.Maybe just leave like this, nothing will happen, and when I finally waved goodbye reluctantly, I saw her—Meiyuan—the former paradise.When I approached, there was no laughter in the plum garden.The gate of the garden was ajar, and a piece of it had been rotten. I pushed it open carefully, and a gust of cold wind rushed towards me, and what appeared before me was an abandoned garden.The plum tree in the garden still exists, standing alone, the ground is covered with fallen flowers, and the pool in the garden is also covered with a thick layer, undulating lazily in the cold wind.The plum garden was quiet, only the soft moan of snowflakes falling on the eyelashes, and the sigh of the deep and shallow footsteps could be heard.

Year after year, flowers bloom and fall, is this simple life and death in the plum garden, reincarnation in the old alley?I asked myself, if so, I can't remember Lao Xiang's face.

Ten years, only ten years, the old lane is aging a little bit, I can clearly see his youth stripped of leaves and life full of wrinkles.I'm gone, maybe it would be a cruel thought to forget everything about today, and that's how it is sometimes.When I walked away on the fallen flowers in this place, a faint fragrance came to my nostrils. This... even I couldn't believe it. Started to breathe greedily.This subtle fragrance lingers all over my body, and the memories of ten years are as irresistible as the tide. I remember the joys and sorrows of the past, and the face of the old lane is coming to me little by little.I held up a handful of plum blossoms and took a deep breath. It was them, the subtle fragrance of the past ten years, and the memories of ten years.A life that has lost its life still has its unique charm, just like this subtle fragrance, although it is shallow, it is unforgettable for a lifetime.Lao Xiang's face is a little bit fresher, and the youth is permeating it a little bit. It is the subtle fragrance of the past ten years that makes me see Lao Xiang's young face again.

I'm gone, taking away the fragrance of clothes, when I look back at the old alley, above the attic, under the eaves, behind the vines, that familiar face is blooming with the unique smile of the old alley, beautiful garden and city, eternal life memorable……

score review
This is a love song sung by wanderers to their hometown.The article writes the virtual "face" of the old alley from a unique perspective, closely related to the topic. The lyrical method of "Farewell to Cambridge" gives people a sense of intimacy; the author shows his attachment to his hometown by using fiction and realism, and using the fragrance of plum blossoms taken away by a wanderer.

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